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【寒假专版】D版写作好词好句
寒假专版
【D版好词好句】描述一个感人的故事
写作提分攻略·沪外版八上(暖色系版)》
好词好句积累
一、好词积累
情感表达
感动的:moving;touching;heartwarming:emotional
珍贵的:precious;valuable;treasured
温暖的:wam;kind;caring
勇敢的:brave;courageous
无私的:selfless;nselfish
真诚的:sincere:genuine
感激的:grateful;thankful
动作描写
帮助:help:assist:aid;support
关心:care for;look after;take care of
分享:share:give;offer
坚持:insist on;keep on;persist in
鼓励:encourage;cheer up;inspire
场景与事件
困难:difficulty;trouble;problem
挑战:challenge;hardship
时刻:moment:occasion;instant
经历:experience;stoy;evet
奇迹:miracle;wonder
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【寒假专版】
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二、经典好句
1.事件起因
1.1 Last winter,my neighbor,an old lady,fell ill suddenly on a snowy night.
1.2 During the summer camp,my friend Tom lost his way in the mountains.
1.3 When I was in Grade Seven,I failed an important exam and felt very sad.
2.感人过程
2.1 A stranger helped her call the ambulance and stayed with her until her family arrived.
2.2 He shared his only water with me and encouraged me to keep walking
2.3 My teacher talked to me patiently and helped me find my confidence again.
3.情感与感悟
3.1 This experience taught me that even a small act of kindness can make a big difference.
3.2 I will never forget that warm moment when she held my hand and said,"Everything will be okay."
3.3 It was the most touching story I've ever heard,and it made me believe in the goodness of people.
An Unforgettable Kindness
Last year,on a rainy afternoon,something unforgettable happened to me.I was walking home from
school alone when suddenly heavy rain started to fall.I had forgotten my umbrella and stood under a
tree on the quiet street,feeling worried and cold.
Just then,an old lady with a warm smile came over.She held a big umbrella and noticed my broken
umbrella lying beside me."Poor child,let's share the umbrella together,"she said in a soft voice.I was
surprised and grateful,so I walked with her slowly.
During the walk,I found out she lived near my home.When we arrived at my door,I thanked her again
and asked for her name,but she just smiled and said,"It's just a small helping hand."I was deeply moved
by her kind act and couldn't help crying.
This story tells me that even a small kind act can make a big difference to others.No matter how difficult
life is,love and care can always warm our hearts.I will never forget that rainy afternoon and the old
lady's selfless kindness.
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八上沪外版
【寒假专版】
D版写作好词好句
An Unforgettable Kindness
Last year,on a_(weather time,e.g.rainy afternoon,sunny morning),something unforgettable hap-
pened to me.I was_(action,e.g.walking home from school alone,shopping in the street)when
suddenly(event,e.g.heavy rain started to fall,a little girl cried).I(your situation,e.g.hadforgot-
ten my umbrella,didn't know what to do)and(location,e.g.stood under a tree on the quiet street,sat
on a bench in the empty park),feeling_(emotion,e.g.worried and cold,scared and sad).
Just then,a_(person,e.g.old lady with a warm smile,little boy with short hair)came over.He/She
_(action,e.g.held a big umbrella,took out a candy)and noticed(something about you,e.g.my
broken umbrella lying beside me,my red eyes)."(what he/she said,eg.Poor child,let's share the
umbrella together,Don't cry,here you are),he/she said in a(voice,e.g.soft voice,kind voice).I was
-(emotion,e.g.surprised and grateful,moved and happy),soI(action,e.g.walked with her slowly,
took the candy).
During the(activity,e.g.walk,talk),I found out-(something about him/her,e.g.she lived near my
home,he was on his way to school).When we(result,e.g.arrived at my door,finished talking),I
thanked him/her again and(what you asked,e.g.asked for her name,wanted to give him a hug),but
he/she just_(action,e.g.smiled and said,shook his head and left).I was deeply moved by his/her kind
act and couldn't help(emotion reaction,e.g.crying,smiling).
-(conclusion sentence 1,e.g.This story tells me that even a small kind act can make a big difference
to others,I learned from him that true happiness comes from helping people in need).-(conclusion
sentence 2,e.g.No matter how difficult life is,love and care can always warm our hearts,I will never
forget that special moment and his/her selfless kindness).I will never forget_(the memory,e.g.that
rainy afternoon and the old lady's selfless kindness,that kind boy and his warm smile).
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