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Unit 2 Growing pains and gains 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Growing pains and gains”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“成长与蜕变”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语讲述成长中的烦恼与收获、分享家庭矛盾与化解、论述挫折对成长的意义”,运用一般过去时的被动语态及成长相关核心词汇,提升叙事类与议论类写作的情感表达力和逻辑性。常见写作角度包括:① 描述一次成长中的挫折及收获;② 给笔友分享家庭矛盾的化解过程;③ 论述“失败是成长之母”;④ 讲述应对同伴压力的经历。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“情感性”和“感悟性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“一次成长中的挫折与收获”。请用英语写一篇短文,描述一次你经历的成长挫折(如失败、矛盾、压力等),以及从中获得的收获与感悟,词数60-80左右,题目为“A Painful but Rewarding Experience”。
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【范文】
A Painful but Rewarding Experience
Last term, I failed the English speech contest, and it made me very disappointed.
I had practised hard for weeks, but I forgot my lines on stage. I felt so embarrassed that I wanted to give up. My teacher encouraged me to face the failure bravely. I analysed my mistakes and joined a speech club. With more practice, I won the school contest this term.
This experience taught me that failure is not terrible. It is through difficulties that we grow stronger and gain valuable skills.
【译文】
一次痛苦但有益的经历
上学期,我在英语演讲比赛中失利了,这让我非常失望。
我已经刻苦练习了好几周,但在舞台上忘词了。我感到无比尴尬,甚至想放弃。老师鼓励我勇敢面对失败,我分析了自己的错误并加入了演讲俱乐部。经过更多练习,我在本学期的校级比赛中获胜了。
这次经历让我明白,失败并不可怕。正是通过克服困难,我们才会变得更强大,并收获宝贵的技能。
亮点词块
1.English speech contest 英语演讲比赛
2.feel disappointed 感到失望
3.forget one’s lines 忘词
4.feel embarrassed 感到尴尬
5.face failure bravely 勇敢面对失败
6.analyse mistakes 分析错误
7.valuable skills 宝贵的技能
8.grow stronger 变得更强大
高分句子
1.I had practised hard for weeks, but I forgot my lines on stage.(用过去完成时体现时间先后,贴合单元“成长叙事”逻辑)
2.My teacher encouraged me to face the failure bravely.(描述他人支持,符合课本“成长中需要理解与鼓励”的主题)
3.It is through difficulties that we grow stronger and gain valuable skills.(强调句型升华主题,贴合单元“痛苦与收获并存”的核心思想,运用一般过去时相关语境表达)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter正为与父母的矛盾烦恼,请你写一封邮件,分享一次你化解家庭矛盾的经历,给他一些建议,词数不少于50。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you’re having trouble with your parents. I once had a similar problem, and I’d like to share my experience with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you’re having trouble with your parents. I once had a similar problem, and I’d like to share my experience with you.
My parents didn’t allow me to play basketball after school, thinking it would affect my study. I felt angry and argued with them. Later, my mum talked to me patiently. I realised they cared about me. I promised to finish homework first, and they agreed to let me play for an hour. Communication is the key to solving family conflicts.
Why not talk to your parents calmly? Tell them your feelings and listen to theirs. I’m sure things will get better!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
听说你和父母闹矛盾,我很为你难过。我曾经也遇到过类似的问题,想和你分享我的经历。
我父母不允许我放学后打篮球,认为这会影响我的学习。我很生气,和他们吵了一架。后来,妈妈耐心地和我沟通,我才意识到他们是关心我。我承诺先完成作业,他们也同意让我玩一个小时。沟通是解决家庭矛盾的关键。
为什么不冷静地和你父母谈谈呢?告诉他们你的感受,也听听他们的想法。我相信情况会好转的!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,描述你应对同伴压力的经历,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
压力来源
同学都流行玩一款游戏,劝你一起玩,否则会被孤立
你的做法
坚持自己的学习计划,向同学说明想法
结果
同学理解了你,仍保持友谊,你也专注完成了学习目标
I once faced great peer pressure when my classmates were crazy about a new game.
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【拓展2范文】
I once faced great peer pressure when my classmates were crazy about a new game.
They kept asking me to play with them, saying I would be left out if I refused. But I knew I had to finish my study plan first. I explained my想法 to them calmly and promised to join them on weekends. They understood me, and our friendship remained. I successfully finished my goals, which made me proud.
This experience taught me to stick to my own choices bravely.
【拓展2译文】
当我的同学们为一款新游戏疯狂时,我曾面临巨大的同伴压力。
他们一直劝我一起玩,说如果我拒绝就会被孤立。但我知道必须先完成学习计划,我冷静地向他们说明了我的想法,并承诺周末和他们一起玩。他们理解了我,我们的友谊也得以保持。我成功完成了目标,这让我很自豪。
这次经历让我明白,要勇敢坚持自己的选择。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.成长相关(单元重点)
· 挫折与烦恼:failure 失败;peer pressure 同伴压力;family conflict 家庭矛盾;embarrassment 尴尬;disappointment 失望;argument 争吵;be left out 被孤立;affect study 影响学习
· 收获与成长:gain valuable skills 收获宝贵技能;grow stronger 变得更强大;stick to choices 坚持选择;face bravely 勇敢面对;analyse mistakes 分析错误;achieve goals 实现目标;learn a lesson 吸取教训
· 被动语态相关:be encouraged 被鼓励;be understood 被理解;be left out 被孤立;be asked to 被要求;be allowed to 被允许
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 一般过去时的被动语态:
· 肯定式:was/were + 过去分词(I was encouraged by my teacher.)
· 否定式:was/were + not + 过去分词(He wasn’t allowed to play games.)
· 疑问式:Was/Were + 主语 + 过去分词(Were you understood by your parents?)
· 常用结构:be encouraged to do 被鼓励做;be asked to do 被要求做;be allowed to do 被允许做;be left out 被孤立
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 情感描述:disappointed 失望的;embarrassed 尴尬的;angry 生气的;proud 自豪的;calm 冷静的
· 感悟表达:through difficulties 通过困难;the key to ......的关键;stick to 坚持;face bravely 勇敢面对;learn a lesson 吸取教训
二、实用句型积累
1.描述成长中的挫折(贴合单元核心)
· I once + 经历挫折的动作, and it made me + 感受. 我曾经……,这让我感到……,例:I once failed the math exam, and it made me very upset.
· When I + 具体场景, I was + 被动语态动作. 当我……时,我被……,例:When I refused to play the game, I was thought to be strange by my classmates.
· I had + 过去完成时动作, but + 挫折结果. 我本来……,但却……,例:I had prepared for the exam for a month, but I still didn’t pass it.
1. 讲述化解矛盾/应对压力的过程(贴合单元主题)
· At first, I + 初始反应, but later I + 转变动作. 起初,我……,但后来我……,例:At first, I argued with my parents, but later I chose to communicate with them.
· I + 主动动作, and + 积极结果. 我……,然后……,例:I explained my feelings honestly, and my friends understood me.
· With the help of + 他人/事物, I + 克服动作. 在……的帮助下,我……,例:With the help of my teacher, I got over the embarrassment and tried again.
1. 表达成长感悟(贴合单元内涵)
· This experience taught me that + 感悟. 这次经历让我明白……,例:This experience taught me that communication can solve most family problems.
· It is through + 困难 + that we + 成长收获. 正是通过……,我们才……,例:It is through failures that we learn to be stronger.
· I realised that + 道理, and it will guide me in my future life. 我意识到……,这将在未来的生活中指引我,例:I realised that sticking to my goals is more important than following others, and it will guide me in my future life.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What growing pains have you ever had?;How did you solve the conflict with your parents?;What did you learn from your failure?;How do you deal with peer pressure?;Why is communication important for growing up?
· 回答句型:I once had trouble with peer pressure when my classmates asked me to play games.;I communicated with my parents calmly and explained my feelings.;I learnt to face failure bravely and never give up.;I stick to my own choices and talk to my friends honestly.;Because it helps us understand each other and solve problems.
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