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Unit 1 Here and Now 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Here and Now”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“跨文化沟通与全球视野”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用现在进行时描述当下正在发生的动作、运用打电话常用表达、谈论不同时区人们的生活”,核心语法为 现在进行时(am/is/are + doing),常见写作角度包括:① 描述自己或他人当下的活动;② 写电话邀请对话及回复;③ 介绍不同城市(时区)人们正在做的事;④ 分享如何通过当下的活动拉近彼此距离。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型,突出“即时性”和“跨文化”特点,可直接用于课堂写作教学与练习。
【单元话题】
“世界各地的此刻”。请用英语写一篇短文,描述不同城市的人们此刻正在做的事,体现时区差异,词数60-80左右,题目为“What Are People Doing Right Now?”。
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【范文】
What Are People Doing Right Now?
The world is big, but at this moment, people in different places are busy with different things.
It’s 8 p.m. in Chongqing. Some people are rushing home from work, while others are enjoying hot pot with friends. In Nairobi, it’s 2 p.m. Many people are working in offices, and some are shopping for paintings in markets. In New York, it’s 8 a.m. People are jogging in Central Park or drinking coffee in shops. Although the times are different, everyone’s day is full of life.
These moments show how people around the world live together.
【译文】
此刻人们在做什么?
世界很大,但此时此刻,不同地方的人们正忙着不同的事情。
重庆现在是晚上8点,一些人正下班赶回家,而另一些人在和朋友吃火锅。内罗毕是下午2点,很多人在办公室工作,还有人在集市上买画作。纽约是早上8点,人们在中央公园慢跑或在店里喝咖啡。尽管时间不同,但每个人的一天都充满生机。
这些瞬间展现了世界各地的人们如何共同生活。
亮点词块
1.at this moment 此时此刻
2.be busy with 忙于
3.rush home 赶回家
4.enjoy hot pot 吃火锅
5.work in offices 在办公室工作
6.jog in Central Park 在中央公园慢跑
7.be full of life 充满生机
8.around the world 世界各地
9.time zone 时区
10.different places 不同地方
高分句子
1.Some people are rushing home from work, while others are enjoying hot pot with friends.(用while对比不同活动,运用现在进行时,贴合单元核心语法)
2.Although the times are different, everyone’s day is full of life.(用让步状语从句体现时区差异,升华主题)
3.These moments show how people around the world live together.(呼应单元Big Question,贴合主题内涵)
【拓展1】
你的笔友Lisa想知道你此刻在做什么,以及中国现在的情况,请你写一封邮件回复她,词数不少于50。
Dear Lisa,
Hi! You asked about what I’m doing right now. Let me tell you!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Lisa,
Hi! You asked about what I’m doing right now. Let me tell you!
It’s 7 p.m. in Beijing. I’m helping my mom make mooncakes—we’re preparing for the Mid-Autumn Festival. My dad is washing the car outside. Outside the window, some kids are riding bikes, and old people are walking in the park. Beijing is busy but warm at this moment. What about you in London? What are you doing now? Is the weather nice there?
Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的莉萨:
嗨!你问我此刻在做什么,让我告诉你吧!
北京现在是晚上7点,我在帮妈妈做月饼——我们在为中秋节做准备。爸爸正在外面洗车。窗外,一些孩子在骑自行车,老人们在公园散步。此时此刻的北京忙碌又温暖。你在伦敦怎么样?现在在做什么?那里的天气好吗?
尽快回信呀!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,描述你和家人此刻正在做的事,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
时间
周六晚上7点
你
写英语作业,听音乐
爸爸
看足球比赛
妈妈
厨房做饭,唱着歌
妹妹
和宠物狗玩耍
It’s 7 p.m. on Saturday. My family and I are all doing different things at home.
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【拓展2范文】
It’s 7 p.m. on Saturday. My family and I are all doing different things at home.
I’m doing my English homework while listening to light music. My dad is watching a football match on TV—he’s cheering loudly! My mom is cooking dinner in the kitchen and singing happily. My little sister is playing with our pet dog; they’re running around the living room. We’re not together, but we feel warm.
【拓展2译文】
现在是周六晚上7点,我和家人正在家里做着不同的事。
我一边听轻音乐一边做英语作业。爸爸在看电视上的足球比赛——他正大声欢呼呢!妈妈在厨房做晚饭,还开心地唱着歌。妹妹在和我们的宠物狗玩耍,它们在客厅里跑来跑去。我们没有待在一起,但感觉很温暖。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.现在进行时相关(单元重点)
· 动词-ing形式:doing homework 做作业;making mooncakes 做月饼;washing the car 洗车;riding a bike 骑自行车;jogging 慢跑;cooking dinner 做晚饭;playing football 踢足球;listening to music 听音乐
· 时间状语:right now 现在;at the moment 此刻;at present 目前;now 现在
1. 打电话相关(单元重点)
· 常用表达:Hold on 别挂断;Can I speak to...? 我能找……吗?;Can I take a message? 我能捎个口信吗?;call back 回电话;leave a message 留口信;What are you doing at the moment? 你此刻在做什么?
1. 时区与活动相关(单元重点)
· 城市与活动:Chongqing hot pot 重庆火锅;Central Park 中央公园;Nairobi markets 内罗毕集市;rush to work 赶去上班;shop for gifts 买礼物;walk in parks 逛公园;take the subway 坐地铁
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 现在进行时构成:
· 肯定式:I’m doing... / He/She is doing... / They are doing...
· 否定式:I’m not doing... / They aren’t doing...
· 疑问式:What are you doing? / Is she cooking?
· Wh-questions:What are you doing?(你在做什么?);Where are they working?(他们在何处工作?);Who is he talking to?(他在和谁说话?)
二、实用句型积累
1.描述当下活动(贴合单元核心)
· I’m + 动词-ing + at the moment. 我此刻正在……
· He/She is + 动词-ing + while + 另一个动作. 他/她在……的同时正在……
· Some people are + 动词-ing, while others are + 动词-ing. 一些人在……,而另一些人在……
· What are you doing right now? I’m + 动词-ing. 你此刻在做什么?我正在……
1. 打电话与邀请(贴合单元主题)
· Hi, it’s... What are you doing at the moment? 嗨,我是……,你此刻在做什么?
· I’m working on something important, but I can join you later. 我正在做重要的事,但之后可以加入你。
· Could you tell him to call me back? 你能让他给我回电话吗?
1. 描述不同时区活动(贴合单元内涵)
· It’s + 时间 + in + 城市. People there are + 动词-ing. 某城市现在是……点,那里的人们正在……
· Although the time zones are different, people around the world are all living their lives. 尽管时区不同,但世界各地的人们都在过着自己的生活。
三、课堂实用句型(教学专用)
· 提问句型:What are you doing now?;Is your dad watching TV?;Where are they jogging?;What time is it in New York?
· 回答句型:I’m reading a book.;Yes, he is. / No, he’s cooking.;They’re jogging in the park.;It’s 8 a.m. there.
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