Unit 1 The Wise Man's Advice 作文学案 -2025-2026学年教科版五四学制（2012）九年级英语上册

Unit 1 The Wise Mans Advice 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“The Wise Mans Advice”为话题，属于“真理与诚信”主题范畴，核心聚焦“用英语讲述诚信故事、表达对‘言行一致’的看法、分享生活中的诚信感悟’’，运用一般现在时及诚信相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和感染力。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次坚守诚信的经历；② 给朋友写邮件分享对“言行一致”的理解；③ 论述“诚信是立身之本”；④ 仿写智者故事传递诚信道理。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“道德性”和“实用性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次诚信的选择”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你面临选择时坚守诚信的经历，包括背景、选择过程及感悟，词数80-100左右，题目为“A Choice for Honesty”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 A Choice for Honesty Last term, I faced a difficult choice that tested my honesty. During a maths exam, my best friend whispered to me for the answer to a difficult question. I really wanted to help him, but I remembered the wise man’s advice: “Follow your own advice before giving it to others.” Cheating is never right, so I shook my head gently and told him I couldn’t. After the exam, I explained the problem to him patiently. This experience teaches me that honesty is more valuable than temporary help. It helps us gain true trust and respect from others. 【译文】 一次诚信的选择 上学期，我面临了一个考验诚信的艰难选择。 数学考试时，我最好的朋友小声向我索要一道难题的答案。我真的很想帮他，但我想起了智者的忠告：“给别人建议前，先自己遵循它。”作弊从来都不对，所以我轻轻摇了摇头，告诉他我不能帮忙。考试结束后，我耐心地给他讲解了这道题。 这次经历让我明白，诚信比一时的帮助更珍贵，它能让我们赢得他人真正的信任与尊重。 亮点词块 1.test one’s honesty 考验某人的诚信 2.whisper to sb 向某人小声说话 3.follow one’s advice 遵循某人的建议 4.temporary help 一时的帮助 5.gain true trust 赢得真正的信任 6.respect from others 他人的尊重 7.explain sth patiently 耐心讲解某事 高分句子 1.I really wanted to help him, but I remembered the wise man’s advice: “Follow your own advice before giving it to others.”（呼应课本核心名言，贴合单元主题） 2.Cheating is never right, so I shook my head gently and told him I couldn’t.（用一般现在时表达客观真理，贴合单元语法重点） 3.This experience teaches me that honesty is more valuable than temporary help.（升华主题，体现诚信的重要性，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter最近在生活中遇到了诚信困境，他想知道你对“言行一致”的看法，请你写一封邮件，分享你的观点及理由，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re confused about honesty. The wise man’s story in my textbook really makes me think deeply about “practicing what you preach”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re confused about honesty. The wise man’s story in my textbook really makes me think deeply about “practicing what you preach”. The wise man didn’t advise the boy to stop eating sweets until he gave it up himself. This shows that actions speak louder than words. If we ask others to be honest but cheat ourselves, no one will trust us. Honesty helps us build real relationships and gain respect. When you face difficult choices, just follow your heart and stick to honesty. It will never let you down. Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你对诚信感到困惑，我很为你担心。我课本里智者的故事让我对“言行一致”有了深刻的思考。 那位智者在自己戒掉甜食前，没有劝说男孩停止吃甜食。这说明行动胜于言语。如果我们要求别人诚信，自己却作弊，没有人会信任我们。诚信能帮助我们建立真正的人际关系，赢得尊重。 当你面临艰难选择时，只需遵从内心，坚守诚信。它永远不会让你失望。 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“诚信是立身之本”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 诚信是个人最宝贵的品质，是立身之本 理由 诚信赢得他人信任；诚信让社会更和谐；诚信是成功的基础 呼吁 每个人都应坚守诚信，做言行一致的人 Honesty is the most precious quality for a person and the foundation of being a good person. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Honesty is the most precious quality for a person and the foundation of being a good person. First, honest people always gain others’ trust and true friendship. Second, honesty makes our society more harmonious—people can live and work without doubt. What’s more, many successful people owe their achievements to honesty. As the wise man teaches us, we should practice what we preach. Let’s stick to honesty and be people who keep their words. 【拓展2译文】 诚信是个人最宝贵的品质，也是立身之本。 首先，诚信的人总能赢得他人的信任和真挚的友谊；其次，诚信让社会更和谐——人们可以毫无猜忌地生活和工作；此外，许多成功人士的成就都归功于诚信。 正如智者教导我们的，我们应言行一致。让我们坚守诚信，做信守承诺的人。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.诚信相关（单元重点） · 品质与行为：honesty 诚信；honest 诚实的；cheat 作弊；lie 说谎；keep one’s word 信守承诺；practice what you preach 言行一致；stick to honesty 坚守诚信；gain trust 赢得信任 · 一般现在时相关：is 是；are 是；make 使；gain 赢得；help 帮助；teach 教导；owe 归功于；follow 遵循 · 故事与感悟：wise man 智者；advice 建议；choice 选择；experience 经历；quality 品质；foundation 基础；precious 珍贵的；temporary 暂时的 · 交流与表达：whisper 小声说；explain 解释；persuade 劝说；share 分享；express 表达；confused 困惑的 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 一般现在时（表客观真理/常态）： · 主语+动词原形（复数/第一、二人称）：We stick to honesty in daily life.（我们在日常生活中坚守诚信。） · 主语+动词三单（单数/第三人称）：Honesty brings us true friendship.（诚信带给我们真挚的友谊。） · 一般现在时（表观点/感悟）： · He believes honesty is more important than success.（他认为诚信比成功更重要。） · The story teaches us that actions speak louder than words.（这个故事告诉我们行动胜于言语。） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：first 首先；second 其次；what’s more 此外；so 因此；because 因为；this shows that 这表明 · 感悟表达：the foundation of ……的基础；more valuable than 比……更珍贵；owe…to… 把……归功于……；never let sb down 永远不让某人失望 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述诚信经历（贴合单元核心） · I faced a difficult choice that… 我面临了一个……的艰难选择，例：I faced a difficult choice that tested my honesty during the group project. · I really wanted to… but I remembered… 我真的很想……但我想起了……，例：I really wanted to copy his homework but I remembered my teacher’s advice. · This experience teaches me that… 这次经历让我明白……，例：This experience teaches me that honesty is the key to trust. 1. 分享诚信观点（贴合单元主题） · The wise man’s story makes me realize that… 智者的故事让我意识到……，例：The wise man’s story makes me realize that practicing what you preach is important. · If we… no one will… 如果我们……，没有人会……，例：If we lie to others often, no one will trust us anymore. · Honesty helps us… 诚信帮助我们……，例：Honesty helps us build real relationships with people around. 1. 论述诚信重要性（贴合单元内涵） · … is the foundation of… ……是……的基础，例：Honesty is the foundation of a harmonious society. · There are many reasons why… ……有很多原因，例：There are many reasons why honesty is precious. · As the wise man teaches us, we should… 正如智者教导我们的，我们应该……，例：As the wise man teaches us, we should follow our own advice first. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What does the wise man’s advice teach us?；Have you ever faced a choice about honesty?；Why is honesty important in our life?；How can we practice what we preach?；What will happen if people lose honesty? · 回答句型：It teaches us that we should practice what we preach.；Yes, I once refused to cheat in an exam.；Because honesty helps us gain trust and friendship.；We can keep our promises and avoid lying.；The society will become disharmonious and people will doubt each other. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $