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写作专版
【D版好词好句】叙述暴风雨中的经历
写作提分攻略·教科社八上(暖色系版)
好词好句积累
一、好词积累
天气与环境描写
自然现象:stom暴风雨;thunder雷声;lightning闪电;rainstorm暴雨;strong wind强
风:heavy rain大雨;dark clouds乌云;power cut停电:flood洪水;howling wind呼啸
的风
环境状态:dark黑暗的;wet潮湿的;nessy凌乱的:dangerous危险的;frightening吓人
的;destructive破坏性的;calm down平静下来;clear up放晴
动作与感受描写
动作:run跑;hide躲藏;hold on抓紧:close关;cover遮盖;repair修理;help帮助;rescue
救援
感受:scared害怕的:nervous紧张的:worried担心的:can冷静的:brave勇敢的;surprised
惊讶的:relieved如释重负的;thankful感激的
场景相关
地点:hone家;street街道;school学校:garden花园:window窗户;roof屋顶:tree树:
1road道路
物品:umbrella雨伞:raincoat雨衣;flashlight手电筒;candle蜡烛;blanket毯子;phone
电话
二、经典好句
1.天气与环境
1.1 The storm came suddenly with strong winds and heavy rain
1.2 Dark clouds covered the sky,and the lightning lit up the night.
1.3 The howling wind made it hard to hear anything
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1.4 After the storm,the street was messy with broken branches.
2.动作与感受
2.1 I was scared when I heard the loud thunder
2.2 My parents told me to stay calm and hold on to the table.
2.3 We closed all the windows to keep the rain out.
2.4 She helped an old man cross the street in the heavy rain.
2.5 I felt relieved when the storm finally stopped.
3.综合叙述
3.1 Last Friday,a terrible storm hit our city.I was at home alone,and the power went out suddenly.
3.2 During the storm,I sat by the window and watched the strong wind blow the trees.
3.3 My brother and I used a flashlight to find candles when it got dark.
3.4 Although the storm was frightening,we helped each other and felt safe together.
3.5 After the storm,we saw many people cleaning the street,and the sun came out again.
My Experience in the Storm
Last Friday afternoon,a sudden thunderstorm hit my neighborhood.I wasreading a book at home when
dark clouds gathered quickly outside.The sky turned dark,and the strong wind began to howl,making
the windows rattle loudly.
Suddenly,lightning flashed across the sky,followed by loud thunder that made me jump.The rain
poured down heavily,and I hurried to close all the windows tightly.Just then,the lights went out-there
was a power cut!I felt scared and nervous,so I grabbed a flashlight and ran to find my parents.
In the dark living room,my little brother was trembling with fear.I held his hand tightly and told him
not to be afraid.My mother stayed calm and said,"Let's hide under the table until the storm calms
down."We sat together,listening to the noisy rain and the frightening thunder.Although the storm was
powerful,being with my family made me feel safe.
After about an hour,the rain stopped and the thunder faded.When we went outside,we saw broken
branches on the street and wet leaves everywhere.My father and I helped clean up the mess,and neigh-
bors came out to help each other too.As the sun came out,I felt relieved and happy that everyone was
okay.
This storm was a scary experience,but it taught me that staying calm and helping others can make
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difficult times easier.I will always remember how my family and neighbors stood together through the
chaos.
My Experience in the Storm
(time,e.g.Last Friday afternoon,One evening),a sudden(weather phenomenon,e.g.thunderstorm,
storm)hitmy(place,e.g.neighborhood,city).I was-(action,e.g.reading a book,doing homework)
at home when_(environmental change,e.g.dark clouds gathered quickly,the sky turned dark)outside.
The sky turned dark,and the strong wind began to howl,making the windows rattle loudly.
Suddenly,(natural phenomenon,e.g.lightning flashed across the sky,thunder boomed,followed by
-(result,e.g.loud thunder that made me jump,heavy rain pouring down).Therain poured down heavily,
and I hurried to(action,e.g.close all the windows tightly,turn off the lights).Just then,(event,
e.g.the lights went out,a tree fell down)-there was a(problem,e.g.power cut,loud noise)!I felt
-(feeling,e.g.scared and nervous,worried)and nervous,so I(action,e.g.grabbed a flashlight,ran
to find my parents).
In the dark(place,e.g.living room,bedroom),my(family member,e.g.little brother,sister)was
(action,e.g.trembling with fear,crying).I(action,e.g.held his/her hand tightly,hugged him/her)
and told him/her not to be afraid.My(family member,e.g.mother,father)stayed calm and said,
(dialogue,e.g.Let's hide under the table until the storm calms down.Stay indoors and be careful)."
We sat together,listening to the(sound,e.g.noisy rain,frightening thunder).Although the storm was
(adjective,e.g.powerful,scary),being with my family made me feel(feeling,e.g.safe,calm).
After about(time,e.g.an hour,two hours),the rain stopped and the(natural phenomenon,e.g.
thunder faded,wind died down).When we went outside,we saw-(scene,e.g.broken branches on the
street,wet leaves everywhere).My(family member,e.g.father,mother)and I helped(action,e.g.
clean up the mess,pick up the branches),and neighbors came out to help each other too.As the sun came
out,I felt-(feeling,e.g.relieved,happy)and happy that everyone was okay.
This storm was a(adjective,e.g.scary,unforgettable)experience,but it taught me that(lesson,e.g.
staying calm and helping others can make difficult times easier,family and neighbors are important).I
will always remember how my family and neighbors stood together through the chaos.
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