Unit 4 Growing Good Corn 作文学案- 2025-2026学年教科版英语九年级上册

Unit 4 Growing Good Corn 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Growing Good Corn”为话题，属于“团结合作”主题范畴中“互助共赢”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语讲述互助合作的故事、分享团队协作的收获、论述‘共赢’的人生智慧’’，运用一般过去时（规则动词） 及合作相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和感染力。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次团队合作完成任务的经历；② 给朋友写邮件分享互助带来的成功；③ 论述“互助是共赢的基础”；④ 仿写农场故事传递协作理念。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“协作性”和“共赢性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次难忘的团队合作”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你参与团队合作的经历，包括背景、过程、合作细节及收获，词数80-100左右，题目为“A Memorable Teamwork Experience”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 A Memorable Teamwork Experience Last semester, our class took part in the school garden competition, and we decided to grow vegetables together—just like Farmer Duffy shared his corn seeds. At first, we didn’t know how to prepare the soil or choose seeds. Some classmates researched online, others asked the gardener for advice, and I was responsible for watering the plants every afternoon. When pests appeared, we worked together to make natural pesticides. After two months, our garden was full of fresh vegetables. This experience taught me that teamwork makes dreams come true. Just as good corn needs neighbors’ pollen, success needs others’ help. We achieved more by supporting each other. 【译文】 一次难忘的团队合作经历 上学期，我们班参加了学校的园艺比赛，我们决定一起种植蔬菜——就像达菲农场主分享他的玉米种子那样。 一开始，我们不知道如何翻土或选种。有些同学上网查资料，有些向园丁请教，而我负责每天下午给植物浇水。当害虫出现时，我们一起制作了天然杀虫剂。两个月后，我们的菜园里长满了新鲜蔬菜。 这次经历让我明白，团队合作能让梦想成真。就像优质玉米需要邻居的花粉一样，成功也需要他人的帮助。通过相互支持，我们收获了更多。 亮点词块 1.take part in 参加 2.prepare the soil 翻土 3.natural pesticides 天然杀虫剂 4.make dreams come true 让梦想成真 5.support each other 相互支持 6.share seeds 分享种子 7.be responsible for 负责 高分句子 1.At first, we didn’t know how to prepare the soil or choose seeds. Some classmates researched online, others asked the gardener for advice, and I was responsible for watering the plants every afternoon.（用一般过去时描述过去动作，贴合单元语法重点） 2.Just as good corn needs neighbors’ pollen, success needs others’ help.（呼应课本核心隐喻，贴合单元主题） 3.This experience taught me that teamwork makes dreams come true.（升华主题，体现合作的意义，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter最近在小组项目中遇到了合作难题，请你写一封邮件，分享你对“互助共赢”的理解及建议，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re having trouble with your group project. The story of Farmer Duffy in my textbook really made me think about the importance of mutual help. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re having trouble with your group project. The story of Farmer Duffy in my textbook really made me think about the importance of mutual help. Farmer Duffy shared his special corn seeds with neighbors, and his corn grew better because of their good pollen. This shows that helping others is helping ourselves. For your project, try to talk openly with your group members first—find out everyone’s strengths. Assign tasks based on what each person is good at. When someone is in trouble, offer your help actively. Teamwork isn’t about doing everything alone, but about working together. I believe you’ll finish the project successfully by supporting each other. Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你在小组项目中遇到了麻烦，我很为你担心。我课本里达菲农场主的故事让我对互助的重要性有了深刻的思考。 达菲农场主将他的优质玉米种子分享给邻居，而他的玉米也因为邻居们的优质花粉长得更好。这表明，帮助别人就是帮助自己。对于你的项目，首先试着和组员坦诚沟通——找到每个人的优势，根据各自擅长的领域分配任务。当有人遇到困难时，主动伸出援手。 团队合作不是独自完成所有事，而是共同努力。我相信通过相互支持，你们一定能成功完成项目。 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“互助是共赢的基础”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 互助是个人与集体成功的关键，能实现共赢 理由 互助发挥各自优势；互助弥补彼此不足；互助增进信任与友谊 呼吁 学会分享与互助，共建共赢的美好环境 Mutual help is the foundation of win-win results. No one can achieve great things alone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Mutual help is the foundation of win-win results. No one can achieve great things alone. First, mutual help makes full use of everyone’s strengths—someone is good at planning, while another excels at execution. Second, it fills in each other’s weaknesses, making tasks easier to complete. What’s more, helping each other builds trust and friendship, just like Farmer Duffy and his neighbors. We should learn to share and help others. Only through mutual support can individuals and groups achieve common success. 【拓展2译文】 互助是共赢的基础，没有人能独自成就大事。 首先，互助能充分发挥每个人的优势——有人擅长规划，有人擅长执行；其次，它能弥补彼此的不足，让任务更易完成；更重要的是，互助能建立信任与友谊，就像达菲农场主和他的邻居们那样。 我们应该学会分享与助人，只有通过相互支持，个人和集体才能实现共同成功。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.合作互助相关（单元重点） · 合作与行动：teamwork 团队合作；mutual help 互助；share 分享；cooperate 合作；support each other 相互支持；assign tasks 分配任务；work together 共同努力；take part in 参加 · 一般过去时（规则动词）相关：researched 研究；asked 询问；watered 浇水；prepared 准备；decided 决定；achieved 实现；shared 分享；finished 完成 · 故事与感悟：Farmer Duffy 达菲农场主；corn seeds 玉米种子；pollen 花粉；win-win 共赢；strengths 优势；weaknesses 不足；foundation 基础 · 表达与动作：make natural pesticides 制作天然杀虫剂；prepare the soil 翻土；choose seeds 选种；fill in 弥补；make full use of 充分利用 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 一般过去时（规则动词变化）： · 直接加-ed：work → worked；share → shared；water → watered；help → helped · 以e结尾加-d：live → lived；prepare → prepared；decide → decided · 辅音+y结尾变i加-ed：study → studied；try → tried；carry → carried · 重读闭音节双写尾字母加-ed：stop → stopped；plan → planned · 一般过去时（否定式与疑问式）： · 否定式：We didn’t know how to start.（我们不知道如何开始。） · 疑问式：Did you cooperate well with your teammates?（你和队友合作得好吗？） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：first 首先；second 其次；what’s more 更重要的是；at first 一开始；after that 之后；finally 最后 · 感悟表达：make dreams come true 让梦想成真；achieve success 获得成功；the foundation of ……的基础；build trust 建立信任 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述团队合作经历（贴合单元核心） · We decided to… together, just like… 我们决定一起……，就像……，例：We decided to organize a charity sale together, just like Farmer Duffy shared his seeds. · Some… others… and I… 有些人……有些人……而我……，例：Some designed posters, others contacted donors, and I managed the money. · This experience taught me that… 这次经历让我明白……，例：This experience taught me that mutual help makes difficult things easy. 1. 分享互助观点（贴合单元主题） · The story of… made me realize that… ……的故事让我意识到……，例：The story of Farmer Duffy made me realize that sharing brings win-win results. · For…, try to… 对于……，试着……，例：For your group project, try to communicate more and help each other. · Teamwork isn’t about… but about… 团队合作不是……而是……，例：Teamwork isn’t about winning alone, but about growing together. 1. 论述互助重要性（贴合单元内涵） · … is the foundation of… ……是……的基础，例：Mutual help is the foundation of a harmonious team. · There are three reasons why… ……有三个原因，例：There are three reasons why mutual help is important. · Only through… can we… 只有通过……，我们才能……，例：Only through sharing and helping can we achieve common progress. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What did Farmer Duffy do to grow good corn?；Have you ever had a teamwork experience?；Why is mutual help important?；How did your team solve problems together?；What did you learn from the teamwork? · 回答句型：He shared his special corn seeds with his neighbors.；Yes, I once planted a garden with my classmates.；Because it helps us make full use of strengths and achieve win-win results.；We communicated openly and helped each other overcome difficulties.；I learned that teamwork is the key to success. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $