2026年初中英语作文热点素材 part 18 旅游与交通 讲义

该初中英语讲义聚焦中考书面表达“旅游与交通”核心话题，覆盖词汇积累、句型运用、篇章结构三大考点，按“炫词-酷句-好句-好段”分层架构梳理知识，通过考点解读（如定语从句应用）、句式模板（开头/中间/结尾句）、范文点评（Travel Plans等真题示例）等环节，帮助学生系统突破写作难点。 亮点在于“情境化语言能力培养”和“逻辑思维构建”，如设计“酷句仿写”活动让学生用where定语从句描述旅游地点，通过好段中不同旅行方式的对比分析提升思维品质。配套“基础句型-篇章应用”阶梯训练，结合5分钟句式速练即时反馈，确保高效复习，助力学生提升写作表达准确性与逻辑性，教师可据此精准把控复习进度。

初中英语作文热点素材 part 18 旅游与交通 Travel Plans National Day is coming. The students in Yucai Middle School hope to relax themselves and now they are making travel plans. Half of the students choose to go to big cities where there are museums and places of interest. A quarter of them plan to visit small cities because they want to have delicious food. The rest of them will travel to the countryside to breathe fresh air and enjoy the beauty of nature. They all think travelling is a very good activity. 炫词 places of interest名胜 countryside乡村 half一半 quarter四分之一 rest其余的 酷句 Half of the students choose to go to big cities where there are museums and places of interest. 一半的学生选择去有博物馆和名胜的大城市。 （where there are museums and places of interest是定语从句, 修饰cities。） 译文 旅行计划 国庆节就要来了。育才中学的学生希望去放松他们自己, 现在他们正在做旅行计划。一半的学生选择去有博物馆和名胜的大城市。他们中的四分之一计划去参观小城市因为他们想吃美味的食物。其余的人会到乡下去旅行, 去呼吸新鲜的空气和享受大自然的美景。他们全都认为旅行是一个很好的活动。 The Way to My Home Next Saturday is my birthday. I'm going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 7:30. Would you like to come? I've also asked some other classmates of ours and some of my friends. I live at 70, Nanjing Road. You can take bus No. 1 or No.34, and get off at the stop of Renmin Road. My house is just on the other side of the road. It's a red house with a white door. You can't miss it. I do hope you will come. Yours, Li Hua 炫词 hold拿住, 保持 ask问, 邀请 get off下车 on the other side在对面 酷句 Next Saturday is my birthday. I'm going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. 下个星期六是我的生日。我晚上要在家里举办一个生日聚会。 （next Saturday is my birthday 介绍原因, at home介绍地点, in the evening介绍时间。语言简明扼要。） 译文 去我家的路 下个星期六是我的生日。我晚上要在家里举办一个生日聚会。7：30开始, 你愿意来吗？ 我也邀请我们其他的一些同学和我的朋友。 我住在南京路70号。你可乘1路公共汽车或34路公共汽车, 在人民路站下车。我的家就在马路的对面。它是一个红色的房子和白色的门。你不会找不到的。我真希望你来。 李华 Life can be likened to a journey with an unknown destination. 生命可以被比作一次不知目的地的旅行。 好句 ∗开头句∗ 1. Today my topic is travel. 我今天的话题是旅行。 2. Traveling is interesting and helpful. 旅行非常有趣而且有益。 ∗中间句∗ 1. When we are free or fed up with our work and study, we can go to a beautiful place to enjoy ourselves. 当我们有空闲时间或厌倦了工作和学习时, 我们可以去一个美丽的地方放松一下自己。 2. So, we'd better prepare for everything carefully while travelling. 因此, 我们最好在旅游时仔细准备好全部东西。 3. And sometimes the weather and the food there don't agree with us. If so, we often get ill or lose interest. 有时我们不适应当地的气候和食物。如果这样的话, 我们会生病或失去兴趣。 4. Here's how you can do the things easily. 教你怎样轻松地去做这些事情。 5. Then turn right and you'll see Park Street. 然后向右转, 你会看到公园路。 6. Walk along the street northward for a while, and you will get to the bank. 沿着那条街向北走一会儿, 你就会到达那个银行。 7. You can have lunch in a restaurant next to the zoo. 你可以在紧挨着那个动物园的一家饭店吃午饭。 8. Cross Bush Street and you can play tennis in a tennis club. 穿过布什街, 你可以在一家网球俱乐部打网球。 9. Then go southward along Great Street and you will find a teahouse and have some tea there. 然后沿着伟大街向南走, 你会看见一个茶馆, 在那里喝杯茶吧。 10. One day, I was going to travel by train. 一天, 我正要乘火车去旅行。 ∗结尾句∗ 1. How about finding a companion to be with us？So, we can help each other and be happy during the trip. 找一个旅伴和我们一起去如何？ 这样我们可以互相帮助并且可以有一个欢乐的旅途。 2. I'm sure you'll have no trouble doing things. 我确信你做这些事情不会有任何困难。 3. We can breathe fresh air there to relax ourselves and even make new friends. 我们可以在那里呼吸新鲜空气, 以放松自己, 甚至可以结交新朋友。 好段 Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people's daily lives and economic development. To solve the problem, some pieces of advice is put forward. 点评 本段写目前的交通状况, 结尾句有引起下文的作用, 使文章流畅连贯。 译文 现今, 许多大城市的人都在抱怨交通拥堵。它已经严重地影响了人们的日常生活和经济发展。为了解决这个问题, 人们提出了一些建议。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way, the traffic density can be reduced, hence speeding up the flow of buses and cars. But the new roads and streets will be filled with many cars and buses soon. Some people advise to limit the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand, this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded. In my opinion, the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time, buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles. Besides, underground train and city train should be developed quickly. 点评 本段介绍了两种解决方法, 最后写自己的看法。运用Some people suggest that. . . , Some people advise to. . . , In my opinion来分类介绍, 全文思路清晰, 层次分明。 译文 有人建议修建更多的道路。通过这种方法, 可以减小交通密度, 这样公共汽车与小汽车的速度就可以提上来。但是不久, 新道路又将被更多的公共汽车与小汽车塞满。 有人建议限制自行车和小轿车的数量, 这可以减少交通的流量。但是另一方面, 这就会影响消费并使公共汽车更加拥挤。 我认为, 应该控制私家车的数量。同时, 公共汽车应该有自己的线路, 这些线路不能被其他交通工具所占用。此外, 应快速发展地铁和城市铁路。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I decided to see a film this afternoon, so I took a bus to the cinema. While I was sitting in the bus, I saw an old lady getting on. I stood up at once and offered my seat to her. The old lady sat down happily and thanked me. When the bus stopped in front of the cinema, I got off and waved goodbye to her. 点评 本段记述了在公共汽车上让座的事情。文中运用了while, when引导的时间状语从句, I saw an old lady getting on. 运用了see sb. doing sth. 结构, 显示出作者的语言运用能力很强。 译文 今天下午我决定去看电影, 所以我坐公共汽车去电影院。我坐在车上时, 看见一位老太太走上车。我立刻站起来把座位让给她。老太太高兴地坐在座位上并感谢我。公共汽车在电影院前停下来, 我下车和老太太挥手告别。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Suddenly I saw a woman fall off her bike. The woman lay on the ground and couldn't get up. I ran up to her and tried to help her up. She sat up but still couldn't stand up, because her right leg was broken. At that moment, Dingdong's father, a policeman, came over. When he saw this, he called a taxi at once. The taxi driver sent the lady to the nearest hospital. I went with her to the hospital. There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there what had happened. The lady was well looked after, so I said goodbye to her. Before I left, the lady thanked me again and again. 点评 本段按照事情发生的先后顺序写了自己做好事的过程。文中“There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there what had happened. ”一句运用了倒装结构和what引导的宾语从句, 是精彩句。 译文 突然我看见一个妇女从自行车上摔倒在地。她倒在地上站不起来了。我跑过去试着帮她站起来。她坐起来但仍不能站立, 因为她的右腿摔伤了。这时东东的爸爸走过来, 他是一名警察。他一看这情况马上叫了辆出租车。出租车司机把那位女士送到了最近的医院。我也跟去了。在医院我给那位女士单位打了电话并告诉那里的一人发生了什么事。 那位女士被细心地照看着, 于是我向她告别。临走时她再三对我表示感谢。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Last Saturday I went shopping with my mother. We wanted to come back home by bus. At a bus stop there were many people and they were waiting for bus. A few minutes later a bus came but it was full of people. It was difficult for us to get on because my mother had a big bag of things in her hand. The assistant found her and asked me, “Carry the bag for your sister, young man. ” I wanted to correct him, but my mother stopped me. She thanked him happily and said to me, “Do as the assistant said, brother. ” 点评 本段记述了发生在母亲身上的一件趣事, 使我们看到了母亲性格中可爱的一面。 译文 一个星期六, 我跟妈妈去买东西, 我们想坐公交车回家。车站上已经等了许多人。一会儿, 来了一辆车, 上面挤满了人。我妈妈手里拿着大包, 上不去, 售票员看见后对我说：“年轻人, 快帮你姐姐提上包！”我想纠正他, 但我妈妈不让。她高兴地谢了那个人, 然后把包递给我说：“弟弟, 照他说的做。” ∗∗∗∗∗ To my mind, travelling by train is safer than any other way of travelling. Railway stations are usually in the center of cities. We can open the windows and enjoy many interesting and beautiful things on the way. We can also walk around and talk to other people, but it may take much more time. Travelling by plane is also popular now, but it can not be as free as travelling by train. And the airports are usually too far away from the cities. Travelling by car should be as free as travelling by train but it is not so safe on the roads. 点评 本段运用了To my mind先提出自己的观点；接着写与其他旅行方式相比乘火车旅行的优点和缺点。Travelling by train is safer than any other way of travelling. It can not be as free as travelling by train. Travelling by car should be as free as travelling by train but it is not so safe on the roads. 这些比较句型的运用, 使文章论证有力、表达流畅、主题突出。 译文 依我之见, 乘火车旅行比其他任何旅行方式都更安全。火车站通常就设在城市中心。我们可以打开窗户欣赏沿途有趣的事情和美丽的风景。我们也可以四处走动, 还可以和别人谈话。但是, 有可能花的时间更多一些。乘飞机旅行现在很流行, 但是它不如乘火车旅行自由。而且机场通常离城市太远。乘小汽车旅行和乘火车一样自由, 但在公路上不是那么安全。 ∗∗∗∗∗ When you get out of your house, walk across the road and take the No. 3 Bus, Please get off at Baishiqiao station. Then you should walk along the Shengli Road until you come to the second crossing. Turn right to the Guangming Street. Walk about 500 meters and you will see an overhead walkway. Now you must go across it to the other side of the street. When you walk down the overhead walkway, you will see a sign on the roadside, which says, “Xing Long Garden, 50 meters ahead”. I live in Room 1202, Building 5. I'm sure you can find my home easily. 点评 本段使用了状语从句和一些并列连词如now, and 等, 使文章衔接自然。 译文 从你家出来后, 过马路坐3路公共汽车, 请在白石桥站下车。然后你就沿着胜利路走到第二个路口, 向右转到光明大街上。大约走500米, 你就能看见一座天桥, 过天桥到马路对面。当你从天桥上走下来的时候, 你会看见马路边的一个标志, 上面写着：“兴隆花园, 向前走50米。”我住在5号楼, 1202房间。我相信你很容易就能找到我家。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Some are well dressed and some are not, some have many bags and some carry only one. Always you see many children of all ages, they also like to look at everyone and everything around them. Sometimes there are long lines of people at the ticket windows and at the entrance gates. It is interesting to watch the people stand quietly in line, and yet when the gates open they rush forward and squeeze themselves through the small gate in one big human wave. So many people are in a hurry to get through the gate and then stand in line again at the platform to board the train. When the train arrives, the people rush forward again in large groups into the small doors of the train. 点评 本段具体描写人们排队的场面。能抓住火车站最富特点的场面进行描写, 语言流畅, 描述生动形象, 尤其是运用了比喻等修辞手法, 使文章更加生动。 译文 有些人穿的好, 有些人穿的不好；有些人有许多包, 有些人只有一个包。你总能看见许多不同年龄的孩子, 他们也喜欢看周围的每一个人和每一样东西, 有时候在售票口和进站口会排很多长队。看着人们静静地站在队里, 但当门打开的时候, 他们就如潮水似地冲入小门, 这是一件很有趣的事情, 如许多人急急忙忙穿过那扇门然后又在站台上站成队等着上车, 当火车到达的时候, 那些人们又挤成一团冲入火车的小门。 ∗∗∗∗∗ We first went to Beihai Park. We were all struck by its beautiful flowers on show. Then, we visited the Science Museum. We saw plenty of valuable things, from which we learnt more about the science. After that we drove to the Summer Palace. It is a beautiful place of interest in our city, and from there we enjoyed the wonderful scenery of the Kunming Lake. We had a delicious lunch at the Seafood Restaurant and came back at 1:20 p. m. 点评 文中用了first, then, after that等连接词, 把游览的时间顺序交代得很清楚。结尾表达感受, 是这种记事类日记常用的套路。除文中用到的句子外, We had a wonderful time today. 或We felt very happy today. 也很常见。 译文 我们先去了北海公园, 在那里, 花会上美丽的鲜花深深地吸引着我们。接着, 我们参观了科技馆。我们看到了许多有价值的东西, 在那里我们对科技有了更多的了解。之后, 我们驱车去了颐和园。那是我们这个城市的名胜古迹。在那里我们欣赏到了昆明湖的美景。我们在海鲜酒家吃了一顿丰盛的午餐。下午1点20分, 我们返程了。 ∗∗∗∗∗ How wonderful the sight was! We felt we had been in another new world. It was full of beauty and loveliness. There're hundreds of mountains, one after another. There're great cliffs, one above another. We climbed up and breathed the fresh air there. 点评 本段勾勒了大山的壮观景象。如：There're hundreds of mountains, one after another. There're great cliffs, one above another. 气势磅礴, 引人向往。 译文 那儿的景色真美啊！ 我们感觉自己到仿佛置身于另外一个全新的世界, 一个充满美丽和可爱的世界。那儿有数百座连绵不断的山峰, 有层出不穷的壮观的悬崖。我们一边登山, 一边呼吸着山间清新的空气。 ∗∗∗∗∗ It is a beautiful hill with green trees, limpid water and many kinds of birds. We sat in low Mongolian tent, drinking a cup of tea with milk, eating delicious barbecue, and felt very happy. After meal, we got to the green hill. With a little fear and much curiosity, I rode on a very strong horse and felt life on the horseback was really wonderful. As we returned to the tent, mutton soup was ready. Drinking a bowl of it, we felt energetic again. I like living on the green hills surrounded by strong horses, clear sky, fresh air and kind villagers. 点评 作者以细腻的笔触记述了在风景如画的少数民族地区的所见所闻。We sat in low Mongolian tent, drinking a cup of tea with milk, eating delicious barbecue, and felt very happy. 一句中drinking 和eating是现在分词短语作状语, 伴随动作。 译文 这是一座美丽的山, 山上有绿树、清澈的水和许多种类的鸟。我们在低矮的蒙古包里喝着奶茶, 吃着美味的烤肉, 感到十分高兴。饭后, 我们来到翠绿的山坡, 我怀着既害怕又好奇的心情骑上一匹高头大马, 体验了马背上的奇妙生活感觉棒极了。当我们回到蒙古包时, 羊肉汤已经准备好了, 喝了一碗, 立刻精神百倍。 我喜欢生活在这些绿山中间。那里有强壮的马群、洁净的天空、新鲜的空气和友善的村民。 ∗∗∗∗∗ My hometown is an unknown small village. It lies at the foot of Hua Mountain. There is a clear and long river and many natural parks in my hometown. There are lots of fishes and all kinds of stones in river. Flowers and grass grow on both banks of it. They are red, yellow, green, blue and white. In these natural parks, there are big and tall trees, some trunks of which have holes. Little animals live in some of the holes. There are strange stones, wild flowers in the parks. All these form a beautiful picture of nature. 点评 本段运用了clear and long river, fishes and all kinds of stones in river, flowers and grass, big and tall trees, little animals, strange stones, wild flowers等一系列优美的词汇, 为我们描绘了一幅美丽的山村自然景观图。全文处处体现出作者对家乡的深深感情。 译文 我的家乡是一个不为人知的小村庄, 位于华山脚下。我的家乡有一条清澈见底的长河和许多天然的公园。河里有不同种类的鱼和各种各样的石头。沿河两岸长满了花草, 其颜色有红、黄、绿、蓝和白等。在这些公园里, 有一些高大的树木。有些树干上有些洞穴, 有一些小动物住在里面。公园里还有各种怪石野花。这一切构成一幅美丽的自然景观图。 ∗∗∗∗∗ On our way to the Great Wall, we saw many tall buildings on both sides of the road. About two hours later, we arrived at the Great Wall. When the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldn't help crying, “What a wonderful sight it is!How great it is!”When we walked on the Great Wall, we felt very proud because it's the longest wall in the world. Today it has become a place of interest to the people all over the world. When we reached the top, we felt very proud. 点评 本段按照时间顺序记述了游长城的过程。叙述清楚, 文中有On our way to the Great Wall状语前置、because引导的原因状语从句、when引导的时间状语从句等句式, 富于变化, 词汇丰富。 译文 在去长城的路上, 我们看见沿途有许多高大建筑。大约两小时后, 我们到达长城。当长城一出现在我们的视野时, 我们就情不自禁地大喊起来：“多壮观的景色呀！ 长城好伟大！”我们沿着长城走着, 心里觉得特别骄傲, 因为它是世界上最长的墙。今天, 对于世界人民来说它已经成为一个旅游胜地。当我们到达最高处时, 我们感到非常自豪。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August. You've made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors'imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2, 000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I'm sure you'll have a good time. 点评 作者把对家乡四川的一片热爱之情融入字里行间, 运用了be well known for, excite visitors' imagination, enjoyable 等词汇以及of which引导的非限制性定语从句。使文章词汇丰富, 语言流畅。 译文 听说你8月份要来四川, 我很高兴。来四川旅游是一个明智的选择, 四川有丰富的旅游资源和许多名胜古迹, 如九寨沟和都江堰水利工程。 九寨沟因其湖水清澈见底, 色彩斑谰而著名, 它能激发旅游者的想象。另一处景点是都江堰水利工程, 它建于2000多年前, 至今在灌溉方面仍发挥着重要作用。除此之外, 宜人的气候, 便捷的交通会使你更加享受你的旅途。我确信你的旅途会很愉快。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $