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Unit 2 作文学案 2025-2026学年鲁教版五四制九年级全册 【写作导引】 本单元以“Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“青少年权利与责任”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语谈论青少年应被允许或禁止做的事、表达赞同与反对,运用情态动词(should/may/could)表允许与建议及被动语态(should be allowed to do) ,探讨青少年自主选择与规则约束的平衡”,常见写作角度包括:① 阐述青少年应被允许/禁止做的事及理由;② 分享对家庭/学校规则的看法;③ 给家长或老师写建议信;④ 结合自身经历谈论自主选择的重要性。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型,突出“思辨性”和“实用性”,可直接用于课堂写作教学与练习。 【单元话题】 “青少年的自主选择权”。请用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你认为青少年应被允许做的两件事和应被禁止做的两件事,说明理由,词数60-80左右,题目为“Teenagers’ Right to Choose”。 _ 【范文】 Teenagers’ Right to Choose As teenagers, we need proper freedom and clear rules. I think we should be allowed to make our own choices in some ways. First, we should be allowed to choose our own hobbies, like playing sports or learning musical instruments. Hobbies help us relax and develop talents. Second, we should be allowed to manage our spare time reasonably. We can learn time management from it. However, we shouldn’t be allowed to smoke or drink, as they are bad for our health. We also shouldn’t be allowed to stay out too late, because safety comes first. Balancing freedom and rules helps us grow healthily. 【译文】 青少年的自主选择权 作为青少年,我们需要适当的自由和明确的规则。我认为在某些方面我们应该被允许自己做选择。 首先,我们应该被允许选择自己的爱好,比如做运动或学习乐器。爱好能帮助我们放松并培养才能。其次,我们应该被允许合理安排课余时间,从中我们能学会时间管理。然而,我们不应该被允许吸烟或喝酒,因为这对健康有害。我们也不应该被允许在外逗留太晚,因为安全第一。 平衡自由与规则有助于我们健康成长。 亮点词块 1.proper freedom 适当的自由 2.make one’s own choices 自己做选择 3.musical instruments 乐器 4.develop talents 培养才能 5.manage spare time 安排课余时间 6.time management 时间管理 7.stay out too late 在外逗留太晚 8.safety comes first 安全第一 9.balance freedom and rules 平衡自由与规则 10.grow healthily 健康成长 高分句子 1.First, we should be allowed to choose our own hobbies, like playing sports or learning musical instruments.(运用“should be allowed to do”被动结构,贴合单元核心语法) 2.However, we shouldn’t be allowed to smoke or drink, as they are bad for our health.(用转折关系阐述禁止的事及理由,逻辑清晰) 3.Balancing freedom and rules helps us grow healthily.(总结观点,升华主题,贴合单元内涵) 【拓展1】 你对父母不让你参加学校社团活动感到不满,请给父母写一封信,说明你想参加的理由,词数不少于50。 Dear Mom and Dad, Hi! I’m writing to talk about joining the school English club. I really hope you can allow me to take part in it. _ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Mom and Dad, Hi! I’m writing to talk about joining the school English club. I really hope you can allow me to take part in it. First, joining the club can help me improve my English speaking skills. We practice conversations with partners every week, which is useful for my exams. Second, I can make friends who share the same interest. We can learn from each other. I promise I won’t let it get in the way of my schoolwork. I’ll finish my homework first before going to the club. Please trust me—I can balance study and the club activity. I really want to have this chance. Could you agree with me? Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的爸爸妈妈: 嗨!我写信是想谈谈参加学校英语社团的事。我真的希望你们能允许我参加。 首先,加入社团能帮助我提高英语口语能力。我们每周都会和同伴练习对话,这对我的考试很有帮助。其次,我能交到有相同兴趣的朋友,我们可以互相学习。我保证不会让它影响我的学业,我会先完成作业再去社团。请相信我——我能平衡学习和社团活动。 我真的很想拥有这个机会,你们能同意我吗? 你的, 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示,描述你对“青少年是否应被允许做兼职”的看法,词数50左右,开头已给出。 提示 信息 观点 支持青少年做兼职 理由 1. 学会赚钱不易,珍惜父母的付出;2. 积累社会经验,提升沟通能力;3. 培养责任感 注意事项 不影响学习,选择安全的工作 Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs? I think the answer is yes. _ 【拓展2范文】 Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs? I think the answer is yes. Doing part-time jobs teaches us that money doesn’t come easily, so we’ll cherish what our parents give us. It also helps us gain social experience and improve communication skills. What’s more, we can learn to be responsible. Of course, we shouldn’t let it affect our study and should choose safe jobs. It’s a good way for us to grow up. 【拓展2译文】 青少年应该被允许做兼职吗?我认为答案是肯定的。 做兼职能让我们明白赚钱不易,从而珍惜父母的付出。它还能帮助我们积累社会经验,提升沟通能力。更重要的是,我们能学会承担责任。当然,我们不能让它影响学习,而且要选择安全的工作。这对我们的成长来说是一种很好的方式。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.权利与规则(单元重点) 允许与禁止:be allowed to do 被允许做;should be allowed to do 应该被允许做;be not allowed to do 不被允许做;shouldn’t be allowed to do 不应该被允许做;be forbidden to do 被禁止做 常见行为:have part-time jobs 做兼职;choose own clothes 选择自己的衣服;get ears pierced 穿耳洞;smoke 吸烟;drink 喝酒;stay out late 在外逗留太晚;join clubs 参加社团;manage spare time 安排课余时间 相关表达:make one’s own decisions 自己做决定;get in the way of 妨碍;cherish parents’ efforts 珍惜父母的付出;gain social experience 积累社会经验;improve communication skills 提升沟通能力;develop a sense of responsibility 培养责任感 1. 语法相关(单元重点) 情态动词表允许与建议: 允许:can be allowed to 可以被允许;may be allowed to 可能被允许;could be allowed to 或许可以被允许 建议:should 应该;shouldn’t 不应该;had better 最好;It’s better to 最好做 被动语态结构: 肯定式:主语 + should be allowed to do 主语应该被允许做 否定式:主语 + shouldn’t be allowed to do 主语不应该被允许做 疑问式:Should + 主语 + be allowed to do?主语应该被允许做吗? 1. 观点表达(单元基础) 赞同:I agree with... 我同意……;I think it’s a good idea to... 我认为……是个好主意;In my opinion, ... 依我看……;It’s beneficial for... to... 对……来说……是有益的 反对:I disagree with... 我不同意……;I don’t think... 我认为……不……;It’s not wise to... ……是不明智的;It’s harmful for... to... 对……来说……是有害的 理由阐述:because 因为;since 既然;as 由于;for 因为;so 所以;therefore 因此;in order to 为了 二、实用句型积累 1.表达允许与禁止(贴合单元核心) Teenagers should be allowed to... because... 青少年应该被允许……因为…… We shouldn’t be allowed to... as... 我们不应该被允许……因为…… It’s necessary for teenagers to... so they should be allowed to... 对青少年来说……是必要的,所以他们应该被允许…… ...should be forbidden because it’s bad for teenagers’... ……应该被禁止,因为它对青少年的……有害。 1. 阐述观点与理由(贴合单元主题) I support/oppose... because first... second... 我支持/反对……因为首先……其次…… In my view, ... can help us... 依我看,……能帮助我们…… Although... has some advantages, it may... 尽管……有一些好处,但它可能会…… We can gain... from... which is important for our growth. 我们能从……中获得……,这对我们的成长很重要。 1. 提出建议(贴合单元内涵) Parents/Teachers should allow teenagers to... 父母/老师应该允许青少年…… We suggest that teenagers be allowed to... 我们建议允许青少年…… It’s better to balance... and... 最好平衡……和…… Teenagers should be given chances to... so that they can... 应该给青少年……的机会,这样他们才能…… 三、课堂实用句型 提问句型:Should teenagers be allowed to choose their own clothes?;What do you think teenagers shouldn’t be allowed to do?;Why do you support/oppose...?;Do you think part-time jobs are good for teenagers? 回答句型:Yes, they should. 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