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译林版英语七年级上册 Unit 2 Hobbies 写作专项
写作目标
结合本单元“介绍爱好”的核心主题,能用正确的时态和词汇详细描述自己的爱好,内容包括:爱好是什么、何时做、和谁做、为什么喜欢、爱好带来的影响及相关小故事等。
1. 能正确使用一般现在时(含动词第三人称单数变化)和简单连接词,符合本单元语法要求;
2. 能用本单元核心词汇(如hobby、favourite、enjoy、be interested in、spend...doing等)及相关短语丰富表达;
3. 能有条理、有细节地介绍爱好,篇幅控制在90-100词,体现“爱好让生活更充实”的单元主题。
题目解析
1. 体裁:说明文(介绍爱好),要求向他人全面展示自己的爱好及相关细节,契合本单元“分享爱好、交流体验”的写作要求。
2. 人称:以第一人称(I)为主,用自身视角分享个人爱好,符合初中介绍类写作的人称规范。
3. 时态:核心用一般现在时,描述爱好相关的习惯、感受(本单元重点语法),适配七年级学生水平。
4. 核心要求
○ 内容:写清爱好的名称、频率、时间、同伴、喜欢的原因、具体体验及对自己的帮助,加入1-2个细节让内容更丰满。
○ 字数:90-100词,以简单句为主,适当加入基础复合句和连接词。
典型例题
班级正在举办“我的爱好故事”分享会,请以“My Favourite Hobby”为题,写一篇90-100词的短文,向同学们介绍你的爱好,内容包括:
1. 你最喜欢的爱好是什么?
2. 你多久做一次、什么时候做、和谁一起做?
3. 你为什么喜欢这个爱好,有没有印象深刻的小片段?
4. 这个爱好对你有什么帮助或影响?
思路点拨
1. 引入主题:点明自己的爱好,用一句话概括爱好带来的核心感受,快速吸引注意力。
2. 细节展开:先说明做爱好的频率、时间、同伴,再加入一个简短的具体场景(如某次分享、完成作品的瞬间),让内容更生动。
3. 深入说明:讲清喜欢的原因(如放松、学知识、交好友),体现爱好的吸引力。
4. 总结收尾:说明爱好对自己的帮助,或表达坚持爱好的愿望,让介绍更完整。
写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标)
第一段:开头引入,点明爱好(约25词)
• 写作目的:明确爱好名称,概括感受,简单提及频率,呼应单元主题。
• 必写要素:爱好名称 + 感受 + 频率
• 基础句式:My favourite hobby is [爱好]. It always brings me great joy, and I spend about an hour doing it [频率,如every evening after finishing homework].
• 示例:My favourite hobby is reading storybooks. It always brings me great joy, and I spend about an hour doing it every evening after finishing homework.
第二段:中间详述,细节与场景(约45-50词)
• 写作目的:说明时间、同伴,加入具体小场景,运用本单元“描述日常活动”的表达。
• 必写要素:时间 + 同伴 + 具体场景
• 基础句式:Sometimes I read alone in my room, and sometimes I share interesting stories with my sister. Last month, I finished a book about [主题,如adventures], and I even told the story to my classmates in English class—they loved it!
• 示例:Sometimes I read alone in my room, and sometimes I share interesting plots with my sister. Last month, I finished a book about a brave little fox, and I even told the story to my classmates in English class—they praised me for telling it well!
第三段:结尾总结,意义与愿望(约20-25词)
• 写作目的:说明喜欢的原因、对自己的帮助,表达愿望,贴合单元“爱好的意义”目标。
• 必写要素:喜欢的原因 + 帮助 + 愿望
• 基础句式:Reading not only makes me relaxed but also teaches me new words. I hope to collect more good books and keep this hobby forever.
• 示例:Reading not only makes me relaxed but also teaches me many new words and life lessons. I hope to collect more good storybooks and keep this hobby forever.
范文
英文
My Favourite Hobby
My favourite hobby is playing basketball. It always brings me great joy, and I spend about two hours playing it with my classmates every Saturday afternoon on our school playground. Last week, we had a small match against another class, and I scored the winning goal—everyone cheered for me! I love basketball because it helps me make more friends and learn teamwork. It also keeps my body strong and teaches me to never give up when facing difficulties. I hope to join the school basketball team next term and improve my skills further.
中文翻译
我最喜欢的爱好
我最喜欢的爱好是打篮球。它总能给我带来极大的快乐,我每周六下午都会和同学们在学校操场打大约两个小时。上周,我们和另一个班进行了一场小型比赛,我投进了制胜一球——大家都为我欢呼!我喜欢篮球,因为它让我交到更多朋友,还学会了团队合作。它也让我的身体保持强壮,教会我遇到困难时永不放弃。我希望下学期能加入学校篮球队,进一步提高自己的技术。
素材积累
短语
1. favourite hobby — 最喜欢的爱好
2. spend...doing sth — 花费……做某事
3. every Saturday afternoon — 每周六下午
4. school playground — 学校操场
5. small match — 小型比赛
6. score the winning goal — 投进制胜一球
7. cheer for — 为……欢呼
8. learn teamwork — 学会团队合作
9. never give up — 永不放弃
10. join the school team — 加入校队
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
My favourite hobby is playing basketball.
My favourite hobby is drawing cartoons.
I spend two hours playing it every weekend.
I spend one hour drawing every evening.
It helps me make more friends and learn teamwork.
It helps me relax and improve my creativity.
I hope to join the school basketball team.
I hope to show my works in the school art show.
好句集锦
1. Hobbies are like little treasures that make our daily life more colourful.(爱好就像小宝藏,让我们的日常生活更丰富多彩。)
2. Every time I do my hobby, I forget all my worries and feel totally relaxed.(每次做爱好时,我都会忘记所有烦恼,感到无比放松。)
3. Doing what I love not only brings me happiness but also helps me become a better person.(做自己喜欢的事,不仅给我带来快乐,还让我成为更好的人。)
4. I believe sticking to my hobby will bring me more surprises in the future.(我相信坚持我的爱好,未来会给我带来更多惊喜。)
学生写作填空练习版
My Favourite Hobby
My favourite hobby is _______(爱好,如drawing cartoons). It always brings me great joy, and I spend about _______(时间,如one hour) doing it _______(频率+时间,如every evening after dinner). Sometimes I do it alone in my room, and sometimes I _______(和谁做+做什么,如draw with my best friend Lily and exchange our works). Last month, _______(具体小场景,如I drew a cartoon of our class and showed it to my teacher—she praised me for my creativity). I love this hobby because _______(喜欢的原因,如it makes me creative and helps me express my ideas). It also _______(带来的帮助,如teaches me to be patient when drawing details). I hope to _______(愿望,如hold a small cartoon show with Lily next year) and share my happiness with more people.
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