Unit 1 课时6 Section B 3a-3c 写作课（大单元课时课件）英语新教材人教版八年级下册

Unit 1 Unit 1 Unit 1 Time to Relax Time to Relax Time to Relax Section B 2a ~ 2c Vocabulary 人教版（新教材） 1 2 3 Learning Aims 学习目标 • 能够通过阅读Shuyin的论坛帖子，提取关于她的爱好（骑马）的关键信息（内容、起因、时间、地点、原因、感受），并完成思维导图。 • 能够识别并概括范文“总起介绍-过去经历-现在情况-喜爱原因-情感升华”的基本写作框架。 学习理解 • 能够模仿范文的写作框架，使用思维导图（3b）工具，系统规划自己关于最爱好的写作内容（What, When, Where, Why, How）。 •在撰写回帖（3c）时，能够准确、恰当地运用课件所归纳的功能句型（如表达开始、原因、感受的句子）来组织语言，完成一篇结构完整、要点清晰的短文。 应用实践 • 能够超越模板，在写作中融入个性化的细节与真实感受（如使用一个生动的比喻、一个具体的故事瞬间），并自信地向全班分享自己的作品。 • 能理解“论坛回帖”的交际目的，树立“写作是为与他人交流分享”的意识，而不仅仅是完成作业。 迁移创新 Contents 目 录 1. Lead in 2. Read and learn 3. mind-map of writing 4. Writing 5. check and evaluate 6. Assignment Part 1 Lead-in — The Hobby Forum https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 1. Do you know a forum about students’ free-time activities? Let’s read some posts on the forum. https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 2. Read one of the posts on the forum. What is your favourite free-time activities? Hi, everyone! I’d like to take up a new free-time activity, and I’m hoping to get some ideas. What do you do? Why do you like it? Please tell me more! Jason UK Jason needs our help! If you were a member of this forum, what would you tell him? Part 2 Reading for Structure — Decode Shuyin’s Post https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 3. Read Shuyin’s post (another post)and learn Shuyin’s favourite activity. Reading https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 4. Read Shuyin’s post again and complete the mind map. Reading Shuyin horse riding WHEN does she do it now? WHERE does she do it now? WHY does she like it? HOW did it start? Her grandfather took her to ride a horse when she was six. Every weekend at her grandfather’s farm • She enjoys being in nature. • Horse riding helps her stay fit. • She can spend time with her best friends Nini. WHAT does she like to do? Horse riding https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 5. Read Shuyin’s post again and learn how to write a post. Reading Shuyin horse riding start past now reason feeling https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 6. Read Shuyin’s post again and learn how to write a post. Reading Shuyin horse riding start past reason feeling 情感升华 • My favourite... is... • I started when... /It was... when... • I like it because... / It lets me... / I enjoy... when... • It makes me... / I find it fun to... / I’m lucky to... • Hobby is...(A Mirror | A Bridge | A Seed) Part 3 From Map to Writing — Build Your Own Framework https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 7. Conclude the structure and useful expressions from Shuyin’s post. Reading start past reason feeling 情感升华 • My favourite... is... • I started when... /It was... when... • I like it because... / It lets me... / I enjoy... when... • It makes me... / I find it fun to... / I’m lucky to... • Hobby is...(A Mirror | A Bridge | A Seed) What’s her favourite free-time activities? When did she start the activity? Why does she like to do it? How does the hobby mean for you? https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 8. Try to think how to build your own mind map about your hobby. Reading Pre-writing Your Hobby WHAT is your hobby? WHEN did it start? WHY do you like it? How does the hobby for you? WHERE do you do it? https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Pre-writing Your Hobby WHAT is your hobby? WHEN did it start? WHY do you like it? How does the hobby for you? WHERE do you do it? 9. Work on 3b. Create a similar mind map for your own favourite activity. https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 10. Let’s pay attention to the useful expressions we can use. Reading Pre-writing WHAT is your hobby? WHEN did it start? WHY do you like it? • My hobby is... • I love/enjoy... • I’m interested in... • I like to... • I like + V-ing... • I often spend time... • I started it... ago. • I began when I was... • It all started in... • I got into it... • I’ve been doing it since... • It makes me feel... • It helps me to... • I like it because... • It’s a great way to... • I find it... https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in 10. Let’s pay attention to the useful expressions we can use. Reading Pre-writing WHO do it with you? WHERE do you do it? • I usually do it with my... • Sometimes I... with my family/classmates. • I join a club/group, so I do it with... • Most of the time, I do it alone/by myself. • I share this hobby with... • I usually do it at... • I often go to... to do it. • Most of the time, I do it in my bedroom/in the living room. • It can be done anywhere, like... • I practice it at school/in the garden/on the playground. Part 4 Writing Workshop — Reply to Jason! https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Writing 11. Work on 3c. Write a reply to Jason’s post by introducing your favourite free-time activity. You can use the expressions we conclude above. WHEN does she do it now? WHERE does she do it now? WHY does she like it? HOW did it start? WHAT does she like to do? • My favourite free-time activity is ... • I started this activity when I was ... • I like to do it because ... • It lets me ... • I find it fun to ... • It makes me really happy when ... • I enjoy ... when I ... https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Writing 12. Please pay attention to the following facts when writing. 内容与结构 覆盖所有要点 逻辑清晰连贯 语言与语法 守住语法生命线 善用高级结构提分 词汇应用要准确 卷面与格式 书写工整 卷面整洁 注意标点与大小写 Part 5 Sharing & Evaluation — Our Hobby, Our Story https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Writing 13. Check your works in groups and choose the best to share in the class. Evaluation 标准 评价 内容是否完整 ☆☆☆☆☆ 语言是否准确 ☆☆☆☆☆ 句式是否多元 ☆☆☆☆☆ 结构是否严谨 ☆☆☆☆☆ 卷面是否整洁 ☆☆☆☆☆ https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Writing 14. Share some excellent works. Evaluation I enjoy several free-time activities, such as playing the guitar, hiking, and cooking. However, my favorite is taking photos. It started when my father gave me an old camera on my twelfth birthday. I began by taking pictures of flowers in our garden. Now, I carry my camera everywhere I go. I love photography because it helps me see the beauty in everyday life. Taking photos also encourages me to be more creative. But the best part is that it allows me to share my perspective with others. Whenever I show my photos to my family, they always smile and ask about the stories behind them. I feel so happy to capture and share these moments. https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Writing 14. Share some excellent works. Evaluation There are many things I like to do in my free time, like listening to music, drawing, and playing video games. But nothing beats playing basketball. I first tried basketball in a PE class two years ago. I was not good at it, but I found it exciting. Now, I practice with my friends at the school court every Tuesday and Thursday. Basketball is my favorite because it’s both fun and challenging. It keeps me healthy and teaches me about teamwork. What I love most is the feeling when our team works together to score. Every game is a new adventure, and every shot fills me with energy. I’m glad to have such an active hobby. https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Writing 14. Share some excellent works. Evaluation In my spare time, I do many things—I collect stamps, play chess, and help my mom cook. But the activity I love most is writing stories. My interest began after I read a wonderful book in fifth grade. I thought, “I want to create my own world too.” Now, I write in my notebook almost every evening. Writing allows me to express my thoughts and imagination freely. It also improves my language skills. Most importantly, it gives me a way to relax and escape into different adventures. Whenever I finish a story, I feel a real sense of achievement. It’s like leaving a part of myself on the page. Part 6 Assignment https://huaban.com/pins/4633832284?searchWord=%E5%8D%A1%E9%80%9A%E4%BE%BF%E5%88%A9%E8%B4%B4 Lead in Reading Writing 15. Do homework happily. Evaluation Assignment 基础作业 框架巩固与优化：根据课堂互评得到的反馈，修改并完善自己在课堂上完成的思维导图和写作初稿。要求至少在一处加入更生动的细节描写。 句型归类练习：从自己修改后的作文中，找出分别用于“介绍爱好”、“说明开始时间”、“阐述原因”和“表达感受”的句子各一句，并抄录下来。 提升作业 “论坛版主”任务：假设你是该学生论坛的版主，请根据本课所学的写作结构和评价标准，为“介绍我的爱好”这类帖子起草一份简要的发帖指南（Posting Guide），用英文列出3-4条建议（例如：1. Start with your favourite activity. 2. Tell us when you started...）。 $