2026年中考英语专题复习课件之如何写好中考英语作文？

该初中英语中考复习课件聚焦中考英语作文核心考点，严格对接中考对写作的考查要求，系统梳理了审题不清、思路混乱、语言语法错误等五大常见问题，归纳出“开头引入—中间分层—结尾总结”的三段论结构及常用连接词，体现备考的针对性和实用性。 课件亮点在于“错误案例分析+实战写作指导”模式，如通过蒙山旅游报道审题案例解析写作目的把握方法，以低碳生活作文为例示范高级句型运用，培养学生语言能力和思维品质。教师可借助此课件指导学生掌握结构搭建和亮点表达技巧，有效提升中考作文得分率，助力冲刺复习。

期末复习基础考点串讲 九年级 主讲人:吴同庆 2026.01.24 中考作文如何得高分? 大家容易犯哪些错误? 1、审题迷糊! 文章要传递给读者什么样的信息? 告诫读者什么(即写作目的)? 【例文】: 蒙山是山东著名的游览胜地,一年四季都有其独特的景色(scene)。尤其春天的景色更加迷人。每当春天来临,青山滴翠,美丽的景色吸引了许多游客前来踏青观光。 可最近几年,游人不注意保护环境,乱扔垃圾,攀折树枝花草, 点火野餐,致使自然环境遭到破坏。请你写篇报道,说明蒙山旅游环境的变化,号召人们文明旅游,保护生态环境。 这两段谁才是重点? 来看看这个大神写的: 前70字 【学生习作】: Mengshan Mountain is a famous place of interest in Shandong Province. It has its special scenes all the year round, especially in spring. When spring comes, the days get longer and longer and the weather get warmer and warmer. Trees are beginning to turn green, and all kinds of beautiful flowers come out. Everything begins to grow. The mountains are covered with a lot of green tall trees and all kinds of colorful wild flowers. It is so beautiful that a lot of visitors come here and enjoy its beauty every day. 2、 思路混乱! 构思好先写什么、后写什么? 哪些内容应该详写,哪些内容应该略写 【例文】:以“My beloved teacher”为题,介绍你喜欢的一位老师。写一篇80词左右的作文。 【学生习作】: I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I think it is a good job. I will be glad to have many lovely students. I like them. I will work hard to teach the students well, and I will get on well with my students. Mr. Li is my teacher. I like him. He teaches me English and he is strict with us. I will learn from him to be a good teacher one day. 他先说想成为老师 然后介绍老师的情况 这两段谁应该在前,谁在后? 3、 语言、语法错误! 单词拼写错误、人称与数的错误、时态、语态、标点符号、大小写等方面的错误等 错句:He left his hometown for almost ten years. 他离开家乡有十多年了。 We are going to see a movie if it won’t rain tomorrow. 如果明天不下雨我们打算去看一场电影。 He take a lot of photos in the park yesterday. Don’t worried! They still have five minutes left. 4、 表达错误! 句子不完整、不连贯、中式英语等 常见错句: Our go to school time is 8:00. 上学时间是8:00。 In china have different places of interest. 在中国有很多风景名胜。 I very like the gift. 我很喜欢这个礼物。 His father’s body is strong. 他父亲身体很好。 5、潦草问题! 字体潦草、卷面潦草 有点小错误,我就当看不见 多给他1分, 都对不起我为人师表的原则! 那怎样才能写好一篇作文呢? 开头、中间分层、结尾(三段论) 下面按开头、中间分层、结尾三类,给大家整理中考英语作文最常用、最稳的分层/分段连接词/短语,直接背了就能用。 一、开头引入(总起) - Nowadays, ... 如今,…… - Recently, ... 最近,…… - With the development of ... 随着……的发展 - It is well-known that ... 众所周知,…… - As we all know, ... 众所周知,…… - Now, more and more people ... 现在,越来越多的人…… - In recent years, ... 近年来,…… 二、中间分层(分点论述,最核心) 1. 第一点 / 首先 - First / Firstly / First of all 首先 - To begin with 首先 - At first 起初 2. 第二点 / 其次 - Second / Secondly 其次 - Next 、Then 接下来 - Besides 此外,而且 - What’s more 而且,更重要的是 - In addition 此外 3. 第三点 / 另外 - Third / Thirdly 第三 - Also 也 -Lastly,Finally 最后 -Last but not the least 最后但并非不重要 - Another important point is that ... 另一个重要点是…… - What’s worse 更糟糕的是(用于负面递进) 4. 转折 / 对比(换角度) - However 然而 - Although / Though 虽然 - In fact 事实上 - On the other hand 另一方面 5. 举例 / 说明 - For example 例如 - Such as 比如(后接名词/短语) - Take ... for example 以……为例 - That is to say 也就是说 三、结尾总结 / 升华 1. 总结 - In a word 总之- In short 总之 - All in all 总的来说 - In general 总之(稍正式) - To sum up 总而言之 2. 建议 / 呼吁 - We should ... 我们应该…… - We are supposed to ...我们应该…… - It’s important for us to ... 对我们来说……很重要 - Let’s ... 让我们…… - Why not ...? 为什么不……呢? 3. 展望 / 意义 - I believe / I think ... 我相信/我认为…… - Only in this way can we ... 只有这样我们才能……(倒装,加分) - If we ..., we will ... 如果我们……,我们会…… - It will make a big difference. 这会有很大影响。 预 测 :Let’s Live a Low-carbon Life 精讲 (写作思路+注意点+提分亮点) 题目:Let’s Live a Low-carbon Life 要求:随着环保意识的增强,低碳生活成为热门话题。作为中学生,我们可以从身边小事做起,践行低碳生活。请以“Let’s Live a Low-carbon Life”为题,写一篇英语短文,内容包括: 1. 低碳生活的意义(保护环境、节约资源等) 2. 中学生践行低碳生活的具体做法(至少3点); 3. 发出倡议,呼吁大家一起行动。 注意: 1. 词数:80–100词; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范 一、写作思路(总-分-总,80–100词,中考标准结构) 1. 开头:点题 + 重要性(1–2句) - 核心:直接点明低碳生活的意义,引出主题 - 思路:Nowadays/With the development of 低碳生活重要 目的(保护环境/节约能源) 2. 中间:分点写做法(3点,每点2-3句,逻辑清晰) - 核心:用First/Second/Third等加分词分层,结合学生日常,避免空泛 - 思路:节约水电 绿色出行 垃圾分类/回收(3个最易写、最安全的角度) 3. 结尾:升华 + 呼吁(1–2句) - 核心:总结意义 + 号召行动,提升立意in a word,all in all,in general等 - 思路:Small actions make a big difference. Let’s take action together! 二、写作注意点(避坑+拿基础分) 1. 时态统一:全文以一般现在时为主(谈习惯、建议),避免过去/现在混用 2. 结构清晰:必须用First/Second/Third或Besides/What’s more等分层, 阅卷老师一眼抓重点 3. 内容具体:不写“we should protect the environment”这种空话, 要写“turn off lights when leaving”“go to school by bike”等具体行为 4. 字数控制:80–100词,开头结尾各1–2句,中间3点各2-3句,避免冗长 三、提分亮点句型&短语(直接套用,瞬间加分) (一)开头亮点(替代普通句) 1. Nowadays, it’s widely known that living a low-carbon life plays an important role in protecting our environment. (如今,人们普遍认为低碳生活在保护环境中起着重要作用。) - 亮点:it’s widely known that…(人们普遍认为)+ play an important role in…(在……中起重要作用),比普通句更高级 2. With the environment getting worse, it’s time for us to live a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution. (随着环境恶化,我们是时候过低碳生活来节约能源、减少污染了。) - 亮点:with + 宾语 + 宾补(伴随状语)+ it’s time for sb to do…(是某人做某事的时候了),句式高级且点题 (二)中间分点亮点(替代普通做法句) 1. 节约水电(基础 升级) - 普通:I turn off lights when I don’t use them. - 升级:First, I always turn off the lights and taps at once when leaving a room to save energy and water. 亮点:at once(立刻)+ when leaving(省略句,比when I leave更简洁) 2. 绿色出行(基础 升级) - 普通:I go to school by bike. - 升级:Second, I prefer to go to school by bike or on foot rather than take a car - 亮点:prefer to do… rather than do…(宁愿做……而不愿做……) 3. 垃圾重复使用/回收(基础 升级) - 普通:I reuse rubbish. - 升级:Third, I make it a habit to reuse rubbish and recycle things like paper and bottles, which is good for our planet. 亮点:make it a habit to do…(养成做某事的习惯)+ like(举例,比such as更自然) (三)结尾亮点(替代普通呼吁句) 1. In a word,Small actions make a big difference. Let’s take action from now on and make our earth a better place to live in. (小事成就大不同。让我们从现在行动,让地球成为更宜居的地方。) - 亮点:Small actions make a big difference(万能金句,环保/公益类必用)+ make sth a better place to do(让某物成为做某事的好地方) 2. All in all,If everyone makes a contribution to living a low-carbon life, our world will become more and more beautiful. (如果每个人都为低碳生活做贡献,我们的世界会越来越美) - 亮点:if引导条件状语从句(主将从现,中考高频加分句型)+ make a contribution to doing(为……做贡献,to是介词,后接doing) 作文讲解 融会贯通 Let’s Live a Low-carbon Life Nowadays, it’s widely known that living a low-carbon life plays an important role in protecting our environment. It can help save energy and reduce pollution.For us,what can we do to live a low-carbon life First of all, I always turn off the lights and taps at once when leaving a room. What’s more , I prefer to go to school by bike or on foot rather than take a car, which can cut down air pollution. Finally, I make it a habit to sort rubbish and recycle paper and bottles. In a word,small actions make a big difference. 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