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Unit 5 Good manners 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Good manners”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“人际交往与礼仪文化”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“介绍不同场景的礼仪规范、运用 enough/too 及 enough to/too ... to 结构、理解中外礼仪差异”,常见写作角度包括:① 分享日常礼仪(如餐桌、校园、公共场合礼仪);② 对比中外礼仪差异;③ 阐述礼仪的重要性。单元语法重点为 enough/too 的用法 及 enough to/too ... to 结构,思维技能侧重“清晰分点呈现礼仪规范,结合实例凸显礼仪价值”,阅读策略聚焦“从语篇中提取不同文化的礼仪特点与差异”。
【单元话题】
“礼行天下,仪润人心”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍公共场合应遵守的良好礼仪,包括具体行为规范及礼仪的重要性,词数80左右,题目为“Good Manners in Public Places”。
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【范文】
Good Manners in Public Places
Good manners are important in public places as they help people get along well. We should always keep these rules in mind.
In libraries or cinemas, we must keep quiet—talking too loudly will disturb others. When waiting in line, we should be patient enough to let everyone take their turn. It’s also polite to hold the door for people behind you. We should not drop litter anywhere; instead, we should put it in dustbins. Remember, being too careless with our behavior will make others uncomfortable.
Good manners show respect for others. Let’s follow these rules to make public places more pleasant for everyone.
【译文】
公共场合的良好礼仪
良好的礼仪在公共场合至关重要,因为它们能帮助人们友好相处。我们应当时刻牢记这些规则。
在图书馆或电影院里,我们必须保持安静——大声说话会打扰他人。排队时,我们应足够耐心,让每个人都能按顺序排队。为身后的人扶门也是有礼貌的行为。我们不应随处乱扔垃圾,而应把垃圾扔进垃圾桶。记住,行为过于随意会让他人感到不适。
良好的礼仪是对他人的尊重,让我们遵守这些规则,让公共场合对每个人来说都更舒适惬意。
亮点词块
1. get along well 友好相处
1. keep quiet 保持安静
1. disturb others 打扰他人
1. wait in line 排队等候
1. hold the door 扶门
1. drop litter 乱扔垃圾
1. put in dustbins 扔进垃圾桶
1. show respect for 对……表示尊重
1. public places 公共场合
高分句子
1. Good manners are important in public places as they help people get along well.(开篇点题,强调礼仪重要性,贴合单元主题)
1. When waiting in line, we should be patient enough to let everyone take their turn.(运用 enough to 结构,符合单元语法重点)
1. Good manners show respect for others. Let’s follow these rules to make public places more pleasant for everyone.(升华主题,呼吁践行礼仪,呼应单元核心)
【拓展1】
你的外国朋友 Linda 即将来中国旅游,想了解中国的餐桌礼仪,请你写一封邮件,向她介绍相关礼仪,词数不少于60。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad you’re coming to China! Table manners here are important, and I’d like to share some with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Linda,
I’m glad you’re coming to China! Table manners here are important, and I’d like to share some with you.
First, don’t start eating until everyone is ready—it’s polite to wait for the host. When using chopsticks, never stick them into your food or point them at others. Also, chew quietly and don’t talk with food in your mouth. The host may keep putting food on your plate—that’s a way to show care, so you should eat some instead of refusing.
These manners are simple but meaningful. Following them will help you enjoy your meals more. I’m sure you’ll have a great time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的琳达:
很高兴你要来中国!这里的餐桌礼仪很重要,我想跟你分享一些。
首先,要等所有人都准备好再开始吃饭——等主人动筷是有礼貌的表现。使用筷子时,千万别把它们插进食物里,也不要用筷子指着别人。另外,吃饭时要细嚼慢咽,嘴里有食物时不要说话。主人可能会不断给你夹菜——这是表达关心的方式,所以你应该吃一些,不要拒绝。
这些礼仪简单但意义重大,遵守它们会让你更享受用餐时光。我相信你在中国一定会玩得很开心!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
假设你参加“文明有礼好少年”征文比赛,请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇题目为“Why Good Manners Matter”的短文,词数80左右,开头已给出。
为什么礼仪很重要
1. 个人层面(体现修养、赢得尊重)2. 社会层面(促进和谐、减少冲突)3. 文化层面(传承文化、展现形象)4. 做法(从小事做起、践行礼仪)
Why Good Manners Matter
Good manners are like a bridge connecting people. They play a key role in our daily lives.
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【拓展2范文】
Why Good Manners Matter
Good manners are like a bridge connecting people. They play a key role in our daily lives.
For individuals, good manners show our修养 (cultivation) and help us win others’ respect. In society, they promote harmony—polite communication can reduce unnecessary conflicts. Moreover, as a part of culture, good manners pass down traditional values and show a positive image of a person or a country. We can start with small things: saying “please” and “thank you”, waiting patiently, and respecting others.
Good manners make the world a better place. Let’s practice them and spread kindness everywhere.
【拓展2译文】
为什么礼仪很重要
良好的礼仪就像连接人与人之间的桥梁,在我们的日常生活中扮演着关键角色。
对个人而言,良好的礼仪体现我们的修养,帮助我们赢得他人的尊重。在社会中,它们促进和谐——礼貌的沟通能减少不必要的冲突。此外,作为文化的一部分,良好的礼仪传承传统价值观,展现个人或国家的良好形象。我们可以从小事做起:说“请”和“谢谢”、耐心等待、尊重他人。
良好的礼仪让世界变得更美好,让我们践行礼仪,把善意传播到每个角落。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1. 礼仪相关(单元重点)
· good manners 良好礼仪
· bad manners 不良礼仪
· polite 有礼貌的
· impolite 无礼的
· respectful 尊重他人的
· patient 有耐心的
· modest 谦虚的
· behave properly 举止得体
· table manners 餐桌礼仪
· public manners 公共场合礼仪
· cultural differences 文化差异
· show respect 表示尊重
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· enough 足够的(修饰名词放前,修饰形容词/副词放后)
· too 太(修饰形容词/副词放前)
· enough to do 足够……去做
· too ... to do 太……而不能做
· 常用形容词:patient(有耐心的)、polite(有礼貌的)、careful(细心的)、loud(大声的)、careless(粗心的)、shy(害羞的)
1. 场景与行为相关(单元核心)
· keep quiet 保持安静
· wait in line 排队等候
· drop litter 乱扔垃圾
· hold the door 扶门
· talk quietly 轻声说话
· chew with mouth closed 闭着嘴咀嚼
· stick chopsticks 插筷子
· point at others 指着别人
· say “please” and “thank you” 说“请”和“谢谢”
· follow rules 遵守规则
1. 评价与重要性相关(单元基础)
· important 重要的
· meaningful 有意义的
· necessary 必要的
· matter 重要
· play a key role 扮演关键角色
· promote harmony 促进和谐
· win respect 赢得尊重
· pass down 传承
· cultivate good habits 培养好习惯
二、实用句型积累
1. 介绍礼仪规范(贴合单元核心)
· In [place], we should/must ...
· We should be + 形容词 + enough to ...
· It’s polite/impolite to ...
· Never ...; instead, we should ...
· When [doing sth], we need to ...
1. 语法句型运用(贴合单元语法)
· She is patient enough to wait for others for a long time.(enough to 表肯定)
· The music is too loud for us to study.(too ... to 表否定)
· We have enough time to prepare for the party.(enough 修饰名词)
· He is too shy to speak in public.(too ... to 表否定)
1. 阐述礼仪重要性(贴合单元主题)
· Good manners are important because they ...
· Having good manners helps us ...
· Good manners play a key role in ...
· It’s necessary for us to have good manners.
1. 总结与呼吁(贴合单元内涵)
· Let’s follow these good manners to ...
· Good manners make the world a better place.
· We should practice good manners in our daily lives.
· Let’s spread kindness and respect through good manners.
三、基础句式与衔接
1. 核心语法+礼仪场景(单元核心语法)
· In the library, we must be quiet enough to avoid disturbing others. We shouldn’t talk too loudly. 图书馆里,我们必须足够安静,避免打扰他人,不应该大声说话。
· When eating with others, it’s too impolite to stick chopsticks into the rice. We should be careful enough to use them properly. 和别人吃饭时,把筷子插进米饭里太无礼了,我们应该足够细心地正确使用它们。
1. 礼仪描述+衔接词(单元拓展)
· First, we should greet others politely when we meet them. Second, we need to wait in line patiently in public places. Finally, we should always say “thank you” when someone helps us. 首先,见面时要礼貌问候他人;其次,公共场合要耐心排队;最后,有人帮忙时要常说“谢谢”。
· Good manners can help us make more friends. Besides, they can promote harmony in society. However, some people still have bad manners, which needs to be improved. 良好的礼仪能帮我们交到更多朋友;此外,还能促进社会和谐;但仍有一些人举止无礼,这需要改进。
1. 逻辑衔接词(简单基础)
· 顺序:first(首先)、second(其次)、finally(最后)、next(接下来)
· 递进:besides(此外)、what’s more(更重要的是)、also(也)
· 转折:but(但是)、however(然而)、while(而)
· 因果:because(因为)、so(所以)、therefore(因此)
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