话题 16 介绍自己喜欢的名人及其主要事迹-2025-2026学年九年级英语写作范文集合（仁爱版）

初三仁爱版 【写作专版】 B版写作范文集合 写作专版 【B版范文集合】介绍自己喜欢的名人及其 主要事迹 写作范文集合·仁爱版初三 范文赏析 【范文一】My Favorite Celebrity My Favorite Celebrity Among all the celebrities,I admire Marie Curie most.She was a great Polish-French scientist born in 1867. Curie is famous for her research on radioactivity.Together with her husband Pierre,she discovered two new elements:polonium and radium.Her work laid the foundation for modern nuclear science and medicine. What impressesmemost isher perseverance.Despite facing gender discrimination and financial difficulties, she never gave up her studies.She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win Nobel Prizes in two different sciences-Physics and Chemistry.Her spirit of curiosity and dedication to science inspires me to work hard in my studies. 【范文二】The Celebrity I Admire The Celebrity I Admire My favorite celebrity is Nelson Mandela,a respected leader and fighter for justice.Born in South Africa in 1918,Mandela spent most of his life fighting against apartheid,a system of racial segregation.He was imprisoned for 27 years for his beliefs but remained determined to achieve equality. In 1994,Mandela became South Africa's first black president,uniting the country and promoting recon- ciliation.He once said,"Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world." His courage,forgiveness,and commitment to peace make him a true hero.Mandela teaches us that even in the darkest times,hope and perseverance can bring about positive change. 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 1 初三仁爱版 【写作专版】 B版写作范文集合 人物背景类： Among all the celebrities,I admire...most/Born in...in.../...is famous for... 成就描述类： discovered.../laid the foundation for.../became...'s first... 品质评价类： What impresses me most is.../Despite facing...,...never gave up.../...teaches us that... 引用名言类： He/She once said,”.” 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇名人介绍（100词左右)： 提示：选择一位你敬佩的名人（科学家/艺术家/运动员等），介绍其出生背景、主要成就和值得学习 的品质。 仿写框架参考： My favorite celebrity is He/She was born in in He/She is famous for The most important achievement is What I admire most is He/She once said,” ”This teaches us that 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：She is born in 1867.→正确：She was born in1867.(过去事件) 错误：He become president in 1994.→正确：He became president in1994, 冠词缺失： 错误：She wasfirst woman to win Nobel Prize.→正确：the first woman/a Nobel Prize 搭配错误： 错误：fight with apartheid→正确：fight against apartheid 核心写作要点 2 初三仁爱版 【写作专版】 B版写作范文集合 结构清晰：开头（名人身份+背景）→中间（主要成就+具体事例）→结尾（个人感悟+名 言引用) 信息完整：必写：出生背景、主要成就、敬佩原因：选写：名言引用、社会影响 时态准确：历史事件用一般过去时，永恒真理现存影响用一般现在时 亮点句型：使用What impresses me most is..等模板句型提升文采 文化意识：正确拼写名人姓名(Marie Curie非Mary Curie),准确使用头衔(President Mandela)