Unit 6 Fantastic friends 作文学案 -2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

Unit 6 Fantastic friends 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Fantastic friends”为话题，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“人与动物”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语描述动物的神奇之处、分享动物助人的故事、呼吁保护动物朋友”，运用现在进行时及动物相关核心词汇，提升说明类与叙事类写作的生动性和感染力。常见写作角度包括：① 介绍一种神奇的动物及其特性；② 给笔友分享动物助人的感人故事；③ 讲述渡渡鸟灭绝的教训；④ 制作动物档案呼吁保护。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“神奇性”和“责任感”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一种神奇的动物”。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍一种你认为神奇的动物，包括其外形、特殊技能及你的感受，词数60-80左右，题目为“An Amazing Animal”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 An Amazing Animal The animal I find most amazing is the pigeon, which has surprising abilities beyond people’s imagination. Pigeons look common, but they are very clever. They can recognise themselves in mirrors and fly thousands of kilometres without getting lost. Some can even fly at over 100 km per hour! Right now, a pigeon is standing on the window, watching the world quietly. Pigeons are not boring at all. They are fantastic friends of humans and deserve our care. 【译文】 一种神奇的动物 我觉得最神奇的动物是鸽子，它拥有超乎人们想象的惊人能力。 鸽子看起来很普通，但它们非常聪明。它们能在镜子中认出自己，还能飞行数千公里而不迷路，有些甚至能以每小时100多公里的速度飞行！此刻，一只鸽子正站在窗台上，静静地观察着世界。 鸽子一点也不乏味，它们是人类奇妙的朋友，值得我们关爱。 亮点词块 1.beyond people’s imagination 超乎人们想象 2.recognise themselves in mirrors 在镜子中认出自己 3.fly thousands of kilometres 飞行数千公里 4.without getting lost 不迷路 5.deserve our care 值得我们关爱 6.fantastic friends 奇妙的朋友 高分句子 1.Right now, a pigeon is standing on the window, watching the world quietly.（运用现在进行时描述即时场景，贴合单元语法重点） 2.They can recognise themselves in mirrors and fly thousands of kilometres without getting lost.（呼应课本鸽子的核心特性，贴合单元主题） 3.Pigeons are not boring at all. They are fantastic friends of humans and deserve our care.（升华主题，体现对动物的尊重，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter对动物助人的故事很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件，向他分享救援犬冰洁的感人故事，词数不少于50。 Dear Peter, You mentioned you love stories about animals helping humans. I want to share the story of Bingjie, a heroic rescue dog. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, You mentioned you love stories about animals helping humans. I want to share the story of Bingjie, a heroic rescue dog. Bingjie worked with firefighters and had a good sense of smell. After the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake, he searched day and night to find missing people. He got hurt but never gave up and saved many lives. He was a true hero to everyone. Animals are our fantastic friends. Their loyalty and courage always move me. Do you know any other animal helpers? Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 你提到你喜欢动物助人的故事，我想和你分享救援犬冰洁的英雄事迹。 冰洁和消防员一起工作，嗅觉非常灵敏。2008年汶川地震后，他日夜搜寻失踪人员，虽然受伤但从未放弃，拯救了许多生命。对所有人来说，他都是一位真正的英雄。 动物是我们奇妙的朋友，它们的忠诚和勇气总能打动我。你还知道其他动物助人的故事吗？ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，讲述渡渡鸟的悲剧并呼吁保护动物，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 渡渡鸟现状 已灭绝，仅能在博物馆看到标本 灭绝原因 人类砍伐森林、猎杀渡渡鸟，其宠物吃掉鸟蛋 呼吁 保护动物，不让悲剧重演 The dodo is a bird that can no longer be seen in the wild. Its sad story warns us to protect animals. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 The dodo is a bird that can no longer be seen in the wild. Its sad story warns us to protect animals. Dodos lived on an island and had a peaceful life. But when humans arrived, they cut down forests and hunted dodos. Their pigs and cats ate dodo eggs, so dodos died out soon. We must learn from this tragedy. Let’s protect animals and make the world a better home for them! 【拓展2译文】 渡渡鸟是一种在野外再也看不到的鸟类，它的悲惨故事警示我们要保护动物。 渡渡鸟生活在一座岛上，过着平静的生活。但人类到来后，砍伐了森林、猎杀渡渡鸟，他们的猪和猫还吃掉了渡渡鸟蛋，于是渡渡鸟很快就灭绝了。 我们必须从这场悲剧中吸取教训，让我们保护动物，为它们打造更美好的家园！ 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.动物相关（单元重点） · 动物名称：pigeon 鸽子；dodo 渡渡鸟；rescue dog 救援犬；beaver 河狸；eagle 鹰；giraffe 长颈鹿 · 外形与技能：common 普通的；clever 聪明的；have a good sense of smell 嗅觉灵敏；fly at high speed 高速飞行；recognise 认出；get lost 迷路 · 现在进行时相关：is standing 正站着；is watching 正观察；is searching 正搜寻；are living 正生活；are cutting 正砍伐 · 保护与悲剧：die out 灭绝；protect 保护；tragedy 悲剧；hunt 猎杀；cut down forests 砍伐森林；deserve care 值得关爱 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 现在进行时（肯定式）： · 主语+am/is/are+动词-ing：She is feeding the pigeons.（她正在喂鸽子。）；They are searching for survivors.（它们正在搜寻幸存者。） · 现在进行时（否定式）： · 主语+am/is/are+not+动词-ing：The dodo is not living in the wild.（渡渡鸟不再生活在野外。）；He is not hunting animals.（他没有在猎杀动物。） · 现在进行时（疑问式）： · Am/Is/Are+主语+动词-ing：What is the pigeon doing?（这只鸽子在做什么？）；Are they protecting the animals?（他们在保护动物吗？） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 情感与评价：amazing 神奇的；fantastic 奇妙的；heroic 英雄的；touching 感人的；peaceful 平静的 · 行动与结果：search for 搜寻；give up 放弃；save lives 拯救生命；learn from 从……吸取教训；make a better home 打造更美好的家园 二、实用句型积累 1.介绍神奇动物（贴合单元核心） · The animal I find most amazing is…, which… 我觉得最神奇的动物是……，它……，例：The animal I find most amazing is the beaver, which can build homes with sticks. · It looks… but it can… 它看起来……但它能……，例：It looks small but it can carry heavy things. · Right now, + 动物 + is + 动词-ing… 此刻，……正在……，例：Right now, the eagle is flying high in the sky. 1. 分享动物助人故事（贴合单元主题） · [Animal name] is a… that… ……是一种……的动物，它……，例：Bingjie is a rescue dog that helped save many people after earthquakes. · It + 特殊技能 +. When…, it… 它能……，当……时，它……，例：It has a sharp sense of smell. When disasters happen, it searches for missing people. · Its… always moves me. 它的……总能打动我，例：Its loyalty and courage always moves me. 1. 呼吁保护动物（贴合单元内涵） · The tragedy of… warns us to… ……的悲剧警示我们要……，例：The tragedy of dodos warns us to protect wild animals. · Humans’ actions…, so… 人类的行为……，所以……，例：Humans’ actions destroyed their homes, so many animals are in danger. · Let’s… to make the world better for animals. 让我们……，为动物打造更美好的世界，例：Let’s stop hunting and cutting forests to make the world better for animals. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What amazing animal do you know?；What special skills does it have?；Have you heard of any animal helpers?；Why did dodos die out?；How can we protect animals? · 回答句型：I know pigeons are amazing because they can fly far without getting lost.；It can recognise itself in mirrors and run very fast.；Yes, I heard of a rescue dog that saved people in earthquakes.；Because humans hunted them and destroyed their homes.；We can stop cutting forests and refuse to eat wild animals. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $