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2025年中考英语写作真题解读（福建卷） 【真题链接】 （2025·福建·中考真题）假定你是某校学生李华，近日你校开展了以“共植诚信之树”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示，用英语给笔友Henry写一封电子邮件，分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。 Time:Plant an Honest Tree Together June 10th, 2025 Activities: ●watch a video ●listen to a speech ●have a discussion ●plant an honest tree Feeling (s): ... 注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Henry, I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【文本解读】 1. 核心任务：以李华身份给笔友 Henry 写电子邮件，分享学校 “共植诚信之树” 主题活动，需包含活动时间（2025 年 6 月 10 日）、活动内容（看视频、听演讲、讨论、植树）及个人感受。 2. 关键约束：词数 80 左右；开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；行文连贯，不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 3. 文体要求：电子邮件（非正式书信），语言亲切自然，符合朋友间分享的语气，结构清晰，感受真挚。 【命题特色】 1. 融入德育主题：以 “诚信” 为核心，结合实践活动（植树），将价值观教育与英语写作结合，体现 “立德树人” 导向。 2. 注重信息完整性：明确要求包含所有活动要素，考查学生梳理信息、有序表达的能力。 3. 场景真实得体：电子邮件格式规范，对象为笔友，语气友好，符合跨文化交流的简单场景。 【写作框架】 核心内容 常用表达 开头（引入活动） 点明活动主题、时间 The event was held on June 10th, 2025. We had a series of meaningful activities that day. 中间（描述活动 + 感受） 按逻辑顺序描述活动内容，自然引出感受 First, we watched a video about honest people and their stories. Then we listened to a speech by our teacher on the importance of honesty. After that, we had a heated discussion about how to be honest in daily life. Finally, we planted small trees in the school garden and named them “Honest Trees”. 结尾（深化感受） 总结活动收获，表达践行诚信的决心 Through these activities, I realized that honesty is the foundation of friendship and trust. I decide to be an honest person and keep the “Honest Tree” in my heart forever. 【满分范文】 【答案】例文 Dear Henry, I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school. It was held on June 10th, 2025. First, we watched a video about our school model students, who always tell the truth and help others. Then, we listened to a speech about the importance of being honest. After that, we had a discussion on how to take action in our daily life and all promised to be honest in competitions and examinations. At last, we planted an honest tree in our school. We all think the event is educational and we will take good care of the tree. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍活动的过程和感悟，不可遗漏提示信息，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动内容； 第二步，介绍感受。 [亮点词汇] ①tell the truth说实话 ②the importance of...……的重要性 ③take action采取行动 ④at last最终，最后 ⑤take care of照顾 [高分句型] ①First, we watched a video about our school model students, who always tell the truth and help others.（who引导定语从句） 【范文赏析】 范文 1：侧重诚信的重要性 Dear Henry, I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school. It was held on June 10th, 2025, and we had a great time. First, we watched a touching video about students who always told the truth. Then a guest speaker gave a speech on how honesty helps us build good relationships. We also discussed situations like returning lost money and not cheating in exams. Finally, we planted trees in the school yard together. This event made me understand that honesty is like a tree—it needs to be nurtured carefully. I feel proud to be part of it and will always stick to honest behaviors. Yours, Li Hua 范文 2：侧重活动的互动与收获 Dear Henry, I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school. It took place on June 10th, 2025, and all of us actively participated. We started by watching a video about honest stories in daily life. Then our headmaster gave a speech, encouraging us to be honest. In the discussion part, I shared my experience of admitting a mistake to my teacher. Finally, we planted small trees in groups and promised to be as upright as the trees. I felt very meaningful after the event. It not only made me know more about honesty but also helped me make more friends. Honesty is the best quality, and I’ll keep it forever. Yours, Li Hua 范文 3：侧重个人行动的改变 Dear Henry, I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school. It was held on June 10th, 2025, and it changed my understanding of honesty. First, we watched a video about someone who lost friends because of lying. Then we listened to a speech about honesty in study and life. During the discussion, my classmates shared many practical ways to be honest. Finally, we planted “Honest Trees” and promised to follow our words. I felt deeply moved. Before, I sometimes lied to avoid being scolded, but now I know honesty makes me trustworthy. I’ll try my best to be an honest person and let the “Honest Tree” grow with me. Yours, Li Hua 6 / 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $