专项09 书面表达（专项训练）六年级英语寒假专项提升（译林版三起）

专题09 书面表达 01 答题技巧 02 知识精练 答题技巧 书面表达不用怕，“审、列、写、查” 四步走，轻松写出满分小作文！ 1. 审题 “抓三要素”，别跑题 拿到题目先盯紧 3 个关键点，确保不跑偏： 主题：是写人（My friend）、记事（A happy day）、写景（My school）还是写物（My pet）？ 要求：题目有没有规定要写的内容？比如 “写你的周末，至少 3 句话”“要提到时间和活动”，这些要求一定要满足！ 格式：是书信（有 Dear、落款）还是普通短文？书信要记得开头称呼、结尾祝福语和署名。 2. 列 “小提纲”，搭骨架 别上来就写！花 1 分钟列个简单提纲，作文结构超清晰： 开头：一句话点明主题（比如写周末→ Last Sunday, I had a great time.） 中间：写 2-3 个关键内容（比如做了什么：I went to the park. I flew a kite with my sister.） 结尾：一句话总结感受（比如 It was a wonderful day!）也可以用关键词法列提纲：比如写 My hobby → 关键词：reading, every evening, storybooks, happy 3. 动笔 “用熟句”，不犯错 写作时记住 “宁简勿难”，用自己会的句子才靠谱： 多用 “拿手句型”：别瞎写复杂句子！用学过的简单句，比如 主谓宾：I like playing football. There be：There is a big tree in my garden. 时间句：I get up at 7 o’clock every morning. 加 “连接词” 让句子变流畅：用 and, but, then, first, next 这些词串句子，作文更有条理。例：First, I did my homework. Then, I watched TV with my family. 写 “真实内容”：别编自己没学过的词！比如想写 “我很开心”，就用 I was very happy. 别硬凑复杂表达。 4. 检查 “挑小错”，补满分 写完一定要花 2 分钟检查，揪出这些 “小马虎” 错误： 单词拼写：看有没有漏字母、拼错词（比如把 happy 写成 happpy）。 语法：主谓一致吗？（He plays football，不是 He play）；时态对吗？（写过去的事用过去式，比如 went, played）。 标点和大小写：句首字母要大写，句末要加 . ! ? ；人名、地名首字母也要大写（比如 Beijing, Tom）。 字数：看有没有达到题目要求的字数，不够的话可以加一句简单的话补充。 小妙招：背 “万能句子”，应急用 平时记几个万能开头和结尾，考试直接用： 开头万能句： My favourite... is... （我最喜欢的…… 是……） Let me tell you about... （让我来告诉你关于……） 结尾万能句： I love it very much! （我非常喜欢它！） What a nice...! （多么美好的…… 啊！） 小试牛刀 一、书面表达 1．书面表达。 假如你是Mike，你用表格记录了这周末全家的主要活动，现在准备写一篇短文，详细描述一下这个周末： When Who What Sat. Mum and I visit my grandparents... my dad do housework... Sun. my parents play with our cat Mimi and go shopping... I do my homework... 要求：（1）补全标题，写作内容包含表格中的所有信息，并展开合理想象； （2）条理清晰，语句通顺，时态正确，词数不少于60； （3）请保持卷面整洁、书写规范、字迹清楚。 What a ______ weekend I am Mike_________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 2．写话。 同学们，中国最重要的节日农历新年就要到来了，以前你是怎样度过的？今年你又有什么样的计划呢？请介绍一下吧，所写内容覆盖问题和图片信息。(不少于5句) * What holiday is it? * What did you do last Chinese New Year? * What are you going to do this year? My Chinese New Year Last year, I ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m going to __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．书面表达。 上个周末一定是个愉快的时光吧？请以“Last weekend”为题写一篇短文，介绍你都做了哪些有趣的事情。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，不少于5句话。 提示：do my homework, watch a film, watch TV, go to the park… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．书面表达。 科技的发展使人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化，以前人们的生活(获取信息、购物、联系方式等)是怎样的？如今，人们的生活又有了哪些变化？请你以“Changes (改变) in our life”为题，写一篇短文。 要求：（1） 时态准确，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。 （2）所写内容需包含上述两个问题，可展开想象和适当拓展。 （3）不少于5句话。 参考词汇：listened to the radio, read newspapers, used… to call people, do shopping on the Internet… Changes in our life There are a lot of changes in our life. In the past, ___________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now, _______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．书面表达。 上周六，天气晴朗，Peter和家人一起去了农场，他们学习了挤牛奶(milk cows)，采摘、品尝(taste)了水果，他们还做了许多其他的事情。请你帮助Peter将这快乐的一天记录下来吧。 要求：（1）题目自拟。 （2）使用第一人称。 （3）记录内容要包含所有文字信息和图片信息，可适当加上自己的想象和拓展。 （4）时态准确，语句通顺，表达合理，不少于60词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．书面表达。 Yang Ling一家国庆节去北京旅游，回家后，Yang Ling将出行经历做成了信息卡，想分享给其他旅行爱好者。请根据她的信息，写一篇旅行日志。 A wonderful day in Beijing Family parents Place the Great Wall, Tian’anmen Square, Palace Museum, ... Food Beijing roast duck, Beijing Douzhi (豆汁儿), ... Things ... Feelings interesting, funny, happy 提示：至少7句话(已给的不计入总句数)，书写规范，语句通顺，意思连贯，信息基本完整。 Thursday, 25th July Today was a happy day. I went to many interesting places in Beijing with my parents. First, we went to ____________________________. We _____________________________. Then, we____________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________        I enjoyed my day. I think Beijing is a great place for all of you. It’s the capital city of our country. I hope I can go there again. 7．书面表达 以“Then and now”为主题，介绍一下现在的生活和过去的生活的对比，你可以从这四个方面比较，也可以选择其他的方面进行比较，要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，时态正确，书写规范, 不少于50个词。 提示词：read newspapers, write e-mails, buy things from shops, read e-books, by car, …        Things changed(改变) a lot these years.___________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 8．书面表达。 下图是同学们为保护地球而制作的海报，请为海报附加文字内容。 要求：（1）内容要点齐全，适当补充一些内容；（2）句子通顺，语法正确；（3）词数 60左右。 The Earth is our home. ___________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________Let’s protect our Earth together. 参考答案与解析 一、1．范文： What a busy weekend I am Mike. My family had a busy weekend. On Saturday, my mum and I visited my grandparents. We had lunch together. My dad did housework at home. He cleaned the rooms and washed the clothes. On Sunday, my parents played with our cat Mimi and went shopping. They bought some flowers. I was at home and did my homework. What a busy weekend! 【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求以“What a ______ weekend”为题，用第一人称介绍周末活动。阐述家人的周末活动。注意文章为一般过去时并要符合单词数量要求。 （2）参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：busy忙碌的，visited看望，cleaned打扫，bought买 参考句型：We had…；He cleaned…；They bought… 2．                                                   My Chinese New Year Last year, I had a big family dinner with my grandparents and parents. After dinner, we watched the Spring Festival Gala and my parents gave me red packets. I felt so happy that night.   This year,  I am going to  help my mom clean the house and stick red couplets on the door. On Chinese New Year’s Day, we are going to get up early in the morning. We are going to set off firecrackers. We are going to cook delicious food. We are going to have a big family dinner. In the evening, we are going to watch Spring Festival Gala. On the second day of Chinese New Year, we are going to visit our relatives and friends. 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求分享一下你去年的春节是如何度过的，以及今年春节的计划，所写内容覆盖问题和图片信息。人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时和一般将来时，同时注意句子数量的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：important重要的，red packets红包，stick red couplets贴红对联，set off firecrackers放鞭炮，relatives亲戚 参考句型：I had…，we watched…，I am going to…，We are going to… 3．范文：                                                                    Last weekend Last weekend, I was busy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework. On Saturday afternoon, I watched a film with my parents. On Sunday morning, I went to the park with my friend. We played football. On Sunday evening, I watched TV. 【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求以“Last weekend”为题写一篇短文。然后再阐述周六和周日做的事情。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。 （2）参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：busy忙碌的，do my homework做作业，watch a film看电影，go to the park去公园，play football踢足球，watch TV看电视 参考句型：Last weekend, I was …；On … I … 4．范文：                                                             Changes in our life There are a lot of changes in our life. In the past, people used the telephone at home and in the office to call people. People listened to the radio and read newspapers for news. People bought things from shops. Now, people do shopping on the Internet. People can read and watch news on the Internet too. 【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求以“Changes (改变) in our life”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述过去和现在的生活。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。 （2）参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：listened to the radio听收音机，read newspapers读报纸，used… to call people用……给人们打电话，do shopping on the Internet网上购物 参考句型：People … 5．范文： A Happy Saturday on the Farm Last Saturday, the weather was sunny. I went to the farm with my family. When we got there, a kind farmer showed us how to milk cows. It was interesting but a little difficult at first. After that, we picked fruits. There were many apples and pears. I picked a big apple and tasted it immediately—it was so sweet! In the afternoon, we helped the farmer feed the chickens and ducks. We also took a lot of photos with the lovely animals. We went home happily in the evening. It was a wonderful day, and I hope to go to the farm again soon. 【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求写皮特一家人在农场上度过的快乐的一天，人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时，同时注意单词数量的要求。 （2）参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：milk cows挤牛奶，pick采摘，taste品尝，feed喂 参考句型：Last Saturday, the weather was…；I went to…；It was…；I…；We… 6．范文： Thursday, 25th July     Today was a happy day. I went to many interesting places in Beijing with my parents. First, we went to the Great Wall. We took many photos and walked on the old stones. Then, we visited Tian’anmen Square and saw the big national flag. After that, we went to the Palace Museum. We saw many old things there. At lunch, we ate Beijing roast duck. It was delicious! For dinner, we tried Beijing Douzhi. It was funny because it tasted special. I felt very happy and excited all day. I enjoyed my day. I think Beijing is a great place for all of you. It’s the capital city of our country. I hope I can go there again. 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求根据信息卡，写一篇旅行日志，介绍杨玲一家国庆节在北京的旅行。时态是一般过去时，人称是第一人称，同时注意词数的要求。 参考词汇和句型 参考词汇：parents 父母，the Great Wall 长城，Tian’anmen Square天安门广场，Palace Museum 故宫，Beijing roast duck 北京烤鸭，Beijing Douzhi 北京豆汁儿，interesting 有趣的，funny滑稽的，happy 开心的 参考句型：We went to...；We did...；I felt... 7．例文： Things changed (改变) a lot these years. In the past, people used to read newspapers for news, but now we can read e-books and news online. For communication, people used to write letters, but now we send emails or use instant messaging. When it comes to shopping, people went to stores to buy things, while now we can shop online and get things delivered to our home. Transportation has also improved, Many years ago, people mostly traveled by bicycle or bus, but now many travel by car or even by high-speed train. Life has become faster and more convenient. 【详解】（1）题干解读：本题要求以“Then and now”为主题，对比过去和现在的生活。可以选择出行、购物、学习、娱乐等方面进行比较，时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。同时要符合字数要求。 （2）参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：transportation 出行，learning 学习，entertainment 娱乐，shopping 购物，read newspapers 读报纸，write e-mails 写电子邮件，buy things from shops 从商店购买物品，read e-books 阅读电子书，by car 乘车，the Internet 互联网 参考句型：People used to... but now they...；Transportation has changed from... to...；Transportation has...； Life has... 8．范文： The Earth is our home. We can do a lot of things to protect our Earth. We should reuse and save water. We shouldn’t litter. We should put the rubbish in the bin. We shouldn’t drive too much. We should save energy. We can plant more trees to keep the air clean. Don’t throw useful things. We can reuse and recycle them. Let’s protect our Earth together. 【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求根据海报为海报附加文字内容，可用第一人称描述，时态用一般现在时，主要描述在保护地球中哪些是该做，哪些是不该做的，内容要齐全并可适当补充，注意条理清晰，语法正确，书写规范并符合题干要求的字数。 （2）参考词汇和句型： 参考单词和短语：protect保护，reuse重复使用，save water节约用水，litter乱扔(垃圾)，rubbish垃圾，save energy节能，plant种植，recycle再利用 参考句型：We can…；We should…；We shouldn’t…； Don’t… 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $