Unit 3 What were you doing when the rainstorm came 作文学案 2025-2026学年鲁教版五四学制（2012）八年级上册

Unit 3 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“What were you doing when the rainstorm came?”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“突发事件与叙事表达”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语描述过去某个时刻正在发生的动作、讲述突发事件中的经历,运用过去进行时及“when/while 引导的时间状语从句”,提升叙事类写作的逻辑性与画面感”,常见写作角度包括:① 描述一次暴风雨(或其他突发事件)中的亲身经历;② 讲述历史重要时刻自己或他人的所作所为;③ 记录一次因突发事件导致的意外经历;④ 分享在困境中互助的故事。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型,突出“叙事性”和“场景感”,可直接用于课堂写作教学与同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次难忘的突发经历”。请用英语写一篇短文,描述一次你经历过的突发事件(如暴风雨、停电等),包括事件发生的时间、你当时正在做的事、事件中的经过及感受,词数60-80左右,题目为“An Unforgettable Sudden Event”。 _ 【范文】 An Unforgettable Sudden Event Last summer evening, a heavy rainstorm hit my city unexpectedly. I was doing my homework in my room when the wind started to blow strongly. The lights went out suddenly, and I felt a little scared. My mom was lighting candles while my dad was closing the windows tightly. We sat together and listened to the rain beating against the glass. After an hour, the storm stopped. Although it was a scary experience, it made our family closer. I’ll never forget that special night. 【译文】 一次难忘的突发经历 去年夏天的一个晚上,一场暴雨突然袭击了我的城市。 我正在房间里写作业,突然狂风大作。电灯猛地熄灭了,我有点儿害怕。妈妈在点燃蜡烛,而爸爸在紧紧关上窗户。我们坐在一起,听着雨水猛烈地拍打玻璃。一个小时后,暴风雨停了。 虽然那是一次可怕的经历,但它让我们一家人更亲密了。我永远不会忘记那个特别的夜晚。 亮点词块 1.heavy rainstorm 暴雨 2.hit unexpectedly 突然袭击 3.blow strongly 狂风大作 4.go out (灯)熄灭 5.light candles 点燃蜡烛 6.close the windows tightly 紧紧关窗 7.beat against the glass 拍打玻璃 8.scary experience 可怕的经历 9.get closer 变得更亲密 高分句子 1.I was doing my homework in my room when the wind started to blow strongly.(运用过去进行时+when从句,贴合单元核心语法) 2.My mom was lighting candles while my dad was closing the windows tightly.(用while连接两个同时进行的动作,叙事逻辑清晰) 3.Although it was a scary experience, it made our family closer.(总结经历感悟,升华主题,贴合单元内涵) 【拓展1】 你的笔友Mike想知道你在“9 11事件”相关纪念活动中了解到的故事,或你经历过的类似突发时刻,请你写一封邮件,分享一次相关经历,词数不少于50。 Dear Mike, You asked about a sudden event I experienced, and I’d like to share a memorable one with you. _ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Mike, You asked about a sudden event I experienced, and I’d like to share a memorable one with you. Last year, there was a big blackout in my neighborhood when I was having dinner with my family. At first, we were all surprised. My dad was looking for flashlights while my mom was telling us not to panic. I was calling my friend to ask what happened when the lights came back on 20 minutes later. We laughed and finished our dinner by candlelight. It was a fun experience that made me realize the importance of staying calm in unexpected situations. Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的迈克: 你问起我经历过的一次突发事件,我想和你分享一段难忘的经历。 去年,我正和家人吃晚饭时,小区突然大面积停电了。一开始我们都很惊讶,爸爸在找手电筒,妈妈则告诉我们不要慌张。我正在给朋友打电话询问情况,20分钟后电灯突然亮了。我们笑着,在烛光下吃完了晚饭。 那是一次有趣的经历,让我明白在突发状况中保持冷静的重要性。 你的, 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,描述Kate错过学校篮球比赛的经历,词数50左右,开头已给出。 提示 信息 时间 上周三下午2点(篮球比赛开始时) Kate正在做的事 出门去车站,准备前往学校 突发状况 发现书包落在家中,返回途中看到受伤的小狗 后续 等待路人帮忙联系动物救助热线,最终错过比赛 Last Wednesday, Kate missed the school basketball competition because of an unexpected thing. _ 【拓展2范文】 Last Wednesday, Kate missed the school basketball competition because of an unexpected thing. The game started at 2 p.m. when Kate was on her way to the bus stop. She suddenly realized her bag was at home and ran back. While she was returning, she saw a hurt dog by the road. She had to wait for someone to help call the Animal Helpline. By the time she arrived at school, the game was over. Though she felt sorry, she was happy to help the dog. 【拓展2译文】 上周三,凯特因为一件意外的事错过了学校的篮球比赛。 下午2点比赛开始时,凯特正在去公交站的路上。她突然意识到书包落在了家里,于是往回跑。返回途中,她看到路边有一只受伤的小狗,不得不等路人帮忙拨打动物救助热线。等她赶到学校时,比赛已经结束了。虽然她感到很遗憾,但能帮助小狗让她很开心。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.突发事件与天气(单元重点) 天气类:rainstorm 暴雨;storm 暴风雨;wind 风;heavy rain 大雨;strong wind 狂风;thunder 雷声;lightning 闪电;blackout 停电 动作与场景类:blow strongly 狂风大作;beat against 拍打;go out(灯)熄灭;light candles 点燃蜡烛;close the windows 关窗户;panic 恐慌;stay calm 保持冷静;hit 袭击;fall down 倒塌;clean up 清理 情感类:scared 害怕的;surprised 惊讶的;nervous 紧张的;memorable 难忘的;unexpected 意外的;exciting 令人兴奋的 1. 语法相关(单元重点) 过去进行时(描述过去正在进行的动作): 肯定式:主语 + was/were + 动词-ing + 其他,例:I was reading when the rain started.(下雨时我正在看书。) 否定式:主语 + wasn’t/weren’t + 动词-ing + 其他,例:They weren’t watching TV at that moment.(那一刻他们没在看电视。) 疑问式:Was/Were + 主语 + 动词-ing + 其他?例:Were you sleeping when the storm came?(暴风雨来的时候你在睡觉吗?) 时间状语从句引导词: when:后接短暂性动词,例:The rain started when we were playing outside. while:后接持续性动词(多用进行时),例:While my mom was cooking, I was doing homework. 1. 叙事场景(单元基础) 时间表达:at that moment 那一刻;at 8 p.m. last night 昨晚8点;when the event happened 事件发生时;while we were talking 我们聊天的时候 逻辑连接:suddenly 突然;unexpectedly 意外地;finally 最后;after that 之后;though 虽然;however 然而 二、实用句型积累 1.描述过去正在进行的动作(贴合单元核心) I was + 动词-ing + when + 短暂性动作. 我正在……这时……,例:I was walking home when the rainstorm came. While + 主语 + was/were + 动词-ing, 主语 + was/were + 动词-ing. 当……正在……时,……正在……,例:While my dad was repairing the roof, my mom was preparing food. What were you doing at + 具体时间? 你在……(时间)正在做什么?例:What were you doing at 9 last night? 1. 讲述突发事件经过(贴合单元主题) Suddenly, + 突发状况. 突然,……,例:Suddenly, the lights went out and the room became dark. At first, + 初始反应, but later + 后续动作. 一开始……,但后来……,例:At first, I felt scared, but later I calmed down with my family’s help. By the time + 动作, + 结果. 等到……的时候,……,例:By the time we arrived at the park, the storm had stopped. 1. 表达经历感悟(贴合单元内涵) This unexpected event taught me that + 感悟. 这次意外事件让我明白……,例:This unexpected event taught me that we should help each other in difficulty. Although + 事件感受, it made me + 成长收获. 虽然……,但它让我……,例:Although the storm was scary, it made me more brave. It was an unforgettable experience because + 原因. 那是一次难忘的经历,因为……,例:It was an unforgettable experience because I learned how to face emergencies. 三、课堂实用句型 提问句型:What were you doing when the rainstorm came?;What unexpected event have you experienced?;How did you feel during the event?;What did you do to deal with it?;Why is this event memorable? 回答句型:I was doing my homework when the rainstorm came.;I experienced a big blackout last month.;I felt scared at first but then calm.;I called my parents and stayed in a safe place.;Because it taught me to stay calm in emergencies. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $