Unit 1 The secrets of happiness 作文学案- 2025-2026学年外研版七年级下册

该初中英语作文学案以“The secrets of happiness”为主题，聚焦“心灵成长”主题群，核心目标是引导学生运用一般过去时及幸福相关词汇，提升叙事与议论类写作的情感感染力和逻辑性。学案通过写作导引明确方向，结合单元话题写作、范文分析、拓展任务及词汇句型积累，构建从基础描述到综合应用的递进式学习路径，体现知识建构的系统性与连贯性。 亮点在于主题探究与实践任务的深度结合，如“描述助人获幸福经历”“给笔友分享幸福小事”“论述家人陪伴的意义”等任务，既强化语言能力（运用一般过去时和核心词块），又培养思维品质（分析幸福的多元意义）。学案提供亮点词块、高分句子及实用句型积累，助力学生深度学习，同时为教师实施单元复习提供从基础训练到能力提升的完整指导，有效支持学生核心素养发展。

Unit 1 The secrets of happiness 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“The secrets of happiness”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“心灵成长”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语讲述幸福故事、分享获得幸福的方法、论述幸福的意义”，运用一般过去时及幸福相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的情感感染力和逻辑性。常见写作角度包括：① 描述一次通过助人获得幸福的经历；② 给笔友分享让自己幸福的小事；③ 论述“爱与陪伴是幸福的关键”；④ 制作“幸福指南”介绍获得幸福的方法。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“温暖性”和“实践性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次通过助人获得幸福的经历”。请用英语写一篇短文，描述一次你帮助他人的经历，包括过程、感受及对幸福的感悟，词数60-80左右，题目为“Happiness from Helping Others”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Happiness from Helping Others Last Saturday, I helped an elderly lady carry her heavy bags home, and it brought me great happiness. She was struggling with two big bags at the bus stop. I walked up and offered my help. On the way, she told me stories about her grandchildren. When we arrived, she thanked me warmly and gave me an apple. I felt a strong sense of joy in my heart. This experience taught me that happiness springs from doing good. Even small acts of kindness can make the world warmer and ourselves happier. 【译文】 来自助人的幸福 上周六，我帮一位老奶奶把沉重的袋子搬回了家，这给我带来了极大的幸福感。 她在公交站吃力地提着两个大袋子，我走上前主动提供帮助。路上，她给我讲了她孙辈的故事。到达后，她热情地感谢了我，还送给我一个苹果。我心里涌起一股强烈的喜悦感。 这次经历让我明白，幸福源于行善。即使是小小的善举，也能让世界变得更温暖，也让我们自己更幸福。 亮点词块 1.elderly lady 老奶奶 2.struggle with 吃力地拿着 3.offer help 主动提供帮助 4.sense of joy 喜悦感 5.spring from 源于 6.small acts of kindness 小小的善举 7.make the world warmer 让世界更温暖 高分句子 1.She was struggling with two big bags at the bus stop.（用一般过去时描述场景，贴合单元语法重点） 2.I felt a strong sense of joy in my heart.（表达助人后的感受，符合课本“行善获幸福”的核心思想） 3.This experience taught me that happiness springs from doing good.（引用柏拉图名言相关立意，升华主题，贴合单元核心观点） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter最近感到不开心，请你写一封邮件，分享三件让你感到幸福的小事，给他一些启发，词数不少于50。 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling down. Happiness is often in small things, and I’d like to share my happy moments with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling down. Happiness is often in small things, and I’d like to share my happy moments with you. First, having dinner with my family every evening makes me happy. We talk about our days and laugh together. Second, helping my classmates with their homework brings me joy. Seeing them make progress makes me proud. Third, walking in the park on weekends fills me with peace. The fresh air and green trees make me relaxed. Try to notice these small joys around you. I believe you’ll feel happier soon! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你心情低落，我很为你难过。幸福往往藏在小事里，我想和你分享我的幸福时刻。 首先，每天晚上和家人一起吃晚饭让我很幸福，我们谈论各自的一天，一起欢笑；其次，帮同学辅导作业给我带来快乐，看到他们取得进步，我感到很自豪；最后，周末在公园散步让我内心平静，新鲜的空气和绿树让我放松。 试着留意身边这些小小的美好，我相信你很快会感到更幸福的！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“家人的陪伴是幸福的源泉”，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 家人的陪伴是幸福最珍贵的来源 理由 困难时家人给予支持，快乐时家人一起分享，平淡日子因陪伴而温暖 感悟 幸福不在于物质财富，而在于彼此的关爱与陪伴 Familys company is the most precious source of happiness. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Familys company is the most precious source of happiness. When we face difficulties, family always supports us. When we are happy, we share joys together. Even plain days become warm because of their company. Charlie’s family was poor, but they were happy with love and陪伴. Happiness isn’t about money. It’s the care and company from family that make life full of joy. 【拓展2译文】 家人的陪伴是幸福最珍贵的来源。 当我们面临困难时，家人总是支持我们；当我们开心时，我们一起分享喜悦。即使是平淡的日子，也因他们的陪伴而变得温暖。查理的家庭虽然贫穷，但他们因爱与陪伴而幸福。 幸福与金钱无关，正是家人的关爱与陪伴，让生活充满了喜悦。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.幸福相关（单元重点） · 幸福感受：happiness 幸福；joy 喜悦；sense of joy 喜悦感；peace 平静；warmth 温暖；pride 自豪 · 幸福来源：family’s company 家人的陪伴；small acts of kindness 小小的善举；helping others 帮助他人；share joys 分享喜悦；love and care 关爱 · 一般过去时相关：was/were 是；helped 帮助；offered 提供；told 告诉；thanked 感谢；felt 感觉；struggled 吃力地做 · 动作与场景：carry bags 提袋子；offer help 主动帮忙；have dinner together 一起吃晚饭；walk in the park 在公园散步；support sb 支持某人 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 一般过去时（be动词）： · 肯定式：I was happy.；They were kind. · 否定式：I wasn’t sad.；They weren’t late. · 疑问式：Were you there?；Was she happy? · 一般过去时（实义动词）： · 肯定式：I helped her.；He told a story. · 否定式：I didn’t refuse.；She didn’t complain. · 疑问式：Did you offer help?；Did they thank you? 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 情感描述：down 低落的；proud 自豪的；relaxed 放松的；warm 温暖的；joyful 喜悦的 · 感悟表达：spring from 源于；be full of 充满；the source of ......的源泉；small acts of kindness 小小的善举；make a difference 产生影响 二、实用句型积累 1.描述助人获幸福的经历（贴合单元核心） · Last + 时间, I + 助人动作 +. It brought me great happiness. 上周/去年……，我……，这给我带来了极大的幸福，例：Last Sunday, I helped a lost child find his parents. It brought me great happiness. · When I saw + 他人困境, I + 行动. On the way, + 细节. I felt + 感受. 当我看到……，我……，路上……，我感到……，例：When I saw the old man carrying heavy boxes, I offered to help. On the way, he praised me for being kind. I felt a strong sense of achievement. · This experience taught me that + 感悟. 这次经历让我明白……，例：This experience taught me that helping others is helping ourselves. 1. 分享获得幸福的方法（贴合单元主题） · There are many small things that can bring happiness. For example, + 具体事例. 有很多小事能带来幸福，比如……，例：There are many small things that can bring happiness. For example, reading with my sister every night. · · 幸福场景 + makes me happy because + 原因. ……让我幸福，因为……，例：Cooking with my mom makes me happy because we talk and laugh together. · To feel happy, we can + 行动1, + 行动2 and + 行动3. 要感到幸福，我们可以……、……和……，例：To feel happy, we can help others, spend time with family and enjoy small moments. 1. 论述幸福的意义（贴合单元内涵） · · 观点 +. For example, + 事例. ……，比如……，例：Happiness comes from love. For example, Charlie’s family was poor but happy with each other’s love. · Even though + 客观情况, + 幸福感受. 尽管……，但……，例：Even though we don’t have much money, we are happy because of family’s company. · It’s not + 物质 + that brings happiness, but + 精神层面. 带来幸福的不是……，而是……，例：It’s not money that brings happiness, but the care and kindness from people around us. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What makes you happy?；Have you ever felt happy by helping others?；What small things can bring happiness?；Why is family’s company important for happiness?；How can we stay positive when we feel down? · 回答句型：Spending time with my family makes me happy.；Yes, I helped a classmate with his English and felt joyful.；Reading books, listening to music and walking in the park can bring happiness.；Because family supports us and shares joys with us.；We can look for the bright side of life and help others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $