2026年中考英语作文热点素 part 17 计划与愿望

该初中英语中考复习知识清单聚焦“计划与愿望”主题作文，系统涵盖范文示例、核心词汇、实用句式及段落结构指导，为学生搭建从基础表达积累到篇章写作的完整复习框架。 清单通过“炫词酷句分类”“好句分模块（开头/中间/结尾）”及“好段点评含句式分析”构建知识体系，如将“理想职业”范文中的调查类开头句标注为高频模板，“暑假计划”中的衔接词（Besides/What's more）设为应用提示，培养学生的语言能力和思维品质。特别设计“译文对照”和“句式功能解析”，助力学生自主梳理写作逻辑，为教师提供针对性教学素材，提升复习效率。

初中英语作文热点素材 part 17 计划与愿望 Ideal Jobs Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' ideal jobs. Here's a report about my group members' ideas. Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener, she likes plants, and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He'd like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He'd like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people. Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future. 炫词 survey调查 ideal理想的 fashion designer时装设计师 protect保护 realize实现 hopefully有希望地 酷句 Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' ideal jobs. 最近, 为了了解学生们的理想职业, 我们在我们班里做了一次调查。 （in order to learn about students' ideal jobs是目的状语。） 译文 理想职业 最近, 为了了解学生们的理想职业, 我们在我们班里做了一次调查。下面是关于我们组成员的观点的报告。 玛丽想成为一名时装设计师, 因为她喜欢漂亮的衣服, 而且擅长画画。凯特想当一名园丁, 她喜欢植物, 她想使这个城市更好。迈克想当一名作家, 他想要和其他人分享他的趣事。汤姆想当厨师, 他想为其他人做可口的饭菜。我想当一名警察, 我想保护人民。 希望每个人将来都能实现自己的梦想。 The Plan about The Summer Vacation Hi, Bob. The summer vacation is coming soon. After a tiring school year, I'm going to relax myself. I will spend my vacation with my grandparents. I will stay with them for about three weeks. Of course, I am going to help them do some housework. Perhaps we will take some short trips. Besides, I am going to visit some of my friends and relatives. I think we will have a happy time together. What's more, I will be a senior student in a new term, so I am going to make some preparations. How will you spend your holiday? Best wishes. Yours, Zhang Lin 炫词 tiring令人疲倦的 relax使……放松 of course当然 perhaps也许 besides此外 relative亲戚；相关的 have a happy time过得愉快 what's more而且 senior较高的 preparation 准备 酷句 What's more, I will be a senior student in a new term, so I am going to make some preparations. 而且, 我要在新学期成为一名高中生。所以我要做一些准备。 （What's more是插入语。连词so表示前后句是因果关系。使前后句连贯。） 译文 暑假计划 你好, 鲍勃。暑假很快就要来了。在辛苦的一学年后, 我要去放松一下自己。我要和我的爷爷奶奶度过我的假期。我会和他们一起待大约三个星期。当然, 我也会帮他们做家务, 可能我们会有一些短期旅行。另外, 我要拜访我的朋友们和亲戚们。我想我们会过得很愉快。而且, 我要在新学期成为一名高中生。所以我要做一些准备。你怎么度过你的假期呢？ 最好的祝愿！ 张林 Great hopes make great men. 伟大的理想造就伟大的人物。 好句 ∗开头句∗ 1.I am a student of an international school. Recently I made a survey among 100 boys and 100 girls. 我是一所国际学校的学生, 最近我对100名男生和100名女生作了调查。 2.I'm a student, I know I'm the hope star of my family, my friends even my homeland—China. 我是一名学生, 我知道我不仅是我的家庭和朋友, 甚至是我的祖国——中国的希望之星。 3.Everybody has a dream. 每个人都有一个梦想。 4.One day, some of my classmates were talking about what we would like to be in the future. 一天, 班上的几位同学在谈论将来干什么的话题。 5.When I was still a little boy, I cherished many fancy dreams about my future. 当我还是一个小男孩的时候, 我就对未来充满了幻想。 ∗中间句∗ 1.When I was a child, my parents used to tell me that I was their hope. And I have to study hard so that my future would be bright. 在我很小的时候, 我的父母就向我灌输我是他们的希望这种思想。就这样, 为了光明的前途, 我必须刻苦学习。 2.Because I feel myself strong and powerful, my will is spurred up irresistibly. 因为我觉得自己强而有力我才可以斗志昂扬。 3.Today I also have a dream—to make our country stronger and more prosperous. 今天我也有一个理想——让我们的国家变得更加强大, 更加繁荣。 4.The true value of life is not in what we get but in what we give. 人生的价值不在于索取, 而在于奉献。 5.If you don't stand for something, what do you win？ 倘若你没有信念, 那么胜利又有什么意义呢？ 6.If we want light, we must conquer darkness. 如果我们想要光明, 就得战胜黑暗。 ∗结尾句∗ 1.There is only one success to be able to spend your life in your own way. 只有一种成功, 那就是能够用自己的方式度过自己的一生。 2.As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible. 只要我们一起努力, 我们就能把不可能变为可能。 3.Many of us dream of becoming successful people, but no matter what you want to be, start rom being an ordinary person, be responsible and struggle hard for what you want. 我们中大多数人都梦想成为成功的人。但是无论你想成为什么样的人, 都要从一个普通人做起, 为你的理想负责并努力奋斗。 好段 The result of the survey is as follows:what boys like to do most is to become scientists. While the girls' favorite work is to be teachers, only a few boys want to do this job. It is interesting that the numbers of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyers, more boys wish to have this job. What's more, there are still students who are not clear about their future. 点评 本段按照男孩最喜欢的职业和女孩最喜欢的职业以及男孩和女孩都喜欢的职业的顺序, 简明扼要地写出了所有的要点, 层次清晰。文中有what引导的主语从句, while在这里是并列连词, “It is interesting that the numbers of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. ”一句中it是形式主语, that引导主语从句, who引导的是定语从句。这些句式的运用, 使文章表达形式丰富, 语言流畅。 译文 调查结果如下：男生最喜欢的职业是科学家, 女生最喜欢的工作是老师, 只有几个男生想当老师。有趣的是喜欢做医生的男生数与女生数相同, 至于律师, 男生比女生多一些, 另外还有一些学生对自己未来的职业还没有明确的目标。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I would dream of becoming an actor when I was watching a film on TV. I wanted to be a doctor when I was ill in bed. Yet when I first came to school, my teachers who taught me to read and write. With the teachers' help, I came to know many things and now I have grown into a fine student. In my mind, teaching is the greatest job in the world. Now if you ask me what I want to be when I grow up, I will say that I want to be a teacher, particularly an English teacher! 点评 作者孩提时代“想入非非”, 上了学之后, 渐渐对事物有了认识, 确立了自己的志向。文章中有用的句型和词语如dream of, 含when的从句和if从句的复合句的使用更有锦上添花之效。 译文 在电视上看影片时, 我梦想成为演员。我生病卧床时, 想当个医生。然而, 当来上学时, 老师教我读书写字。在老师们的帮助下, 我逐渐明白了许多事情, 现在我已成为一名优秀的学生。在我的心目中, 教学是世界上最伟大的工作。如今你若问我长大想干什么, 我会回答：我想当一个老师, 尤其是当一个英语老师！ ∗∗∗∗∗ Almost every student has a great number of colorful dreams. They all think the university is a wonderful place which helps them realize their good dreams. Some students want to enter the university in order to get good jobs and high pay after they graduate from universities. 点评 本段叙述详尽, 语言使用灵活, 层次清楚。which helps them realize their good dreams定语从句及in order to. . . 短语的使用, 为文章添色不少。 译文 几乎每一个学生都有很多多彩的梦想。他们都认为大学是帮助他们实现梦想的理想场所。一些学生想去读大学是为大学毕业后获得更好的工作, 得到更高的薪金。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Now I want to be a filmmaker. That is because a great filmmaker can make wonderful films, and then that may make him become more and more popular in the world and everyone may admire him very much. I'll try my best to be an ideal filmmaker. I believe I'm able to make the most wonderful film in the future. So I must study hard at my lessons in order to enrich my knowledge. 点评 作者的梦想是当一名电影制片人。文章说明了想当电影制片人的原因, 并表明自己决心怎样去实现心中的梦想。全文涉及过去、现在和将来, 时态运用灵活, 行文条理清楚。 译文 现在我想成为一名电影制片人, 因为一个伟大的电影制片人能制作出精彩的电影, 并且会因此在世界各地越来越受到人们的欢迎和尊敬。 我将尽我最大的努力成为一名理想的电影制片人, 我相信我将来能够制作出最优秀的电影。因此我必须努力学好我的课程使我的知识越来越丰富。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I like reading books, newspapers and magazines. I also like watching TV very much. From those I can get much information. I know about the population and resource problem. And I pay much attention to the special illness in world, such as AIDS, cancer and near-sight and so on. Because I was interested in biology and chemistry when I touched them for the first time, so I want to be a doctor to research the medicine after growing up. The way has been chosen by me so I must work hard. I believe my dream will come true one day because“Where there is a will, there is a way. ” 点评 作者回想自己的成长历程, 结尾写自己的目标。文中出现了时间状语从句、宾语从句、原因状语从句等多种复合句, 使文章表达灵活, 引用名言结尾很有气势。 译文 我喜欢读书、看报、看杂志, 当然我也喜欢看电视, 我可以从中获得丰富的信息。我了解到人口与资源问题, 并且我的目光更多地集中在世界性疾病上, 如艾滋病、癌症和近视等。因为当我第一次触及生物和化学学科时, 我就被它们深深吸引了。因此, 我想在我长大以后做一名致力于药物研究的医生。 这条路是我自己选择的, 因此我必须努力实现自己的目标。我坚信我的梦想总有一天会成为现实。正所谓：“有志者, 事竟成！” 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $