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Unit 8 Follow your interests - 英语写作学案
Topic: Writing an article about your favourite hobby
【Phase 1: Explore & Deconstruct 语篇探究与细致解构】
阅读课本P124 Wang Yao的范文“My happy life with dancing”,完成以下探究任务。
Task A: The Skeleton (探寻文章骨架)
请仔细阅读范文,将段落(Para. 1-4)与对应的段落大意(Main Ideas)连线或填写对应字母:
A. Expressing hopes for the future
B. Introducing the hobby
C. Explaining why she likes it (Feelings & Reasons)
D. Describing how she developed the hobby (Past to Present)
Para. 1: ______ Para. 2: ______ Para. 3: ______ Para. 4: ______
Task B: The Timeline of Action (梳理时间与动作轴)
Wang Yao在第二段使用了丰富的时间状语来描述爱好的发展。请根据课文填空,感受她是如何将“过去”与“现在”巧妙连接的(输入量探究):
[Past 过去]
• Only starting to walk: Used to follow ______________________ on TV.
• Four years old: Started taking ______________________.
[Present 现在]
• Frequency (频率): Dance almost ______________________.
• Weekdays (工作日): Practise for _______________ after school.
• Weekends (周末): Practise for _______________ each day.
• Holidays (假期): Usually perform in ______________________.
Task C: The Power of Emotions (共情与原因探析)
在第三段,Wang Yao表达了她热爱舞蹈的原因。请找出她使用的描写情绪和感受的形容词或词组:
1. I never feel ________ with dancing.
2. I feel so ________ and ________.
3. It is ________ to express myself with my body language.
【Phase 2: Language Accumulation 语言内化与句型宝库】
优秀的写作者善于使用高级句型。请从文中找出对应原句并仿写。
1. 表达“从多大开始做某事”:
原句:I ________ taking dance lessons ________ I ________ four years old.
仿写 (Playing chess, 6 years old): __________________________________________________
2. 表达“过去常常做某事(现在不了)”:
原句:My mum said I ________ ________ follow the dancing shows on TV...
仿写 (Read picture books): I used to _________________________________________________
3. 表达“做某事很有趣”:
原句:It is ________ ________ express myself with my body language.
仿写 (Play basketball with friends): It is _____________________________________________
4. 表达对未来的期许:
原句:I ________ I can become a dancer ________ ________.
【Phase 3: Scaffolding & Joint Construction 搭建支架与平行阅读】
在自己独立写作前,让我们运用刚刚学到的结构和句型,一起完成下面这篇关于“打篮球”的短文填空,熟悉写作套路。
(Word Bank: used to / favourite / started / hope / fun / happy / weekends / every day)
My (1)________ hobby is playing basketball.
I (2)________ playing it when I was seven years old. I (3)________ watch NBA games on TV with my dad. Now I play it almost (4)________. I practise with my school team on weekdays, and play with my friends at (5)________.
I never feel tired when I play. I feel very (6)________ and energetic. It is (7)________ to work as a team and score points.
I (8)________ I can become a great basketball player one day.
【Phase 4: Differentiated Writing 实战篇:分层输出】
Teen Life Magazine 正在征稿:“What is your favourite hobby? Why do you like it? Write an article and send it to us.” 请给你的文章起一个吸引人的标题(Eye-catching title)。
请根据你自己的英语基础,选择 A、B、C 其中一个层次完成写作任务:
Level A (基础攀登层) - 适合需要更多语言支持的同学:
Title: My happy life with ___________
My favourite hobby is _________________.
I started _________________ when I was _______ years old. I used to _________________ (过去常做的事). Now I _________________ almost every day. At weekends, I _________________.
I like it very much. When I _____________, I feel _________________ (填感受). It is fun to _________________.
I hope I can _________________ one day.
Level B (能力提升层) - 适合已有清晰思路,能独立连词成句的同学:
Title: _______________________________
Para 1 (Introduction): My favourite hobby is...
Para 2 (Development - Past & Present): I started... when... I used to... Now I (frequency)...
Para 3 (Reasons & Feelings): I never feel... When I..., I feel... It is fun to...
Para 4 (Hopes): I hope I can... one day.
(在此处写下你的完整文章)
Level C (卓越挑战层) - 适合英语基础扎实,词汇丰富的同学:
请完全脱离模板,根据Wang Yao的思维导图(Outline),运用丰富的从句(如宾语从句、状语从句)、多样的高级形容词和准确的时态,自由创作一篇80词左右的文章。
(在此处写下你的完整文章)
【Phase 5: Self/Peer Checklist 评价与修改】
写完后,请对照课本P125的表格进行自我检查(Check and revise),在方框内打钩:
□ 1. I introduced my favourite hobby clearly at the beginning. (首段清晰引出爱好)
□ 2. I explained how I developed my hobby and why I like it. (交代了发展过程及原因)
□ 3. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. (使用了本单元重点词汇句型)
□ 4. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. (拼写、语法和标点正确)
□ 5. I used past tense for the past and present tense for the present correctly. (时态运用准确)
【参考答案 / Answer Key】
Phase 1: Explore & Deconstruct
Task A:
Para. 1: B Para. 2: D Para. 3: C Para. 4: A
Task B:
• the dancing shows
• dance lessons
• every day
• one hour
• several hours
• dance shows
Task C:
1. bored 2. happy, free 3. fun
Phase 2: Language Accumulation
1. started; when; was
仿写: I started playing chess when I was 6 years old.
2. used to
仿写: I used to read picture books when I was a child/much younger.
3. fun to
仿写: It is fun to play basketball with friends.
4. hope; one day
Phase 3: Scaffolding & Joint Construction
(1) favourite (2) started (3) used to (4) every day (5) weekends (6) happy (7) fun (8) hope
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