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高考读后续写指导学案 I was lounging on the sofa, enjoying a cozy TV session with the kids, when my wife Lindsey burst into the room. “Jake, there’s a pig on our driveway!” she exclaimed. Our driveway was on the opposite side of the house, so we’d installed a security camera for just such occasions. Sure enough, it revealed a massive, four-legged creature wandering around. Moments later, we caught sight of it gently touching the window with his snout and grunting softly. “He’s adorable!” my 10-year-old daughter, Ella, squealed, “I’m going to say hello!” I cautioned her that we didn’t know if the pig was friendly, but before I could stop her, she was already out the door. To our relief, the colossal pig seemed perfectly content to be petted and fawned over. Ella pleaded to keep him, but I gently explained that we didn’t have enough space. Disappointed though Ella was, Lindsey and I decided to send the pig back. I called a local farmer to see if the pig belonged to him. When I described the animal’s size and distinctive markings, he chuckled, confirming that it was definitely Kevin Bacon, who was probably just out looking for some company. The Hollywood actor’s name gave us all a good laugh. The farmer also told us Kevin enjoyed playing with kids. We learned that the farmer was away on business and wouldn’t be able to return until the next day. He asked if we could walk Kevin home. “I’m not sure we’ll be able to get him to move.” I replied. “You could try luring him with food,” the farmer suggested. He then mentioned that Kevin had a soft spot for Oreos. Fortunately, we had some Oreos in the biscuit tin. I hoped it would be enough. Then Lindsey managed to fit Kevin with a dog leash. 续写提示： (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1、 文本分析 1.核心情节梳理 导语：一家意外发现迷路的宠物猪Kevin，联系到猪主人（农夫）后，需用奥利奥引诱猪回家。 关键信息： 1） 猪性格温顺，喜欢孩子和奥利奥（伏笔：后续可能依赖这一特点解决冲突）。2） 农夫不在家，需“我们”亲自送猪，且猪体型庞大（暗示运输难度）。 3）已有线索：狗绳、奥利奥、孩子Ella对猪的喜爱。 情感基调与人物设定：情感：温馨、幽默（猪的名字“Kevin Bacon”自带笑点）。 Ella：孩子视角，对猪有爱心，可成为引导猪的关键角色（如用语言鼓励，动作等）。 “我”和妻子：成年人视角，负责主导行动，体现责任感。 2、 续写段首句解读文本分析 Paragraph 1：“After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats.”→任务：描写出发后的过程，需体现“如何用奥利奥引导猪”，可加入途中的小波折（如猪中途停留、路人反应等），突出人物互动（Ella的作用）。 Paragraph 2：“Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food.”→任务：危机（奥利奥用尽），需通过合理方法解决（不可凭空出现新食物），最终成功送猪回家，结尾可升华情感（如家庭合作、人与动物的温情等）。 3、 续写框架与逻辑构建 （“十句五定法”的框架设计） 核心原则：首尾句定调，中间句填充逻辑与细节，确保段落连贯、语言丰富。 Paragraph 1：After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. 首句（一般会是动作+心情） Ella, holding an Oreo in her hand, walked ahead to lead the way，her eyes sparkling with anticipation. 尾句（承上启下） Ella kept feeding Kevin, laughing at his funny grunts. 中间句补充： 猪的初始反应（用动作描写体现“食物驱动”）； 途中的小波折（如猪中途停留、路人反应等）； Ella的应对（用对话或动作展现“孩子的方法”）；我和妻子的做法。 Kevin followed her closely, his eyes fixed on the cookie. Whenever he stopped to sniff something interesting, Ella would wave another treat to attract him back. With Lindsey holding the leash and me checking the map, we made steady progress. People passing by looked at us in surprise, some even taking pictures. Not only did Kevin enjoy the treats, but he also seemed to love the attention. Walking along the country road, we felt like we were on a unique family trip. Paragraph 2：Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. 首句（动作+情感） Panic surged through me not knowing what to do next. Just then I saw Ella held the last cookie high, teasing Kevin with it. 尾句（画面定格+升华 ----如家庭合作、人与动物的温情等）。 Watching Kevin disappear into the farmyard, we felt both relieved and a little sad. 中间段落补充：需通过合理方法解决（不可凭空出现新食物），最终成功送猪回家。 Seeing the last cookie, Kevin stopped and refused to move any further. Just then I saw Ella knelt down, looking into Kevin’s eyes, and said gently, “Come on, Kevin, we’re almost there.” To our amazement, he took a small step forward after hearing her voice. Encouraged by this, Ella walked backward, holding the last Oreo high. Step by step, Kevin followed, though slowly. When we finally reached the farm gate, Ella gave him the cookie, which he ate happily. Then, with a satisfied grunt, he turned and trotted into his home. 范文 Paragraph 1: Ella, holding an Oreo in her hand, walked ahead to lead the way，her eyes sparkling with anticipation. Kevin followed her closely, his eyes fixed on the cookie. Whenever he stopped to sniff something interesting, Ella would wave another treat to attract him back. With Lindsey holding the leash and me checking the map, we made steady progress. People passing by looked at us in surprise, some even taking pictures. Not only did Kevin enjoy the treats, but he also seemed to love the attention. Walking along the country road, we felt like we were on a unique family trip. Ella kept feeding Kevin, laughing at his funny grunts. Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food.Panic surged through me, not knowing what to do next. Seeing the last cookie, Kevin stopped and refused to move any further. Just then I saw Ella knelt down, looking into Kevin’s eyes, and said gently, “Come on, Kevin, we’re almost there.” To our amazement, he took a small step forward after hearing her voice. Encouraged by this, Ella walked backward, holding the last Oreo high. Step by step, Kevin followed, though slowly. When we finally reached the farm gate, Ella gave him the cookie, which he ate happily. Then, with a satisfied grunt, he turned and trotted into his home. Watching Kevin disappear into the farmyard, we felt both relieved and a little sad. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $英语作文续写练习 原文文本： I was lounging on the sofa, enjoying a cozy TV session with the kids, when my wife Lindsey burst into the room. “Jake, there’s a pig on our driveway!” she exclaimed. Our driveway was on the opposite side of the house, so we’d installed a security camera for just such occasions. Sure enough, it revealed a massive, four-legged creature wandering around. Moments later, we caught sight of it gently touching the window with his snout and grunting softly. “He’s adorable!” my 10-year-old daughter, Ella, squealed, “I’m going to say hello!” I cautioned her that we didn’t know if the pig was friendly, but before I could stop her, she was already out the door. To our relief, the colossal pig seemed perfectly content to be petted and fawned over. Ella pleaded to keep him, but I gently explained that we didn’t have enough space. Disappointed though Ella was, Lindsey and I decided to send the pig back. I called a local farmer to see if the pig belonged to him. When I described the animal’s size and distinctive markings, he chuckled, confirming that it was definitely Kevin Bacon, who was probably just out looking for some company. The Hollywood actor’s name gave us all a good laugh. The farmer also told us Kevin enjoyed playing with kids. We learned that the farmer was away on business and wouldn’t be able to return until the next day. He asked if we could walk Kevin home. “I’m not sure we’ll be able to get him to move.” I replied. “You could try luring him with food,” the farmer suggested. He then mentioned that Kevin had a soft spot for Oreos. Fortunately, we had some Oreos in the biscuit tin. I hoped it would be enough. Then Lindsey managed to fit Kevin with a dog leash. 续写提示： (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats. __________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food. __________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 导语： 一家意外发现迷路的宠物猪Kevin，联系到猪主人（农夫）后，需用奥利奥引诱猪回家。 关键信息： ）猪性格温顺，喜欢孩子和奥利奥（伏笔：后续可能依赖这一特点解决冲突）。 2） 农夫不在家，需“我们”亲自送猪，且猪体型庞大（暗示运输难度）。 3）已有线索：狗绳、奥利奥、孩子Ella对猪的喜爱。 情感基调与人物设定： 1）情感： 温馨、幽默（猪的名字“Kevin Bacon”自带笑点）。 2）Ella： 孩子视角，对猪有爱心，可成为引导猪的关键角色（如用语言鼓励，动作等）。 3）“我”和妻子： 成年人视角，负责主导行动，体现责任感。 二、续写段首句解读文本分析 Paragraph 1：“After checking the route to the farm, we set off with a bag of treats.”→任务： 描写出发后的过程，需体现“如何用奥利奥引导猪”，可加入途中的小波折（如猪中途停留、路人反应等），突出人物互动（Ella的作用）。 Paragraph 2：“Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food.”→任务： 危机（奥利奥用尽），需通过合理方法解决（不可凭空出现新食物），最终成功送猪回家，结尾可升华情感（如家庭合作、人与动物的温情等）。 三、续写框架与逻辑构建 （“十句五定法”的框架设计） 核心原则：首尾句定调，中间句填充逻辑与细节，确保段落连贯、语言丰富。 首句（一般会是动作+心情） 写Ella的动作和心情  Ella, holding an Oreo in her hand, walked ahead to lead the way，her eyes sparkling with anticipation. 尾句（承上启下） 正开心的喂猪 Ella kept feeding Kevin, laughing at his funny grunts. 中间句补充： 猪的初始反应（用动作描写体现“食物驱动”）； 途中的小波折（如猪中途停留、路人反应等）； Ella的应对（用对话或动作展现“孩子的方法”）；我和妻子的做法。 1.猪的反应 Kevin followed her closely, his eyes fixed on the cookie. 2.途中的小波折（如猪中途停留、路人反应等）； Ella的应对（用对话或动作展现“孩子的方法”）；我和妻子的做法。 1）Whenever he stopped to sniff something interesting, Ella would wave another treat to attract him back. 2） With Lindsey holding the leash and me checking the map, we made steady progress. 3） People passing by looked at us in surprise, some even taking pictures. 4） Not only did Kevin enjoy the treats, but he also seemed to love the attention. 5） Walking along the country road, we felt like we were on a unique family trip. 首句（动作+情感） Panic surged through me， not knowing what to do next. Just then I saw Ella held the last cookie high, teasing Kevin with it. 尾句（画面定格+升华---如家庭合作、人与动物的温情等）。  Watching Kevin disappear into the farmyard, we felt both relieved and a little sad. 中间段落补充：需通过合理方法解决（不可凭空出现新食物），最终成功送猪回家。 1）Seeing the last cookie, Kevin stopped and refused to move any further. 2） Just then I saw Ella knelt down, looking into Kevin’s eyes, and said gently, “Come on, Kevin, we’re almost there.” 3） To our amazement, he took a small step forward after hearing her voice. 4）Encouraged by this, Ella walked backward, holding the last Oreo high. 中间段落补充：需通过合理方法解决（不可凭空出现新食物），最终成功送猪回家。 5）Step by step, Kevin followed, though slowly. 6） When we finally reached the farm gate, Ella gave him the cookie, which he ate happily. 7）Then, with a satisfied grunt, he turned and trotted into his home. Paragraph 1: Ella, holding an Oreo in her hand, walked ahead to lead the way，her eyes sparkling with anticipation. Kevin followed her closely, his eyes fixed on the cookie. Whenever he stopped to sniff something interesting, Ella would wave another treat to attract him back. With Lindsey holding the leash and me checking the map, we made steady progress. People passing by looked at us in surprise, some even taking pictures. Not only did Kevin enjoy the treats, but he also seemed to love the attention. Walking along the country road, we felt like we were on a unique family trip. Ella kept feeding Kevin, laughing at his funny grunts. Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we realized there was only one Oreo left and it was impossible to find more food.Panic surged through me, not knowing what to do next. Seeing the last cookie, Kevin stopped and refused to move any further.  Just then I saw Ella knelt down, looking into Kevin’s eyes, and said gently, “Come on, Kevin, we’re almost there.” To our amazement, he took a small step forward after hearing her voice. Encouraged by this, Ella walked backward, holding the last Oreo high. Step by step, Kevin followed, though slowly. When we finally reached the farm gate, Ella gave him the cookie, which he ate happily. Then, with a satisfied grunt, he turned and trotted into his home. Watching Kevin disappear into the farmyard, we felt both relieved and a little sad. $