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Unit 6 A Girl Named Wilma 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“A Girl Named Wilma”为话题,属于“追求理想”主题范畴,核心聚焦“用英语讲述不畏困境、坚守梦想的经历、分享对‘永不言弃’的理解、论述‘毅力造就成功’的理念’’,运用情态动词表可能性(may/might/will) 及励志相关核心词汇,提升叙事类与议论类写作的感染力和逻辑性。常见写作角度包括:① 讲述一次突破困境、坚持追梦的经历;② 给笔友分享威尔玛的故事带给你的感悟;③ 论述“毅力是成功的必经之路”;④ 仿写威尔玛的故事传递坚韧精神。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“励志性”和“感染力”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“逆境中的追梦之路”。请用英语写一篇短文,讲述一次你在困境中坚持追求目标的经历,包括困境、努力过程、结果及感悟,词数80-100左右,题目为“Chasing My Dream in Adversity”。
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【范文】
Chasing My Dream in Adversity
Just like Wilma Rudolph who fought against polio to become an Olympic champion, I also faced great difficulties while chasing my dream of being a dancer.
I was born with weak legs and doctors said I might never dance freely. But Wilma’s story inspired me—I refused to give up. I practiced dancing every day, starting with simple steps and gradually moving to difficult moves. When my legs ached badly, I told myself: “I can do it!” There were times I wanted to quit, but I remembered Wilma’s perseverance.
After two years of hard work, I won first prize in the school dance competition. This experience teaches me that nothing is impossible with determination. Even if the road is tough, we may achieve our dreams if we keep trying.
【译文】
逆境中的追梦之路
就像与小儿麻痹症抗争、最终成为奥运冠军的威尔玛·鲁道夫一样,我在追求舞蹈梦想的路上也遭遇了巨大的困难。
我天生腿部孱弱,医生说我可能永远无法自由跳舞。但威尔玛的故事激励了我——我拒绝放弃。我每天练习跳舞,从简单的舞步开始,逐渐过渡到高难度动作。当腿部剧痛时,我告诉自己:“我能做到!”有好几次我想过放弃,但我想起了威尔玛的毅力。
经过两年的努力,我赢得了学校舞蹈比赛的一等奖。这次经历让我明白,只要有决心,没有什么是不可能的。即使道路艰难,只要我们坚持尝试,就可能实现梦想。
亮点词块
1.fight against 与……抗争
2.Olympic champion 奥运冠军
3.weak legs 腿部孱弱
4.refuse to give up 拒绝放弃
5.gradually move to 逐渐过渡到
6.perseverance 毅力
7.tough road 艰难的道路
高分句子
1.I was born with weak legs and doctors said I might never dance freely.(用might表过去的可能性,贴合单元语法重点)
2.But Wilma’s story inspired me—I refused to give up.(呼应课本核心人物精神,贴合单元主题)
3.This experience teaches me that nothing is impossible with determination.(升华主题,体现毅力的核心价值,贴合单元内涵)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter在追求足球梦想的过程中多次受挫,想要放弃,请你写一封邮件,分享威尔玛的故事带给你的感悟及坚持梦想的建议,词数不少于60。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you want to give up your football dream because of repeated setbacks. The story of Wilma Rudolph in my textbook really touches my heart.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you want to give up your football dream because of repeated setbacks. The story of Wilma Rudolph in my textbook really touches my heart.
Wilma had polio and was told she might never walk, but she practiced hard and won three Olympic gold medals. Her story shows that setbacks are not the end. For you, first, believe in yourself—you may be closer to success than you think. Second, analyze your mistakes and keep improving. Finally, don’t be afraid of failure—it’s a step toward growth.
Dreams need perseverance to come true. I believe if you keep trying, you will achieve your football dream. Never give up!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
听说你因为多次受挫想要放弃足球梦想,我很为你担心。我课本里威尔玛·鲁道夫的故事真的触动了我的心。
威尔玛患有小儿麻痹症,医生说她可能永远无法走路,但她刻苦训练,最终赢得了三枚奥运金牌。她的故事表明,挫折并非终点。对你来说,首先要相信自己——你可能比想象中更接近成功;其次,分析错误并持续进步;最后,不要害怕失败——它是成长的一步。
梦想需要毅力才能实现。我相信只要你坚持尝试,就一定能实现足球梦想。永不放弃!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,论述“毅力是成功的必经之路”,词数70左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
核心观点
毅力是跨越困境、实现成功的必经之路,能让人在挫折中坚守、在迷茫中前行
理由
毅力让人不轻易放弃;毅力积累点滴进步;毅力铸就坚韧品格
呼吁
心怀毅力,直面困境,勇敢追逐梦想
Perseverance is the only way to success. It gives people the strength to keep going when facing difficulties and setbacks.
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【拓展2范文】
Perseverance is the only way to success. It gives people the strength to keep going when facing difficulties and setbacks.
Just like Wilma Rudolph, who relied on perseverance to overcome polio and become a champion. Perseverance keeps us from giving up easily, helps us accumulate small progresses, and shapes a strong character. Without perseverance, most dreams will die halfway.
We should cultivate perseverance and face challenges bravely. With perseverance, we may turn our dreams into reality and achieve extraordinary success.
【拓展2译文】
毅力是成功的必经之路,它给予人们在困境与挫折中坚持前行的力量。
就像威尔玛·鲁道夫一样,她凭借毅力战胜小儿麻痹症,成为冠军。毅力让我们不轻易放弃,帮助我们积累点滴进步,塑造坚韧品格。没有毅力,大多数梦想会半途而废。
我们应该培养毅力,勇敢面对挑战。有了毅力,我们就可能将梦想变为现实,成就非凡的成功。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.追梦与毅力相关(单元重点)
· 困境与突破:adversity 逆境;setback 挫折;fight against 与……抗争;overcome 克服;polio 小儿麻痹症;weak legs 腿部孱弱;tough road 艰难的道路
· 可能性相关(情态动词):may 可能;might 可能;will 将会;can 能够;could 过去能够;might never 可能永远不会;may achieve 可能实现
· 故事与感悟:perseverance 毅力;determination 决心;Olympic champion 奥运冠军;inspire 激励;refuse to give up 拒绝放弃;accumulate progresses 积累进步;cultivate 培养
· 行动与表达:practice hard 刻苦训练;start with 从……开始;gradually move to 逐渐过渡到;analyze mistakes 分析错误;face challenges 面对挑战;turn into reality 变为现实
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 情态动词表可能性:
· 现在/将来可能性(may/might/will):He may win the competition.(他可能会赢得比赛。);She might achieve her dream.(她可能会实现梦想。);They will succeed with perseverance.(有了毅力,他们会成功。)
· 过去可能性(might have done):He might have given up without Wilma’s story.(没有威尔玛的故事,他可能已经放弃了。)
· 情态动词表能力/建议:
· can/could 表能力:I can practice dancing for hours.(我能练习跳舞好几个小时。);She could walk without a brace at nine.(她九岁时就能不戴支架走路了。)
· should 表建议:You should keep trying.(你应该坚持尝试。);We should cultivate perseverance.(我们应该培养毅力。)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:just like 就像;but 但是;even if 即使;because of 因为;first 首先;second 其次;finally 最后;without 没有
· 感悟表达:the only way to ……的必经之路;nothing is impossible 没有什么是不可能的;die halfway 半途而废;turn into reality 变为现实;extraordinary success 非凡的成功
二、实用句型积累
1.讲述逆境追梦经历(贴合单元核心)
· Just like… who…, I also… 就像……的……,我也……,例:Just like Wilma who never gave up, I also faced difficulties in chasing my dream.
· Doctors said I might never… but I… 医生说我可能永远不会……但我……,例:Doctors said I might never sing well but I practiced every day.
· This experience teaches me that… 这次经历让我明白……,例:This experience teaches me that perseverance makes success possible.
1. 分享追梦建议(贴合单元主题)
· Her story shows that… 她的故事表明……,例:Her story shows that setbacks are not insurmountable.
· For you, first… second… finally… 对你来说,首先……其次……最后……,例:For you, first believe in yourself, second keep practicing, finally learn from failures.
· I believe if you… you will… 我相信如果你……你会……,例:I believe if you stick to it, you will realize your dream.
1. 论述毅力的重要性(贴合单元内涵)
· Perseverance is the only way to… 毅力是……的必经之路,例:Perseverance is the only way to overcome difficulties.
· Just like… who relied on… to… 就像……依靠……去……,例:Just like Wilma who relied on perseverance to become a champion.
· With perseverance, we may… 有了毅力,我们可能……,例:With perseverance, we may achieve what seems impossible.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What difficulty did Wilma face when she was young?;How did Wilma become an Olympic champion?;Have you ever chased a dream in adversity?;Why is perseverance important for success?;What can we learn from Wilma’s story?
· 回答句型:She had polio and was told she would never walk.;She practiced hard every day and never gave up.;Yes, I once tried to learn the piano despite my clumsy fingers.;Because it keeps us from giving up and helps us accumulate progress.;We can learn that nothing is impossible with determination.
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