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B2U2:Integrated skills
-Encouraging a friend to work out regularly
-By: Ella
Step1:Preparation: We watch and think
1.What troubles has Leo had recently?
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2.Why does Leo fail to get enough exercise?
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He has been catching colds all the time, and he has sleep problems and can't focus in class .
He has no time to work out , no partner to exercise with and can't afford the cost of exercise.
3.What suggestions can you give to Leo to encourage him to work out?
Step 2:Presentation
To write an e-mail to encourage Leo to work out regularly using the expressions collected in the unit.
Step 3:Participation
Task round 1 : We listen to Doctor Chen’s advice
Dr. Chen's suggestions Benefits
Try a 1.____________(healthy) diet. It will help your body grow 2._______.
Be more active. Do some aerobic exercise such as swimming or 3. ___________ twice a week. 1.It will strengthen your immune system so you can fight off 4.__________.
2.It will 5.____________, making you feel tried and 6.________ better at night.
It will help 7.________ brain functions, which may help you 8.____________(concentration).
healthier
jogging
stronger
illness
burn energy
sleep
improve
concentrate
Dr Chen: (1) ____________________ a healthier diet ? It will help your body grow stronger.
Leo: OK.
Dr Chen: (2)_______________ exercise? Do you do any sports?
Leo: Actually, I don't like sport. I'd rather stay indoors reading than play sport.
Dr Chen: Well, many teenagers today don't feel like playing sport. But (3)
_______________________________________more active, that is to do some exercise.This will strengthen your immune system so you can fight off illness. Exercise will also burn energy, so you'll feel tired, and sleep better at night.
Leo: That sounds good.
Dr Chen: And (4)______________________________ you can choose an activity like swimming or jogging to do twice a week. You know, aerobic exercise helps improve brain functions. That may help you concentrate.
Why not try
How about
it would be good for you to be
It would be even better if
1. Why not try sth? 为什么不尝试做某事呢?
2. how about doing sth 做某事怎么样
3. It would be good for you to do... 做...对你有好处
4. It would be even better if ...
如果......那就更好了。
Step 3:Participation
Task round 2 : We listen to the expressions of giving advice
Step 3:Participation
Task round 3 : We apply
It would be good for you to be
brain function
Dear Tom,
I’m really sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling unwell because of school stress. I know how busy you are with homework, and how hard it is to find time to relax. I’d like to offer some suggestions — I hope they can be of help to you.
1.____________________starting with something simple? 2.____________________ you to jog for just 20 minutes around the school playground every day. It’s free, easy, and great for your health. This kind of aerobic exercise can strengthen your 3.__________________, helping you 4._______________colds more effectively. 5.__________________inviting a classmate to join you? Exercising together will make it more fun and easier to keep going. Aerobic exercise also boosts your 6.__________________, so you can 7.______________better in class and sleep better at night. 8.________________________ you stick to it twice a week — you’ll feel less stressed in no time. All you need is a pair of comfortable sneakers!
I hope you can take my suggestions into account. I truly hope they will help you feel healthier and happier.
Yours,
Li Hua
fight off
concentrate
immune system
It would be even better if
how about
Why not try
Step 4:Production
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Leo最近因学业压力过大,出现焦虑、失眠、频繁感冒等状况。他在来信中提到,自己知道这与缺乏锻炼有关,但苦于作业繁重没时间、找不到运动伙伴,还担心运动需要去健身房花费过高。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达关心与理解;
2. 说明运动对身心的益处;
3. 提出具体可行的锻炼建议;
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Leo,
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Your sincerely
Li Hua
Possible version
Dear Leo,
I'm sorry to hear academic stress has left you anxious. I totally understand how drained you feel with piles of assignments, so here are some easy tips to help.
Why not try swapping your afternoon soda for warm milk? It will help you sleep better. It would be good for you to do 15-minute stretches between study sessions to ease tension and boost focus. How about asking your roommate to join you for a 20-minute campus jog each evening? Exercising together makes it more fun. It would be even better if you stick to it twice a week, as regular exercise will strengthen your immune system and fight off colds.
I hope these small changes help you feel healthier soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Step 5:Perspective
The standard of grading
Handwriting (3 points) 3pts:Neat, clear, no erasures, perfect punctuation/capitalization
2pts: Legible, minor erasures, mostly correct punctuation
1pts: Messy, multiple errors/erasures
Essay structure (4 points) 4pts: Complete intro/body/conclusion, smooth transitions, tight logic
3pts: Complete structure, clear layers, minor transition issues
2pts: Incomplete structure, loose logic or off-topic parts
1pt: No clear structure, scattered content
Application of knowledge(5points) 4pts: Flexible use of learned vocabulary/sentences
3pts: Some use of learned content, relevant but weak points
2pts: Basic vocabulary only, weak relevance
1pt: No use of learned content, off-topic
Grammar (3points)points) 4pts: No errors, varied sentence structure, precise expression
3pts: Minor errors, some sentence variety
2pts: Obvious errors, simple sentences only
1pt: Severe errors, unclear meaning
Step 5:Perspective
Task round 1: Peer-review
Task round 2: AI(Doubao) review
Now, let's appreciate the article together. Please discuss with your partners and try to grade it according to the grading standards .
This time, let’s check out AI Doubao’s feedback and score for this article.
Step 6: Homework
1.Compulsory homework: Please polish your writing with your desk-mate and grade it according to the grading standard.
2.Optional work: Please write another e-mail to encourage your parents to work out regularly
Remember: life lies in movement! Let’s spare time to enjoy every minute of our workouts together
Thank you!
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