内容正文:
专题10 写作指导(看图/情景类)
目 录
01·考情剖析·命题前瞻 2
02·时空导航·网络构建 3
03·题型通关·靶向突破 3
考点一 题型破解 3
(一)考查地位 3
(二)题材分布 4
考点二 解题要点 4
一、精选典型试题 4
二、分维度深度精讲 5
三、精讲总结 7
考点三 “看图/情景类” 高频短语及句型清单 8
一、图片描述类 8
二、危险/行为描述类 8
三、安全/规则建议类 9
四、活动描述类 10
五、感受/总结类 11
六、通用衔接类 11
04·优题精选·练能提分 12
Passage 01(题材:生活技能・体裁:短文) 12
Passage 02(题材:中华文化・体裁:电子邮件) 13
Passage 03(题材:健康生活・体裁:演讲稿) 14
Passage 04(题材:生活技能・体裁:记叙类短文) 15
Passage 05(题材:自我提升・体裁:征文) 16
考情分析
材料形式:均为 “图片+文字提示”,图片提供场景背景(如骑行的男孩、课堂场景),文字提示明确核心任务(如 “提安全建议”“介绍规则”),审题难度低;
核心任务:无纯描述图片的题目,都需要“基于图片 + 完成实用任务”(提建议、说做法、介绍信息),避免无意义的图片描述;
文体要求:以短文为主,语言简洁明了,逻辑清晰,无需复杂修辞,突出 “可操作性”“信息准确性”;
评分关键:图片信息提取完整(如危险行为、活动元素)、任务要点全覆盖、逻辑连贯,缺一不可。
命题预测
命题形式:图文结合,任务明确。不会出现纯图片无文字提示的题目,核心任务仍为 “建议、规则、介绍” 等实用内容。
图片类型:实景图片(如校园垃圾分类场景、学生课间活动场景、交通安全场景),无抽象漫画。图片信息简洁明了,无需复杂解读,重点在 “基于图片完成任务”;
文字提示:明确核心任务(如 “提3条垃圾分类建议”“介绍课间活动规则”“说2条安全注意事项”),避免模糊要求。
词数仍控制在 80 词左右,语言要求 “简单、准确、有条理”。
考点一 题型破解
(一)考查地位
结合 2023-2025 年河北中考真题及各地市模拟题,“看图 / 情景类” 未单独作为核心命题类别,而是融入 “建议 / 做法类”“介绍类” 等实用题型中,占比约 15%,属于 “辅助但必考” 的题型:
真题体现:近三年真题无纯看图写作,但 2024 年真题 “介绍张军课堂表现”、2025 年真题 “介绍 Alice 体育课体验” 均含 “情景提示” 属性,需结合场景描述核心信息;
模拟题占比:2025 年唐山、邯郸、秦皇岛等地市模拟题中,“看图 / 情景类” 均为 “图片+文字提示” 结合,核心任务多为 “提建议、说做法、描述场景”,如 “看图提骑行安全建议”“看图介绍校园活动” 等。
这类题型核心考查 “通过图片 / 情景提取信息+精准传递实用内容” 的能力,符合新课标 “语言在真实场景中运用” 的要求。
(二)题材分布
题材类型
模拟题
核心特点
安全防护场景
唐山三模 “看图提骑行安全建议”、沧州二模 “看图说校园安全规则”
图片含危险行为,核心任务为 “提具体安全建议”
校园/生活规则场景
石家庄二模 “看图说课堂规则”、邯郸三模 “看图说大课间活动要求”
图片含场景细节,核心任务为 “介绍规则 / 做法”
活动描述场景
秦皇岛一模 “看图介绍社会实践活动”、张家口一模 “看图分享校园艺术活动”
图片含活动元素,核心任务为 “描述活动+感受”
生活习惯场景
唐山二模 “看图说健康饮食习惯”、廊坊一模 “看图说阅读习惯”
图片含习惯细节,核心任务为 “介绍习惯+意义”
考点二 解题要点
一、精选典型试题
(2025·河北唐山·三模)请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示写一篇英语短文。
提示:(1)What is the boy doing in the picture?
(2)What should we do to ride safely? (至少三点)
注意:(1)短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:helmet (头盔), bike lane (自行车道)
`Riding a bike is convenient, but safety always comes first.________________________________________
二、分维度深度精讲
(一)审题定向(定主题、定文体)
1. 审题核心:
图片信息(隐含):男孩骑行时使用手机,周围有车辆,存在安全隐患(需准确描述这一核心场景);
核心任务:
① 描述图片中男孩的行为;
② 提出至少 3 条骑行安全建议(河北中考 “建议类” 核心要求,要点不能少);
限制条件:词数 80 左右,开头已给出,需简洁明了,建议具体可操作。
2. 定主题:聚焦 “骑行安全”,传递实用建议
主题定位为 “描述骑行中的危险行为,给出具体安全建议,帮助他人安全骑行”,避免偏离 “安全” 核心,不添加无关内容(如骑行的好处)。
3. 定文体:实用型短文
文体特征:语言平实、逻辑清晰,分点介绍建议(用 First、Second 等连接词),符合 “建议类” 短文的实用属性;
行文风格:贴合中学生身份,多用简单句 + 基础连接词,不用复杂长句,确保建议易理解、可操作。
(二)定要点、定人称、定时态
1. 定要点:
必选要点(2个核心):
描述图片:男孩骑行时使用手机,周围有车辆,存在危险(1-2 句话,不冗长);
安全建议:至少 3 条,需具体(结合参考词汇,如戴头盔、走自行车道,避免空泛)。
补充细节:
图片描述:In the picture, the boy is using a mobile phone while riding, and there are cars around him. This is very dangerous.
安全建议:戴头盔、不使用电子设备、走自行车道、遵守交通规则(选 3 条核心即可)。
2. 定人称:第一人称复数(we)
建议针对 “我们中学生”,用 we 更自然,符合 “分享安全建议” 的交流场景,避免用 you 显得生硬。
3. 定时态:一般现在时
描述 “普遍的危险行为” 和 “通用的安全规则”,无时间限制,用一般现在时(如 is using、should wear、we avoid)。
(三)列框架、拓思维
框架:开头承接→描述图片→分点建议→结尾总结:
框架
具体内容
思维拓展
开头承接
沿用已给开头,无需额外发挥
若无给定开头,可写 “From the picture, we can see a dangerous scene. It reminds us to pay attention to safety while riding.”
描述图片
简洁说明男孩的危险行为(骑行玩手机及周围有车),点出 “危险”
描述图片不超过 2 句话,只抓核心信息,不纠结细节(如男孩的穿着、车辆的颜色)
分点建议
1. 戴头盔(protect head);2. 不使用电子设备(keep attention);3. 走自行车道(follow rules)
每条建议增加一句简短理由(如 “wear a helmet to reduce injury risk”),用 First、Second、Third 连接
结尾总结
强调遵守规则的重要性,呼应开头 “安全第一”
可写 “By following these safety rules, we can enjoy riding without danger.”
(四)理思路、写佳句
1. 开头句(给定,直接衔接)
原句:Riding a bike is convenient, but safety always comes first.
衔接句:In the picture, the boy is using a mobile phone while riding, and there are cars both in front of and behind him. This puts him in great danger.
亮点:简洁描述图片核心危险,自然引出 “安全建议”,逻辑连贯。
2. 中间分点句(核心得分区,建议 + 细节)
建议 1:First, we should always wear a helmet when riding. It can greatly reduce the risk of head injuries if an accident happens.
亮点词汇:wear a helmet(戴头盔)、reduce the risk of(降低…… 风险);
亮点句型:when riding(省略句,简洁)、if 引导条件状语从句。
建议 2:Second, we must avoid using mobile phones or listening to music while riding. We need to keep our full attention on the road.
亮点词汇:avoid doing(避免做)、keep attention on(专注于);
亮点句型:must 表强调,符合 “规则 / 建议” 的语气。
建议 3:Third, we should ride on the bike lane and follow traffic rules strictly. Never run red lights or ride against the traffic.
亮点词汇:bike lane(自行车道)、follow traffic rules(遵守交通规则);
亮点句型:Never 开头的祈使句,强化建议力度。
3. 结尾句(总结升华,呼应开头)
佳句:By following these simple but useful rules, we can enjoy a safe and pleasant cycling experience.
亮点:用 By doing 结构总结,呼应开头 “safety first”,简洁有力,符合词数要求。
(五)整合优化
最终范文
Riding a bike is convenient, but safety always comes first. In the picture, the boy is using a mobile phone while riding, and there are cars both in front of and behind him. This puts him in great danger.
To ride safely, first, we should always wear a helmet. It can greatly reduce the risk of head injuries in an accident. Second, we must avoid using mobile phones or listening to music while riding to keep full attention on the road. Third, we should ride on the bike lane and follow traffic rules strictly.
By following these rules, we can enjoy a safe and pleasant cycling experience.
范文亮点解析:
1. 图片信息提取完整:准确描述 “骑行玩手机 + 周围有车” 的危险场景,无遗漏;
2. 要点全覆盖:3 条建议具体可操作,每条隐含简单理由,符合河北中考 “建议类” 评分标准;
3. 逻辑连贯:用 First、Second、Third 分点,结尾总结升华,结构清晰;
4. 语言准确:无语法错误,高频短语(wear a helmet、follow traffic rules)和句型(while riding、By doing)运用恰当.
三、精讲总结
1. 图片解读 “抓核心”:不纠结无关细节,只提取与任务相关的信息(如危险行为、活动元素);
2. 任务优先 “不跑偏”:图片描述是铺垫,核心是完成实用任务(提建议、说规则),描述不超过 2 句话;
3. 建议/规则 “要具体”:避免 “be careful”“obey rules” 等空泛表达,用 “wear a helmet”“ride on the bike lane” 等可操作的表达;
4. 逻辑衔接 “用连接词”:分点用 First、Second、Third,过渡用 In the picture、To...、By doing,让行文更清晰;
5. 词数控制 “抓重点”:80 词左右时,图片描述 1-2 句,核心任务(建议 / 规则)3-4 句,结尾 1 句,避免单句过长。
考点三 “看图/情景类” 高频短语及句型清单
一、图片描述类
(一)高频短语
1. in the picture 在图片中
2. on the left/right 在左边 / 右边
3. in the middle of 在…… 中间
4. do sth. while doing 做某事时同时做……(如骑行时玩手机)
5. around/nearby 在周围 / 附近
6. be in danger 处于危险中
7.take action 采取行动
8. follow the scene 结合场景
(二)高频句型
1. In the picture, we can see a boy riding a bike while using a mobile phone. 在图片中,我们能看到一个男孩骑行时正在使用手机。
2. There are some cars around the boy, which makes the situation very dangerous. 男孩周围有一些车辆,这让情况非常危险。
3. As shown in the picture, some students are running in the hallway. 如图所示,一些学生正在走廊里奔跑。
4. The scene in the picture reminds us of the importance of safety. 图片中的场景提醒我们安全的重要性。
5. From the picture, it’s clear that the girl is helping an old man cross the road. 从图片中可以清楚地看到,女孩正在帮助一位老人过马路。
二、危险/行为描述类
(一)高频短语
1. run in the hallway 在走廊奔跑
2. ride against the traffic 逆行骑行
3. use a mobile phone while riding/driving 骑行 / 驾驶时使用手机
4. skip breakfast 不吃早餐
5. stay up late 熬夜
6. litter everywhere 到处乱扔垃圾
7. play on the street 在街道上玩耍
8. not wear a helmet 不戴头盔
(二)高频句型
1. The boy in the picture is riding without a helmet, which is a risky behavior. 图片中的男孩骑行未戴头盔,这是一种危险行为。
2. Some students are playing football on the street, and there are many passing cars. 一些学生正在街上踢足球,而且有很多过往车辆。
3. It’s dangerous to run across the road without looking around. 不环顾四周就横穿马路是很危险的。
4. Staying up late and skipping breakfast will do harm to our health. 熬夜和不吃早餐会对我们的健康有害。
5. Littering everywhere not only pollutes the environment but also breaks public rules. 到处乱扔垃圾不仅污染环境,还违反公共规则。
三、安全/规则建议类
(一)核心短语
1. wear a helmet 戴头盔
2. ride on the bike lane 在自行车道骑行
3. follow traffic rules 遵守交通规则
4. keep away from 远离……
5. look both ways 左右看
6. obey school rules 遵守校规
7. take care of 照顾;注意
8. keep quiet 保持安静
9. queue up 排队
10. avoid doing sth. 避免做某事
(二)高频句型
1. First, we should wear a helmet when riding a bike to protect our heads. 首先,我们骑行时应该戴头盔来保护头部。
2. Second, we must avoid using mobile phones while walking on the road. 其次,我们在路上行走时必须避免使用手机。
3. If each of us follows traffic rules, we can make the road safer. 如果我们每个人都遵守交通规则,就能让道路更安全。
4. On the one hand, we should queue up when waiting for the bus; on the other hand, we shouldn’t push others. 一方面,我们等公交时应该排队;另一方面,我们不应该推搡他人。
5. When you are outside, you'd better look around carefully before crossing the road. What's more, you mustn’t run red lights. 当你在户外时,过马路前最好仔细环顾四周。此外,你绝对不能闯红灯。
6. The most important for us is to obey school rules. If we do so, we can have a safe and happy campus life. 对我们来说最重要的是遵守校规。如果我们这样做,就能拥有安全快乐的校园生活。
四、活动描述类
(一)核心短语
1. take part in 参加
2. clean the street 打扫街道
3. plant trees 植树
4. have a picnic 野餐
5. do volunteer work 做志愿工作
6. perform a play 表演戏剧
7. collect rubbish 收集垃圾
8. help with housework 帮忙做家务
(二)高频句型
1. As shown in the picture, students are collecting rubbish in the park to protect the environment. 如图所示,学生们正在公园里收集垃圾以保护环境。
2. I love taking part in volunteer activities. They are meaningful and help me learn to care for others. 我喜欢参加志愿活动。它们很有意义,还能帮助我学会关爱他人。
3. During the activity, we not only cleaned the street but also told people about environmental protection. 在活动中,我们不仅打扫了街道,还向人们宣传了环保知识。
4. In fact, doing volunteer work is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. 事实上,做志愿工作非常有意义,我能从中学到很多。
5. The students in the picture are planting trees. It’s a good way to make our city greener. 图片中的学生们正在植树。这是让我们的城市更绿的好方法。
五、感受/总结类
(一)核心短语
1. be meaningful/educational 有意义的 / 有教育意义的
2. make a big difference 产生很大影响
3. improve ourselves 提升自己
4. keep safe/healthy 保持安全 / 健康
5. have a good time 玩得开心
6. learn a lot from 从…… 中学到很多
(二)高频句型
1. In a word, safety is important for everyone, so we should always keep it in mind. 总之,安全对每个人都很重要,所以我们应该时刻牢记。
2. If everyone tries his best to follow the rules, I think we will live a safer and happier life. 如果每个人都尽力遵守规则,我认为我们会过上更安全、更幸福的生活。
3. As far as we know, following public rules is the most important thing for us. 众所周知,遵守公共规则对我们来说是最重要的事。
4. Through this activity, I realized that helping others can bring us great joy. 通过这次活动,我意识到帮助他人能给我们带来巨大的快乐。
5. These experiences are so enjoyable that I will never forget them. 这些经历非常愉快,我永远不会忘记。
六、通用衔接类
(一)核心短语
1. First / First of all 首先
2. Second / Secondly 其次
3. Third / Thirdly 第三
4. What’s more / Besides 此外
5. In addition 另外
6. Finally 最后
7. In short / All in all 总之
8. For example 例如
(二)高频句型
1. First, we should finish our homework on time; besides, we need to help with housework. 首先,我们应该按时完成作业;此外,我们需要帮忙做家务。
2. For example, we can ride bikes to school instead of taking cars to protect the environment. 例如,我们可以骑自行车上学而不是坐汽车,以保护环境。
3. In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. It can not only help us learn better but also show respect to the teacher. What's more, we should take notes in time. 在课堂上,我们应该认真听老师讲课。这不仅能帮助我们学得更好,还能向老师表示尊重。此外,我们应该及时记笔记。
4. At school, we should obey the campus rules; at home, I usually help my parents do some cooking. 在学校,我们应该遵守校园规则;在家里,我通常帮父母做些饭菜。
Passage 01(题材:生活技能・体裁:短文)
(2025·河北邢台·一模)在成长的道路上我们探索奋进,努力学习各种生活技能,成长为更好的自己。请你结合下面思维导图的内容和自身经历,写一篇短文介绍你学会的一项生活技能。
Learning to ______
1. What life skill do you learn?
2. How did you learn the skill?
3. Why do you want to learn this skill?
4. What is your feeling?
写作要求:
1. 内容须包含提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3. 词数80个左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Learning life skills is a journey of self-improvement.
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Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now.
Passage 02(题材:中华文化・体裁:电子邮件)
(2025·河北石家庄·三模)假设你是李华,你校将举办国潮文化节(China-Chic Cultural Festival)。请结合以下思维导图,用英语写一封邮件,邀请你的外国好友Jason来参加。
注意:1.包含提示内容,可适当增加细节;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3.词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jason,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is good news for you.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 03(题材:健康生活・体裁:演讲稿)
(2025·河北邯郸·三模)2025年被国家定为“体重管理年”,倡导全民关注健康生活。你所在的学校计划开展“健康生活宣传活动”,鼓励同学们改善饮食习惯并积极运动。作为活动的一部分,学校邀请同学们分享如何让健康生活变得有趣且有效的想法。假如你是李华,请你以“我的健康计划”为题,根据以下信息写一篇英语发言稿。
注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share my health plan with you. In the “Year of Weight Management”, I have decided to focus on developing a new habit of
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
Passage 04(题材:生活技能・体裁:记叙类短文)
(2025·安徽合肥·模拟预测)假如你是李辉,上周你在劳动实践课上学会了一项重要的生活技能—炒菜。请根据下边图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,简述你的经历及感受。
注意:
1.短文须包含图上步骤,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Last week, in our labor practice class, I learned an important life skill—cooking vegetables. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 05(题材:自我提升・体裁:征文)
(2025·河北廊坊·二模)某英语网站开展主题为“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动,倡导同学们提升自我,努力成为“终生运动者,责任担当者,问题解决者,优雅生活者”。请根据以下表格内容积极投稿。
Voices from “YES”
Voices from “NO”
▶exercise for an hour
▶be in the face of problems
▶be interested in
×stay at home, play games
×run away from problems
×lose interest
要求:
(1)请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself. Here are some ways.
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I believe that if I can do these, I will improve myself step by step.
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专题10 写作指导(看图/情景类)
目 录
01·考情剖析·命题前瞻 3
02·时空导航·网络构建 3
03·题型通关·靶向突破 4
考点一 题型破解 4
(一)考查地位 4
(二)题材分布 4
考点二 解题要点 5
一、精选典型试题 5
二、分维度深度精讲 5
三、精讲总结 8
考点三 “看图/情景类” 高频短语及句型清单 9
一、图片描述类 9
二、危险/行为描述类 9
三、安全/规则建议类 10
四、活动描述类 11
五、感受/总结类 12
六、通用衔接类 12
04·优题精选·练能提分 13
Passage 01(题材:生活技能・体裁:短文) 13
Passage 02(题材:中华文化・体裁:电子邮件) 15
Passage 03(题材:健康生活・体裁:演讲稿) 17
Passage 04(题材:生活技能・体裁:记叙类短文) 18
Passage 05(题材:自我提升・体裁:征文) 20
考情分析
材料形式:均为 “图片+文字提示”,图片提供场景背景(如骑行的男孩、课堂场景),文字提示明确核心任务(如 “提安全建议”“介绍规则”),审题难度低;
核心任务:无纯描述图片的题目,都需要“基于图片 + 完成实用任务”(提建议、说做法、介绍信息),避免无意义的图片描述;
文体要求:以短文为主,语言简洁明了,逻辑清晰,无需复杂修辞,突出 “可操作性”“信息准确性”;
评分关键:图片信息提取完整(如危险行为、活动元素)、任务要点全覆盖、逻辑连贯,缺一不可。
命题预测
命题形式:图文结合,任务明确。不会出现纯图片无文字提示的题目,核心任务仍为 “建议、规则、介绍” 等实用内容。
图片类型:实景图片(如校园垃圾分类场景、学生课间活动场景、交通安全场景),无抽象漫画。图片信息简洁明了,无需复杂解读,重点在 “基于图片完成任务”;
文字提示:明确核心任务(如 “提3条垃圾分类建议”“介绍课间活动规则”“说2条安全注意事项”),避免模糊要求。
词数仍控制在 80 词左右,语言要求 “简单、准确、有条理”。
考点一 题型破解
(一)考查地位
结合 2023-2025 年河北中考真题及各地市模拟题,“看图 / 情景类” 未单独作为核心命题类别,而是融入 “建议 / 做法类”“介绍类” 等实用题型中,占比约 15%,属于 “辅助但必考” 的题型:
真题体现:近三年真题无纯看图写作,但 2024 年真题 “介绍张军课堂表现”、2025 年真题 “介绍 Alice 体育课体验” 均含 “情景提示” 属性,需结合场景描述核心信息;
模拟题占比:2025 年唐山、邯郸、秦皇岛等地市模拟题中,“看图 / 情景类” 均为 “图片+文字提示” 结合,核心任务多为 “提建议、说做法、描述场景”,如 “看图提骑行安全建议”“看图介绍校园活动” 等。
这类题型核心考查 “通过图片 / 情景提取信息+精准传递实用内容” 的能力,符合新课标 “语言在真实场景中运用” 的要求。
(二)题材分布
题材类型
模拟题
核心特点
安全防护场景
唐山三模 “看图提骑行安全建议”、沧州二模 “看图说校园安全规则”
图片含危险行为,核心任务为 “提具体安全建议”
校园/生活规则场景
石家庄二模 “看图说课堂规则”、邯郸三模 “看图说大课间活动要求”
图片含场景细节,核心任务为 “介绍规则 / 做法”
活动描述场景
秦皇岛一模 “看图介绍社会实践活动”、张家口一模 “看图分享校园艺术活动”
图片含活动元素,核心任务为 “描述活动+感受”
生活习惯场景
唐山二模 “看图说健康饮食习惯”、廊坊一模 “看图说阅读习惯”
图片含习惯细节,核心任务为 “介绍习惯+意义”
考点二 解题要点
一、精选典型试题
(2025·河北唐山·三模)请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示写一篇英语短文。
提示:(1)What is the boy doing in the picture?
(2)What should we do to ride safely? (至少三点)
注意:(1)短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:helmet (头盔), bike lane (自行车道)
`Riding a bike is convenient, but safety always comes first.________________________________________
二、分维度深度精讲
(一)审题定向(定主题、定文体)
1. 审题核心:
图片信息(隐含):男孩骑行时使用手机,周围有车辆,存在安全隐患(需准确描述这一核心场景);
核心任务:
① 描述图片中男孩的行为;
② 提出至少 3 条骑行安全建议(河北中考 “建议类” 核心要求,要点不能少);
限制条件:词数 80 左右,开头已给出,需简洁明了,建议具体可操作。
2. 定主题:聚焦 “骑行安全”,传递实用建议
主题定位为 “描述骑行中的危险行为,给出具体安全建议,帮助他人安全骑行”,避免偏离 “安全” 核心,不添加无关内容(如骑行的好处)。
3. 定文体:实用型短文
文体特征:语言平实、逻辑清晰,分点介绍建议(用 First、Second 等连接词),符合 “建议类” 短文的实用属性;
行文风格:贴合中学生身份,多用简单句 + 基础连接词,不用复杂长句,确保建议易理解、可操作。
(二)定要点、定人称、定时态
1. 定要点:
必选要点(2个核心):
描述图片:男孩骑行时使用手机,周围有车辆,存在危险(1-2 句话,不冗长);
安全建议:至少 3 条,需具体(结合参考词汇,如戴头盔、走自行车道,避免空泛)。
补充细节:
图片描述:In the picture, the boy is using a mobile phone while riding, and there are cars around him. This is very dangerous.
安全建议:戴头盔、不使用电子设备、走自行车道、遵守交通规则(选 3 条核心即可)。
2. 定人称:第一人称复数(we)
建议针对 “我们中学生”,用 we 更自然,符合 “分享安全建议” 的交流场景,避免用 you 显得生硬。
3. 定时态:一般现在时
描述 “普遍的危险行为” 和 “通用的安全规则”,无时间限制,用一般现在时(如 is using、should wear、we avoid)。
(三)列框架、拓思维
框架:开头承接→描述图片→分点建议→结尾总结:
框架
具体内容
思维拓展
开头承接
沿用已给开头,无需额外发挥
若无给定开头,可写 “From the picture, we can see a dangerous scene. It reminds us to pay attention to safety while riding.”
描述图片
简洁说明男孩的危险行为(骑行玩手机及周围有车),点出 “危险”
描述图片不超过 2 句话,只抓核心信息,不纠结细节(如男孩的穿着、车辆的颜色)
分点建议
1. 戴头盔(protect head);2. 不使用电子设备(keep attention);3. 走自行车道(follow rules)
每条建议增加一句简短理由(如 “wear a helmet to reduce injury risk”),用 First、Second、Third 连接
结尾总结
强调遵守规则的重要性,呼应开头 “安全第一”
可写 “By following these safety rules, we can enjoy riding without danger.”
(四)理思路、写佳句
1. 开头句(给定,直接衔接)
原句:Riding a bike is convenient, but safety always comes first.
衔接句:In the picture, the boy is using a mobile phone while riding, and there are cars both in front of and behind him. This puts him in great danger.
亮点:简洁描述图片核心危险,自然引出 “安全建议”,逻辑连贯。
2. 中间分点句(核心得分区,建议 + 细节)
建议 1:First, we should always wear a helmet when riding. It can greatly reduce the risk of head injuries if an accident happens.
亮点词汇:wear a helmet(戴头盔)、reduce the risk of(降低…… 风险);
亮点句型:when riding(省略句,简洁)、if 引导条件状语从句。
建议 2:Second, we must avoid using mobile phones or listening to music while riding. We need to keep our full attention on the road.
亮点词汇:avoid doing(避免做)、keep attention on(专注于);
亮点句型:must 表强调,符合 “规则 / 建议” 的语气。
建议 3:Third, we should ride on the bike lane and follow traffic rules strictly. Never run red lights or ride against the traffic.
亮点词汇:bike lane(自行车道)、follow traffic rules(遵守交通规则);
亮点句型:Never 开头的祈使句,强化建议力度。
3. 结尾句(总结升华,呼应开头)
佳句:By following these simple but useful rules, we can enjoy a safe and pleasant cycling experience.
亮点:用 By doing 结构总结,呼应开头 “safety first”,简洁有力,符合词数要求。
(五)整合优化
最终范文
Riding a bike is convenient, but safety always comes first. In the picture, the boy is using a mobile phone while riding, and there are cars both in front of and behind him. This puts him in great danger.
To ride safely, first, we should always wear a helmet. It can greatly reduce the risk of head injuries in an accident. Second, we must avoid using mobile phones or listening to music while riding to keep full attention on the road. Third, we should ride on the bike lane and follow traffic rules strictly.
By following these rules, we can enjoy a safe and pleasant cycling experience.
范文亮点解析:
1. 图片信息提取完整:准确描述 “骑行玩手机 + 周围有车” 的危险场景,无遗漏;
2. 要点全覆盖:3 条建议具体可操作,每条隐含简单理由,符合河北中考 “建议类” 评分标准;
3. 逻辑连贯:用 First、Second、Third 分点,结尾总结升华,结构清晰;
4. 语言准确:无语法错误,高频短语(wear a helmet、follow traffic rules)和句型(while riding、By doing)运用恰当.
三、精讲总结
1. 图片解读 “抓核心”:不纠结无关细节,只提取与任务相关的信息(如危险行为、活动元素);
2. 任务优先 “不跑偏”:图片描述是铺垫,核心是完成实用任务(提建议、说规则),描述不超过 2 句话;
3. 建议/规则 “要具体”:避免 “be careful”“obey rules” 等空泛表达,用 “wear a helmet”“ride on the bike lane” 等可操作的表达;
4. 逻辑衔接 “用连接词”:分点用 First、Second、Third,过渡用 In the picture、To...、By doing,让行文更清晰;
5. 词数控制 “抓重点”:80 词左右时,图片描述 1-2 句,核心任务(建议 / 规则)3-4 句,结尾 1 句,避免单句过长。
考点三 “看图/情景类” 高频短语及句型清单
一、图片描述类
(一)高频短语
1. in the picture 在图片中
2. on the left/right 在左边 / 右边
3. in the middle of 在…… 中间
4. do sth. while doing 做某事时同时做……(如骑行时玩手机)
5. around/nearby 在周围 / 附近
6. be in danger 处于危险中
7.take action 采取行动
8. follow the scene 结合场景
(二)高频句型
1. In the picture, we can see a boy riding a bike while using a mobile phone. 在图片中,我们能看到一个男孩骑行时正在使用手机。
2. There are some cars around the boy, which makes the situation very dangerous. 男孩周围有一些车辆,这让情况非常危险。
3. As shown in the picture, some students are running in the hallway. 如图所示,一些学生正在走廊里奔跑。
4. The scene in the picture reminds us of the importance of safety. 图片中的场景提醒我们安全的重要性。
5. From the picture, it’s clear that the girl is helping an old man cross the road. 从图片中可以清楚地看到,女孩正在帮助一位老人过马路。
二、危险/行为描述类
(一)高频短语
1. run in the hallway 在走廊奔跑
2. ride against the traffic 逆行骑行
3. use a mobile phone while riding/driving 骑行 / 驾驶时使用手机
4. skip breakfast 不吃早餐
5. stay up late 熬夜
6. litter everywhere 到处乱扔垃圾
7. play on the street 在街道上玩耍
8. not wear a helmet 不戴头盔
(二)高频句型
1. The boy in the picture is riding without a helmet, which is a risky behavior. 图片中的男孩骑行未戴头盔,这是一种危险行为。
2. Some students are playing football on the street, and there are many passing cars. 一些学生正在街上踢足球,而且有很多过往车辆。
3. It’s dangerous to run across the road without looking around. 不环顾四周就横穿马路是很危险的。
4. Staying up late and skipping breakfast will do harm to our health. 熬夜和不吃早餐会对我们的健康有害。
5. Littering everywhere not only pollutes the environment but also breaks public rules. 到处乱扔垃圾不仅污染环境,还违反公共规则。
三、安全/规则建议类
(一)核心短语
1. wear a helmet 戴头盔
2. ride on the bike lane 在自行车道骑行
3. follow traffic rules 遵守交通规则
4. keep away from 远离……
5. look both ways 左右看
6. obey school rules 遵守校规
7. take care of 照顾;注意
8. keep quiet 保持安静
9. queue up 排队
10. avoid doing sth. 避免做某事
(二)高频句型
1. First, we should wear a helmet when riding a bike to protect our heads. 首先,我们骑行时应该戴头盔来保护头部。
2. Second, we must avoid using mobile phones while walking on the road. 其次,我们在路上行走时必须避免使用手机。
3. If each of us follows traffic rules, we can make the road safer. 如果我们每个人都遵守交通规则,就能让道路更安全。
4. On the one hand, we should queue up when waiting for the bus; on the other hand, we shouldn’t push others. 一方面,我们等公交时应该排队;另一方面,我们不应该推搡他人。
5. When you are outside, you'd better look around carefully before crossing the road. What's more, you mustn’t run red lights. 当你在户外时,过马路前最好仔细环顾四周。此外,你绝对不能闯红灯。
6. The most important for us is to obey school rules. If we do so, we can have a safe and happy campus life. 对我们来说最重要的是遵守校规。如果我们这样做,就能拥有安全快乐的校园生活。
四、活动描述类
(一)核心短语
1. take part in 参加
2. clean the street 打扫街道
3. plant trees 植树
4. have a picnic 野餐
5. do volunteer work 做志愿工作
6. perform a play 表演戏剧
7. collect rubbish 收集垃圾
8. help with housework 帮忙做家务
(二)高频句型
1. As shown in the picture, students are collecting rubbish in the park to protect the environment. 如图所示,学生们正在公园里收集垃圾以保护环境。
2. I love taking part in volunteer activities. They are meaningful and help me learn to care for others. 我喜欢参加志愿活动。它们很有意义,还能帮助我学会关爱他人。
3. During the activity, we not only cleaned the street but also told people about environmental protection. 在活动中,我们不仅打扫了街道,还向人们宣传了环保知识。
4. In fact, doing volunteer work is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. 事实上,做志愿工作非常有意义,我能从中学到很多。
5. The students in the picture are planting trees. It’s a good way to make our city greener. 图片中的学生们正在植树。这是让我们的城市更绿的好方法。
五、感受/总结类
(一)核心短语
1. be meaningful/educational 有意义的 / 有教育意义的
2. make a big difference 产生很大影响
3. improve ourselves 提升自己
4. keep safe/healthy 保持安全 / 健康
5. have a good time 玩得开心
6. learn a lot from 从…… 中学到很多
(二)高频句型
1. In a word, safety is important for everyone, so we should always keep it in mind. 总之,安全对每个人都很重要,所以我们应该时刻牢记。
2. If everyone tries his best to follow the rules, I think we will live a safer and happier life. 如果每个人都尽力遵守规则,我认为我们会过上更安全、更幸福的生活。
3. As far as we know, following public rules is the most important thing for us. 众所周知,遵守公共规则对我们来说是最重要的事。
4. Through this activity, I realized that helping others can bring us great joy. 通过这次活动,我意识到帮助他人能给我们带来巨大的快乐。
5. These experiences are so enjoyable that I will never forget them. 这些经历非常愉快,我永远不会忘记。
六、通用衔接类
(一)核心短语
1. First / First of all 首先
2. Second / Secondly 其次
3. Third / Thirdly 第三
4. What’s more / Besides 此外
5. In addition 另外
6. Finally 最后
7. In short / All in all 总之
8. For example 例如
(二)高频句型
1. First, we should finish our homework on time; besides, we need to help with housework. 首先,我们应该按时完成作业;此外,我们需要帮忙做家务。
2. For example, we can ride bikes to school instead of taking cars to protect the environment. 例如,我们可以骑自行车上学而不是坐汽车,以保护环境。
3. In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. It can not only help us learn better but also show respect to the teacher. What's more, we should take notes in time. 在课堂上,我们应该认真听老师讲课。这不仅能帮助我们学得更好,还能向老师表示尊重。此外,我们应该及时记笔记。
4. At school, we should obey the campus rules; at home, I usually help my parents do some cooking. 在学校,我们应该遵守校园规则;在家里,我通常帮父母做些饭菜。
Passage 01(题材:生活技能・体裁:短文)
(2025·河北邢台·一模)在成长的道路上我们探索奋进,努力学习各种生活技能,成长为更好的自己。请你结合下面思维导图的内容和自身经历,写一篇短文介绍你学会的一项生活技能。
Learning to ______
1. What life skill do you learn?
2. How did you learn the skill?
3. Why do you want to learn this skill?
4. What is your feeling?
写作要求:
1. 内容须包含提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3. 词数80个左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Learning life skills is a journey of self-improvement.
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Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now.
【答案】例文
Learning life skills is a journey of self-improvement. Last year, I learned to cook simple meals. At first, I watched my mother prepare dishes carefully. Then I tried to follow her steps, though I once burned the vegetables. With practice, I mastered basic cooking methods like frying eggs and making sandwiches. I wanted to learn this skill because it helps me become more independent. Now I can prepare breakfast when my parents are busy. Whenever I see them enjoying my food, I feel proud and confident.
Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干表格中的要点,详细介绍学会的一项生活技能;
第三步,分享感受并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②want to do想要做某事
[高分句型]
①I wanted to learn this skill because it helps me become more independent.(原因状语从句)
②Now I can prepare breakfast when my parents are busy.(时间状语从句)
Passage 02(题材:中华文化・体裁:电子邮件)
(2025·河北石家庄·三模)假设你是李华,你校将举办国潮文化节(China-Chic Cultural Festival)。请结合以下思维导图,用英语写一封邮件,邀请你的外国好友Jason来参加。
注意:1.包含提示内容,可适当增加细节;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3.词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jason,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is good news for you.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jason,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is good news for you. Our school will hold the China-Chic Cultural Festival on the playground on May 30th, which offers a fantastic chance to explore China’s traditions.
During the event, we will watch folk activities such as making lanterns and learning paper cutting. At the same time, we will watch Beijing opera and enjoy Chinese tea. We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.
Join us! You’ll have fun and better understand Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your reply .
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】文体活动、中华文化
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍国潮文化节举行的时间和地点;
第二步,介绍具体的活动安排;
第三步,表达对此次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②at the same time同时
③look back on回顾
[高分句型]
①Our school will hold the China-Chic Cultural Festival on the playground on May 30th, which offers a fantastic chance to explore China’s traditions.(which引导的定语从句)
②We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.(because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 03(题材:健康生活・体裁:演讲稿)
(2025·河北邯郸·三模)2025年被国家定为“体重管理年”,倡导全民关注健康生活。你所在的学校计划开展“健康生活宣传活动”,鼓励同学们改善饮食习惯并积极运动。作为活动的一部分,学校邀请同学们分享如何让健康生活变得有趣且有效的想法。假如你是李华,请你以“我的健康计划”为题,根据以下信息写一篇英语发言稿。
注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share my health plan with you. In the “Year of Weight Management”, I have decided to focus on developing a new habit of
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share my health plan with you. In the “Year of Weight Management”, I have decided to focus on developing a new habit of jogging in the morning.
Jogging not only burns calories but also strengthens my heart and lungs. By doing so, I can stay at a healthy weight and reduce the risk of illness. I believe this habit is the key to building endurance and staying active. To make it more fun, I’m going to start a “Morning Running club” with my friends. We’ll share our progress, hold mini-races, and cheer each other on. This way, jogging becomes more enjoyable and easier to keep doing.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【知识点】健康与运动
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增加细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整并重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍自己想要培养的一种习惯;
第二步,介绍培养这种习惯的重要性及创意方法;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①the risk of……的风险
②stay active保持积极
③cheer each other on互相加油
[高分句型]
①I believe this habit is the key to building endurance and staying active. (宾语从句)
②To make it more fun, I’m going to start a “Morning Running Club” with my friends. (动词不定式作目的状语)
Passage 04(题材:生活技能・体裁:记叙类短文)
(2025·安徽合肥·模拟预测)假如你是李辉,上周你在劳动实践课上学会了一项重要的生活技能—炒菜。请根据下边图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,简述你的经历及感受。
注意:
1.短文须包含图上步骤,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Last week, in our labor practice class, I learned an important life skill—cooking vegetables. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last week, in our labor practice class, I learned an important life skill—cooking vegetables. It was my first time cooking, so I felt nervous but excited.
Washing vegetables and cutting them into bite-sized pieces were the things I did first. After that, I heated some oil in a pan and waited until the oil was hot enough to cook the vegetables. Then I put the vegetables in the pan. Alter stir-frying the vegetables for a while, I added some flavourings to the dish. Finally, I turned off the heat and put the dish on a plate. Despite my nervousness, the dish turned out to be surprisingly delicious!
Through the experience, I’ve come to realize that cooking is not just about food—it teaches me patience and independence. I’m proud that I can help my family in the kitchen now!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:依据给定的图示(炒菜步骤)及要求写作,需简述学会炒菜的经历和感受,不能遗漏炒菜步骤相关信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明上周在劳动实践课学会炒菜这一事件,描述初次炒菜时紧张又兴奋的心情;
第二步,按照图示依次描述炒菜步骤,包括洗菜切菜、热油、翻炒、调味、装盘等过程;
第三步,阐述此次经历带来的感悟,即认识到烹饪不仅是做食物,还教会自己耐心和独立,以及为能帮家人做饭感到自豪。
[亮点词汇]
① for the first time 第一次
② turn out 结果是;证明是
③ come to realize 逐渐意识到
[高分句型]
①Through the experience, I’ve come to realize that cooking is not just about food—it teaches me patience and independence.(that引导宾语从句)
Passage 05(题材:自我提升・体裁:征文)
(2025·河北廊坊·二模)某英语网站开展主题为“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动,倡导同学们提升自我,努力成为“终生运动者,责任担当者,问题解决者,优雅生活者”。请根据以下表格内容积极投稿。
Voices from “YES”
Voices from “NO”
▶exercise for an hour
▶be in the face of problems
▶be interested in
×stay at home, play games
×run away from problems
×lose interest
要求:
(1)请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself. Here are some ways.
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I believe that if I can do these, I will improve myself step by step.
【答案】例文
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself. Here are some ways.
Firstly, instead of staying at home playing games, I will exercise for an hour every day. Running or playing basketball can make me healthier. Secondly, when meeting problems, I won’t run away. For example, if I fail a math test, I’ll ask teachers for help instead of giving up. Thirdly, I’ll keep trying new things to stay interested. Learning to paint or joining school clubs can make life more colorful. Losing interest makes life boring, but learning new things brings joy.
I believe that if I can do these, I will improve myself step by step.
【知识点】计划、自我管理
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍提升自我能做和不能做的事;
第二步,书写总结,表达信心。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是
②ask teachers for help向老师请求帮助
③giving up放弃
[高分句型]
①For example, if I fail a math test, I’ll ask teachers for help instead of giving up.(条件状语从句)
②Learning to paint or joining school clubs can make life more colorful.(动名词作主语)
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