内容正文:
06书面表达:人与自我——个人情况与个人兴趣
注:书面表达的所有主题及题目都是经过2023—2025年中考英语成都真题与模拟试题的真实数据分析,按照成都中考英语真题及模拟题重点考查的主题及考点,组成的符合成都中考英语核心考点的考前模拟训练。
目录
01 考情剖析•命题前瞻 1
02 时空导航•网络构建 2
03 题型通关•靶向突破 3
类型一:应用文(高频) 3
类型二:话题作文(高频) 7
类型三:图表作文 8
类型四:看图作文 10
04优题精选•练能提分 12
01 考情剖析•命题前瞻
维度
内容
新课标教学大纲基本理念
1.坚持素养导向,培养学生适应终身发展和社会发展需要的正确价值观、必备品格和关键能力。
2.以学生为中心,尊重个体差异,激发学习兴趣,培养自主学习能力。
3.构建主题引领的单元整体教学,促进核心素养综合发展。
4.倡导实践取向,通过大量语言实践活动,提升语言运用能力。
5.强化文化意识,增强家国情怀和人类命运共同体意识。
初中课程
三大主题
1.人与自我:聚焦个体发展,包括生活与学习、做人与做事两大主题群。
· 2.人与社会:聚焦社会交往,包括社会服务、人际沟通、文学艺术、历史文化、科学技术等主题群。
· 3.人与自然:聚焦生态环境,包括自然生态、环境保护、灾害防范、宇宙探索等主题群。
书面表达
题型概述
1.书面表达考查学生在特定情境中对英语词汇、句型、语法等基础知识的语言运用的能力。
2.测试学生对材料的分析能力、语言组织能力、表达能力以及想象能力,反映学生的语言能力和思维品质。
命题趋势
1.“立德树人”根本任务:五育并举、中华优秀传统文化、社会主义先进文化、党的领导等;
2.真实情境:素材真实、任务真实(如:书信、电子邮件、演讲稿、自荐信等);
3.时代性:“双减”政策、热点人物、科技创新、绿色环保、天宫课堂等;
4.形式多样:英文提示、思维导图、图画、图表、邮件、海报等新形式。
文体
应用文(如:电子邮件、演讲稿、书信作文);说明文;记叙文;少部分的议论文。
主题
以人与自我和人与社会为主;少部分是人与自然。
话题
1.人与自我:个人情况、个人兴趣、家庭朋友、日常生活、学校及校园生活、计划与愿望、感情与情绪、方法与策略等。
2.人与社会:人际交往、社会服务、文学艺术、历史、文化、节日、科普知识与现代技术、著名人物、通讯与媒体等。
3.人与自然:环境保护、环境污染、航天航空等。
人与自我
的内容
1.个人成长
话题内容:梦想与目标、成长感悟、克服困难、自我挑战、学习新技能。
2.兴趣爱好
话题内容:阅读、运动、音乐、绘画、收藏等爱好;爱好对个人的积极影响。
3.学习生活
话题内容:学习方法、校园生活、考试压力、师生关系、课外阅读。
4.品格塑造
话题内容:诚实、勇敢、坚持、自信、感恩、责任感。
5.健康生活
话题内容:饮食习惯、运动锻炼、作息规律、心理健康、远离不良习惯。
02 时空导航•网络构建
类型一:应用文(高频)
应用文一般包括书信/电子邮件;通知;发言稿;演讲稿;书信;通知等。
例题1 书信
例文话题:爱好、中华文化
考点一 题型破解
(2025·四川成都·二模)在初中音乐课上,同学们聆听或演奏了不同的中国传统乐器,如琵琶 (pipa)、管子 (guanzi)、笛子 (dizi)、箫 (xiao)、高胡 (gaohu)、鼓 (drum)等。假如你叫李华, 请根据下面的思维导图, 写一封信给笔友 Jim,向他介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统乐器或者一首中国民间乐曲。
注意:
1.信件须全面反映思维导图信息,文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2.有适当的开头和结尾,词数80左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I hope you are doing well!In our music class,we′ve been exploring traditional Chinese instruments,and I want to share my favorite one with you—the pipa.It's a four-stringed lute with a pear-shaped body,and its sound is both melodic and expressive.I love it because it can convey different emotions,from gentle melodies to lively rhythms. The pipa has a rich history,dating back over 2,000 years,and is often used in both solo and ensemble performances.I think you would enjoy its unique sound too!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇书信;
②时态:“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增加细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整并突出重点。[写作步骤]
【解题步骤】
第一步,介绍最爱的乐器;
第二步,具体介绍乐器的构成;
第三步,介绍喜爱琵琶的原因及历史;
第四步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②date back追溯到
【高分句型】
①I love it because it can convey different emotions,from gentle melodies to lively rhythms.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②The pipa has a rich history,dating back over 2,000 years,and is often used in both solo and ensemble performances.(使用非谓语结构)
例题2 演讲稿
例文话题:个人经历、校园生活
考点一 题型破解
校园生活如同一片花园,同学们在其中播种、欢笑和收获……这些经历记录了同学们的成长。初中生活即将结束,你校英语社团(Sunny English Express)下周五将举行毕业典礼演讲比赛,请结合海报内容写一篇以 “My ________ School Days” 为题的演讲稿积极参与此活动。
写作要求:
1. 分享你的校园回忆及收获;
2. 表达感恩及对新生活的展望;
3. 不少于80词且不出现个人真实信息。
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【解析】
【答案】例文
My Unforgettable School Days
How time flies!My junior high school life is coming to an end.It's time to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates.I'll never forget my colorful and meaningful school days.
I remember I used to be a shy girl in my first year.My English was really poor.I always hid behind my book and never said anything in class.My teacher encouraged me to read aloud and join in the discussion.With her help,I became more and more outgoing and confident.
I also remember I studied hard but still failed in the math exam sometimes.My desk mate patiently encouraged me to keep trying.Finally I made great progress in math and became a top student.
In the past three years,I have grown up so much.Thanks to my teachers and classmates, I have learned a lot.I'll try my best to be a better person in the future.
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;
③提示:围绕难忘的校园生活展开,讲述具体事例,情感真挚。
【写作步骤】
第一步,用感叹时光飞逝,引出初中生活即将结束,点明主题是难忘的校园生活;
第二步,分别讲述英语老师帮助自己克服害羞,变得自信;同桌鼓励自己学好数学这两件事,展现难忘的校园点滴;
第三步,总结自己的成长,表达对老师和同学的感谢以及对未来的期许。
【亮点词汇】
①used to过去常常
②encourage鼓励
③make progress取得进步
【高分句型】
①I remember l used to be a shy girl in my first year.(宾语从句)
②With her help,I became more and more outgoing and confident.(with引导的伴随状语,简洁说明变化原因)
类型二:话题作文(高频)
例文话题:个人经历、愿望
考点一 题型破解
(2025·四川成都·一模)2025年春节档影片《哪吒2》重磅上映,瞬间点燃了观众们的热情。这部电影的主题深刻而富有内涵,它不仅仅是一个关于神话英雄的故事,更是一部关于成长、梦想和命运的励志之作。影片告诉我们无论面对多大的困难和挑战,只要我们勇敢地追求自己的梦想,坚定地相信自己,就一定能够战胜命运,书写属于自己的精彩人生。请你结合提示和自身实际,以“Fighting for Dreams”为题写一篇短文。
提示内容:
1.What is your dream?
2.Why do you dream for that?
3.How will you realize your dream?
要求:
1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范:
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数;不少于80(标题和开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解析】
【答案】例文
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream.My dream is to become a writer.I love reading story books.Every time I read,I feel like I am in a new world.This makes me want to write my own stories and bring joy to other kids.
To make my dream come true,I read lots of books.After that,I try to write little stories.I share my stories with my friends and listen to their ideas.
When I feel like giving up,I will think of Ne Zha.If I keep trying,I can be a good writer one day!
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章围绕自己的梦想展开,包含梦想是什么、产生梦想的原因、为实现梦想所做的努力以及在遇到困难时的激励方式等要点,适当添加个人感受和想法等细节,突出为梦想奋斗的内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点明主题,指出每个人都有梦想,自己的梦想是成为一名作家,详细阐述梦想产生的原因,即热爱读故事书,每次阅读都感觉进入
新世界,从而想自己写故事给其他孩子带来快乐;
第二步,说明为实现梦想所采取的行动,如读很多书、尝试写小故事、与朋友分享并听取意见;
第三步,通过在想放弃时会想到哪吒,激励自己坚持下去,相信只要不断努力,总有一天能成为优秀的作家,表达为梦想奋斗的决心。
【亮点词汇】
①come true实现
②feel like感觉好像
③share...with...与……分享……
【高分句型】
①Every time I read,I feel like I am in a new world.(时间状语从句)
②If I keep trying,I can be a good writer one day!(条件状语从句)
类型三:图表作文
例文话题:阅读、方法/策略
考点一 题型破解
例题 阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力,无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式,它都能让你增长知识,开阔眼界。最近,某出版社在两万人中,针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文:第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80;
2. 首句已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
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【解析】
【答案】例文
Recently,a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading.Here is what we have learned from it.
60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers,while only 38.4%choose to read paper books.So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.However,whatever way of reading we choose,it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.
As for me,I am still used to reading paper books.Whenever I open a paper book,the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid.Just because of this,I got into the habit of reading So when I read paper books now,they always bring me the old feelings.On the other hand,compared with the electronic devices,reading paper books is good for eyes.So you see,I believe e-books won't take the place of paper books in my heart.
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生要注意要点,从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式”来谈谈这种阅读方式的好处,这是本篇写作的重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,简要说明图表内容;
第二步,从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
第三步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①more and more越来越多
②increase增长
③as for关于,至于
④remind sb.of使某人想起……
⑤compared with与……相比较
【高分句型】
①So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.(prefer to do sth.rather than do sth.宁愿做某事而不愿做某事)
②whatever way of reading we choose,it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.(whatever引导的让步状语从句)
类型四:看图作文
例文话题:个人经历、叙事忆旧
考点一 题型破解
例题Last Friday, Li Hua went to the night market of Laixi. Look at the pictures and write a story on the topic Lucky Li Hua.
(上周五,李华去了莱西夜市。请根据图片提示,以《幸运的李华》为题写一篇短文。)
写作提示及要求:
①下列词汇你在写作的过程中可能会使用到:dart n.飞镖,teddy bear n.玩具熊,game stand游戏摊位;
②关注图片传递的信息与图片之间的关联,适当增加对话或内心独白;
③写作内容中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Lucky Li Hua
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【解析】
【答案】例文
Lucky Li Hua
Last Friday,Li Hua went to the night market of Laixi,where she had a special experience.
As she strolled around the bustling market aimlessly,she suddenly came across a game stand.The stand offered a dart-throwing game,and the grand prize was a lovely teddy bear.Instantly drawn to the fluffy toy,Li Hua couldn't resist giving the game a try and paid ten yuan for a chance.
Li Hua held the darts firmly and looked at the target carefully.Then she threw the darts one by one.Because the game wasn't too hard for her,she hit the target dead-center with all three darts.The people watching couldn't help crying out in surprise,and the owner of the game stand looked really shocked.Li Hua had won the teddy bear!
Hugging the teddy bear tightly,Li Hua made her way home with a big smile on her face.How lucky she was!
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括图片和文字提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍了故事发生的时间、地点,并点明李华在那里有一段特殊的经历,引起读者的兴趣,为下文具体描述这段经历做铺垫;
第二步,交代故事的起因:偶遇一个飞镖游戏摊位,大奖是一只可爱的泰迪熊,李华被这只毛绒玩具吸引,忍不住花钱尝试玩这个游戏;
第三步,详细描写了李华玩飞镖游戏的过程;
第四步,介绍故事的结尾,展现了李华的喜悦之情,也呼应了文章的标题“Lucky Li Hua”。
【亮点词汇】
①one by one一个接一个地
②can't help doing sth.禁不住做某事
【高分句型】
①As she strolled around the bustling market aimlessly,she suddenly came across a game stand.(as引导的时间状语从句)
②How lucky she was!(感叹句)
(一)
(2025·四川成都·一模)假设你是初三学生滕飞,你的英国笔友Peter想知道你从初一到现在发生的一些变化。请你根据图片提示给他回电子邮件,介绍你在外表、性格、学习方式和爱好方面的变化,并谈谈你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
I' m glad to hear from you! Since Grade 7, I've gone through some changes. Physically, I've grown taller and thinner. I used to be quite shy, but now I've become good at socializing. My learning habits have also changed-I used to study alone, but now we study together as a group.
As for hobbies, I used to love drawing, but now I' m more into playing basketball with my friends. It' s great fun and keeps me healthy.I feel really happy about these changes. They' ve made me a better person. How about you? Have you changed much?
Best wishes!
Teng Fei
【解析】
【总体分析】
1题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
2时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”交替使用,用于描述过去的变化和现在的状态;
3提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括外表、性格、学习方式、爱好方面的变化以及感受。考生需围绕这些要点展开,确保不遗漏,并适当添加细节以丰富内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图。开头简要提及收到Peter的来信,并引出话题一一自己从初一到现在发生的变化;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。外表变化;性格变化;学习方式变化;爱好变化;感受第三步,书写结语。表达对Peter的感谢,并期待听到他的变化,同时欢迎他有机会来中国,尤其是自己的家乡看看。
【亮点词】
1go through经历
2physically身体上地
3be good at擅长于
4as for至于
5keep sb.healthy保持某人健康
【高分句型】
1.Since Grade 7,I have gone through some changes.(现在完成时描述过去的经历对现在的影响)
2.They’ve made me a better person.( "make sb.+名词” 句型表示“使某人成为……”)
3. fun and keeps me healthy.(and连接两个并列的谓语,描述打篮球的好处)
(二)
学校英语社团公众号将开设“Growing Pains and Gains” (成长的烦恼与收获)专栏,现向全体同学征稿。专栏希望听到同学们真实动人的成长故事。请结合以下提示,以“The Change That Makes Me Better”为题,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
1. 描述改变:简要介绍你过去和现在在某个方面 (如性格、习惯、技能等) 的具体不同;
2. 讲述故事:分享是哪个关键事件或原因促使你做出了改变?(请描述具体过程);
3. 反思成长:这次改变让你对自己或成长有了什么新的认识?它如何让你成为了一个更好的自己?
要求:
1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
The Change That Makes Me Better
There's no doubt that everyone changes as they grow up. The biggest change for me is that I have become______________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】One possible version:
The Change That Makes Me Better
There's no doubt that everyone changes as they grow up. The biggest change for me is that I have become more responsible and independent.
In the past, I always relied on my parents to remind me to finish my homework or pack my schoolbag. However, things changed after I entered middle school. One day, my mother was sick and couldn't help me as usual. I had to manage my time and tasks by myself. At first, I felt a little worried, but I made a plan and tried to follow it. To my surprise, I not only completed all my homework but also had time to help my mother.
This experience made me understand that responsibility is not just about doing things right, but about taking initiative. Now, I no longer wait for others to tell me what to do. I think this change makes me better because it helps me prepare for the future. I believe that being responsible and independent will allow me to face more challenges in life.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图。引出作者成长变化的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述令作者变得更有责任感和独立的经历;
第三步,书写结语。总结使作者从这次经历中所获得的认识及感悟。
【亮点词汇】
①rely on 依赖
②remind sb. to do sth. 提醒某人做某事
③to one’s surprise 令某人吃惊的是
④not only…but also… 不但……而且……
⑤have time to do sth. 有时间做某事
⑥make sb. do sth. 使某人做某事
⑦help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
⑧prepare for 准备
⑨allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
【高分句型】
①However, things changed after I entered middle school. (after引导时间状语从句)
②This experience made me understand that responsibility is not just about doing things right, but about taking initiative. (含有that的宾语从句)
③I think this change makes me better because it helps me prepare for the future. (省略that的宾语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
(三)
(2025·四川成都一模)你校英文报以“My middle school life”为题向初三同学征稿。过去的两年多初中生活中你有哪些改变和进步,面对新的一年,你有什么样的展望。请根据以下图示投稿。
要求:
1.须全面反映图文信息。内容简洁明了,衔接过渡自然。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及所在学校的名称。
3.词数:80-100词左右。
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【答案】例文
My Middle School Life
In the past two years,I have become taller and stronger,and I have also changed from a student who was not good at speaking to one who is good at speaking.In terms of learning,my grades have greatly improved,especially in English.With the help of my teacher,I am now able to communicate fluently with my classmates.I am also good at playing basketball.
In the upcoming third year of junior high school,I will build good relationships with my classmates,study harder,and continue to exercise.I also want to learn to play a musical instrument to cultivate my interests.In short, during the third year of junior high school,I will master study skills,work harder,and aim to enter a prestigious high school.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍过去两年的变化和提高;
第二步,介绍初三生活的计划和希望;
第三步,表达自己的愿望。
【亮点词汇】
①be good at擅长
②with the help of在……帮助下
③communicate with与……沟通
④want to do sth.想做某事
【高分句型】
①In the past two years,I have become taller and stronger,and I have also changed from a student who was not good at speaking to one who is good at speaking.(并列句;who引导的定语从句)
②With the help of my teacher,I am now able to communicate fluently with my classmates.(With the help of my teacher介词短语)
(四)
初中阶段,每个同学都发生了不小的变化。英语课上,同学们都在谈论自己的变化。请你用英语写一篇短文,从外貌、性格、爱好、学习等方面描述你在初中阶段的变化以及你对这些变化的感受。
注意:
(1) 短文须包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
以下词汇供参考:
Appearance: tall, short, strong, glasses, long/short hair…
Personality: outgoing, shy, active, quiet, brave…
Hobby: be interested in, used to do, now, spend...doing, favorite…
Study: be good at, do well in, work hard, be more hardworking…
(2) 文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(3) 写作词数为80左右,短文标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
Hello, I'm Li Ming. I have changed a lot in the past two years.
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【答案】例文
Some Changes in My Life
Hello,I'm Li Ming.I have changed a lot in the past two years.
In the past,I was short and a little shy with short hair.Now I am taller with glasses.I used to be quiet,but now become more outgoing and active.About hobbies,I was interested in history books,but now I spend more time learning English and reading English stories.For studies,I didn't do well in English before.Now I work harder and I'm good at it.
I feel happy about these changes.They make me grow as a better person.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括外貌、性格、爱好、学习等方面的变化,考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,并适当添加细节,突出变化的主题。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图。通过“I have changed a lot in the past two years”这句话,直接引出要介绍的重点内容,即个人在初中
阶段的变化;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从外貌、爱好和学习几个方面,详细对比了过去的自己和现在的自己,突出了变化;
第三步,书写结语。通过“I feel happy about these changes.They make me grow as a better person.”这两句话,表达了对这
些变化的积极感受,认为这些变化让自己成为了一个更好的人。
【亮点词汇】①used to do过去常常做某事
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③spend...doing花费……做某事
④be good at擅长于
【高分句型】①In the past,I was short and a little shy with short hair.Now I am taller with glasses.(对比过去和现在的外貌特征,突出了外貌上的变化)
②I used to be quiet,but now I become more outgoing and active.(对比过去和现在的性格特点,突出了性格上的变化,使用了转折连词“but”,使句子更加生动有力)
(五)
(2025·浙江台州·三模)为鼓励同学们增强健康意识,校英语报发起“我最喜爱的体育运动”征文活动,请你根据以下三位同学的发言,并结合自己的经历写一篇短文,分享自己最喜欢的一项运动,并谈谈运动对自己的影响。
注意:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Among different kinds of sports, my favourite sport is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let's enjoy the real fun that sports bring!
【答案】例文
Among different kinds of sports, my favorite sport is badminton. Like Tony who values persistence, I train three times a week despite challenges. This sport sharpens my reflexes and builds endurance, just as Lucy described how sports boost energy. When I lost a match last month, I learned to stay calm like Max facing difficulties. Now badminton has taught me that real victory lies in never giving up. It's not just a game—it's a life teacher!
Let's enjoy the real fun that sports bring!
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:记叙文(运动主题征文);
②时态:一般现在时为主,描述经历时使用一般过去时;
③提示:必须包含(1)最喜欢的运动 (2)个人经历 (3)运动影响。
【写作步骤】
第一步:选择一项最喜欢的体育运动;
第二步:描述运动带来的具体经历;
第三步:阐明运动对健康的积极影响(需回应“增强健康意识”主题) 。
【亮点词汇】
① stay calm 保持冷静
② give up 放弃
【高分句型】
①When I lost a match last month, I learned to stay calm like Max facing difficulties. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Now badminton has taught me that real victory lies in never giving up. (that引导的宾语从句)
(六)
(2025·福建泉州·模拟预测)初中三年的校园生活即将结束,相信你有很多的感悟。假设你是李华,应学校英语社团的邀请为学弟学妹们演讲,分享自己的经历。请根据以下图文提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
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【答案】
例文
Hello everyone. I’m Li Hua. My middle school life is coming to an end. In the past three years, I have learnt a lot and overcome many difficulties. One of the most influential things is that I mastered some learning skills, such as what to preview and review and how to use mind maps. During that time, I found my increasing interest in math, too.
Also, I joined our school basketball team and became more active and independent. Though I wasn't good at English at the beginning, I didn't give up and with the help of my teachers. I kept on going. Finally I made much progress.
At this moment, I hope our school will be more beautiful and I hope all of us have a wonderful future.
That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时与一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍自己在学校的情况,包括学习的经历,遇到的困难和活动等;
第二步,表达祝愿。
【亮点词汇】
①overcome克服
②independent独立的
【高分句型】
①Though I wasn't good at English at the beginning, I didn't give up and with the help of my teachers.(让步状语从句)
②At this moment, I hope our school will be more beautiful and I hope all of us have a wonderful future.(宾语从句)
(七)
(2025·江苏盐城·三模)在人生的道路上,我们总会面临诸多选择:我们选择直面挫折,收获破茧成长;我们选择坚持守护,收获万物新生;我们选择理解包容,收获双向温情。校报正在以“The best choice I’ve made”为主题举行征文活动,请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
●The choice you made
●The story about your choice
●The influence of your choice
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数:
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
The Best Choice I've Made
Life is full of choices, big or small. Some are easy, while others require careful thought. Looking back, I find that the best choice I've made is
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【答案】例文
The Best Choice I've Made
Life is full of choices, big or small. Some are easy, while others require careful thought. Looking back, I find that the best choice I've made is joining the school volunteer team last year.
Last term, my classmates and I noticed that the nursing home near our school needed help. Though I was worried about balancing study and volunteer work, I decided to join them. Every Saturday, we visited the elderly, cleaned their rooms, and shared stories with them. Once, an old lady named Grandma Li was ill, and I stayed with her all afternoon, reading her favorite poems. Her smile as I left made me realize how meaningful this was.
This choice has changed me a lot. I have learned to be more patient and responsible. More importantly, I understand that small acts of kindness can bring huge warmth to others. Whenever I see the elderly's happy faces, I'm sure it was the best choice I've ever made.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去式”;
③提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
【写作步骤】
第一步,通过概括性描述引出文章核心——“加入学校志愿者团队”是最佳选择;
第二步,通过具体事例说明这个选择为何重要,突出行动和情感影响;
第三步,阐述这一选择对“我”的个人成长和价值观的改变。
【亮点词汇】
①be full of 充满
②be worried about 担心
【高分句型】
①More importantly, I understand that small acts of kindness can bring huge warmth to others. (宾语从句)
②Though I was worried about balancing study and volunteer work, I decided to join them. (though引导让步状语从句)
(八)
(2025·浙江杭州·三模)成长路上,我们都在努力让自己变得更好。你曾经为提升自己做过一些努力吗?请根据以下征文海报,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获,并谈谈你在这方面的计划。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better.
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【答案】例文
During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better. The most meaningful experience was joining an English speaking competition. Before the competition, I was not confident and was afraid to speak English in front of others. But my teacher encouraged me to challenge myself. So I practised again and again whenever I had time. During the competition, I did quite well and got the first prize. It was the experience that helped me become more confident in learning English. And I also learned that hard work pays off.
For the future, I plan to read more books and join an English club to improve myself. I believe every effort will take me closer to my goals.
【解析】
【总体分析】
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍在提升自我方面的一次经历;
第二步,介绍收获;
第三步,最后谈谈在这方面的计划。
【亮点词汇】
① be afraid to do害怕做
② encourage sb to do鼓励某人做
③ plan to do计划做
【高分句型】
I believe every effort will take me closer to my goals. (省略that的宾语从句)
(九)
(2024·湖北咸宁·二模)学校英语周活动将举行英语演讲比赛。本次演讲比赛的主题是The Person I Want to Thank Most。假如你是李华,将代表你的班级参加比赛,请根据通知要求用英语书写一篇演讲稿。具体通知如下。
要求:
(1)根据英文通知中的要求拟定演讲稿;
(2)词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Dear schoolmates,
It's my pleasure to give a speech here. When it comes to topic-The Person I Want to Thank Most
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That's all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
It's my pleasure to give a speech here. When it comes to the topic—The Person I Want to Thank Most, that must be my English teacher—Mr. Zhang. He is very kind and knowledgeable. He takes good care of everyone.
I still remember that once I fought with my friend, he was not angry with me or shouted at me, instead, he asked me why patiently and taught me how to get on with my friend. With his help, I not only made great progress in English, but I also became a better myself.
I'm very thankful for all that he has done for me. I really want to say "Thank you" to him and I'll try my best to be a good student.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据通知中所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点题,自己最想感谢的人是谁及其性格;
第二步,介绍感谢他/她的原因;
第三步,再次表达感谢并下定决心好好努力学习;
第四步,感谢大家的倾听。
【亮点词汇】
①takes good care of好好照顾
②be angry with生气
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④made great progress取得很大进步
⑤try my best尽我最大的努力
【高分句型】
①I still remember that once I fought with my friend, he was not angry with me or shouted at me, instead, he asked me why patiently and taught me how to get on with my friend.(宾语从句;how+动词不定式)
②I'm very thankful for all that he has done for me. (定语从句)
(十)
梦想点亮未来,奋斗成就人生。一直以来,“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。你梦想中的工作是什么?你为什么拥有这样的梦想?你又将为此如何努力?请在下图中任选一种或自选一种其他工作,以“My dream job”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:(1)内容包括提示中的所有要点,并适当阐述。(2)词数90左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。(3)文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名等信息。
My dream job
I have a dream. When I grow up, I want to be _______________________________________________
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【答案】例文
My dream job
I have a dream. When I grow up, I want to be a teacher.
As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times. Teachers help students get knowledge and make them not only become knowledgeable, but also be a good person. So teachers should be kind, friendly and helpful. In order to be a knowledgeable and skillful teacher, now I must study hard at all my subjects. I must learn a lot. Of course I should be kind to my friends and be polite to my teachers and parents to build up my good personalities.
I believe I can make my dream come true by working hard one day.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的三个问题,选择一种工作进行阐述,可适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图。介绍我的理想工作具体是什么;
第二步,具体阐述理由。从“历史渊源以及榜样影响”等几个方面介绍选择这份梦想工作的理由;
第三步,书写结语。表达为梦想工作而加倍努力的期许。
【亮点词汇】
①as we all know众所周知
②not only...but also不但……而且……
③in order to为了
【高分句型】
①As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times.(as引导非限制性定语从句)
②I believe I can make my dream come true by working hard one day.(省略that的宾语从句)
(十一)
周末偶尔出门爬山总是令人惬意,但小主人公一路上在玩手机,然而……然后发生了什么呢?请根据上述文字,并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。
要求:
1.80—120词;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
worried, disappointed, sad, upset, tired, satisfied...
close to nature: sun, ant, plant, soil, fresh air, breeze (微风) …
help: search for, ask others ...
communication: argue, talk patiently, calm down, understand ...
success: climb, make an effort, feel, achieve...
others: hug, praise, present, party...
natural thing, enjoy, cheer, joy, challenge myself, bright side, enjoy the real life...
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An Unforgettable Hiking Trip
On weekends, going hiking is always relaxing. Last Sunday, a boy went hiking with his parents. However, he was absorbed in his mobile phone all the way.
Suddenly, when he looked up, his parents were out of sight. Panic-stricken, he was worried and sad. He searched everywhere but couldn't find them. Then he asked other hikers for help.
With their assistance, he finally found his worried-looking parents. His parents were relieved and didn't scold him. Instead,they had a patient talk with him. The boy realized his mistake.
Afterwards, he put away his phone and truly enjoyed nature. He felt the warm sun the gentle breeze, and saw beautiful plants.He was satisfied and joyful. From this experience, he learned to put down his phone and embrace real-life beauty.
【解析】
【总体分析】
1题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
2时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
3提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍事件发生的起因一小男孩沉迷于手机和父母走失;
第二步,介绍事件发生的经过一一寻找父母、寻求帮助、最终找到父母;第三步,介绍事件发生的结果一放下手机、欣赏自然美景以及小男孩的感受。
【亮点词汇】
1.be absorbed in全神贯注于
2.out of sight看不见的
3.put away收起
(十二)
青春如歌,校园似画。在成长的年轮里,那些与同窗共度的活动时光,必是镌刻在你记忆深处的璀璨印记——或许是赛场上挥洒的汗水,是舞台上绽放的光芒,是实践中收获的智慧……每一次参与,都是与更好的自己相遇。我校开展了最受欢迎的校园活动调研(结果见下图)。请你简述调查结果,结合自身经历描述一项你最喜欢的学校活动,并谈谈你的收获与感悟。
要求:
1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
参考信息:Broaden horizons (拓展视野)
Build up confidence and team spirit
Interact (互动) with classmates to develop social skills
Knowledge is not only from textbooks but from practice.
My Favorite School Activity
School life is full of exciting activities that bring us joy and growth. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
My Favorite School Activity
School life is full of exciting activities that bring us joy and growth.According to the survey,cultural festivals and sports events are the most vibrant choices.My favorite was the English Drama Festival last year.
Immersed in practicing Shakespeare's play,I overcame stage fright through teamwork.We designed creative costumes and interacted daily to polish performances.When the spotlight finally shone on us,our group won thunderous applause.
This experience built up my confidence and taught me team spirit.I realized true learning happens beyond textbooks—it grows when we dare to practice.The sense of accomplishment still inspires me today.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据图示和要求书写内容,注意不要遗漏图片上的信息,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,描述图表数据;
第二步,叙述个人经历;
第三步,总结收获感悟。
【亮点词汇】
①overcome克服
②be immersed in沉浸于
③accomplishment成就
【高分句型】
When the spotlight finally shone on us,our group won thunderous applause.(when引导的时间状语从句)
(十三)
根据下列五幅图片所示内容,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
(1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
(2)词数在80~100之间。
(3)字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
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例文
I have a wonderful friend named Tom.He is really good-looking and always wears a pair of glasses.
Tom loves studying. He is good at all subjects and always tries out new ideas.Whenever his classmates have trouble with their studies,he is happy to help them.Tom is also extremely helpful in daily life.He's always ready to help others when they are in trouble.One rainy day,he saw a little boy on the road.The boy's bike was broken and he looked worried and helpless.Seeing this he went over and helped fix it.At home,Tom often helps his parents with the housework.He loves sports,especially basketball.
All in all,Tom sets a good example for us,and I am truly lucky to have him as my friend.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点题,介绍人物的外貌;
第二步,根据图示,介绍人物的品质以及事迹等;
第三步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①a pair of一副
②be good at擅长
③in trouble处于困境
④all in all总而言之
【高分句型】
He's always ready to help others when they are in trouble.(when引导时间状语从句)
(十四)
学校英语社团正在开展以“健康达人”为主题的英语演讲活动,假如你是Li Xiang,请以“Better Feelings, Better Lives”为题,写一篇英文演讲稿。词数80-100左右。
注意事项:(1) 参考提示信息,可适当发挥,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。
Dear girls and boys,
I’m Li Xiang. I'm glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is _____________________________________
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That's all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
Dear girls and boys,
I’m Li Xiang. I'm glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Feelings, Better Lives”.
My favorite exercise is cycling. I often ride my bike to school every day, because I think it is helpful and relaxing. And I like drawing, too. It can help me to make friends with others.
I think we should do exercises every day. We can take part in different kinds of activities. By the way, we should have good habits of eating and sleeping, they can build up our body well. When I face problems, I usually share them with my parents or friends, sharing makes my life lighter and easier.
Remember: better feelings cause better lives. I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。【写作步骤】
第一步、承接已给的开头,介绍演讲的主题;
第二步、介绍自己的爱好、习惯以及与人分享的重要性;
第三步、表达希望并书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①make friends交朋友
②take part in参加
③build up建立
【高分句型】
①l often ride my bike to school every day,because I think it is helpful and relaxing.(原因状语从句;宾语从句)
二、个人兴趣——爱好、阅读
(一)
假如你是黄英,你想制作一个英语视频向外国友人介绍你最喜爱的中国传统艺术,请根据以下图示撰写视频文稿。
注意:
1. 请在给出的四种传统艺术中选出其中一种并详细介绍(至少3点);
2. 须全面反映图文信息;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数80左右。
参考词汇:评论区comments 书法calligraphy
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Hello, friends. I know many of you are interested in traditional Chinese art. Today, I want to share my favorite form of traditional Chinese art with you. It is Chinese calligraphy.
Chinese calligraphy has developed over many years and has been widely practiced in China. It can not only show the beauty of Chinese characters, but also express the writer's thoughts. Chinese calligraphy has a great influence on me. When my grandfather practiced it, I was deeply shocked at his great writing.
As a student, I hope more kids at my age can realize the fun of learning calligraphy. As Chinese, I want more foreign friends like you to fall in love with it.
If you like my sharing, please let me know in my comments.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图,点出自己最喜欢的传统艺术形式。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,介绍自己喜欢的原因。
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
【亮点词汇】
①fall in love with爱上……
②favorite最爱的
③widely广泛地
【高分句型】
①It can not only show the beauty of Chinese characters, but also express the writer's thoughts.(并列句)
②If you like my sharing, please let me know in my comments.(条件状语从句)
(二)
(2024九年级·四川成都·期末)请你根据以下图文信息写一篇关于Journey to the West的书评,在下周的英语课上进行分享。
参考词语:true scriptures n. 真经
注意:
1.词数80词左右。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
Hello everyone! Today I want to share my thoughts on the book Journey to the West. It's a wonderful classic.
The main characters are Tang Sanzang, Sun Wukong, Zhu Bajie and Sha Wujing. The book tells the story of their long and difficult journey to get the true scriptures.
I like this book because it's full of imagination and the characters are very interesting. Also, it teaches us to be brave and never give up. I highly recommend it to all of you!
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇关于《西游记》的评论性短文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:分享对《西游记》这本书的看法,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开头向大家打招呼并表明要分享对《西游记》的想法。
第二步,介绍主要人物及故事梗概。
第三步,阐述喜欢这本书的原因,并向大家强烈推荐。
【亮点词汇】
①wonderful精彩的;极好的
②classic经典的;名著
③imagination想象力
④recommend推荐;建议
【高分句型】
①I like this book because it's full of imagination and the characters are very interesting.(because引导原因状语从句)
(三)
(2025·河南平顶山·三模)阅读使人快乐,让人成长。为了鼓励同学们多读书,你校英语社团向同学们发出“爱读书、读好书、善读书”的倡议。请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇短文,谈谈你的阅读收获。
写作要求:
1.内容包含提示中的所有要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4.词数100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
As we all know, reading plays an important part in our lives.
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【答案】例文
As we all know, reading plays an important part in our lives. Books are our best friends. Reading books can increase our knowledge and make us wiser. It can broaden our horizons and we can improve ourselves by reading.
We should read different kinds of books, such as science books,novels, history books and so on. Second, it's important for us to have a proper reading plan. We can read five days a week and one hour a day. Keeping a good reading habit helps us manage our time and have a better understanding of books. Reading in a quiet and comfortable place is also important.
Reading makes a full man! Let's start reading now.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,论述阅读在生活中的重要性以及如何进行阅读。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:阐述阅读的意义、阅读的方法,呼吁人们开始阅读。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开头点明阅读在生活中的重要地位,阐述阅读带来的好处。
第二步,中间提出阅读的具体建议,包括阅读不同种类书籍、制定阅读计划、选择合适阅读地点。
第三步,结尾通过名言呼吁大家开始阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①increase增加;增长
②broaden拓宽;扩大
③horizons视野;眼界
④manage管理;安排
【高分句型】
①Reading books can increase our knowledge and make us wiser.(使用并列谓语结构,简洁明了地表达阅读的双重益处,使句子紧凑有力。)
②Keeping a good reading habit helps us manage our time and have a better understanding of books.(动名词短语作主语,强调阅读习惯的重要性,同时运用并列结构说明阅读习惯带来的好处。)
(四)
假如你校英语报就阅读方式偏好对全校2000名学生进行了调查,你是该报的学生记者。请根据以下提示,以“Which do you like better, e-books or paper books?”为题完成一篇稿件。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,使文章更加充实;
3. 不少于80词。
参考词语: electronic adj. 电子的;device n. 设备
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【答案】One possible version:
Which do you like better, e-books or paper books?
Our school did a survey among 2,000 students on which reading way they like better. Here are the results.
About two-thirds of the students prefer reading paper books, as paper books offer them a real experience of reading. The rest like e-books better because e-books are easy to carry.
As for me, I'm a big fan of traditional paper books. Firstly, we don't have to own an electronic device or worry about its Internet connection. Secondly, compared with reading e-books, reading paper books doesn't tire our eyes easily. In a word, paper books are better than e-books.
【解析】
【总体分析】
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文兼表达观点类短文,主题是“喜欢电子书还是纸质书”。
② 时态:以一般现在时为主,用来陈述调查结果和表达个人看法。
③ 提示:文章需包含三部分——调查结果、他人观点、个人选择及理由。语言应简洁自然,条理清晰。
【写作步骤】
第一步:引出调查背景,说明调查对象与目的。
第二步:介绍调查结果,说明不同学生的偏好及原因。
第三步:表达个人观点并给出三条理由,总结强调个人立场。
【亮点词汇】
① prefer…to… 更喜欢……而不是……
② as for 至于
③ have to 不得不
④ worry about 担心
⑤compared with 与……比较
⑥in a word 总之
【高分句型】
① About two-thirds of the students prefer reading paper books, as paper books offer them a real experience of reading.(as引导原因状语从句)
② Compared with reading e-books, reading paper books doesn't tire our eyes easily.(过去分词结构作状语)
(五)
学校英文报就学生是否应该阅读课外书籍(Extracurricular books)展开讨论。请你根据以下图示向该报投稿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文:
Extracurricular Books or Not
Should we read extracurricular books?Different people have different opinions.
Some support it.First,it improves students' speaking skills Second,it opens students' minds.Third,reading helps students forget worries.But others show their worries.Reading too much extracurricular books may make students'
schoolwork worse.It may also hurt students' eyes.Besides,some books may be bad for young students.
In my opinion,reading extracurricular books in the right way should be encouraged.We can't spend all the time on them and we need to choose books wisely.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容,并适当增加细节。
【写作步骤】
①第一步,表明写作意图,学生们对课外书有不同的看法;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容,支持和不支持看课外书的原因;
③第三步,书写结语,表达自己对课外书的看法。
【亮点词汇】
①be bad for对……有害
②In my opinion在我看来
【高分句型】
①Reading too much extracurricular books may make students' schoolwork worse.(动名词作主语)
(六)
某英文报刊正在开展以“My reading life”为题的征文活动。请根据提示,写一篇英语短文,向该报刊投稿。
注意:
1.先将提示中的空格补充完整,再进行写作,每空一词;
2.包含所有提示要点:
3.适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
4.不少于80词。
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【答案】
(1)habits(2)kinds
例文
My reading life
I enjoy reading very much.I like reading on the phone because I can read wherever I go.I often read for about one hour everyday if there isn't too much homework.I like reading different kinds of books,especially science and history books.These types of books help me understand the world better and make me think more.
Reading can also help me imagine and create new things.It can give me different advice and ideas that I might not have thought of before.So let′s start reading and let it become a habit.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文主要讲述自己的阅读生活,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍自己喜欢阅读以及喜欢在手机上阅读;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢读什么类型的书
第三步,介绍从书中可以学到什么。
【亮点词汇】
①too much太多
②different kinds of不同种类的
③help me understand the world better帮助我更好地了解这个世界
【高分句型】
①I like reading on the phone because I can read wherever I go.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②l often read for about one hour every day if there isn't too much homework.(if引导的条件状语从句)
③It can give me different advice and ideas that I might not have thought of before.(定语从句)
(七)
工作与职业假如你是李华,你准备参与暑期的“职业体验夏令营(Career Experience Summer Camp)”,请你根据下面报名信息表中的内容,写一封申请信。
Career Experience Summer Camp
1. Personal Information
Name: ________
Age: ________
2. Career Field Selection (职业领域选择)
□Teacher □Artist □Doctor □Other: ________
Reason: ________
3. Required Questions
Why do you think dreams are important for teenagers?
__________________________________________________________________________________________
What’s your plan to realize your dream (at least 3 points)?
_________________________________________________________________________________________
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写作要求:1. 文中须包含信息表中的全部内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Hello! I’m Li Hua. I'm 15 years old. I really want to join the "Career Experience Summer Camp". ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope I can go to this fun summer camp.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hello!I'm Li Hua.I'm 15 years old.I really want to join the "Career Experience Summer Camp"Dreams can give us goals in life and make us work harder.With a dream,we can find happiness and become better people.My dream is to become a doctor,because doctors save lives and help people feel better.
To make my dream come true,I will try my best every day.First,I will listen to teachers carefully in the school.Next,I will read books about medicine and watch videos to learn more.Finally,I will keep a healthy lifestyle,like exercising and eating vegetables,because a doctor needs to be strong too.
I know it will not be easy,but I will never give up.I believe my dream can come true if I keep working hard!
I hope I can go to this fun summer camp.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是书信;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息表内容中“提示信息”的要求,适当发挥。[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍姓名、年龄、职业。
第二步:阐述梦想为何对青少年很重要。
第三步:阐述为实现梦想做出的计划。
【亮点词汇】
①give up放弃
②keep doing sth.保持做某事
③come true实现
【高分句型】
①I hope I can go to this fun summer camp.(宾语从句)
②Finally,I will keep a healthy lifestyle,like exercising and eating vegetables,because a doctor needs to be strong too.(Because引导的原因状语从句)
(八)
少年智则国智,少年富则国富;少年强则国强,少年独立则国独立;少年自由则国自由,少年进步则国进步;少年胜于欧洲,则国胜于欧洲;少年雄于地球,则国雄于地球。作为21世纪的青少年,我们应该如何践行去实现我们自己的“中国梦”。假定你校将开展以“For Our Dreams”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。
be healthy
戴口罩、勤洗手、不熬夜
be happy
遇问题、多交流
be hard-working
上课认真听讲、作业按时完成、课后要复习
be responsible (有责任感的)
节约能源、保护环境
注意:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,100词左右;
2. 文章必须包含所给提示,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:wear masks, save energy
For Our Dreams
Hello, everyone! It's a great honor to give a speech here. What should we do to achieve our dreams?
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【答案】例文
For Our Dreams
Hello,everyone!It′s a great honor to give a speech here.What should we do to achieve our dreams?
Firstly,we should be healthy.We should wear masks when going outside and wash hands before meals.We shouldn't stay up late,which is bad for our health and makes us sleepy in class.Secondly,we should be happy.We should learn to find happiness in our daily life.When we meet problems,we should communicate more.Thirdly,we should be hard-working.We should listen to teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time.We should review lessons after class Last but not the least,we should be responsible.We should save energy and protect the environment.For example,we should turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.
Let's play a part in realizing our dreams.Thank you for listening!
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材:这是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,注意不要遗漏,可以适当补充。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开门见山,引出主题(已给出);
第二步,具体介绍如何践行去实现“中国梦”;
第三步,总结(已给出)。
【亮点词汇】
①make us sleepy使我们困倦
②communicate more多沟通
③find happiness发现幸福
【高分句型】
①We shouldn't stay up late,which is bad for our health and makes us sleepy in class.(定语从句)
②For example,we should turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.(when引导时间状语从句)
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注:书面表达的所有主题及题目都是经过2023—2025年中考英语成都真题与模拟试题的真实数据分析,按照成都中考英语真题及模拟题重点考查的主题及考点,组成的符合成都中考英语核心考点的考前模拟训练。
目录
01 考情剖析•命题前瞻 1
02 时空导航•网络构建 2
03 题型通关•靶向突破 3
类型一:应用文(高频) 3
类型二:话题作文(高频) 7
类型三:图表作文 8
类型四:看图作文 10
04优题精选•练能提分 12
01 考情剖析•命题前瞻
维度
内容
新课标教学大纲基本理念
1.坚持素养导向,培养学生适应终身发展和社会发展需要的正确价值观、必备品格和关键能力。
2.以学生为中心,尊重个体差异,激发学习兴趣,培养自主学习能力。
3.构建主题引领的单元整体教学,促进核心素养综合发展。
4.倡导实践取向,通过大量语言实践活动,提升语言运用能力。
5.强化文化意识,增强家国情怀和人类命运共同体意识。
初中课程
三大主题
1.人与自我:聚焦个体发展,包括生活与学习、做人与做事两大主题群。
· 2.人与社会:聚焦社会交往,包括社会服务、人际沟通、文学艺术、历史文化、科学技术等主题群。
· 3.人与自然:聚焦生态环境,包括自然生态、环境保护、灾害防范、宇宙探索等主题群。
书面表达
题型概述
1.书面表达考查学生在特定情境中对英语词汇、句型、语法等基础知识的语言运用的能力。
2.测试学生对材料的分析能力、语言组织能力、表达能力以及想象能力,反映学生的语言能力和思维品质。
命题趋势
1.“立德树人”根本任务:五育并举、中华优秀传统文化、社会主义先进文化、党的领导等;
2.真实情境:素材真实、任务真实(如:书信、电子邮件、演讲稿、自荐信等);
3.时代性:“双减”政策、热点人物、科技创新、绿色环保、天宫课堂等;
4.形式多样:英文提示、思维导图、图画、图表、邮件、海报等新形式。
文体
应用文(如:电子邮件、演讲稿、书信作文);说明文;记叙文;少部分的议论文。
主题
以人与自我和人与社会为主;少部分是人与自然。
话题
1.人与自我:个人情况、个人兴趣、家庭朋友、日常生活、学校及校园生活、计划与愿望、感情与情绪、方法与策略等。
2.人与社会:人际交往、社会服务、文学艺术、历史、文化、节日、科普知识与现代技术、著名人物、通讯与媒体等。
3.人与自然:环境保护、环境污染、航天航空等。
人与自我
的内容
1.个人成长
话题内容:梦想与目标、成长感悟、克服困难、自我挑战、学习新技能。
2.兴趣爱好
话题内容:阅读、运动、音乐、绘画、收藏等爱好;爱好对个人的积极影响。
3.学习生活
话题内容:学习方法、校园生活、考试压力、师生关系、课外阅读。
4.品格塑造
话题内容:诚实、勇敢、坚持、自信、感恩、责任感。
5.健康生活
话题内容:饮食习惯、运动锻炼、作息规律、心理健康、远离不良习惯。
02 时空导航•网络构建
类型一:应用文(高频)
应用文一般包括书信/电子邮件;通知;发言稿;演讲稿;书信;通知等。
例题1 书信
例文话题:爱好、中华文化
考点一 题型破解
(2025·四川成都·二模)在初中音乐课上,同学们聆听或演奏了不同的中国传统乐器,如琵琶 (pipa)、管子 (guanzi)、笛子 (dizi)、箫 (xiao)、高胡 (gaohu)、鼓 (drum)等。假如你叫李华, 请根据下面的思维导图, 写一封信给笔友 Jim,向他介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统乐器或者一首中国民间乐曲。
注意:
1.信件须全面反映思维导图信息,文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2.有适当的开头和结尾,词数80左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I hope you are doing well!In our music class,we′ve been exploring traditional Chinese instruments,and I want to share my favorite one with you—the pipa.It's a four-stringed lute with a pear-shaped body,and its sound is both melodic and expressive.I love it because it can convey different emotions,from gentle melodies to lively rhythms. The pipa has a rich history,dating back over 2,000 years,and is often used in both solo and ensemble performances.I think you would enjoy its unique sound too!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇书信;
②时态:“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增加细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整并突出重点。[写作步骤]
【解题步骤】
第一步,介绍最爱的乐器;
第二步,具体介绍乐器的构成;
第三步,介绍喜爱琵琶的原因及历史;
第四步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②date back追溯到
【高分句型】
①I love it because it can convey different emotions,from gentle melodies to lively rhythms.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②The pipa has a rich history,dating back over 2,000 years,and is often used in both solo and ensemble performances.(使用非谓语结构)
例题2 演讲稿
例文话题:个人经历、校园生活
考点一 题型破解
校园生活如同一片花园,同学们在其中播种、欢笑和收获……这些经历记录了同学们的成长。初中生活即将结束,你校英语社团(Sunny English Express)下周五将举行毕业典礼演讲比赛,请结合海报内容写一篇以 “My ________ School Days” 为题的演讲稿积极参与此活动。
写作要求:
1. 分享你的校园回忆及收获;
2. 表达感恩及对新生活的展望;
3. 不少于80词且不出现个人真实信息。
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【解析】
【答案】例文
My Unforgettable School Days
How time flies!My junior high school life is coming to an end.It's time to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates.I'll never forget my colorful and meaningful school days.
I remember I used to be a shy girl in my first year.My English was really poor.I always hid behind my book and never said anything in class.My teacher encouraged me to read aloud and join in the discussion.With her help,I became more and more outgoing and confident.
I also remember I studied hard but still failed in the math exam sometimes.My desk mate patiently encouraged me to keep trying.Finally I made great progress in math and became a top student.
In the past three years,I have grown up so much.Thanks to my teachers and classmates, I have learned a lot.I'll try my best to be a better person in the future.
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;
③提示:围绕难忘的校园生活展开,讲述具体事例,情感真挚。
【写作步骤】
第一步,用感叹时光飞逝,引出初中生活即将结束,点明主题是难忘的校园生活;
第二步,分别讲述英语老师帮助自己克服害羞,变得自信;同桌鼓励自己学好数学这两件事,展现难忘的校园点滴;
第三步,总结自己的成长,表达对老师和同学的感谢以及对未来的期许。
【亮点词汇】
①used to过去常常
②encourage鼓励
③make progress取得进步
【高分句型】
①I remember l used to be a shy girl in my first year.(宾语从句)
②With her help,I became more and more outgoing and confident.(with引导的伴随状语,简洁说明变化原因)
类型二:话题作文(高频)
例文话题:个人经历、愿望
考点一 题型破解
(2025·四川成都·一模)2025年春节档影片《哪吒2》重磅上映,瞬间点燃了观众们的热情。这部电影的主题深刻而富有内涵,它不仅仅是一个关于神话英雄的故事,更是一部关于成长、梦想和命运的励志之作。影片告诉我们无论面对多大的困难和挑战,只要我们勇敢地追求自己的梦想,坚定地相信自己,就一定能够战胜命运,书写属于自己的精彩人生。请你结合提示和自身实际,以“Fighting for Dreams”为题写一篇短文。
提示内容:
1.What is your dream?
2.Why do you dream for that?
3.How will you realize your dream?
要求:
1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范:
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数;不少于80(标题和开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解析】
【答案】例文
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream.My dream is to become a writer.I love reading story books.Every time I read,I feel like I am in a new world.This makes me want to write my own stories and bring joy to other kids.
To make my dream come true,I read lots of books.After that,I try to write little stories.I share my stories with my friends and listen to their ideas.
When I feel like giving up,I will think of Ne Zha.If I keep trying,I can be a good writer one day!
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章围绕自己的梦想展开,包含梦想是什么、产生梦想的原因、为实现梦想所做的努力以及在遇到困难时的激励方式等要点,适当添加个人感受和想法等细节,突出为梦想奋斗的内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点明主题,指出每个人都有梦想,自己的梦想是成为一名作家,详细阐述梦想产生的原因,即热爱读故事书,每次阅读都感觉进入
新世界,从而想自己写故事给其他孩子带来快乐;
第二步,说明为实现梦想所采取的行动,如读很多书、尝试写小故事、与朋友分享并听取意见;
第三步,通过在想放弃时会想到哪吒,激励自己坚持下去,相信只要不断努力,总有一天能成为优秀的作家,表达为梦想奋斗的决心。
【亮点词汇】
①come true实现
②feel like感觉好像
③share...with...与……分享……
【高分句型】
①Every time I read,I feel like I am in a new world.(时间状语从句)
②If I keep trying,I can be a good writer one day!(条件状语从句)
类型三:图表作文
例文话题:阅读、方法/策略
考点一 题型破解
例题 阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力,无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式,它都能让你增长知识,开阔眼界。最近,某出版社在两万人中,针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文:第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80;
2. 首句已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
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【解析】
【答案】例文
Recently,a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading.Here is what we have learned from it.
60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers,while only 38.4%choose to read paper books.So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.However,whatever way of reading we choose,it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.
As for me,I am still used to reading paper books.Whenever I open a paper book,the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid.Just because of this,I got into the habit of reading So when I read paper books now,they always bring me the old feelings.On the other hand,compared with the electronic devices,reading paper books is good for eyes.So you see,I believe e-books won't take the place of paper books in my heart.
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生要注意要点,从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式”来谈谈这种阅读方式的好处,这是本篇写作的重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,简要说明图表内容;
第二步,从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
第三步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①more and more越来越多
②increase增长
③as for关于,至于
④remind sb.of使某人想起……
⑤compared with与……相比较
【高分句型】
①So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.(prefer to do sth.rather than do sth.宁愿做某事而不愿做某事)
②whatever way of reading we choose,it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.(whatever引导的让步状语从句)
类型四:看图作文
例文话题:个人经历、叙事忆旧
考点一 题型破解
例题Last Friday, Li Hua went to the night market of Laixi. Look at the pictures and write a story on the topic Lucky Li Hua.
(上周五,李华去了莱西夜市。请根据图片提示,以《幸运的李华》为题写一篇短文。)
写作提示及要求:
①下列词汇你在写作的过程中可能会使用到:dart n.飞镖,teddy bear n.玩具熊,game stand游戏摊位;
②关注图片传递的信息与图片之间的关联,适当增加对话或内心独白;
③写作内容中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Lucky Li Hua
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【解析】
【答案】例文
Lucky Li Hua
Last Friday,Li Hua went to the night market of Laixi,where she had a special experience.
As she strolled around the bustling market aimlessly,she suddenly came across a game stand.The stand offered a dart-throwing game,and the grand prize was a lovely teddy bear.Instantly drawn to the fluffy toy,Li Hua couldn't resist giving thee game a try and paid ten yuan for a chance.
Li Hua held the darts firmly and looked at the target carefully.Then she threw the darts one by one.Because the game wasn't too hard for her,she hit the target dead-center with all three darts.The people watching couldn't help crying out in surprise,and the owner of the game stand looked really shocked.Li Hua had won the teddy bear!
Hugging the teddy bear tightly,Li Hua made her way home with a big smile on her face.How lucky she was!
考点二 解题要点
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括图片和文字提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍了故事发生的时间、地点,并点明李华在那里有一段特殊的经历,引起读者的兴趣,为下文具体描述这段经历做铺垫;
第二步,交代故事的起因:偶遇一个飞镖游戏摊位,大奖是一只可爱的泰迪熊,李华被这只毛绒玩具吸引,忍不住花钱尝试玩这个游戏;
第三步,详细描写了李华玩飞镖游戏的过程;
第四步,介绍故事的结尾,展现了李华的喜悦之情,也呼应了文章的标题“Lucky Li Hua”。
【亮点词汇】
①one by one一个接一个地
②can't help doing sth.禁不住做某事
【高分句型】
①As she strolled around the bustling market aimlessly,she suddenly came across a game stand.(as引导的时间状语从句)
②How lucky she was!(感叹句)
(一)
(2025·四川成都·一模)假设你是初三学生滕飞,你的英国笔友Peter想知道你从初一到现在发生的一些变化。请你根据图片提示给他回电子邮件,介绍你在外表、性格、学习方式和爱好方面的变化,并谈谈你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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(二)
学校英语社团公众号将开设“Growing Pains and Gains” (成长的烦恼与收获)专栏,现向全体同学征稿。专栏希望听到同学们真实动人的成长故事。请结合以下提示,以“The Change That Makes Me Better”为题,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
1. 描述改变:简要介绍你过去和现在在某个方面 (如性格、习惯、技能等) 的具体不同;
2. 讲述故事:分享是哪个关键事件或原因促使你做出了改变?(请描述具体过程);
3. 反思成长:这次改变让你对自己或成长有了什么新的认识?它如何让你成了一个更好的自己?
要求:
1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
The Change That Makes Me Better
There's no doubt that everyone changes as they grow up. The biggest change for me is that I have become______________________________________________________________________________________
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(三)
(2025·四川成都一模)你校英文报以“My middle school life”为题向初三同学征稿。过去的两年多初中生活中你有哪些改变和进步,面对新的一年,你有什么样的展望。请根据以下图示投稿。
要求:
1.须全面反映图文信息。内容简洁明了,衔接过渡自然。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及所在学校的名称。
3.词数:80-100词左右。
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(四)
初中阶段,每个同学都发生了不小的变化。英语课上,同学们都在谈论自己的变化。请你用英语写一篇短文,从外貌、性格、爱好、学习等方面描述你在初中阶段的变化以及你对这些变化的感受。
注意:
(1) 短文须包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
以下词汇供参考:
Appearance: tall, short, strong, glasses, long/short hair…
Personality: outgoing, shy, active, quiet, brave…
Hobby: be interested in, used to do, now, spend...doing, favorite…
Study: be good at, do well in, work hard, be more hardworking…
(2) 文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(3) 写作词数为80左右,短文标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
Hello, I'm Li Ming. I have changed a lot in the past two years.
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(五)
(2025·浙江台州·三模)为鼓励同学们增强健康意识,校英语报发起“我最喜爱的体育运动”征文活动,请你根据以下三位同学的发言,并结合自己的经历写一篇短文,分享自己最喜欢的一项运动,并谈谈运动对自己的影响。
注意:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Among different kinds of sports, my favourite sport is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let's enjoy the real fun that sports bring!
(六)
(2025·福建泉州·模拟预测)初中三年的校园生活即将结束,相信你有很多的感悟。假设你是李华,应学校英语社团的邀请为学弟学妹们演讲,分享自己的经历。请根据以下图文提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
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(七)
(2025·江苏盐城·三模)在人生的道路上,我们总会面临诸多选择:我们选择直面挫折,收获破茧成长;我们选择坚持守护,收获万物新生;我们选择理解包容,收获双向温情。校报正在以“The best choice I’ve made”为主题举行征文活动,请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
●The choice you made
●The story about your choice
●The influence of your choice
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数:
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
The Best Choice I've Made
Life is full of choices, big or small. Some are easy, while others require careful thought. Looking back, I find that the best choice I've made is
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(八)
(2025·浙江杭州·三模)成长路上,我们都在努力让自己变得更好。你曾经为提升自己做过一些努力吗?请根据以下征文海报,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获,并谈谈你在这方面的计划。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better.
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(九)
(2024·湖北咸宁·二模)学校英语周活动将举行英语演讲比赛。本次演讲比赛的主题是The Person I Want to Thank Most。假如你是李华,将代表你的班级参加比赛,请根据通知要求用英语书写一篇演讲稿。具体通知如下。
要求:
(1)根据英文通知中的要求拟定演讲稿;
(2)词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Dear schoolmates,
It's my pleasure to give a speech here. When it comes to topic-The Person I Want to Thank Most
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That's all. Thanks for listening.
(十)
梦想点亮未来,奋斗成就人生。一直以来,“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。你梦想中的工作是什么?你为什么拥有这样的梦想?你又将为此如何努力?请在下图中任选一种或自选一种其他工作,以“My dream job”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:(1)内容包括提示中的所有要点,并适当阐述。(2)词数90左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。(3)文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名等信息。
My dream job
I have a dream. When I grow up, I want to be _______________________________________________
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(十一)
周末偶尔出门爬山总是令人惬意,但小主人公一路上在玩手机,然而……然后发生了什么呢?请根据上述文字,并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。
要求:
1.80—120词;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
worried, disappointed, sad, upset, tired, satisfied...
close to nature: sun, ant, plant, soil, fresh air, breeze (微风) …
help: search for, ask others ...
communication: argue, talk patiently, calm down, understand ...
success: climb, make an effort, feel, achieve...
others: hug, praise, present, party...
natural thing, enjoy, cheer, joy, challenge myself, bright side, enjoy the real life...
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(十二)
青春如歌,校园似画。在成长的年轮里,那些与同窗共度的活动时光,必是镌刻在你记忆深处的璀璨印记——或许是赛场上挥洒的汗水,是舞台上绽放的光芒,也是实践中收获的智慧……每一次参与,都是与更好的自己相遇。我校开展了最受欢迎的校园活动调研(结果见下图)。请你简述调查结果,结合自身经历描述一项你最喜欢的学校活动,并谈谈你的收获与感悟。
要求:
1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
参考信息:Broaden horizons (拓展视野)
Build up confidence and team spirit
Interact (互动) with classmates to develop social skills
Knowledge is not only from textbooks but from practice.
My Favorite School Activity
School life is full of exciting activities that bring us joy and growth. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(十三)
根据下列五幅图片所示内容,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
(1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
(2)词数在80~100之间。
(3)字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
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(十四)
学校英语社团正在开展以“健康达人”为主题的英语演讲活动,假如你是Li Xiang,请以“Better Feelings, Better Lives”为题,写一篇英文演讲稿。词数80-100左右。
注意事项:(1) 参考提示信息,可适当发挥,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。
Dear girls and boys,
I’m Li Xiang. I'm glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is _____________________________________
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That's all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
二、个人兴趣——爱好、阅读
(一)
假如你是黄英,你想制作一个英语视频向外国友人介绍你最喜爱的中国传统艺术,请根据以下图示撰写视频文稿。
注意:
1. 请在给出的四种传统艺术中选出其中一种并详细介绍(至少3点);
2. 须全面反映图文信息;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数80左右。
参考词汇:评论区comments 书法calligraphy
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(二)
(2024九年级·四川成都·期末)请你根据以下图文信息写一篇关于Journey to the West的书评,在下周的英语课上进行分享。
参考词语:true scriptures n. 真经
注意:
1.词数80词左右。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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(三)
(2025·河南平顶山·三模)阅读使人快乐,让人成长。为了鼓励同学们多读书,你校英语社团向同学们发出“爱读书、读好书、善读书”的倡议。请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇短文,谈谈你的阅读收获。
写作要求:
1.内容包含提示中的所有要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4.词数100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
As we all know, reading plays an important part in our lives.
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(四)
假如你校英语报就阅读方式偏好对全校2000名学生进行了调查,你是该报的学生记者。请根据以下提示,以“Which do you like better, e-books or paper books?”为题完成一篇稿件。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,使文章更加充实;
3. 不少于80词。
参考词语: electronic adj. 电子的;device n. 设备
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(五)
学校英文报就学生是否应该阅读课外书籍(Extracurricular books)展开讨论。请你根据以下图示向该报投稿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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(六)
某英文报刊正在开展以“My reading life”为题的征文活动。请根据提示,写一篇英语短文,向该报刊投稿。
注意:
1.先将提示中的空格补充完整,再进行写作,每空一词;
2.包含所有提示要点:
3.适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
4.不少于80词。
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(七)
工作与职业假如你是李华,你准备参与暑期的“职业体验夏令营(Career Experience Summer Camp)”,请你根据下面报名信息表中的内容,写一封申请信。
Career Experience Summer Camp
1. Personal Information
Name: ________
Age: ________
2. Career Field Selection (职业领域选择)
□Teacher □Artist □Doctor □Other: ________
Reason: ________
3. Required Questions
Why do you think dreams are important for teenagers?
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What’s your plan to realize your dream (at least 3 points)?
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写作要求:1. 文中须包含信息表中的全部内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Hello! I’m Li Hua. I'm 15 years old. I really want to join the "Career Experience Summer Camp". ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope I can go to this fun summer camp.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
少年智则国智,少年富则国富;少年强则国强,少年独立则国独立;少年自由则国自由,少年进步则国进步;少年胜于欧洲,则国胜于欧洲;少年雄于地球,则国雄于地球。作为21世纪的青少年,我们应该如何践行去实现我们自己的“中国梦”。假定你校将开展以“For Our Dreams”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。
be healthy
戴口罩、勤洗手、不熬夜
be happy
遇问题、多交流
be hard-working
上课认真听讲、作业按时完成、课后要复习
be responsible (有责任感的)
节约能源、保护环境
注意:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,100词左右;
2. 文章必须包含所给提示,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:wear masks, save energy
For Our Dreams
Hello, everyone! It's a great honor to give a speech here. What should we do to achieve our dreams?
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