Unit 6 Home Sweet Home 作文学案 2025-2026学年鲁教版五四制七年级英语上册

Unit 6 Home Sweet Home 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Home Sweet Home”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“家庭责任与情感归属”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语谈论家务劳动、礼貌提出请求与获得许可，运用Can/Could表礼貌请求和许可，理解家庭的意义，提升家庭责任感”，常见写作角度包括：① 描述自己能做的家务及家庭分工；② 写邮件请求朋友帮忙（如装饰房间）；③ 分享让家更温暖的方法；④ 阐述对“家”的理解。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型，突出“实用性”和“情感性”，可直接用于课堂写作教学与练习。 【单元话题】 “我为家庭做的事”。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍你常做的家务、如何礼貌请求家人帮忙，以及你对家的理解，词数60-80左右，题目为“What I Do for My Home”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 What I Do for My Home Home is a warm harbor, and I love doing my part to make it better. Every weekend, I help with housework. I usually sweep the floor and water the plants. When I need help packing up my books, I politely ask my mom, “Could you please help me sort the books?” She always agrees happily. Sometimes, I hang up family photos on the wall to make our home cozier. My parents often say I’m a helpful member of the family. For me, home is not just a house—it’s where we care for each other. I’ll keep doing my best for it! 【译文】 我为家庭做的事 家是温暖的港湾，我愿意尽自己的一份力让它更美好。 每个周末，我都会帮忙做家务。我通常扫地、浇花。当我需要帮忙整理书籍时，会礼貌地问妈妈：“你能帮我把书分类吗？”她总是欣然同意。有时候，我会把家庭照片挂在墙上，让家更温馨。父母常说我是家里有用的一员。 对我来说，家不只是一栋房子——它是我们互相照顾的地方。我会一直为它全力以赴！ 亮点词块 1.warm harbor 温暖的港湾 2.do one’s part 尽自己的一份力 3.help with housework 帮忙做家务 4.sweep the floor 扫地 5.water the plants 浇花 6.pack up books 整理书籍 7.sort the books 把书分类 8.hang up photos 挂照片 9.cozy home 温馨的家 10.care for each other 互相照顾 高分句子 1.When I need help packing up my books, I politely ask my mom, “Could you please help me sort the books?”（运用Could表礼貌请求，贴合单元核心语法） 2.Sometimes, I hang up family photos on the wall to make our home cozier.（描述让家更温暖的行动，符合单元主题） 3.For me, home is not just a house—it’s where we care for each other.（升华主题，阐述家的意义，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你想邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间，准备迎接春节，请写一封邮件请求他的帮助，词数不少于50。 Dear John, Hi! With the Spring Festival coming, I want to decorate my room to make it warmer. Could you help me? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear John, Hi! With the Spring Festival coming, I want to decorate my room to make it warmer. Could you help me? Right now, my walls are plain white. I plan to put up some paper-cuts and hang photos of my family. Could you bring your scissors and glue? We can make a festive poster together too. Also, could you help me move a chair to the window? I want to place a pot of flowers there. It will be fun to decorate the room with you. Let’s meet at my home this Sunday morning. Thanks a lot! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的约翰： 嗨！春节快到了，我想装饰我的房间，让它更温馨。你能帮我吗？ 现在我的墙是纯白色的，我打算贴一些剪纸，挂上家庭照片。你能带上你的剪刀和胶水吗？我们还可以一起做一张节日海报。另外，你能帮我把一把椅子搬到窗边吗？我想在那里放一盆花。 和你一起装饰房间会很有趣，我们这周日早上在我家碰面吧。非常感谢！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，描述你家的家务分工，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 家务分工 爸爸：倒垃圾、修理东西；妈妈：做饭、打扫浴室；我：洗碗、整理自己的房间；妹妹：喂鱼、浇花 共同习惯 周末一起大扫除，礼貌请求帮忙 My family has a clear chore plan, and everyone does their part to keep our home tidy. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 My family has a clear chore plan, and everyone does their part to keep our home tidy. Dad takes out the rubbish and fixes things when they break. Mum cooks delicious meals and cleans the bathroom. I do the dishes after dinner and tidy my bedroom every day. My little sister feeds the fish and waters the plants. On weekends, we clean up together. When we need help, we always ask politely, “Could you please give me a hand?” Our home is warm because of our joint efforts. 【拓展2译文】 我家有明确的家务分工，每个人都尽自己的一份力保持家里整洁。 爸爸负责倒垃圾，东西坏了的时候修理。妈妈做美味的饭菜，打扫浴室。我晚饭后洗碗，每天整理自己的卧室。妹妹喂鱼、浇花。周末我们一起大扫除。当需要帮忙时，我们总会礼貌地问：“你能帮我一下吗？”我们的家因为共同的努力而温暖。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.家务相关（单元重点） · 家务劳动：do chores 做家务；sweep the floor 扫地；do the dishes 洗碗；clean the bathroom 打扫浴室；take out the rubbish 倒垃圾；pack up things 打包东西；hang up photos 挂照片；water the plants 浇花；feed the fish 喂鱼；tidy the room 整理房间；fix things 修理东西 · 家庭装饰：decorate the room 装饰房间；put up paper-cuts 贴剪纸；make a poster 做海报；place flowers 摆花；sort books 分类书籍 1. 礼貌请求与许可（单元重点） · 请求句型：Could you please...? 你能……吗？；Can I...? 我能……吗？；Could you help me...? 你能帮我……吗？；Would you like to...? 你愿意……吗？ · 回应句型：Sure. / No problem. 当然可以；I’d love to, but I... 我很愿意，但我……；Yes, you can. 是的，你可以；Sorry, I can’t. 抱歉，我不能。 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · Can/Could用法： · 表请求（Could更礼貌）：Could you please sweep the floor? · 表许可：Can I invite friends to our home? → Yes, you can. · 常用动词：help with 帮忙；ask for 请求；agree 同意；refuse 拒绝；offer 主动提供 1. 家庭情感（单元重点） · 短语：warm home 温暖的家；cozy room 温馨的房间；care for each other 互相照顾；joint efforts 共同努力；family responsibility 家庭责任；feel at home 感觉自在 二、实用句型积累 1.描述家务与分工（贴合单元核心） · I usually + 家务动词短语 + on weekends. 我通常周末…… · My dad/mum often + 家务动词短语 + because... 我爸爸/妈妈经常……因为…… · We divide the chores so that our home is always tidy. 我们分工做家务，这样家里总是很整洁。 · Everyone in my family does their part to make home better. 家里每个人都尽己所能让家更美好。 1. 礼貌请求与回应（贴合单元主题） · Could you please + 动词原形 + ...? I need your help. 你能……吗？我需要你的帮助。 · Can I + 动词原形 + ...? I want to make our home cozier. 我能……吗？我想让家更温馨。 · Sure, I’d love to. When shall we start? 当然，我很愿意。我们什么时候开始？ · Sorry, I can’t help you today, but I can do it tomorrow. 抱歉，我今天帮不了你，但我明天可以。 1. 表达家的意义（贴合单元内涵） · For me, home is not just a house—it’s where family members care for each other. 对我来说，家不只是一栋房子——它是家人互相照顾的地方。 · A warm home needs everyone’s effort. 温暖的家需要每个人的努力。 · Doing chores together makes our family closer. 一起做家务让我们家人更亲密。 · Home is the place where I always feel safe and loved. 家是我永远感到安全和被爱的地方。 三、课堂实用句型（教学专用） · 提问句型：What chores do you usually do at home?；Could you please help me clean the room?；Can I hang up photos here?；What does your family do to make home warm? · 回答句型：I often sweep the floor and water the plants.；Sure, no problem.；Yes, you can. It will look nice.；We cook meals together and talk about our days. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $