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【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
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【C版高级词句】描写某个运动时刻
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范文一高级词句
一、高级词汇
participate
pa:tisipeit/
含义:参加:参与
搭配:participate in a race参加比赛;participate in an activity参与一项活动
challenge /'ifcelmd3/
含义:挑战
搭配:a real challenge一个真正的挑战:face a challenge面对挑战
rhythmically /'nomkli/
含义:有节奏地
搭配:hit the track rhythmically有节奏地踏在跑道上;breathe rhythmically有节奏地呼吸
pound
paund/
含义:(心脏)狂跳:重击
搭配:heart was pounding like a drum心跳得像鼓一样:pound on the door猛敲门
perseverance
ps:sa vIarans/
含义:毅力:坚持不懈
搭配:teach sb.perseverance教会某人毅力:show perseverance表现出坚持不懈
determination /d,ts:m nerfn/
含义:决心:果断
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搭配:powerful determination强大的决心:with determination带着决心
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
Last autumn sports meeting,I participated in the 800-meter race which was areal challenge for me
中文意思:去年秋季运动会,我参加了800米赛跑,对我来说这真是一项挑战。
模板亮点:whch引导的定语从句,用于补充说明先行词的特征,丰富句子层次
英文:When the starting gun fired,all runners rushed forward like arrows.
中文意思:发令枪响时,所有的运动员都像箭一样冲了出去。
模板亮点:when引导的时间状语从句+比喻修辞(like arrows),生动描绘场景
Although I didn't win the first prize,the moment I finished the race felt incredibly rewarding
中文意思:虽然我没有获得一等奖,但冲过终点线的那一刻感觉非常有意义。
模板亮点:lthough引导的让步状语从句,表转折关系,突出核心感受
That experience taught me that perseverance is more important than victory itself.
中文意思:那次经历教会我,毅力比胜利本身更重要。
模板亮点:teach sb.hat..结构,用于表达从经历中获得的感悟,适用于结尾总结教训或哲理
Last autumn sports meeting,I participated in the 800-meter race which was areal challenge for me.When
the starting gun fired,all runners rushed forward like arrows.I tried to keep up with the leading group,
but after 400 meters,my legs began to feel heavy and my breath became short.
"Keep going!You can make it!"I heard my classmates cheering loudly from the stands.Their encour-
agement gave me strength.I bit my lip and quickened my pace.When I saw the finish line ahead,
I summoned all my energy for the final sprint.My feet hit the track rhythmically,and my heart was
pounding like a drum.
Finally,I crossed the line with a time of 2 minutes and 58 seconds.Although I didn't win the first prize,
the moment I finished the race felt incredibly rewarding.That experience taught me that perseverance is
more important than victory itself.Every time I recall the cheering voices and the burning feeling in my
lungs,I remember how powerful determination can be.
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选择性必修1外研版
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范文二高级词句
一、高级词汇
tied /tard/
含义:平局的:得分相等的
搭配:the score was tied比分持平:tied game平局比赛
intercepted /mta 'septrd/
含义:拦截:截断
搭配:intercept the ball拦截球;intercept a pass截断传球
sprinted
/spritId/
含义:冲刺:快速奔跑
搭配:sprint after sb.追赶某人;sprint to the finish冲向终点
persistence pa'srstans/
含义:坚持:毅力
搭配:with persistence凭借毅力;the persistence of effort不懈的努力
thrilling /'0rzlmy/
含义:令人兴奋的:激动人心的
搭配:a thrilling moment激动人心的时刻;thrilling experience刺激的经历
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
英文:The score was tied48-48 with only30 seconds left.
中文意思:比分48平,只剩下30秒。
模板亮点:描述比赛紧张局势,wth+时间短语表伴随,适用于记叙文场景描写
英文:Time seemed to slow down as Peter jumped and shot the ball.
中文意思:当彼得起跳投篮时,时间仿佛放慢了脚步。
模板亮点:seem to do sth.表主观感受,as引导时间状语从句,增强画面感
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英文:That moment of teamwork and victory will always stay in my memory.
中文意思:那个团队合作与胜利的时刻将永远留在我的记忆中。
模板亮点:That moment of..will always stay in my memory'表达深刻记忆,适用于总结难忘经历
It taught me that with trust and persistence,anything is possible on the basketball court.
中文意思:它教会我,只要有信任和毅力,在篮球场上一切皆有可能。
模板亮点:”It taught me that.”总结经验教训,with+抽象名词表条件,用于文章结尾升华主题
Last Saturday afternoon,our class played against Class 3 in the school basketball final.The score was
tied 48-48 with only 30 seconds left.I was dribbling the ball near the center line when I noticed Tom,
our tallest player,open under the basket.I quickly passed him the ball,but a defender intercepted it.My
heart sank,but I didn't give up.I sprinted after the defender,jumped up,and managed to tap the ball
away.It flew straight to Peter,who was standing at the three-point line.
Time seemed to slow down as Peter jumped and shot the ball.The crowd held their breath.Swish!The
ball went through the hoop just as the final buzzer sounded.We won!Everyone rushed onto the court,
hugging and cheering.My teammates lifted me up on their shoulders,and I could feel the sweat dripping
down my face,but I didn't care.That moment of teamwork and victory will always stay in my memory.
It taught me that with trust and persistence,anything is possible on the basketball court.
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