Unit 3 Yang Liwei's Mission to Space 作文学案- 2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语八年级下册

Unit 3 Yang Liweis Mission to Space 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Yang Liweis Mission to Space”为话题，属于“梦想与探索”主题范畴中“航天探索”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语讲述航天探索故事、分享追梦经历、论述坚持与使命的意义”，运用目的状语从句（so that） 及航天相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和感染力。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述自己或他人追求梦想（如航天、科学探索）的经历；② 给笔友分享对杨利伟航天使命的感悟；③ 论述“坚持与规划是实现梦想的关键”；④ 仿写杨利伟的故事传递追梦精神。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“励志性”和“实用性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “我的追梦之旅”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述你追求一个梦想（如成为科学家、运动员、艺术家等）的经历，包括梦想目标、为实现梦想付出的努力、遇到的挑战及感悟，词数80-100左右，题目为“My Journey to Achieve My Dream”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Journey to Achieve My Dream My dream is to become an astronaut like Yang Liwei, who fulfilled his space mission through years of hard work. I have loved space since I was a child. To realize my dream, I study science hard every day so that I can master related knowledge. I also join the school science club and attend space lectures regularly. Once, I failed a physics exam and felt discouraged. But I remembered Yang Liwei’s five-year training—he never gave up. I asked teachers for help and practiced more. Now, my science grades have improved a lot. This journey teaches me that dreams don’t come easily. With clear goals, persistent effort and proper planning, we can turn our dreams into reality. I will keep chasing my space dream. 【译文】 我的追梦之旅 我的梦想是成为像杨利伟那样的宇航员，他通过多年的刻苦努力完成了自己的太空使命。 我从小就热爱太空。为了实现梦想，我每天努力学习科学知识，以便掌握相关技能。我还加入了学校的科学俱乐部，定期参加太空讲座。有一次，我物理考试不及格，感到很沮丧。但我想起了杨利伟五年的训练——他从未放弃。我向老师求助，多加练习。现在，我的科学成绩有了很大提高。 这段旅程让我明白，梦想不会轻易实现。有了明确的目标、坚持不懈的努力和合理的规划，我们就能把梦想变成现实。我会继续追逐我的太空梦。 亮点词块 1.fulfill the space mission 完成太空使命 2.master related knowledge 掌握相关知识 3.science club 科学俱乐部 4.persistent effort 坚持不懈的努力 5.proper planning 合理规划 6.turn dreams into reality 把梦想变成现实 7.chase the dream 追逐梦想 高分句子 1.To realize my dream, I study science hard every day so that I can master related knowledge.（运用so that引导目的状语从句，贴合单元语法重点） 2.My dream is to become an astronaut like Yang Liwei, who fulfilled his space mission through years of hard work.（呼应课本主题人物，贴合单元核心话题） 3.With clear goals, persistent effort and proper planning, we can turn our dreams into reality.（升华主题，体现追梦的核心要素，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter对中国的航天事业很感兴趣，尤其敬佩杨利伟。请你写一封邮件，向他介绍杨利伟的航天使命及你的感悟，分享你自己的追梦计划，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, I’m glad you admire Yang Liwei—he is a true hero in China. I’d like to share his story and my dream with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m glad you admire Yang Liwei—he is a true hero in China. I’d like to share his story and my dream with you. Yang Liwei dreamed of flying as a child. He joined the army so that he could learn to fly, and trained for five years for the space mission. In 2003, he boarded Shenzhou-5 and became the first Chinese astronaut in space. His story inspires me a lot. My dream is to be a space scientist. I read space books every week and take part in science competitions. I know it’s tough, but I’ll keep trying like Yang Liwei. If you’re interested in space, we can share ideas together! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 很高兴你敬佩杨利伟——他是中国真正的英雄。我想和你分享他的故事以及我的梦想。 杨利伟小时候就梦想着飞行。他参军以便能学习飞行，并为太空任务训练了五年。2003年，他登上神舟五号，成为中国首位进入太空的宇航员。他的故事给了我很大的启发。 我的梦想是成为一名太空科学家。我每周都读太空相关的书籍，还参加科学竞赛。我知道这很艰难，但我会像杨利伟一样坚持下去。如果你对太空感兴趣，我们可以一起交流想法！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“坚持与规划是实现梦想的关键”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 实现梦想离不开明确的规划和坚持不懈的努力，二者相辅相成 理由 规划明确方向；坚持克服困难；二者结合才能达成目标 呼吁 树立梦想，做好规划，坚持到底 Dreams are valuable, but achieving them requires more than just desire. Clear planning and persistent effort are the keys to turning dreams into reality. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Dreams are valuable, but achieving them requires more than just desire. Clear planning and persistent effort are the keys to turning dreams into reality. Yang Liwei planned to be a pilot first so that he could get closer to his space dream. He trained hard for years and never gave up when facing difficulties. Without planning, we’ll lose direction; without persistence, we’ll give up easily. Let’s set clear goals, make practical plans, and keep working hard. Only in this way can we fulfill our dreams, just like Yang Liwei did. 【拓展2译文】 梦想很珍贵，但实现梦想需要的不仅仅是渴望。明确的规划和坚持不懈的努力是将梦想变为现实的关键。 杨利伟首先计划成为一名飞行员，以便能更接近他的太空梦想。他刻苦训练多年，面对困难从不放弃。没有规划，我们会迷失方向；没有坚持，我们会轻易放弃。 让我们树立明确的目标，制定切实可行的计划，并持续努力。只有这样，我们才能实现自己的梦想，就像杨利伟那样。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.航天与追梦相关（单元重点） · 航天相关：space mission 太空使命；astronaut 宇航员；Shenzhou-5 神舟五号；spacecraft 宇宙飞船；blast off 发射；training 训练；board 登上（飞船、飞机等）；universe 宇宙 · 目的状语从句相关：so that 以便；in order that 为了（可与so that 互换） · 追梦与努力：fulfill the dream 实现梦想；persistent effort 坚持不懈的努力；practical planning 切实可行的规划；master knowledge 掌握知识；overcome difficulties 克服困难；chase the dream 追逐梦想；turn into reality 变为现实 · 动作与表达：join the army 参军；attend lectures 参加讲座；take part in competitions 参加竞赛；set goals 树立目标；face challenges 面对挑战 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 目的状语从句（so that）用法： · She studies hard so that she can pass the exam.（她努力学习以便能通过考试。） · We practice speaking English every day so that we can improve our oral skills.（我们每天练习说英语，以便能提高口语能力。） · 目的状语从句与情态动词连用： · He saved money so that he could buy a computer.（他存钱以便能买一台电脑。） · They left early so that they might catch the first bus.（他们早点出发，以便能赶上头班车。） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：so that 以便；and 并且；but 但是；with 拥有；without 没有；just like 就像；only in this way 只有这样 · 感悟表达：inspire sb. 启发某人；lose direction 迷失方向；give up easily 轻易放弃；fulfill one’s dream 实现梦想；come true 实现 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述追梦经历（贴合单元核心） · My dream is to...like...who... 我的梦想是成为像……那样的人，他……，例：My dream is to be a scientist like Stephen Hawking who made great achievements in physics. · To realize my dream, I...so that... 为了实现我的梦想，我……以便……，例：To realize my dream, I practice painting every weekend so that I can improve my skills. · I faced...but I...like... 我遇到了……但我像……一样……，例：I faced many failures but I kept going like Yang Liwei. 1. 分享航天故事与感悟（贴合单元主题） · Sb. dreamed of...He...so that... 某人梦想着……他……以便……，例：Neil Armstrong dreamed of walking on the moon. He trained hard so that he could make it come true. · Sb.’s story inspires me a lot. 某人的故事给了我很大启发，例：Yang Liwei’s story inspires me a lot to chase my own dream. · I know it’s tough, but I’ll... 我知道这很艰难，但我会……，例：I know it’s tough to be a doctor, but I’ll keep studying hard. 1. 论述追梦的关键（贴合单元内涵） · Achieving dreams requires... 实现梦想需要……，例：Achieving dreams requires clear goals and never giving up. · Without..., we’ll...; without..., we’ll... 没有……，我们会……；没有……，我们会……，例：Without planning, we’ll get lost; without persistence, we’ll quit easily. · Only by...can we... 只有通过……，我们才能……，例：Only by working hard and making plans can we achieve our dreams. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What did Yang Liwei do to prepare for his space mission?；What is your dream and how do you plan to achieve it?；Why is planning important for realizing dreams?；How did Yang Liwei’s story inspire you?；Have you ever faced difficulties when chasing your dream? · 回答句型：He joined the army to learn to fly and trained for five years.；My dream is to be a teacher. I study hard and practice communicating with kids.；Because planning helps us know what to do step by step.；It teaches me that persistence can overcome any difficulty.；Yes, I once failed a competition, but I didn’t give up and tried again. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $