2026年初中英语作文热点素材 part 20 信及其他 讲义

该初中英语讲义聚焦中考应用文写作核心考点，覆盖书信、通知、便条等常考文体，按“格式规范-常用表达-高分句型”模块整合知识点，构建从基础要素到篇章逻辑的系统框架。通过考点梳理（如书信开头结尾模板）、方法指导（酷句语法解析）、真题范文训练（如家乡介绍信、请假条实例），帮助学生突破写作难点，体现复习的针对性与系统性。 亮点在于“语言能力+思维品质”双提升设计，如通过“炫词积累-酷句仿写-篇章创作”三步训练，强化词汇句型运用（语言能力），结合好段点评分析结构逻辑（思维品质）。设基础句型默写、篇章仿写、高分表达优化分层练习，配合即时互评反馈，确保高效复习，助力学生提升写作得分能力，为教师提供清晰复习路径。

初中英语作文热点素材 part 20 信及其他 My Hometown July 6, 2014 Dear Andy, It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng. Jiangcheng is situated on the bank of Changjiang River. It has scenic beauty and is suited to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly for ages. Many factories, houses and roads have been built. Great changes have taken place about people's daily lives. But some problems have existed. For example, water pollution, air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically and healthily. Our city government and people should pay special attention to protecting the environment. I also think that the growth of population should be under control and then we'll have a glorious future. Best wishes. Yours, Zhao Qiang 炫词 situate使位于 scenic风景优美的 be suited to相称 economy经济 rapidly很快地 take place发生 exist存在 for example例如 pollution 污染 develop发展 scientifically合乎科学地 healthily健康地 population 人口 glorious辉煌的 酷句 I also think that the growth of population should be under control and then we'll have a glorious future. 我还认为应该控制人口增长, 这样我们就会有一个辉煌的未来。 （that the growth of population should be under control是宾语从句, 作think的宾语。连词and then使前后句连贯。） 译文 我的家乡 2014年7月6日 亲爱的安迪： 你的来信让我了解了你所在的美丽的城市, 你真好！ 现在我想告诉你我的家乡江城的一些情况。 江城位于长江岸边, 风景优美, 适宜居住。它的经济近年来快速发展, 修建了很多工厂、房屋和道路。人们的生活也发生了巨大的改变。可是还是存在一些问题, 例如水污染、空气污染、交通拥挤等。依我看, 江城应当科学、健康地发展经济。我们的市政府和人民要特别注意去保护环境。我还认为应该控制人口增长, 这样我们就会有一个辉煌的未来。 祝福你！ 你的朋友, 赵强 Teachers' Day To Miss Gao, Wish my greetings fly around you and live in your heart like the sweet sound of the bell. This card is only a small taken of our gratefulness. Sincerely wish you a happy Teachers' Day. From Li Hua 炫词 gratefulness感激 sincerely真诚地 酷句 Wish my greetings fly around you and live in your heart like the sweet sound of the bell. 让我的祝福, 像那悦耳的铃声, 飘绕在您的耳畔, 留驻在您的心间。 （本句是祈使句。my greetings fly around you and live in your heart like the sweet sound of the bell是宾语从句, 作wish的宾语。） 译文 教师节 致高老师： 让我的祝福, 像那悦耳的铃声, 飘绕在您的耳畔, 留驻在您的心间。这张卡片只代表了我们小小的感激之情, 忠心地祝您教师节快乐！ 李华 Asking for Leave Sept. 18 Dear Mr. Wang, I'm very sorry to tell you that I can't go to school this morning. Could I ask for three days' leave? My mother is ill. She has caught a bad cold. She is in hospital now. She needs looking after. And my father is away at the moment. So I have to take care of her. I'll come back to school as soon as possible and make up all the lessons. I will study even harder than before. Your student, Li Hao 炫词 catch a bad cold重感冒 look after照顾 have to不得不 take care of照顾 as soon as possible尽快 make up构成；虚构；为……化妆；补足 酷句 I'm very sorry to tell you that I can't go to school this morning. 我很抱歉地告诉您今天我不能上学了。 （to tell you that I can't go to school this morning是动词不定式作原因状语, 其中that I can't go to school this morning是宾语从句, 作tell的宾语。） 译文 请假条 亲爱的王老师： 我很抱歉地告诉您今天我不能上学了。我可以请三天假吗？ 我妈妈病了, 她得了重感冒, 现在已经住院了, 她需要人照顾, 爸爸又不在家, 所以我不得不照顾她。我会尽快回到学校并赶上所缺的所有课程, 我将会比以前更加努力。 您的学生, 李浩 9月18日 Put down and picked up again was your letter, picked up but unable to put down is my yearning for you. 放下又拾起的, 是你的信件；拾起却放不下的是我对你的思念！ 好句 ∗开头句∗ 1.信 假如你不知道收信人姓名 Dear Sir/Madam, Dear Professor, Dear President, 假如你知道此人的姓氏, 但他/她并非你的好友 Dear Mr. Jenkins, Dear Ms. Smith, Dear Dr. Spock, Dear Sue, Dear Michael, 假如此人是你的朋友 Dear Sue, Dear Michael, Dear Mary, I have received your letter of July 29. 我已经收到了你7月29日的来信。 I'm writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday. 我给你写信是想打听下星期一讲座的事。 I'm writing to ask if you can come next week. 我给你写信是想问你下个星期能不能来？ How time flies!It's three months since I saw you last. 光阴似箭, 我们已经三个月没有见面了。 I was delighted to receive your letter. 我很高兴收到你的来信。 Your letter came to me this morning. 我今天上午收到了你的来信。 2.通知 Readers are requested to note that. . . 请读者们注意…… A report will be given on English literature by Prof. Yang from Hong Kong University. 前来访问的香港大学的杨教授将作英国文学报告。 The sports meeting which is to take place this Friday has to be put off because of the heavy rain these days. 原定这星期五举行的运动会由于近日连降大雨不得不推迟。 . . . Group takes pleasure in announcing an English Evening to be held in(place)on the(day), the(date)at(time)a. m. /p. m. ……本团队很高兴地通知将于××月××日星期×上午/下午×时在××地点举行英语晚会。 3.便条与启事 Wang Lili, a girl, 10 years old, has been lost since April 11. 王丽丽, 女孩, 10岁, 4月11日走失, 至今未归。 I was careless to forget my mobile phone in the classroom on the 15th of this month. 本人不慎于本月15日把手机丢在教室里了。 I lost sth. with carelessness. 我不小心丢了某物。 A wallet was found yesterday afternoon, inside of which there is money and other things. 昨天下午有人捡到一个钱包, 里面有现金和其他物品。 I'm writing to you to ask for a sick leave. 我给你写条是为了请病假。 I have something urgent to consult you. 我有急事向您请教。 4.日记 Today we had a short trip to Beidaihe. 今天我们去北戴河做了一次短途旅行。 This afternoon my school held an English-speaking contest named“Challenging the Future”in the multi-function hall. 今天下午我们学校在多功能大厅举办了名为“挑战未来”的英语演讲比赛。 Today is a weekend and it is the traditional Chinese festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival. 今天是周末, 也是中国的传统佳节——中秋节。 I was on duty today. I must get to school earlier to open the door of the classroom. 今天我值日, 我必须早点儿到学校去开教室门。 5.贺卡 （To）______, 致______, 6.演讲 Ladies and gentlemen, 女士们, 先生们： Dear friends, 朋友们： Boys and girls, 同学们： Good afternoon. 下午好！ Today I want to talk about the generation gap. 今天我想谈一谈代沟。 I am very glad to deliver a talk here. 我很高兴在这里发表演讲。 My topic is travel today. 我今天的话题是旅行。 Today I want to tell you something about my pet dog. 今天我想和你们讲讲我的宠物狗。 Today let's talk about studying abroad. 今天我们谈一谈出国留学的话题。 ∗中间句∗ 1.信 Thanks for your letter. 谢谢你的来信。 I miss you very much. 我十分想念你。 How do you get on with your study？ 你的学习怎么样？ Do you get on well with your classmates/workmates? 你与同学/同事相处得好吗？ I'm writing to tell you a piece of exciting news. 我写信是为了告诉你一个令人兴奋的消息。 I'm sorry to tell you that I can't meet you tomorrow. 我很抱歉地告诉你明天我不能去见你了。 What about your parents？ 你的父母怎么样？ Hope to hear from you soon. 希望不久能收到你的来信。 Please give my best wishes to Tom. 请代我问候汤姆。 2.通知 Under the auspices of education Bureau. . . 由教育局主办（主持、主讲） Weather permitting, the sports meeting will be held on next Friday. 天气允许的话, 运动会将在下星期五举行。 Readers are requested to note that. . . . 请读者们注意…… Ladies and Gentlemen. 女士们, 先生们： Please be quiet, everyone！ 大家请安静！Be quite！ 请安静！ By the way, we will have a discussion after the report. 顺便说一句, 我们在报告会后开讨论会。 As for the places of the activities, please pay attention to more information here. 至于活动地点, 请关注进一步通知。 3.便条与启事 I wonder if you could lend me your Chinese-English dictionary. 我想知道你能否把你的汉英词典借给我。 I have to turn to the Chinese-English dictionary for help from time to time. 我必须时不时地查汉英词典。 One of most outstanding characteristics is that a mole lies under her Lower lip on the right side. 最突出的特点之一是她的下唇右下侧有一颗黑痣。 I'm writing to you to ask for a leave because I had a high fever this morning. 今天早晨我高烧, 特写条向您请假。 The cause of my illness was that I went swimming yesterday. 我得病是由于昨天游泳了。 In it were my ID card, student card, a little money and two notebooks. 内有我的身份证、学生证、一些钱及两个笔记本。 Somebody who lost the purse is expected to come to the office of the school to claim it. 请丢失钱包者到学校办公室认领。 I hope that my request will be given due consideration. 希望您考虑我的请求。 Please give him a ring if this time does not suit you. 如果时间对你不合适, 请给他回一个电话。 4.日记 I lead a busy but happy life. 我的生活既紧张又愉快。 I will graduate from junior middle school soon. 我很快就要初中毕业了。 When my father has free time, he always cooks delicious food for us. 当爸爸有空余时间, 总是给我们做可口的饭菜。 My mother's eyes were deep, and seemed to speak to you. 母亲的眼睛是深邃的, 仿佛要对你说话似的。 People think my grandpa is an easy-going person for he has a gentle kind face. 人们认为我爷爷是一个很随和的人, 因为他有着一张温和、仁慈的脸。 Looking at my grandma's white face and white hair, tears came into my eyes. I sank into deep thought. 看着奶奶苍白的脸色和满头白发, 我热泪盈眶, 陷入了沉思。 Besides teaching English, she always helps us in many ways. 除了教英语之外, 她还经常在其他各方面帮助我们。 After that, we collected the rubbish and threw it into a dustbin. 然后我们把垃圾收拾起来, 投入垃圾箱。 I rode unsteadily and soon became very tired. But I went on riding after a short rest. 我摇摇晃晃地骑了起来, 很快就累得满头大汗。但我稍稍休息了一会儿, 就继续骑了起来。 Though I wanted very much to buy a pocket recorder, I decided to send the pocket money to the poor children who were eager to go to school. 虽然我很想买一台袖珍录音机, 我还是决定把零花钱送给那些渴望上学的穷孩子。 Seeing this, Mother praised me and I felt very happy. 看到这些, 妈妈表扬了我, 我感到很高兴。 5.贺卡 Happy birthday, my friend. Please remember the smile of old days, recalling the long friendship. May friendship long live. 生日快乐, 我的朋友, 请记着往日的笑声, 忆取那温馨持久的友谊。愿情谊长存。 Every good wish for a merry Christmas and a happy New Year to you！ 祝你圣诞快乐, 新年万事如意！ Ah teacher, please accept the hearty blessings of your student：Happy the Spring Festival. Everything be well and suit your wish. 啊！老师, 请接受一个学生对您的衷心祝福：祝新春愉快, 平安如意！ May you remember the happy time we stay together？ Wish our friendship become harder with time. 但愿你没有忘记我们相处的欢乐时光, 并希望我们的友谊随着岁月, 日渐增长深厚。 I pray for you silently. Upon the ringing of the New Year's bell, may all your beautiful dreams come true. 我静静地为你祈祷, 在这新年钟声敲响的时候, 愿你美梦成真。 I appreciate all the things you have done for me, Mom. Happy Mother's Day！ 感谢您为我所做的一切, 妈妈。母亲节快乐！ 6.演讲 More and more people have realized our environment is becoming worse and worse. In fact, people are living in danger. 越来越多的人意识到我们的环境正在每况愈下了。事实上, 人们生活在危险之中。 As middle school students, learning more about different foreign cultures and getting much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries are good for them. 作为中学生, 学习更多有关国外的不同文化和掌握国外的先进科学技术对他们是有益的。 The most important is that they can learn foreign languages more quickly. 最重要的是, 他们可以更快地学习外语。 But most of the students are too young to look after themselves well. Also, being far away from their hometown may make them feel lonely. 然而, 大部分学生年龄太小不能照顾好自己。另外, 远离家乡会让他们感到孤独。 And the cost is much higher there than that at home. 而且, 国外的费用也比国内更高。 I like Jiajia because it is more intelligent than other dogs. It knows a lot of tricks. For example, it can sit, beg, fetch and roll over. In addition, if there is somebody who goes into my room stealthily, it will bark loudly or bite him. 我喜欢Jiajia因为它比其他的狗聪明。它会做很多的特技, 举例来说, 它会坐、乞讨、接东西取东西抓东西, 还会在地上打滚。另外, 如果有人悄悄地进入我的房间, 它就会大声地叫或者去咬这个人。 ∗结尾句∗ 1.信 Please notify me soon. 请速通知我。 Looking forward to a prompt reply. 盼望您的早日答复。 Please do not fail to write to me. 请别忘记给我写信。 I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience. 请您在方便时尽早回复, 必将感激。 I long for your answer within a few days. 我期望你在几天内回信。 As the season grows colder, I hope you will take good care of yourself. 随着天气变冷, 我希望你照顾好自己。 Please give my compliments to your family. 向你的家人问个好！ Thank you for the past favour. 感谢你过去的帮助。 Wish you a pleasant journey! 祝你旅途愉快！ Yours faithfully, Yours cordially, Yours may, yours sincerely, Best regards. Best wishes. Lovingly yours, 2.通知 Notice is there by given that. . . 特此通知 Be expected to attend. . . 欢迎光临 Be sure to attend on time. 一定准时出席。 3.便条与启事 Anyone knowing her whereabouts is requested to report to any police station or to her family at the following address. 若有知情者, 请通知警察局或者按下面的地址通知其家人。 I will appreciate you very much if you can allow my leave. 如果您能准假, 我会非常感激。 I enclose a certificate from the doctor who is attending on me. 我附上了正在给我治疗的医生证明。 Will the founder please send it to. . . ? 拾到者请把它送到……好吗？ Will the owner come to. . . and get it back? 请失主来……把它领回去好吗？ 4.日记 We felt happy because we had done a good job. 因我们很好地完成了一项工作, 所以大家都很高兴。 Thus I decided to give them all my savings through our Students' Union. And I did so this afternoon. 因此, 我决定通过学生会把所有的储蓄都给他们。而且, 今天下午我就这么做了。 I felt very pleased and excited, for this was the first time I had ever talked with a foreigner in English, and I did give him a little help. 我感到很高兴, 也很兴奋, 因为这是我第一次用英语和外国人交流, 并且确实给了他一些帮助。 I'm determined to study hard and make contributions to our country's development in the future. 我下定决心要努力学习, 将来为祖国的发展做出贡献。 I told nobody about it, It was just my secret. 我没有将这件事告诉任何人, 这只是我的秘密。 I am going to study hard and do good preparation for my future. 我打算好好学习为我的未来作好准备。 You can't imagine how disappointed I was today. 你无法想象这一天我是多么伤心失望！ What a good trip we had today！I'll never forget it. 我们的旅行多愉快呀！ 我将永远不会忘记它。 5.贺卡 （From）_______来自×× 6.演讲 I hope the generation gaps will disappear one day. We will understand each other more easily, and we can live a happier life. 我希望代沟总有一天会消失。我们会彼此更加了解, 我们会过上更加幸福的生活。 To my mind, we should try to work hard to improve ourselves at home. When we finish middle school, we can find some chances to go abroad. 依我看, 我们应该尽力在国内提高自己, 当我们中学生毕业时, 我们再寻找出国留学的机会。 That's all. Thank you. 演讲结束。谢谢你们！ 好段 How are you?I'm very glad to hear from you. Many thanks for your wonderful stamps and pictures! What nice pictures!Your smile is very sweet and when I see them I will think of you. 点评 文中感叹句“What nice pictures！”用得贴切自然, 反映了作者的真情实感。 译文 你好！ 收到你的来信我感到非常高兴, 感谢你送给我邮票和照片。多漂亮的照片啊！ 你的微笑是那么的甜, 一看到它我就想起了你。 ∗∗∗∗∗ How time flies! More than half a year has passed! We once studied in the same class and lived in the same room. You taught me English songs and I told you how to make dumplings. We were like sisters. Now I'm busy getting ready for the exam. Well, I have to stop here. I miss you very much. Please write to me soon. 点评 文中短语be busy doing（忙于做……）, get ready for（为……做准备）用得很熟练, 很贴切。 译文 时间过得真快啊！ 大半年已过去了。我们曾经在同一个班里, 住在同一个宿舍里, 你教我唱英语歌, 我教你包水饺。我们像姐妹一样好。 现在我正忙着准备考试。喔, 就写到这儿了。我非常想念你, 请及时给我回信。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I have been here for a week. Everything here is new for me. Now I'm telling you something about me. I'm in Class 5, Grade 1.There are fifty students—thirty-five boys except me and fourteen girls in our class. English teacher is the head teacher of our class. She is very kind to us. We all like her very much. I'm old enough to take good care of myself. And I'll study harder for all subjects. Don't worry about me, please. 点评 这是一个在外求学的孩子写给父母的信, 语言朴实, 条理清楚。文中I have been here for a week正确地运用了现在完成时, 用old enough to take good care of等词汇和短语能把自己的近况悉数告知父母, 可见小作者功底不错。 译文 我来这里已经一个星期了, 这里的一切对我来说都是新的。现在我把我在这里的一些情况告诉你们。我分在一年级五班, 我们班上共有50人——除我之外有35个男生, 14个女生。英语老师是我们的班主任, 她对我们很和蔼, 我们都非常喜欢她。我已长大了, 能够好好照顾自己, 而且还会更加努力地学习各门功课。请不要为我担心。 ∗∗∗∗∗ This afternoon after class the Student Union will hold an English corner in the meeting room. A few English teachers and two foreigners will be invited to chat with us and help us. You can talk to anybody about anything you like, and you'll make good friends there. You are expected to be there. 点评 本段通知讲明了活动的时间、地点、目的及内容。结构紧凑, 语句连贯。 译文 今天下课后, 学生会将在会议室举办英语角, 一些英语老师和两位外国人被请过来同我们聊天并给予我们帮助, 你可以给任何人讲你喜欢的任何事情, 并且你在那里将会交到很多好朋友。欢迎你的光临！ ∗∗∗∗∗ Our class is going to have a farewell party on the morning of June 18.At 8:00, we'll talk about“What are you going to be when you grow up?”After that, we will discuss our plan for the summer holiday. From 9:00 to 10:00, we'll sing, dance, put on short plays and enjoy music. At 10:10, we are going to do some cleaning, repair the desks and chairs and give books to the pupils. At 11:00, we'll take photos, give each other telephone numbers and addresses, and give presents to the teachers. At 11:30, the party will be over. 点评 本段逐项介绍了会议内容, 叙述条理清楚, 词汇和短语多次运用and连接, 使语言连贯。 译文 我们班将于6月18日上午举行告别会, 在8点我们要讨论“长大后你们做什么？”之后我们要讨论我们的暑假计划。在9点到10点, 我们要唱歌、跳舞、表演短剧和听音乐。10点10分我们要打扫教室、修理桌椅、给小学生送书。11点, 我们要拍照、互留电话号码、地址并给老师送礼物。11点半, 告别会结束。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Tom broke his leg when he was playing football last week. He has been in bed in hospital for a few days. It is Saturday tomorrow. We are going to see him together. We'll meet at the school gate at 9:00 tomorrow morning and go to the hospital by bus. We'll get him some flowers and help him with his lessons. All of us hope that he'll get better soon. Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it. 点评 本段按照事件的起因（汤姆摔断腿）、发展（我们打算去看望他）以及结果（希望他病愈）来写, 条理清晰, 语言运用准确。文中有when引导的时间状语从句, that引导的宾语从句。文章句式有变化。 译文 汤姆上星期踢足球时摔断了腿, 他已经在医院的病床上躺了几天了。明天是星期六, 我们要一起到医院去看望他, 我们明天早上九点在校门口集合, 乘公共汽车去。我们要给他买些花, 帮他学习功课。我们都希望他能很快痊愈。欢迎广大同学踊跃参加。 ∗∗∗∗∗ We will go to the People's Hospital to have a physical examination on April 20th. The hospital is not far from our school. It's about 20 minutes'walk. Here are some points for attention: We'll meet at the school gate at 7:30.We'll go to the hospital by bus. You mustn't eat anything before the check. Keep quiet in the hospital and obey the doctors and nurses' arrangement. 点评 本段结构完整, 要点清晰, 格式正确。 译文 4月20号我们将去人民医院体检。医院离我们学校不远, 步行大约20分钟就到了。体检需要注意以下几点： 我们7点半在校门口集合, 然后乘公共汽车去。 体检前不要吃任何东西。 在医院里要保持安静, 听从医生、护士的安排。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Our class are going to West Lake for an outing tomorrow. We will meet at the school gate at 8:30 a. m. We'll go there by bus. We'll have a picnic lunch. After lunch, we'll hold a party and put on some performances. You'll be invited to sing us an English song. Get ready for it. I'm sure you'll enjoy the outing and have a good time. 点评 这是一张留言条。语言简练, 条理清楚。 译文 我们班明天将外出去西湖游玩。我们八点半在校门口集合。我们乘公共汽车去那里。中午我们将野餐。午饭后, 我们将聚会并表演节目。将邀请你为我们唱一首英文歌。好好准备一下。我确信你会喜欢这次出游并且玩得很高兴。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I'm sorry to tell you that I shall be unable to go to school, because my grandma has been ill and I have to take care of her. I beg to apply for two days' leave from Monday to Tuesday. 点评 本段运用了that引导的宾语从句, because引导的原因状语从句, 使全文语句通顺, 结构紧凑。 译文 我很遗憾地告诉您, 我不能去上学了, 因为我奶奶病了, 我得照顾她。我请星期一到星期二的两天假。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Today I received a letter. It was from an old classmate of mine. Her name is Lu Li. We had been desk mates for three years and got along quite well. She was an ordinary-looking girl, and didn't care for her clothes at all. She was very friendly and helpful. She worked hard at all the subjects and always got the first place in the exams. With her help, I made great progress in my studies. 点评 本段叙述了老同学的姓名、相貌、为人、学习等情况。文中“We had been desk mates for three years and got along quite well. ”一句运用了过去完成时态, ordinary-looking, got along quite well, made great progress这些短语运用得恰当, 显示出作者的语言运用能力很强。 译文 今天我收到一封信, 是来自一个老同学的, 她的名字叫路丽。我们曾同桌三年, 一直相处得很好。 她相貌普通, 不讲究穿着。但是她很友好和乐于助人。她每门功课都很用功, 总是在考试中拿第一。在她的帮助下, 我的学习也进步很大。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Today my teacher asked me to take the place of Su Kai as an honor guarder, I'm very excited. This afternoon we had a rehearsal for tomorrow's performance. I rehearsed painstakingly. When I got home in the evening, I had a slight fever. Mother tried to dissuade me from going to the performance tomorrow, but I insisted on going. Tomorrow, I must go to school, and perform very well to win honor for my class. 点评 作者描述了自己当上仪仗队队员的喜悦心情, 并且要带病参加, 这种精神的确难能可贵。honor guarder, rehearsal, painstakingly, dissuade这些词汇的运用显示出作者有丰富的词汇量。 译文 今天老师叫我代替苏凯做一名仪仗队队员。我兴奋极了。 今天下午, 我们为明天的演出进行了排练, 我演得很认真。晚上回到家, 我有点儿发烧。妈妈不允许我明天去演出, 但我坚持要去。 明天, 我一定要去学校, 而且我要好好地演出, 为我们班争得荣誉。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I lost my handbag on the way to work this afternoon. There is an ID Card and some money inside it. I'll be much thankful if the finder returns it to me, and I'll thank him. 点评 本启事书写符合寻物启事的格式要求, 语言简洁、明了。 译文 本人于下午去单位途中将手提包遗失, 内有一张身份证和一些现金。若有人拾到并归还本人, 本人将不胜感激。 ∗∗∗∗∗ A wallet with some Renminbi and Meal coupons has been found this morning. The loser is expected to come to the General Affairs Office to identify it. 点评 格式正确, 能正确运用被动语态。 译文 今天上午捡到钱包一个, 内有一些人民币和饭票, 请失主到总务处认领。 ∗∗∗∗∗ The English Summer Camp will be held in the school hall from July 29 to August 1.Many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in. During the camp, you can give a lecture and have a debate. Besides, the students who do well in English study will talk about their experiences. There is also an English party between teachers and students. In the end you'll have a chance to visit the City of Tianjin. Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it. Don't forget to tell what you think of the camp in your diary. 点评 本段按照通知的格式, 把夏令营的时间、地点、活动内容及活动要求都写出来了, 要点全面, 行文流畅。文中activity, debate, wait for you to join in等词汇和短语。“Besides, the students who do well in English study will talk about their experiences. ”句中有who引导的定语从句。这些都是文中的得分点。 译文 英语夏令营将于7月29日至8月1日在学校礼堂举办。很多有趣的活动等你们去参加。在夏令营期间, 将举办演讲和辩论活动。除此之外, 英语学得好的同学会谈他们的学习经验。还有师生英语晚会。最后, 你们还有机会参观天津市。欢迎广大同学踊跃参加, 不要忘记活动后写一篇日记谈谈你的感想。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I came here just to tell you that the outing to be held on June 20 has been put off till June 25, because the exam will take place that day. Please remember to bring your camera with you on June 25.I am sorry to hear that you have been ill. I hope you'll recover soon. 点评 便条运用了that引导的宾语从句和because引导的状语从句, 全文语言流畅, 语法正确。 译文 我来就是想告诉你, 出外游玩由原计划的6月20日推迟到6月25日, 因为我6月20日将进行考试。请记住在6月25日带上你的相机。听到你病了我很难过, 希望你尽快康复。 ∗∗∗∗∗ There will be an English lecture on the differences between American English and British English by Mr. Brown, an American professor from Tsinghua University. It will be given in the second reading-room on Saturday evening from 7:00－9:00, Feb. 25, 2014, those who are interested in it are warmly welcome. And you may also invite your friends and the students of other schools to attend it. Be sure not to be late. After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English. 点评 本段通知结构完整, 语句连贯。 译文 清华大学美籍教授布朗先生将举办一次英语讲座, 是关于英国英语与美国英语的差异, 2014年2月25日星期六晚上7：00－9：00在学校第二阅览室举行。欢迎对此感兴趣的同学前来参加, 可以邀请你的朋友或外校同学参加, 不要迟到。听完讲座后, 要求写一篇有关本次讲座的日记。 ∗∗∗∗∗ My name is Wang Lin, I am twenty-three years old. I am studying business management in Wuhan University. I will graduate this summer. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me do the office work very well. And I have learned English for ten years. In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department. My grades come out top in my department. What's more, I like office work very much and I also think that I can be competent for the job. If I could have the opportunity to get the job, I will be quite appreciative. 点评 本求职信介绍了自己的姓名、年龄、专业、特长、经验、经历等, 条理清晰、语词优美。运用的be competent for, opportunity, appreciative均为高级词汇。 译文 我叫王林, 23岁, 现在在武汉大学学习经济管理, 今年夏季即将毕业。我精通计算机操作及办公软件的使用, 这可以帮助我做好办公室工作。我学了10年英语。在过去的两年里我一直担任系英语报的编辑。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。另外, 我非常喜欢办公室工作并且我也认为我能胜任这个工作。 如果我能有机会得到这份工作, 我将非常感激。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student in Oxford University, I'd like to know if you have any special treatment for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch?Or do I need to bring my own food together? How long will the tour last?Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I'd like to know the return time. Besides, is there any time for shopping?I really want to have a look at the big stores in London. 点评 本段条理清晰, 运用了if引导的条件状语从句和since引导的原因状语从句。还有as for, besides对上下文起到了连接作用, 使文章浑然一体。有很强的知识性和趣味性, 值得仔细阅读。 译文 我写信是为了询问关于伦敦一日游的一些信息。 作为牛津大学的一名学生, 我想知道你们是否对学生有特价。另外你们的收费里面是否包含了已列出的旅游地点的门票费？ 午饭怎么样？ 包含在内吗？ 或者我需要自己带食物？ 这次旅游要多长时间？因为我需要准备第二天的课程, 所以想知道返回时间。是否有购物时间？ 我很想看看伦敦的大商场。 ∗∗∗∗∗ This special greeting is just for you, and this big wish it brings, too. Have a very happy birthday! 点评 这是一张儿子写给母亲的生日贺卡, 表达了对母亲的祝福。语言精练、准确。 译文 这张生日卡送给您, 让它把我无限的祝福带给您。 生日快乐！ ∗∗∗∗∗ A Christmas greeting and good wishes, too. To someone who's thought about all the year through. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! 点评 这是一张新年贺卡, 表达了对作者的思念和祝福。 译文 给终年思念的人捎上圣诞佳节最良好的祝福, 恭祝圣诞, 并贺新禧！ ∗∗∗∗∗ Our school started a programme when the New Year came. It is “Respecting Parents Programme”. Ten“Dos”have been worked out for the students to follow clearly and easily, including:remember your parents' birthdays and express your good wishes to them;say“hello”to your parents when they return home, tell your parents where you go when you leave home. Ever since the programme has been successful, we have won praises from parents and other sides of the society. People say this is what we should have done earlier! 点评 本段是一篇发表在报纸上的报道, 全面报道学校开展尊重父母这项活动的具体措施及活动的效果, 语言通顺流畅。 译文 在新的一年即将开始之际, 我们学校开展“敬重父母”的活动。活动提出明确易行的十项要求, 例如：要记住父母的生日, 并向父母表示祝愿；父母进门时要向父母打招呼；离家出门前要告知父母去向等。 自从这一活动成功开展以后, 获得了来自学生家长和社会各界的好评。人们说这项活动我们早就应该开展了。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $