Unit 3 Family ties 作文学案- 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

Unit 3 Family ties 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Family ties”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“家庭亲情”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语描述家庭温暖瞬间、分享家人间的支持与沟通、阐述家庭的意义”，运用名词所有格及家庭相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的情感感染力和逻辑性。常见写作角度包括：① 描述一次难忘的家庭温馨时刻；② 给笔友分享家人如何支持自己；③ 讲述一次家庭沟通解决问题的经历；④ 论述“家庭是爱的港湾”。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“温暖性”和“凝聚力”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次温暖的家庭时刻”。请用英语写一篇短文，描述一次让你难忘的家庭温暖瞬间，包括时间、人物、事件及感受，词数60-80左右，题目为“A Warm Family Moment”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 A Warm Family Moment The most unforgettable family moment happened on my last birthday, which I will always treasure. My parents prepared a surprise dinner. My grandma made my favourite dumplings, and my brother drew a picture for me. We sat around the table, talking and laughing. When I opened the gifts, tears quietly ran down my face. It brought back memories of past birthdays with my family. This moment makes me feel loved. I know family’s silent care is the most precious gift in life. 【译文】 一次温暖的家庭时刻 最难忘的家庭温暖瞬间发生在我去年的生日那天，我会永远珍藏。 父母准备了一场惊喜晚餐，奶奶做了我最爱的饺子，弟弟还为我画了一幅画。我们围坐在餐桌旁，边吃边聊、欢声笑语。当我打开礼物时，眼泪悄悄滑落，这让我想起了以前和家人一起过生日的时光。 这个瞬间让我感受到满满的爱意，我明白家人无声的关爱是生命中最珍贵的礼物。 亮点词块 1.treasure 珍藏；珍视 2.surprise dinner 惊喜晚餐 3.sit around the table 围坐在餐桌旁 4.tears quietly run down 眼泪悄悄滑落 5.bring back memories 唤起回忆 6.silent care 无声的关爱 7.precious gift 珍贵的礼物 高分句子 1.The most unforgettable family moment happened on my last birthday, which I will always treasure.（用定语从句引出主题，贴合单元情感基调） 2.It brought back memories of past birthdays with my family.（呼应课本“回忆”相关表达，贴合单元核心主题） 3.I know family’s silent care is the most precious gift in life.（运用名词所有格“family’s”，贴合单元语法重点，升华家庭意义） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter在学习上遇到了困难，感到很沮丧，请你写一封邮件，分享家人如何支持你克服困难的经历，给他鼓励，词数不少于50。 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about your study problems. I want to share how my family supported me when I faced similar difficulties. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about your study problems. I want to share how my family supported me when I faced similar difficulties. Last term, my maths grades were poor. My dad spent weekends helping me with difficult problems, and my mom encouraged me not to give up. My sister even made flashcards for me to remember formulas. With their support, I made great progress. Family is always our strongest back-up. Talk to your family about your troubles—they will surely help you. Cheer up! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你因为学习问题感到沮丧，我很为你难过。我想和你分享我遇到类似困难时，家人是如何支持我的。 上学期，我的数学成绩很差。爸爸周末花时间帮我讲解难题，妈妈鼓励我不要放弃，姐姐还为我做了记公式的闪卡。在他们的支持下，我取得了很大进步。 家人永远是我们最坚实的后盾。把你的烦恼告诉家人——他们一定会帮你的。振作起来！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“家庭沟通的重要性”，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 良好的家庭沟通是维系亲情的关键 理由 沟通能化解矛盾、增进理解、分享喜怒哀乐 感悟 家人间多沟通，家庭才会更和睦幸福 Good family communication is the key to keeping close family ties. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Good family communication is the key to keeping close family ties. It helps solve conflicts between family members and deepen mutual understanding. We can share joys and sorrows through talking. My family has a weekly dinner talk, which makes us closer. Only with open communication can families stay harmonious and happy. It’s the secret of a warm family. 【拓展2译文】 良好的家庭沟通是维系亲情的关键。 它能化解家人间的矛盾，加深彼此的理解，我们还能通过交流分享喜怒哀乐。我们家每周都会在晚餐时聊天，这让我们的关系更亲密。 只有坦诚沟通，家庭才能和睦幸福，这就是温暖家庭的秘诀。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.家庭亲情相关（单元重点） · 家庭人物：parents 父母；grandma/grandpa 奶奶/爷爷；brother/sister 兄弟/姐妹；family members 家庭成员 · 温暖瞬间：surprise dinner 惊喜晚餐；birthday celebration 生日庆祝；family gathering 家庭聚会；weekly dinner talk 每周晚餐聊天 · 名词所有格相关：family’s care 家人的关爱；dad’s help 爸爸的帮助；mom’s encouragement 妈妈的鼓励；brother’s picture 弟弟的画 · 情感与行动：support 支持；encourage 鼓励；solve conflicts 化解矛盾；deepen understanding 加深理解；share joys and sorrows 分享喜怒哀乐；feel loved 感受到爱 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 名词所有格（有生命名词）： · 单数名词：my mom’s smile（妈妈的笑容）；Tom’s gift（汤姆的礼物） · 以s结尾的复数名词：the boys’ toys（男孩们的玩具）；the teachers’ suggestions（老师们的建议） · 共同所有：Lucy and Lily’s bedroom（露西和莉莉的卧室） · 各自所有：Lucy’s and Lily’s books（露西和莉莉各自的书） · 名词所有格（无生命名词）： · 常用“of + 名词”：the meaning of family（家庭的意义）；the warmth of home（家的温暖） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 情感描述：warm 温暖的；precious 珍贵的；unforgettable 难忘的；harmonious 和睦的；loved 被爱的 · 行动描述：prepare a surprise 准备惊喜；help with 帮助；make progress 取得进步；cheer up 振作起来；talk openly 坦诚沟通 二、实用句型积累 1.描述家庭温暖瞬间（贴合单元核心） · The most unforgettable family moment happened when… 最难忘的家庭瞬间发生在……时候，例：The most unforgettable family moment happened when we celebrated my grandma’s 70th birthday. · We… together, talking and laughing. 我们一起……，边聊边笑，例：We made dumplings together, talking and laughing about past stories. · It brought back memories of… 这唤起了……的回忆，例：It brought back memories of the first time my dad taught me to ride a bike. 1. 分享家人的支持（贴合单元主题） · When I…, my family gave me great support. 当我……时，家人给了我很大的支持，例：When I failed the exam, my family gave me great support. · My… spent time doing…, and my… encouraged me to… 我的……花时间做……，我的……鼓励我……，例：My mom spent time practicing English with me, and my dad encouraged me to speak boldly. · With their support, I… 在他们的支持下，我……，例：With their support, I overcame my shyness and won the speech contest. 1. 论述家庭沟通/意义（贴合单元内涵） · … is the key to… ……是……的关键，例：Open communication is the key to a harmonious family. · Family not only… but also… 家庭不仅……而且……，例：Family not only gives us a warm home but also supports us through difficult times. · It’s the secret of a happy family that… ……是幸福家庭的秘诀，例：It’s the secret of a happy family that we care for each other and talk often. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What’s your most unforgettable family moment?；How does your family support you?；How do you communicate with your family?；Why is family important to you?；Have you ever solved a family problem through communication? · 回答句型：My most unforgettable family moment is celebrating my birthday with my family.；My parents help me with my study and encourage me when I’m down.；We have a weekly talk to share our daily life.；Because family is my warmest harbor.；Yes, I once talked with my mom about my pressure, and she understood me better. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $