Module 1 Travel 作文学案 2025-2026学年外研版（2012）九年级英语下册

Module 1 Travel 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Travel”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“旅行与交通”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语描述旅行经历、谈论旅行方式、分享旅行感受、规划旅行计划”，运用名词、冠词、数词的复习用法及旅行相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与应用类写作的准确性和连贯性。常见写作角度包括：① 描述一次难忘的旅行经历（时间、地点、方式、事件、感受）；② 给朋友写邮件分享旅行见闻；③ 介绍一种喜爱的旅行方式及理由；④ 规划一次旅行行程。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“纪实性”和“实用性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次难忘的旅行”。请用英语写一篇短文，描述一次你难忘的旅行经历，包括旅行时间、地点、交通方式、发生的趣事及你的感受，词数60-80左右，题目为“An Unforgettable Trip”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 An Unforgettable Trip Last summer, I took a direct flight to Hong Kong with my family. The plane left a bit late, but the pilot succeeded in landing on time. We toured the city by bus and taxi, and took a tour of Victoria Peak. The view from the top was amazing—we could see the whole city and the sea. We also visited some famous scenic spots, and I bought many souvenirs. What made it special was that we tried local snacks like fish balls and egg tarts. It was an unforgettable trip. I not only enjoyed the beautiful scenery but also experienced a different culture. 【译文】 一次难忘的旅行 去年夏天，我和家人乘坐直飞航班去了香港。 飞机起飞有点晚，但飞行员成功按时着陆了。我们乘坐公交和出租车游览了这座城市，还参观了太平山顶。山顶的景色令人惊叹——我们能看到整座城市和大海。我们还去了一些著名景点，我买了很多纪念品。让这次旅行特别的是，我们尝了鱼蛋、蛋挞等当地小吃。 这是一次难忘的旅行，我不仅欣赏了美丽的风景，还体验了不同的文化。 亮点词块 1.direct flight 直飞航班 2.succeed in landing 成功着陆 3.tour the city 游览城市 4.take a tour of 参观…… 5.Victoria Peak 太平山顶 6.scenic spots 景点 7.local snacks 当地小吃 8.unforgettable trip 难忘的旅行 9.different culture 不同的文化 高分句子 1.The plane left a bit late, but the pilot succeeded in landing on time.（运用课本核心短语succeed in doing，贴合单元词汇） 2.The view from the top was amazing—we could see the whole city and the sea.（破折号补充说明，句式灵活，符合单元表达习惯） 3.I not only enjoyed the beautiful scenery but also experienced a different culture.（用not only...but also...总结收获，升华主题） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter想了解你的假期旅行，给你写了邮件。请你回复他，分享你的旅行经历，词数不少于50。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear you want to know about my holiday trip! I had a wonderful time traveling to Guilin with my friends. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear you want to know about my holiday trip! I had a wonderful time traveling to Guilin with my friends. We chose to take a high-speed train because it’s fast and comfortable. It took us about 3 hours to get there. We toured the Li River by boat— the mountains along the river have strange shapes, and the water is clear. We also visited Reed Flute Cave, where the stalactites look amazing. We tried local rice noodles, which were delicious. Guilin is a city full of natural beauty. I took many photos and will send them to you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 很高兴听到你想了解我的假期旅行！我和朋友们去桂林旅行，玩得非常开心。 我们选择坐高铁，因为它又快又舒适，花了大约3小时到达那里。我们乘船游览了漓江——河边的山形状奇特，水也很清澈。我们还参观了芦笛岩，里面的钟乳石看起来美极了。我们尝了当地的米粉，非常美味。 桂林是一座充满自然美景的城市，我拍了很多照片，很快就发给你！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍一次火车旅行经历，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 时间 上个月 目的地 西安 交通方式 高铁 事件 遇到老同学，一起聊天；参观兵马俑 感受 愉快，收获满满 Last month, I had a great train trip to Xi’an with my parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Last month, I had a great train trip to Xi’an with my parents. We took the high-speed train, which was smooth and on time. On the train, I met my old classmate Lily—we talked about our school life happily. In Xi’an, we visited the Terracotta Army, which was amazing. We also tried delicious noodles. It was a happy trip. I not only saw famous relics but also reconnected with my friend. 【拓展2译文】 上个月，我和父母一起去西安进行了一次愉快的火车旅行。 我们乘坐了高铁，旅途顺利且准点。在火车上，我遇到了老同学莉莉——我们开心地聊了学校生活。在西安，我们参观了兵马俑，它令人惊叹。我们还尝了美味的面条。 这是一次愉快的旅行，我不仅看到了著名的文物，还和朋友重新取得了联系。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.旅行相关（单元重点） · 交通方式：by bus/taxi/train/plane 乘坐公交/出租车/火车/飞机；high-speed train 高铁；direct flight 直飞航班；take a boat tour 乘船游览；tour the city 游览城市 · 旅行元素：pilot 飞行员；flight 航班；scenic spot 景点；souvenir 纪念品；local snack 当地小吃；relic 文物；view 景色；cave 洞穴 · 动作表达：succeed in landing 成功着陆；take a tour of 参观……；try local food 品尝当地美食；take photos 拍照；reconnect with 与……重新联系 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 名词：可数名词复数（flights, souvenirs, snacks, photos）；不可数名词（scenery, culture, beauty） · 冠词：定冠词the（the Summer Palace, the Terracotta Army）；不定冠词a/an（a direct flight, an amazing view） · 数词：基数词（three hours, 2,600 kilometres）；序数词（the first stop, the third day） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 感受描述：amazing 令人惊叹的；unforgettable 难忘的；wonderful 美妙的；delicious 美味的；comfortable 舒适的 · 旅行收获：enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景；experience different culture 体验不同文化；see famous relics 参观著名文物；make memories 创造回忆 二、实用句型积累 1.介绍旅行基本信息（贴合单元核心） · I took a [交通方式] to [目的地] with [同行人] [时间]. 我[时间]和[同行人]乘坐[交通方式]去了[目的地]，例：I took a high-speed train to Chengdu with my sister last weekend. · The trip took us [时间] because [原因]. 旅途花了我们[时间]，因为……，例：The trip took us five hours because we chose a scenic route. · We toured the city by [交通方式] and visited [景点]. 我们乘坐[交通方式]游览了城市，还参观了[景点]，例：We toured the city by bike and visited the old town. 1. 描述旅行事件与感受（贴合单元主题） · What made the trip special was that [事件]. 让这次旅行特别的是……，例：What made the trip special was that we met a local guide who told us interesting stories. · The view from [地点] was amazing—we could see [景色]. 从[地点]看到的景色令人惊叹——我们能看到……，例：The view from the mountain top was amazing—we could see the lake below. · I not only [收获1] but also [收获2] during the trip. 旅行中我不仅……还……，例：I not only took beautiful photos but also learned about local history. 1. 推荐旅行目的地（贴合单元内涵） · I strongly recommend [目的地] because it’s [优点]. 我强烈推荐[目的地]，因为它……，例：I strongly recommend Lijiang because it’s full of ancient charm. · If you go to [目的地], don’t miss [景点/food]. 如果你去[目的地]，别错过……，例：If you go to Shanghai, don’t miss the Bund and xiaolongbao. · It’s a [感受] trip that you will never forget. 这是一次你永远不会忘记的[感受]之旅，例：It’s a magical trip that you will never forget. 三、课堂实用句型（教学专用） · 提问句型：How did you travel to that place?；How long did the trip take?；What did you do during the trip?；What was the most amazing thing?；Why was the trip unforgettable? · 回答句型：I traveled there by high-speed train.；It took about four hours.；I visited scenic spots and tried local food.；The view from the top was the most amazing.；Because I experienced a different culture and met old friends. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $