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Unit 1 This is me! 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“This is me!”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“自我介绍与人际交往”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语介绍自己及他人、运用一般现在时(be动词用法)、掌握基础问候与交际礼仪”,常见写作角度包括:① 个人自我介绍(姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、爱好);② 介绍同学或朋友;③ 描述新学校的师生关系。单元语法重点为 一般现在时中be动词的用法,思维技能侧重“清晰、简洁地呈现个人核心信息,建立初步跨文化交际意识”,阅读策略聚焦“从简短语篇中提取人物姓名、爱好、性格等关键信息”。
【单元话题】
“遇见新自我,结识新朋友”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍你自己,包括姓名、年龄、外貌、性格及爱好,词数80左右,题目为“My Self-Introduction”。
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【范文】
My Self-Introduction
Hello! My name is Li Hua, and I’m 12 years old. I’m a new student at Sunshine Middle School, and I’m in Class 1, Grade 7.
I’m tall and slim with short black hair. I have two big eyes and a small mouth. People say I’m friendly and helpful— I always like to help my classmates with their studies. My favourite hobby is reading. I often read storybooks in my free time because they make me happy. I also like playing ping-pong with my friends after school.
I’m glad to meet new teachers and classmates here. I hope we can be good friends and have a great time together!
【译文】
我的自我介绍
大家好!我叫李华,今年12岁。我是阳光中学的一名新生,在七年级一班。
我又高又瘦,留着黑色短发,有两只大眼睛和一张小嘴巴。大家说我待人友好、乐于助人——我总是喜欢帮同学们补习功课。我最喜欢的爱好是阅读,空闲时经常读故事书,因为它们能让我感到快乐。我还喜欢放学后和朋友们打乒乓球。
很高兴在这里认识新老师和新同学,希望我们能成为好朋友,一起度过愉快的时光!
亮点词块
1. new student 新生
1. tall and slim 又高又瘦
1. short black hair 黑色短发
1. friendly and helpful 友好且乐于助人
1. help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
1. favourite hobby 最喜欢的爱好
1. in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
1. play ping-pong 打乒乓球
1. make friends 交朋友
高分句子
1. I’m a new student at Sunshine Middle School, and I’m in Class 1, Grade 7.(点明身份与班级,贴合单元“新学校新生活”场景)
1. People say I’m friendly and helpful— I always like to help my classmates with their studies.(运用一般现在时描述性格与习惯,符合单元语法重点)
1. I hope we can be good friends and have a great time together!(表达交友愿望,呼应单元“结识新朋友”核心)
【拓展1】
你的新同桌来自英国,想了解你的好朋友张明,请你写一段介绍,向他介绍张明的基本情况及爱好,词数不少于60。
Dear Tom,
You asked about my good friend Zhang Ming. Let me tell you something about him.
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【拓展1范文】
Dear Tom,
You asked about my good friend Zhang Ming. Let me tell you something about him.
Zhang Ming is 12 years old, and he’s in the same class as me. He’s not very tall but he’s strong. He has short brown hair and wears glasses. He’s smart and hard-working— he’s good at Maths and often helps us solve problems. His favourite hobby is playing football. He plays it every Saturday with our classmates. He also likes reading science books because he wants to be a scientist.
Zhang Ming is a great friend. I’m sure you’ll like him if you meet him!
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的汤姆:
你问起我的好朋友张明,让我来给你介绍一下他吧。
张明12岁,和我在同一个班。他不算很高但很强壮,留着棕色短发,戴着眼镜。他聪明又勤奋——数学很好,经常帮我们解题。他最喜欢的爱好是踢足球,每周六都会和同学们一起踢。他还喜欢读科学书籍,因为他想成为一名科学家。
张明是个很棒的朋友,我相信你要是见到他,一定会喜欢他的!
【拓展2】
假设你参加学校“班级之星”评选,请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇题目为“Why I Want to Be the Class Star”的短文,词数80左右,开头已给出。
为什么想成为班级之星
1. 个人优势(性格开朗、乐于助人、热爱学习)2. 班级贡献(帮助同学、积极参与活动、团结同学)3. 未来计划(带动大家学习、组织课外活动)
Why I Want to Be the Class Star
I want to be the Class Star because I hope to help our class become a better group.
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【拓展2范文】
Why I Want to Be the Class Star
I want to be the Class Star because I hope to help our class become a better group.
I’m an outgoing and helpful student. I’m good at English and Chinese, so I often help my classmates with their homework. I’m also active in class activities— I joined the school singing competition last month and won a prize. I always try to make our class united: when someone is sad, I like to cheer them up.
If I become the Class Star, I will organize more after-school activities like book sharing and English corners. I will also help our class get better grades together. I believe we can make our class the best!
【拓展2译文】
为什么我想成为班级之星
我想成为班级之星,因为我希望帮助我们班变成一个更棒的集体。
我是一个开朗且乐于助人的学生,英语和语文都很好,所以经常帮同学们补习作业。我还积极参加班级活动——上个月我参加了学校的歌唱比赛,还得了奖。我总是努力让班级团结一心:当有人难过时,我喜欢让他们振作起来。
如果我能成为班级之星,我会组织更多课外活动,比如图书分享会和英语角。我还会帮助我们班一起取得更好的成绩,我相信我们能让我们班成为最棒的!
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1. 个人信息相关(单元重点)
· name 名字;age 年龄;class 班级;grade 年级
· new student 新生;classmate 同学;friend 朋友
· school 学校;middle school 中学
1. 外貌与性格相关(单元核心)
· tall 高的;short 矮的;slim 苗条的;strong 强壮的
· short hair 短发;long hair 长发;big eyes 大眼睛;wear glasses 戴眼镜
· friendly 友好的;helpful 乐于助人的;smart 聪明的;hard-working 勤奋的
· outgoing 开朗的;quiet 文静的;kind 善良的;active 积极的
1. 爱好与活动相关(单元基础)
· hobby 爱好;favourite 最喜欢的
· read storybooks 读故事书;play ping-pong 打乒乓球;play football 踢足球
· read science books 读科学书籍;solve problems 解题
· after-school activities 课外活动;join a competition 参加比赛
· book sharing 图书分享会;English corner 英语角
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 一般现在时be动词:am, is, are
· 常用主语:I, you, he, she, it, we, they
· 否定形式:am not, isn’t, aren’t
· 疑问形式:Am I...? Is he/she/it...? Are you/we/they...?
二、实用句型积累
1. 自我介绍基础句型(贴合单元核心)
· My name is ... / I’m ... 我叫……
· I’m ... years old. 我……岁了。
· I’m in Class ..., Grade ... 我在……年级……班。
· I’m a new student at ... Middle School. 我是……中学的一名新生。
· I’m tall/short/slim/strong with ... 我又高/矮/苗条/强壮,有着……
1. 语法句型运用(贴合单元语法)
· I am friendly and helpful.(肯定句:主语+be+形容词)
· He isn’t very tall but he is strong.(否定句:主语+be+not+形容词)
· Are you in Class 1, Grade 7?(一般疑问句:Be+主语+其他?)
· Yes, I am. / No, I aren’t.(肯定/否定回答)
1. 描述爱好与习惯(贴合单元主题)
· My favourite hobby is ... 我最喜欢的爱好是……
· I like/love ... 我喜欢……
· I often ... in my free time. 我空闲时经常……
· He plays football every Saturday. 他每周六都踢足球。
· I like reading because ... 我喜欢阅读,因为……
1. 表达愿望与计划(贴合单元内涵)
· I hope we can be good friends. 我希望我们能成为好朋友。
· I want to be ... 我想成为……
· If I become ..., I will ... 如果我成为……,我会……
· I will organize more activities for our class. 我会为班级组织更多活动。
三、基础句式与衔接
1. 核心语法+自我介绍(单元核心语法)
· I am Li Ming. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 2, Grade 7. 我叫李明,12岁,在七年级二班。
· She is my classmate. She is slim with long hair. She is very kind. 她是我的同学,苗条且留着长发,人非常善良。
1. 信息描述+衔接词(单元拓展)
· First, let me tell you about my age and class. Second, I want to talk about my hobbies. Finally, I hope to make more friends. 首先,让我介绍我的年龄和班级;其次,我想谈谈我的爱好;最后,我希望交到更多朋友。
· I like reading storybooks. Besides, I also enjoy playing ping-pong. What’s more, I often help my classmates with their English. 我喜欢读故事书,此外,我还喜欢打乒乓球,而且我经常帮同学们学英语。
1. 逻辑衔接词(简单基础)
· 顺序:first(首先)、second(其次)、finally(最后)
· 递进:besides(此外)、what’s more(而且)、also(也)
· 因果:because(因为)、so(所以)
· 转折:but(但是)、however(然而)
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