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【寒假专版】D版写作好词好句
寒假专版
【D版好词好句】写一封建议信或投诉信
写作提分攻略·沪外版八上(暖色系版)》
好词好句积累
一、好词积累
建议信常用词汇
动词&短语:suggest doing sth.建议做某事;advise sb.to do sth..建议某人做某事;put
forward提出:improve改善;solve解决;pay attention to注意;take measures采取措施
名词&短语:suggestion建议;advice建议(不可数):problem问题:solution解决方案;
improvement改进;facility设施;environment环境
投诉信常用词汇
动词&短语:complain about抱怨:be dissatisfied with对…不满意;require要求;demand
要求;hope希望:expect期望;promise承诺
名词&短语:complaint投诉;dissatisfaction不满:problem问题;issue问题;service服
务;quality质量;refund退款;apology道歉
信件开头与结尾
开头:I am writing to suggest..我写信是为了建议…;I am writing to complain about…
我写信是为了投诉…;I would like to make a suggestion about..我想就…提个建议;I
feel sorry to tell you that..我很遗憾地告诉你…
结尾:I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration..希望你能考虑我的建议。;I
look forward to your reply.期待你的回复。;Thank you for your time and consideration.感
谢你的时间和考虑。
二、经典好句
1.建议信开头+提出建议
1.1 I am writing to suggest that our school should improve the library facilities.
1.2 I would like to make a suggestion about the school cafeteria.It would be better if we could have
more healthy food options.
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1.3 I think we should pay attention to the environment in our classroom.Maybe we can plant some
flowers to make it more beautiful.
2.投诉信开头+说明问题
2.1 I am writing to complain about the poor service in the school dining hall.
2.2 I feel sorry to tell you that the air-conditioning in our classroom doesn't work well
2.3 I am dissatisfied with the quality of the textbooks we received this term.Some pages are missing.
3.建议/投诉理由+具体措施
3.1 The library is too noisy sometimes,so I suggest that we should have a"quiet area"for students to
study.
3.2 The school bus is often late,which makes many students arrive late for class.I advise the school
to check the bus schedule and take measures to solve this problem.
3.3 The food in the cafeteria is often cold.Ihope the school can require the staff to keep the food warm.
4.信件结尾
4.1 I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration and make some improvements.
4.2 I look forward to your reply and hope the problem will be solved soon
4.3 Thank you for your time and I believe our school will become better with these changes.
Dear Manager
I am writing to make a suggestion about improving the environment of our school.
It would be better if we could have more垃圾捅in the park to keep it clean.
I look forward to seeing the changes in our school after taking my suggestions
Yours sincerely
Dear(recipient,e.g.Sir/Madam,Manager,To whom it may concern)
I am writing to(purpose,e.g.express my dissatisfaction with...,make a suggestion about...,say that..)
(details of problem/suggestion,e.g.The noise from...is so loud that...,It would be better if we could...)
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(expectation,e.g.I hope you will solve this problem as soon as possible.,I look forward to seeing the
changes after taking my suggestions.)
Yours(sincerely/faithfully)
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