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九年级全一册北师大版
【寒假专版】
D版写作好词好句
寒假专版
【D版好词好句】运用5W1H要素写一篇
完整的小故事
写作提分攻略·北师大版九年级全一册(暖色系版)
好词好句积累
一、好词积累
故事要素
时间相关:one sunny morning一个晴朗的早晨;last weekend上周末;at8o'clock在8点
钟;on a rainy day在一个雨天;during the summer holiday暑假期间
地点相关:in the park在公园:at school在校;in the library在图书馆;near the river在
河边;outside the supermarket超市外
人物相关:a little girl一个小女孩;an old man一位老人;a young teacher一位年轻老师;
a kind policeman一位善良的警察;my neighbor我的邻居
事件相关:find a lost dog找到一只走失的狗;help an old woman cross the street帮助老奶
奶过马路;have a picnic野餐;save a cat from a tree从树上救下一只猫;return a wallet归
还钱包
原因相关:because因为;so所以;in order to为了;so that以便:because of因为
方式相关:by bus乘公交车:on foot步行;with a smile带着微笑:quickly快速地;carefully
小心地
动作描写
基础动作:walk走路;rm跑步;ind发现;help帮助:give给:take带走;caTy搬运;
save拯救:return归还;smile微笑
情感动作:cy哭泣;laugh大笑:hank感谢:hug拥抱;od点头
情感表达
积极情感:happy开心的:excited兴奋的:thankful感激的:proud自豪的:warm温暖的
中性情感:surprised惊讶的:worried担心的:cam平静的
九年级全一册北师大版
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二、经典好句
1.时间+地点+人物+事件
1.1 Last Sunday morning,I met an old woman near the park.She was looking for her lost cat
1.2 One rainy afternoon,a little girl was crying outside the supermarket because she couldn't find her
mother.
1.3 During the summer holiday,my friend Tom and I had a picnic by the river.
2.原因+方式+结果
2.1 Lucy helped the old man carry his heavy bag because he was too weak to walk
2.2 The policeman found the lost boy quickly by asking people in the street.
2.3 I returned the wallet to its owner,and she thanked me with a big smile.
3.综合叙述(要素齐全)
3.1 Last weekend,at about 9 o'clock in the morning,I was walking in the park when I saw a dog.It
was small and had curly hair.I thought it was lost,so I took it to the police station.The policeman
was kind and helped me find its owner.In the end,the dog's owner was very excited and gave me
a gift.I felt warm in my heart because I could help others.
3.2 One sunny day,my classmate Lily and I were on our way to school.We saw an old woman with
a round face trying to cross the street.She was slow and worried.Lily is outgoing and helpful,so
she ran to help her.I held the old woman's bag.The old woman thanked us and said we were good
girls.We felt happy because we did a good thing.
3.3 Yesterday afternoon,I was in the library.A boy with short straight hair and a pair of glasses was
looking for a book.He was shy and didn't ask for help.I walked to him and asked,"Can I help
you?"He told me he needed a storybook about animals.I found the book for him,and he smiled.
Now we are good friends,and we often read books together in the library.
A Kind Deed
Last weekend,on a sunny morning,a young girl named Lily walked near the river in the park.She saw
an old man sitting on a bench,looking worried.Lily went over and asked with a smile,"Grandpa,are
you okay?"The old man said,"I can't find my way home because I was lost.
Lily decided to give a hand.She carefully asked for his address and called the police.While waiting,she
shared her snacks with the old man.Thirty minutes later,the police car arrived.The old man was very
thankful and said,"You're such a kind girl!"Lily felt happy to help.
九年级全一册北师大版
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By working together,Lily and the police helped the old man go home safely.It was a great day for her
A Kind Deed
Last_,a named_was_.He/She saw_who wasbecause_.
-decided to.He/She_.After.Thewas very and said,".
feltto help.It was a-day!
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