内容正文:
Unit 5 Play by the rules? 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Play by the rules?”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“规则与秩序”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语谈论规则的重要性、分享遵守/违反规则的故事、制定新规则”,运用动词不定式作目的状语及规则相关核心词汇,提升说明类与叙事类写作的实用性和逻辑性。常见写作角度包括:① 论述遵守规则的意义;② 给笔友分享一次遵守规则的经历;③ 描述违反规则的后果;④ 为班级/校园制定新规则。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“规范性”和“指导性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“遵守规则的重要性”。请用英语写一篇短文,结合具体事例说明遵守规则的重要性,词数60-80左右,题目为“The Importance of Following Rules”。
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【范文】
The Importance of Following Rules
Rules are everywhere in life, and following them is key to a safe and orderly world.
At school, we must keep quiet in class to help everyone focus on studying. On the road, people follow traffic rules to avoid accidents. Last term, a classmate ran across the street without looking, and he was almost hit by a bike. This taught us that rules protect us. Whether in public or at school, rules guide our behavior.
Following rules is not a restriction but a way to keep us safe and happy.
【译文】
遵守规则的重要性
生活中处处有规则,遵守规则是构建安全有序世界的关键。
在学校,我们必须在课堂上保持安静,以便让每个人都能专心学习;在路上,人们遵守交通规则以避免事故。上学期,一位同学过马路时没看路,差点被自行车撞到。这让我们明白,规则是在保护我们。无论在公共场合还是学校,规则都在引导我们的行为。
遵守规则不是限制,而是让我们安全快乐生活的方式。
亮点词块
1.key to ……的关键
2.safe and orderly 安全有序的
3.focus on studying 专心学习
4.traffic rules 交通规则
5.avoid accidents 避免事故
6.run across the street 横穿马路
7.guide our behavior 引导我们的行为
8.not a restriction 不是限制
高分句子
1.At school, we must keep quiet in class to help everyone focus on studying.(运用不定式作目的状语,贴合单元语法重点)
2.Last term, a classmate ran across the street without looking, and he was almost hit by a bike.(用具体事例支撑观点,符合单元“用例子说明规则”的学习目标)
3.Following rules is not a restriction but a way to keep us safe and happy.(总结观点,升华主题,贴合课本“规则保障秩序”的核心思想)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter对中国的公共规则很感兴趣,请你写一封邮件,分享中国的一项公共规则及遵守它的原因,词数不少于50。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in public rules in China! One important rule is “no smoking in public places”, and it’s widely followed.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in public rules in China! One important rule is “no smoking in public places”, and it’s widely followed.
People don’t smoke in parks, restaurants or buses to protect others’ health. Smoking in public used to be common, but now signs are everywhere to remind people. Last month, I saw a man stop smoking when a worker told him about the rule. This rule not only keeps the air clean but also shows respect for others.
If you come to China, you’ll find people follow public rules well. It makes public life more pleasant!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
很高兴你对中国的公共规则感兴趣!其中一项重要规则是“公共场所禁止吸烟”,而且被广泛遵守。
人们不在公园、餐厅或公交车上吸烟,以保护他人的健康。以前在公共场所吸烟很常见,但现在到处都是提示牌提醒人们。上个月,我看到一个男人在工作人员告知他这项规则后就停止了吸烟。这项规则不仅让空气更清新,还体现了对他人的尊重。
如果你来到中国,会发现人们很遵守公共规则,这让公共生活更舒适愉快!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍你班的一项新规则及制定原因,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
规则
课堂上禁止使用手机,手机需交老师保管
原因
避免分心,提高学习效率;保护视力
效果
课堂纪律变好,同学听课更认真
Our class has made a new rule to make our study more effective.
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【拓展2范文】
Our class has made a new rule to make our study more effective.
We mustn’t use mobile phones in class and need to hand them to the teacher for safekeeping. This rule is made to avoid distraction and improve study efficiency. It also helps protect our eyesight. Since the rule was made, our class discipline has become better, and everyone listens more carefully in class.
Following this rule helps us focus on learning and make progress.
【拓展2译文】
我们班制定了一项新规则,以使我们的学习更有成效。
我们在课堂上禁止使用手机,需将手机交给老师保管。制定这项规则是为了避免分心,提高学习效率,同时也有助于保护我们的视力。自从有了这项规则,我们班的纪律变好了,每个人在课堂上都听得更认真了。
遵守这项规则帮助我们专心学习,取得进步。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.规则相关(单元重点)
· 规则类别:public rules 公共规则;traffic rules 交通规则;class rules 班级规则;school rules 校规;online safety rules 网络安全规则
· 动作表达:follow rules 遵守规则;break rules 违反规则;make rules 制定规则;remind sb. of rules 提醒某人规则;hand in 上交;avoid distraction 避免分心;focus on 专注于
· 相关名词:restriction 限制;discipline 纪律;safety 安全;order 秩序;efficiency 效率;sign 提示牌;distraction 分心事物
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 不定式作目的状语结构:
· to do(表目的):I study hard to get good grades.
· in order to do(强调目的):She gets up early in order to catch the bus.
· so as to do(表目的,多用于句中):We keep quiet so as not to disturb others.
· 句型结构:主语 + 动词 + to / in order to / so as to + 目的状语
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 规则描述:widely followed 被广泛遵守;effective 有效的;necessary 必要的;protect sb.’s health 保护某人健康;improve study efficiency 提高学习效率
· 后果与效果:avoid accidents 避免事故;become better 变得更好;make progress 取得进步;keep...safe 保障……安全
二、实用句型积累
1.论述规则的重要性(贴合单元核心)
· Rules are important because they + 作用. 规则很重要,因为它们……,例:Rules are important because they keep public places in order.
· We must follow + 规则 + to + 目的. 我们必须遵守……以……,例:We must follow traffic rules to keep ourselves safe.
· Following + 规则 + is not only + 好处1 but also + 好处2. 遵守……不仅……还……,例:Following class rules is not only good for study but also for friendship.
1. 描述遵守/违反规则的故事(贴合单元主题)
· Last + 时间,I / 某人 + 行为(遵守/违反规则)+ to + 目的/后果. 上次……,我/某人……,为了……/结果……,例:Last week, I reminded a stranger not to smoke in the park to protect the environment.
· A classmate once + 违反规则的行为,and + 后果. 一位同学曾经……,结果……,例:A classmate once talked loudly in the library, and he was asked to keep quiet.
· Since we started following + 规则,+ 积极变化. 自从我们开始遵守……,……,例:Since we started following the no-phone rule, our study has improved a lot.
1. 制定新规则(贴合单元内涵)
· Our class / school has made a new rule: + 规则内容. 我们班/学校制定了一项新规则:……,例:Our school has made a new rule: no running in the corridors.
· The rule is made to + 目的. 制定这项规则是为了……,例:The rule is made to prevent injuries.
· We believe this rule will help us + 积极结果. 我们相信这项规则会帮助我们……,例:We believe this rule will help us study more effectively.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What public rules do you know in China?;Why is it important to follow rules?;Have you ever seen someone break rules?;What new rule does your class need?;How does following rules help us?
· 回答句型:We have rules like “no smoking in public”.;Because rules protect our safety and order.;Yes, I saw someone run a red light once.;We need a rule about keeping the classroom clean.;It helps us focus on study and avoid trouble.
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