Unit 7 The Bad Attitude 作文学案2025-2026学年教科版(五四学制) 九年级英语下册

该初中英语作文学案以“The Bad Attitude”为主题，聚焦“态度决定成败”，核心目标是运用情态动词should/shouldn’t及态度相关词汇，提升叙事与议论写作的逻辑性和感染力。导学设计通过“讲述经历-分享感悟-论述观点”的课时递进和任务关联，构建从基础到拓展的完整学习路径，贴合课本话题，突出反思性与指导性。 亮点在于“叙事-议论”一体化写作任务设计，如单元话题“讲述态度影响结果的经历”、拓展1“给笔友提建议”、拓展2“论述良好态度价值”，培养语言能力（积累亮点词块与高分句子）和思维品质（分析态度与结果关系）。提供范文、译文及实用句型，支持学生深度学习和能力提升，为教师单元复习教学提供系统资源和清晰指导。

Unit 7 The Bad Attitude 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“The Bad Attitude”为话题，属于“人生价值”主题范畴中“态度决定成败”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语讲述态度影响结果的经历、分享对‘良好态度’的理解、论述‘积极态度是人生财富’的理念’’，运用情态动词表建议（should/shouldn’t） 及态度相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和感染力。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次因态度好坏导致不同结果的经历；② 给笔友分享对“工作/学习态度”的感悟；③ 论述“良好态度是成功的基石”；④ 仿写木匠的故事传递态度的重要性。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“反思性”和“指导性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “态度改变结果”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你因态度不同而收获不同结果的经历，包括背景、过程、结果及感悟，词数80-100左右，题目为“A Lesson from My Attitude”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 A Lesson from My Attitude Just like the carpenter in the story who ruined his own house with a bad attitude, I once learned a valuable lesson from my wrong attitude. Last term, our class was assigned a group project. I thought it was boring and developed a lazy attitude. I didn’t concentrate on the work, didn’t use simple materials, and even skipped group discussions. As a result, our project got a low grade. My teacher told me: “You should take every task seriously—attitude decides the result.” I felt ashamed and changed my attitude. In the next project, I worked hard and communicated actively. Finally, we won first prize. This experience teaches me that a good attitude is the key to success. We should always be responsible and positive, for our attitude shapes what we achieve. 【译文】 态度给我的教训 就像故事中那位因糟糕态度毁掉自己房子的木匠一样，我曾经从错误的态度中吸取了宝贵的教训。 上学期，我们班被分配了一个小组项目。我觉得它很无聊，便产生了懒惰的态度：不专注工作、使用简单材料，甚至缺席小组讨论。结果，我们的项目得了低分。老师告诉我：“你应该认真对待每一项任务——态度决定结果。”我感到很羞愧，于是改变了态度。在下一个项目中，我努力工作、积极沟通，最终我们赢得了一等奖。 这次经历让我明白，良好的态度是成功的关键。我们应该始终保持负责任和积极的心态，因为态度塑造我们的成就。 亮点词块 1.valuable lesson 宝贵的教训 2.group project 小组项目 3.concentrate on 专注于 4.skip group discussions 缺席小组讨论 5.low grade 低分 6.take...seriously 认真对待…… 7.shape what we achieve 塑造我们的成就 高分句子 1.I thought it was boring and developed a lazy attitude.（呼应课本木匠的核心情节，贴合单元主题） 2.My teacher told me: “You should take every task seriously—attitude decides the result.”（运用情态动词should表建议，贴合单元语法重点） 3.This experience teaches me that a good attitude is the key to success.（升华主题，点明态度的核心价值，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter最近因学习态度敷衍导致成绩下滑，很烦恼，请你写一封邮件，分享课本故事带给你的感悟及改善态度的建议，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about your falling grades due to a careless attitude. The story of the carpenter in my textbook really makes me think deeply. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about your falling grades due to a careless attitude. The story of the carpenter in my textbook really makes me think deeply. The carpenter had a bad attitude toward his last project—he used cheap materials and didn’t work hard. Finally, he had to live in the poorly built house. This shows that attitude directly affects results. For you, first, you should set clear goals to stay motivated. Second, you shouldn’t put off tasks—finish them carefully step by step. Finally, learn to enjoy the process, not just the result. A good attitude can turn things around. I believe if you change your attitude and work hard, your grades will improve soon. Cheer up! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你因为学习态度敷衍导致成绩下滑而烦恼，我很为你担心。我课本里木匠的故事让我有了深刻的思考。 那位木匠对最后一个项目态度恶劣——使用廉价材料且不认真工作，最终只能住进自己粗制滥造的房子里。这表明态度直接影响结果。对你来说，首先应该设定明确目标保持动力；其次不要拖延任务，一步一步认真完成；最后要学会享受过程，而不仅仅是结果。 良好的态度能扭转局面。我相信只要你改变态度、努力学习，成绩很快就会提升。振作起来！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“良好态度是人生的财富”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 良好态度是人生最宝贵的财富，能让人在困境中坚持、在工作中收获、在成长中进步 理由 良好态度提升工作效率；良好态度赢得他人尊重；良好态度促进自我成长 呼吁 培养良好态度，以积极心态面对人生挑战 A good attitude is the most precious wealth in life. It can help people overcome difficulties and achieve more in various situations. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 A good attitude is the most precious wealth in life. It can help people overcome difficulties and achieve more in various situations. Just like the carpenter should have kept a positive attitude to build a nice house, we should also value a good attitude. It improves work efficiency, helps us win others’ respect, and promotes personal growth. A bad attitude, however, can ruin our efforts easily. We should cultivate a good attitude in daily life. With positivity and responsibility, we can face life’s challenges bravely and create a better future. 【拓展2译文】 良好的态度是人生最宝贵的财富，它能帮助人们克服困难，在各种情况下收获更多。 就像那位木匠本应保持积极态度建造一座漂亮的房子一样，我们也应该珍视良好的态度。它能提升工作效率、帮助我们赢得他人尊重、促进个人成长。而糟糕的态度则容易毁掉我们的努力。 我们应该在日常生活中培养良好的态度，以积极和负责任的心态勇敢面对人生挑战，创造更美好的未来。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.态度相关（单元重点） · 态度与行为：attitude 态度；good attitude 良好态度；bad attitude 糟糕态度；positive 积极的；lazy 懒惰的；careless 敷衍的；responsible 负责任的；concentrate on 专注于；take...seriously 认真对待 · 建议相关（情态动词）：should 应该；shouldn’t 不应该；ought to 应该；had better 最好 · 故事与感悟：carpenter 木匠；valuable lesson 宝贵的教训；ruin 毁掉；poorly built 粗制滥造的；directly affects 直接影响；shape 塑造；promote growth 促进成长；overcome difficulties 克服困难 · 表达与动作：skip discussions 缺席讨论；put off tasks 拖延任务；set clear goals 设定明确目标；work efficiently 高效工作；win respect 赢得尊重；cultivate 培养 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 情态动词表建议（should/shouldn’t）： · 肯定式：You should be responsible.（你应该负责任。）；We should take tasks seriously.（我们应该认真对待任务。） · 否定式：You shouldn’t be lazy.（你不应该懒惰。）；He shouldn’t skip group work.（他不应该缺席小组工作。） · 情态动词表责任/义务（ought to）： · We ought to keep a positive attitude.（我们应该保持积极的态度。）；She ought to finish her work carefully.（她应该认真完成工作。） · 常用句型： · 提建议：You should... / Why not... / It’s better to... · 反思：If only I had...（要是我……就好了）；I should have...（我本应该……） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：just like 就像；as a result 结果；however 然而；first 首先；second 其次；finally 最后；with 凭借 · 感悟表达：the key to success 成功的关键；most precious wealth 最宝贵的财富；directly affects results 直接影响结果；turn things around 扭转局面；face challenges 面对挑战 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述态度相关经历（贴合单元核心） · Just like...who..., I once... 就像……的……，我曾经……，例：Just like the carpenter who had a bad attitude, I once ruined a task with my laziness. · I developed a...attitude, so I... 我产生了……的态度，所以……，例：I developed a careless attitude, so I made many mistakes in the exam. · This experience teaches me that... 这次经历让我明白……，例：This experience teaches me that attitude is more important than ability. 1. 分享态度改善建议（贴合单元主题） · This shows that... 这表明……，例：This shows that a good attitude can make great differences. · For you, first... second... finally... 对你来说，首先……其次……最后……，例：For you, first change your lazy habit, second focus on details, finally set small goals. · I believe if you..., you will... 我相信如果你……，你会……，例：I believe if you keep a positive attitude, you will solve the problem. 1. 论述态度的重要性（贴合单元内涵） · A good attitude is the most precious wealth in... 良好的态度是……中最宝贵的财富，例：A good attitude is the most precious wealth in work and life. · Just like...should have..., we should also... 就像……本应该……，我们也应该……，例：Just like the carpenter should have worked hard, we should also value every task. · With..., we can... 凭借……，我们可以……，例：With a responsible attitude, we can achieve our goals. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：Why did the carpenter develop a bad attitude?；What happened to the carpenter in the end?；Have you ever had a lesson from a bad attitude?；Why is a good attitude important?；What advice would you give to someone with a bad attitude? · 回答句型：Because he felt unfair that he couldn’t have a nice house.；He had to live in the poorly built house he made.；Yes, I once failed a project because I was lazy.；Because it improves work efficiency and helps us win respect.；I would advise him to take tasks seriously and stay positive. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $