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Unit 1 The Big Move 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“The Big Move”为话题,属于“生活变迁”主题范畴中“新环境适应”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语讲述搬家、转学等环境变化的经历、分享适应新环境的感受、论述主动适应的重要性”,运用时间状语从句(when/while/as soon as/before/after) 及环境适应相关核心词汇,提升叙事类写作的逻辑性和感染力。常见写作角度包括:① 讲述一次搬家或转学的难忘经历;② 给笔友分享适应新环境的过程与感悟;③ 论述“主动沟通是适应新环境的关键”;④ 仿写苏珊的日记传递适应新环境的勇气。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“真实性”和“实用性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“一次难忘的搬家经历”。请用英语写一篇短文,讲述一次你搬家的经历,包括搬家的原因、过程中的趣事或困难、适应新环境的过程及感悟,词数80-100左右,题目为“An Unforgettable Moving Experience”。
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【范文】
An Unforgettable Moving Experience
Last summer, my family moved to a new city because my dad got a new job—just like Susan in the textbook.
As soon as we arrived at the new apartment, I felt worried. I didn’t know anyone here and was afraid of the new school. While my parents were arranging furniture, I wandered around the neighborhood. Suddenly, a boy about my age came up to me and introduced himself. He showed me around and told me interesting things about the area. After we talked for a while, I felt much better.
When I started school a week later, he helped me make new friends. This experience teaches me that moving to a new place isn’t scary. As long as we are open to others, we can quickly get used to the new life.
【译文】
一次难忘的搬家经历
去年夏天,因为爸爸找到了一份新工作,我们全家搬到了一座新城市——就像课本里的苏珊一样。
我们一到达新公寓,我就感到很担心。我在这里不认识任何人,还害怕新学校。当爸爸妈妈在整理家具时,我在小区里闲逛。突然,一个和我年纪差不多的男孩走近我并做了自我介绍。他带我四处参观,还告诉我这个地方的趣事。我们聊了一会儿后,我感觉好多了。
一周后我开学时,他帮我交到了新朋友。这次经历让我明白,搬到一个新地方并不可怕。只要我们对别人敞开心扉,就能很快适应新生活。
亮点词块
1.get a new job 找到一份新工作
2.arrange furniture 整理家具
3.wander around 四处闲逛
4.come up to 走近
5.introduce oneself 自我介绍
6.get used to 习惯于
7.be open to 对……敞开心扉
高分句子
1.As soon as we arrived at the new apartment, I felt worried.(用as soon as引导时间状语从句,贴合单元语法重点)
2.While my parents were arranging furniture, I wandered around the neighborhood.(用while描述并行动作,细节生动,贴合单元核心语法)
3.This experience teaches me that moving to a new place isn’t scary. As long as we are open to others, we can quickly get used to the new life.(升华主题,体现适应新环境的核心感悟,贴合单元内涵)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter即将随家人搬到另一个国家,他对适应新环境感到焦虑,请你写一封邮件,分享你的搬家经历及适应新环境的方法,词数不少于60。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you’re anxious about moving to a new country. I had a similar experience last year, and it really taught me a lot.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you’re anxious about moving to a new country. I had a similar experience last year, and it really taught me a lot.
When we moved, I was afraid of making no friends. But as soon as I arrived, I tried to talk to my neighbors. A boy helped me get used to the new life soon. Here are some tips for you: first, be brave to introduce yourself to others. Second, join after-school clubs to meet people with similar hobbies. Finally, be patient—adaptation takes time.
Moving is a new beginning, not a trouble. I believe you’ll make new friends and enjoy the new life. Cheer up!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
听说你对搬到一个新国家感到焦虑,我很为你担心。我去年有过类似的经历,那真的让我学到了很多。
我们搬家时,我害怕交不到朋友。但我们一到那里,我就试着和邻居说话。一个男孩很快帮我适应了新生活。给你一些建议:首先,勇敢地向别人介绍自己;其次,加入课外俱乐部,结识有相似爱好的人;最后,要有耐心——适应需要时间。
搬家是一个新的开始,而不是麻烦。我相信你会交到新朋友,享受新生活的。振作起来!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,论述“主动沟通是适应新环境的关键”,词数70左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
核心观点
主动沟通是适应新环境的关键,能帮助我们消除陌生感、结交朋友、融入新集体
理由
主动沟通打破隔阂;主动沟通建立信任;主动沟通获取帮助
呼吁
勇敢主动地与他人交流,更快适应新环境,开启美好新生活
Active communication is the key to adapting to a new environment. When we move to a new place, we often feel lonely and worried.
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【拓展2范文】
Active communication is the key to adapting to a new environment. When we move to a new place, we often feel lonely and worried.
Active communication can break down barriers quickly—just like the boy who talked to me when I moved. It helps us build trust with others and make new friends. What’s more, we can get useful help through communication. Without it, we might stay isolated for a long time.
We should be brave to talk to people around us. With active communication, we can adapt to the new environment soon and start a wonderful new life.
【拓展2译文】
主动沟通是适应新环境的关键。当我们搬到一个新地方时,常常会感到孤独和担心。
主动沟通能快速打破隔阂——就像我搬家时那个主动和我说话的男孩一样。它帮助我们与他人建立信任,交到新朋友。更重要的是,我们可以通过沟通获得有用的帮助。没有沟通,我们可能会长期处于孤立状态。
我们应该勇敢地和身边的人交流。通过主动沟通,我们能很快适应新环境,开启美好的新生活。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.环境适应相关(单元重点)
· 搬家与行动:move to 搬到;arrange furniture 整理家具;wander around 四处闲逛;come up to 走近;introduce oneself 自我介绍;show around 带领参观;pack boxes 打包箱子;unpack 拆包
· 时间状语从句相关:when 当……时;while 当……时;as soon as 一……就……;before 在……之前;after 在……之后;as 随着
· 感受与适应:worried 担心的;anxious 焦虑的;lonely 孤独的;scared 害怕的;comfortable 舒适的;get used to 习惯于;adapt to 适应;make new friends 交新朋友;break down barriers 打破隔阂
· 表达与情感:be afraid of 害怕;feel much better 感觉好多了;be open to 对……敞开心扉;a new beginning 一个新的开始;isolated 孤立的
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 时间状语从句(when):
· 主句过去时+从句过去时:When I arrived at the new school, I saw many new faces.(当我到达新学校时,我看到了很多新面孔。)
· 主句过去进行时+从句一般过去时:I was reading when my mom called me.(我正在看书时,妈妈给我打电话了。)
· 时间状语从句(while):
· 从句过去进行时+主句过去进行时:While my dad was driving, my mom was packing snacks.(爸爸开车时,妈妈在打包零食。)
· 从句过去进行时+主句一般过去时:While they were talking, I joined them.(他们聊天时,我加入了他们。)
· 时间状语从句(as soon as/before/after):
· As soon as we got there, we started to clean.(我们一到那里就开始打扫。)
· Before I left the old house, I took many photos.(离开老房子之前,我拍了很多照片。)
· After he helped me, we became good friends.(他帮我之后,我们成了好朋友。)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:just like 就像;as long as 只要;first 首先;second 其次;finally 最后;what’s more 更重要的是;without 没有
· 感悟表达:break down barriers 打破隔阂;build trust 建立信任;adapt to 适应;a new beginning 一个新的开始;take time 需要时间
二、实用句型积累
1.讲述搬家经历(贴合单元核心)
· Last... my family moved to... because... 去年……我们全家搬到了……因为……,例:Last winter, my family moved to Shanghai because my mom changed her job.
· As soon as we..., I felt... 我们一……,我就感到……,例:As soon as we entered the new house, I felt excited and nervous.
· While... I... 当……时,我……,例:While my parents were unpacking boxes, I explored the new neighborhood.
1. 分享适应新环境的方法(贴合单元主题)
· Here are some tips for you: first... second... finally... 给你一些建议:首先……其次……最后……,例:Here are some tips for you: first smile at others; second join in activities; finally be honest.
· When you..., try to... 当你……时,试着……,例:When you feel lonely, try to talk to your classmates.
· I believe you’ll... 我相信你会……,例:I believe you’ll adapt to the new school soon.
1. 论述主动沟通的重要性(贴合单元内涵)
· Active communication is the key to... 主动沟通是……的关键,例:Active communication is the key to fitting into a new group.
· Just like... who... 就像……的……,例:Just like the boy who主动 talked to me, communication brings people closer.
· With active communication, we can... 通过主动沟通,我们能……,例:With active communication, we can eliminate strangeness and make friends.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:Why did Susan feel nervous on her first day of school?;What difficulties did you meet when you moved?;How did the boy help the writer adapt to the new neighborhood?;Why is active communication important for adapting to a new environment?;What should you do if you feel lonely in a new place?
· 回答句型:Because she couldn’t speak Chinese well and didn’t know anyone.;I couldn’t find my way to school and had no friends at first.;He showed the writer around and helped him make new friends.;Because it can break down barriers and build trust.;I should be brave to talk to others and join in group activities.
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