摘要:
该初中英语中考复习教案聚焦“兴趣与职业”写作专题,针对中考常考的叙事类写作连贯性、目标表达清晰度及时间状语从句、used to结构等语法考点,构建“考点梳理-范文示范-方法提炼-分层训练”的复习体系,通过核心词汇归纳、高分句型解析和真题仿写练习,帮助学生突破写作难点。
亮点在于“语用情境化”和“能力分层化”教学策略,如通过分析范文中“when引导时间状语从句交代兴趣起源”“used to对比学习过程”等高分表达,培养学生的语言运用能力和逻辑思维品质。设计“个人兴趣介绍、名人案例仿写、兴趣培养叙事”三级任务,配合亮点词块即时应用和5分钟句型转换训练,确保学生高效掌握写作技巧,教师可依托此资料精准把控复习节奏,提升学生应考能力。
内容正文:
Unit 8 Follow your interests 写作学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Follow your interests”为核心话题,围绕“兴趣与职业的关联、梦想职业规划、兴趣培养”展开,核心聚焦“用英语介绍兴趣爱好、阐述兴趣转职业的方法、描述梦想职业”,运用时间状语从句、used to / did not use to 等语法知识,搭配兴趣与职业相关核心词汇与逻辑句型,提升七年级学生的叙事类写作连贯性和目标表达清晰度。常见写作角度包括:① 介绍个人喜爱的兴趣爱好及培养过程;② 阐述如何将兴趣转化为未来职业;③ 描述梦想职业及为之努力的计划;④ 仿写课本“兴趣成就职业”风格的短文。所有内容严格贴合课本话题、词汇与语法要求,适配七年级学生认知水平,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“我的兴趣与梦想职业”。请根据课本“Writing”板块范例,写一篇短文介绍你的一项兴趣爱好,说明它如何影响你的梦想职业,以及你为实现梦想所做的努力,词数80-100左右,题目为“My Interest and Dream Job”。
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【范文】
My Interest and Dream Job
My favourite interest is taking photos, and it has made me dream of becoming a travel photographer.
I fell in love with photography when I got a camera as a birthday gift at 10. At first, I just took photos of flowers and pets. As I kept practising, I started to capture beautiful landscapes during family trips. I used to look for photography tips online every weekend, and now I join the school photography club to learn from teachers and classmates. Taking photos helps me discover the beauty of the world and improves my observation skills.
To become a travel photographer, I plan to learn more about composition and editing. I also want to travel to more places to take unique photos. I believe that as long as I follow my interest and keep working hard, my dream will come true.
【译文】
我的兴趣与梦想职业
我最喜欢的兴趣是拍照,这让我梦想成为一名旅行摄影师。
10岁生日时收到一台相机作为礼物,我就爱上了摄影。一开始,我只拍花草和宠物。随着不断练习,我开始在家庭旅行中捕捉美丽的风景。我以前每个周末都会在网上查找摄影技巧,现在我加入了学校的摄影俱乐部,向老师和同学学习。拍照让我发现世界的美好,还提升了我的观察能力。
为了成为一名旅行摄影师,我计划学习更多关于构图和后期编辑的知识。我还想去更多地方,拍摄独特的照片。我相信,只要追随兴趣、坚持努力,我的梦想一定会实现。
亮点词块
1.fall in love with 爱上
2.capture landscapes 捕捉风景
3.photography tips 摄影技巧
4.observation skills 观察能力
5.composition and editing 构图与编辑
6.follow one’s interest 追随兴趣
7.come true 实现
高分句子
1.I fell in love with photography when I got a camera as a birthday gift at 10.(用时间状语从句交代兴趣起源,贴合单元语法重点,叙事清晰)
2.I used to look for photography tips online every weekend, and now I join the school photography club to learn from teachers and classmates.(用used to对比过去与现在的努力,体现兴趣的培养过程)
3.I believe that as long as I follow my interest and keep working hard, my dream will come true.(用宾语从句总结信念,升华主题,符合七年级写作要求)
【拓展1】
班级要举办“兴趣成就未来”分享会,请你写一段文字介绍一位因兴趣成就职业的名人(如课本中的Patrick Moore),包括其兴趣起源、努力过程及职业成就,词数不少于70。
From Interest to Career: A Role Model’s Story
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【拓展1范文】
From Interest to Career: A Role Model’s Story
Patrick Moore, a famous British astronomer, turned his lifelong interest in stars into a great career.
When he was eight, he received a book about stars as a birthday gift—that was the start of his passion. He used to go outside with his mum on clear nights to observe the sky, and he was extremely curious about different star groups. As he grew older, he read a lot of books about astronomy and asked endless questions. Later, he hosted a TV programme called The Sky at Night, which lasted for over 50 years. He shared his knowledge with audiences in a lively way and inspired many people to love space.
Patrick’s story tells us that interests are the best teachers. If we stick to our interests and keep learning, we can also achieve our dreams.
【拓展1译文】
从兴趣到职业:一位榜样的故事
帕特里克·摩尔是英国著名的天文学家,他将自己对星星的毕生兴趣转化成了伟大的职业。
8岁时,他收到一本关于星星的书作为生日礼物——那是他热爱的开端。他以前会在晴朗的夜晚和妈妈一起去户外观察天空,对不同的星群充满好奇。随着长大,他读了很多天文学相关的书,还提出了无数问题。后来,他主持了一档名为《仰望夜空》的电视节目,持续了50多年。他以生动的方式向观众分享知识,激励了很多人热爱太空。
帕特里克的故事告诉我们,兴趣是最好的老师。如果我们坚持兴趣、不断学习,也能实现自己的梦想。
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,仿写“我的兴趣培养之路”短文,运用本单元核心语法,词数80左右,开头已给出。
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核心内容
兴趣(弹钢琴)、起源(小时候听妈妈弹琴)、过去(每周上课、每天练习1小时)、现在(参加比赛、教同学)、收获(培养耐心、带来快乐)
语言要求
运用used to / did not use to、时间状语从句,贴合单元语法重点
My Journey with Playing the Piano
Playing the piano is my favourite interest. It has been with me for six years and brought a lot of joy to my life.
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【拓展2范文】
My Journey with Playing the Piano
Playing the piano is my favourite interest. It has been with me for six years and brought a lot of joy to my life.
I didn’t use to like music much until I heard my mum play the piano when I was seven. I was deeply moved and asked to learn it. I used to have piano lessons every Saturday and practice for an hour every evening. There were times I wanted to give up, but my teacher encouraged me to keep going. Now, I can play many famous pieces and even won a prize in a school competition. I also teach my classmates simple tunes in my free time.
Playing the piano has taught me perseverance and patience. It is not just a hobby, but a part of my life that I will cherish forever.
【拓展2译文】
我的钢琴之路
弹钢琴是我最喜欢的兴趣。它陪伴我六年了,给我的生活带来了很多快乐。
七岁时听到妈妈弹钢琴之前,我并不怎么喜欢音乐。我被深深打动,要求学习钢琴。我以前每周六上钢琴课,每天晚上练习一小时。有好几次我想放弃,但老师鼓励我坚持下去。现在,我能弹奏很多名曲,还在学校的比赛中获奖了。我还会在空闲时间教同学弹简单的曲子。
弹钢琴教会了我坚持和耐心。它不仅仅是一项爱好,更是我会永远珍惜的生活一部分。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.兴趣与职业相关(单元重点)
· 兴趣爱好:photography 摄影;playing the piano 弹钢琴;painting 绘画;reading 阅读;programming 编程;playing sports 运动;collecting stamps 集邮
· 职业相关:photographer 摄影师;astronomer 天文学家;musician 音乐家;writer 作家;engineer 工程师;artist 艺术家;doctor 医生;teacher 教师
· 语法相关:时间状语从句(when / as / before / after 引导);used to / did not use to(表示过去习惯)
· 行动与努力:practice regularly 定期练习;join a club 加入俱乐部;learn from 向……学习;stick to 坚持;work hard 努力;achieve dreams 实现梦想;take courses 参加课程
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 时间状语从句用法:
· when 表示“当……时”:I was excited when I won the photography competition.(赢得摄影比赛时,我很兴奋。)
· as 表示“随着”:As I practice more, my skills improve quickly.(随着练习增多,我的技能提升得很快。)
· after 表示“在……之后”:After I finish my homework, I practice the piano for an hour.(做完作业后,我弹一小时钢琴。)
· used to / did not use to 用法:
· 表示过去常做的事(现在不做):I used to play computer games every day.(我以前每天都玩电脑游戏。)
· 表示过去没有的习惯:I didn’t use to like reading, but now I read every night.(我以前不喜欢阅读,但现在每天晚上都读。)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:and 和;but 但是;so 所以;because 因为;when 当……时;as 随着;after 在……之后;before 在……之前;now 现在;in the future 将来
· 常用短语:fall in love with 爱上;start doing sth. 开始做某事;keep doing sth. 坚持做某事;look for 寻找;learn from 向……学习;stick to one’s interest 坚持兴趣;come true 实现;bring joy to 给……带来快乐;achieve one’s dream 实现梦想
二、实用句型积累
1.介绍兴趣爱好(贴合单元核心)
· My favourite interest is..., which I started when I was... 我最喜欢的兴趣是……,我从……岁开始接触它,例:My favourite interest is painting, which I started when I was five.(我最喜欢的兴趣是绘画,我从五岁开始接触它。)
· I fell in love with... after... 在……之后,我爱上了……,例:I fell in love with reading after my dad read stories to me every night.(爸爸每天晚上给我读故事后,我爱上了阅读。)
· I used to..., but now I... 我以前……,但现在我……,例:I used to draw only at home, but now I join the school art club.(我以前只在家画画,但现在我加入了学校的艺术俱乐部。)
1. 阐述兴趣与职业的关联(贴合单元主题)
· My interest in... has made me dream of becoming a... 我对……的兴趣让我梦想成为一名……,例:My interest in computers has made me dream of becoming a programmer.(我对电脑的兴趣让我梦想成为一名程序员。)
· To turn my interest into a career, I plan to... 为了把兴趣变成职业,我计划……,例:To turn my interest into a career, I plan to learn more professional knowledge and take related courses.(为了把兴趣变成职业,我计划学习更多专业知识,参加相关课程。)
· This interest helps me develop... skills, which are important for my dream job. 这项兴趣帮助我培养了……技能,这对我的梦想职业很重要,例:This interest helps me develop communication skills, which are important for my dream job as a teacher.(这项兴趣帮助我培养了沟通能力,这对我梦想成为一名教师很重要。)
1. 表达努力与期望(贴合单元内涵)
· I believe that as long as I... , I will... 我相信只要我……,我就会……,例:I believe that as long as I keep practicing, I will become a good musician.(我相信只要我坚持练习,我就会成为一名优秀的音乐家。)
· Following my interest makes me... , and I will never give up. 追随兴趣让我……,我永远不会放弃,例:Following my interest makes me happy and confident, and I will never give up.(追随兴趣让我快乐又自信,我永远不会放弃。)
· It is my dream to... , and I will work hard to make it come true. ……是我的梦想,我会努力让它实现,例:It is my dream to be a travel writer, and I will work hard to make it come true.(成为一名旅行作家是我的梦想,我会努力让它实现。)
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What is your favourite interest?;How did you develop this interest?;What dream job do you have?;How does your interest help your dream job?;What are you doing to achieve your dream?
· 回答句型:My favourite interest is playing basketball.;I developed this interest when I watched a basketball match.;My dream job is to be a basketball player.;It helps me stay healthy and learn teamwork.;I practice basketball every afternoon and learn from professional players.
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