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2025年中考英语写作真题解读（浙江卷） 【真题链接】 （2025·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你正在参与校报主题为“A good way to relax”的征稿活动。请根据以下相关信息，结合自身体验，选择一种放松的方式完成投稿。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 1. 核心任务：以李华身份参与校报 “A good way to relax” 征稿活动，选择一种放松方式，结合自身体验，说明 “where/when/with whom”，并阐述其好处（Keep healthy、Open up mind、Develop friendship）。 2. 关键约束：需结合自身体验，内容具体；需覆盖所有核心疑问和好处；语言通顺，逻辑连贯，无明确词数限制（需充分表达，约 100 词左右）；不得出现真实信息。 3. 文体要求：说明文 + 议论文，兼具体验分享与观点表达，语言生动，能体现个人真实感受。 【命题特色】 1. 关注身心健康：聚焦 “放松方式” 这一贴近学生压力管理的话题，引导学生关注自我成长，具有现实意义。 2. 开放性极强：允许自由选择放松方式（如运动、阅读、徒步、绘画等），充分尊重学生个性与体验。 3. 要素明确化：明确列出需覆盖的内容（时间、地点、同伴、三大好处），为写作提供清晰支架，降低跑题风险。 【写作框架】 段落 核心内容 常用表达 开头（点明放松方式） 直接说明自己选择的放松方式及原因 For me, hiking with friends is a great way to relax. When I feel stressed from study, it always helps me calm down. 中间（描述体验 + 好处） 说明 “where/when/with whom”，分点或连贯阐述三大好处 Every weekend, I go hiking with my best friends in the hills near our city. Hiking makes me walk a lot, which keeps my body healthy. Seeing the beautiful nature and fresh air opens up my mind and helps me forget worries. Working together to climb steep paths also strengthens our friendship. 结尾（总结评价） 再次强调该方式的价值，推荐给他人 It’s not only a way to relax but also a chance to grow. I highly recommend it to anyone who feels tired from study. 【满分范文】 【答案】例文 A good way to relax There are many ways to get relaxed. For me, I’d like to do sports when I am busy or tired. As you know, our schoolwork is always heavy, so sometimes I want to stay away from it, especially on weekends. I will ask my friends or my father to play basketball with me, which is good for my health. We always play against each other for about one and a half hours. Although I feel tired after the game, it makes me full of energy and strong. I am a super boy again. This is my way to get relaxed. Would you like to share your good ways with me? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍运动是自己放松的方式； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己的运动方式以及做运动的好处； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①stay away from远离 ②be good for对……有好处 ③each other互相 [高分句型] ①I will ask my friends or my father to play basketball with me, which is good for my health.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②Although I feel tired after the game, it makes me full of energy and strong.（although引导的让步状语从句） 【范文赏析】 范文 1：跑步放松 A good way to relax For me, running is the best way to relax. When I feel tired from endless homework, running always lifts my mood. I usually run on the school playground after class with my classmates. It’s a great time to breathe fresh air and stretch my body. Running regularly keeps me healthy and full of energy for study. When I run, I can clear my mind and think about happy things, which opens up my mind and helps me solve problems better. Sometimes my classmates and I chat while running, sharing our joys and troubles. This not only makes running more fun but also develops our friendship. Running is simple but effective. It helps me relax physically and mentally, making me a better learner. 范文 2：阅读放松 A good way to relax As for me, reading in the school library is an excellent way to relax. It’s a quiet place where I can escape from the noise of daily life. Every evening after finishing homework, I go to the school library alone or with my book-loving friends. Reading different kinds of books keeps my mind active and my body relaxed—sitting comfortably and focusing on interesting stories reduces my stress. Books take me to different worlds, from ancient history to future technology, which really opens up my mind. When I read with friends, we share our favorite parts and discuss ideas, which helps us develop deeper friendship. Reading is not only a way to relax but also a way to learn. It enriches my life and makes me feel peaceful. 范文 3：篮球放松 A good way to relax Playing basketball with my classmates is my favorite way to relax. It’s exciting and helps me release pressure easily. I play basketball on the school sports ground every Friday afternoon after school. My teammates are all my classmates who love sports. Running, jumping and shooting during the game make me sweat a lot, which keeps my body strong and healthy. Working with teammates to win the game requires teamwork, which opens up my mind to the importance of cooperation. We encourage each other when we fall behind and celebrate together when we win—this deepens our friendship greatly. Playing basketball makes me relaxed and happy. It’s more than a sport; it’s a precious part of my school life that helps me grow better. 5 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $