内容正文:
《话题写作进阶》
英语
第一部分 提分技巧
技巧三 扩写句子
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学生写作时需要先构思要点,接着将其以英文的方式转化为简单句,最后将简单句变成复合句,使内容更加完整、具体。在将简单句转化为复合句时,可以通过以下几种方法扩写:
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方法1 扩写原因
用来表示原因的词汇有:because,since,as,for等。
例1:We are proud of our city. (扩写自豪的原因)
→We are proud of our city because it’s a beautiful city with a long history.
例2:I was praised.(扩写被夸奖的原因)
→I was praised,for I did something meaningful with my pocket money.
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1.I like the library very much. (扩写喜欢图书馆的原因)
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2.Be careful with fire and electricity. (扩写小心用火用电的原因)
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I like the library very much because there are different kinds of books.
Be careful with fire and electricity,for they may cause terrible accidents.
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3.We should have a balanced diet. (扩写应该均衡饮食的原因)
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We should have a balanced diet because it gives our bodies enough energy to study and play every day.
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方法2 扩写事例
用来列举具体事例的短语或句型有:such as,for example,Let’s take…as an example.等。
例1:Good learners know the best way to study. (举例一个好的学习方法)
→Good learners know the best way to study. For example,they can take notes by writing down key words or by drawing mind maps.
例2:We should do exercise at least one hour a day. (举例一项或几项具体的运动)
→We should do exercise at least one hour a day,such as running or walking.
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4.He is very polite. (举一个能佐证人物礼貌的事例)
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5.Family members should share happiness and worries. (列举家庭成员应该分享幸福和忧虑的事例)
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He is very polite. For example,he always greets others in daily life.
Family members should share happiness and worries. For example,when they feel sad,we should try to make them happy.
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6.Chinese culture is becoming more and more popular. (列举中国文化正在变得越来越受欢迎的事例)
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Chinese culture is becoming more and more popular. For example,many foreign restaurants now serve Chinese hot pot.
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方法3 扩写条件
用来表示条件的词汇或短语有:if,unless,as long as等。
例1:Zongzi made by myself will give my parents a pleasant surprise. (扩写父母看到“我”自制的粽子的条件)
→If I bring back home zongzi made by myself,it’ll give my parents a pleasant surprise.
例2:Dreams won’t come true. (扩写梦想实现的条件)
→Dreams won’t come true unless we work hard for them.
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7.Try my best to help animals. (扩写尽力帮助动物的条件)
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8.We won’t become stronger. (扩写变强大的条件)
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If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer,I will try my best to help animals.
We won’t become stronger unless we face difficulties bravely.
9.We will have little clean water to drink. (扩写没有干净的饮用水的条件)
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We will have little clean water to drink if we keep polluting rivers or lakes.
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方法4 扩写结果或目的
用来表示结果的词汇或短语有:so (that),to,therefore,as a result等;
用来表示目的的短语有:so that,in order that/to等。
例1:You should take part in sports. (扩写参加体育运动的目的)
→You should take part in sports in order to keep healthy.
例2:Modern medicine is developing fast. (扩写现代医学快速发展带来的结果)
→Modern medicine is developing fast. As a result,many diseases can be prevented and cured.
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10.Learn to praise the people around us. (扩写学会赞美周围人的目的)
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11.We can discuss in groups freely. (扩写小组自由讨论带来的结果)
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Learn to praise the people around us so that we can get along well with them.
We can discuss in groups freely. Therefore/As a result,we can learn how to communicate with and learn from each other.
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12.It’s necessary to learn how to use AI wisely. (扩写学习明智使用AI的
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It is necessary to learn how to use AI wisely in order to make it a helpful tool in daily life.
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方法5 通过扩写“工具、姿势、态度”等,丰富文章细节
用来表示方式的词或短语有:by doing sth.,with sth.,in a…way等。
例1:I learn English well. (扩写学好英语的方式)
→I learn English well by listening to English songs and reading English stories every day.
例2:She finished the model plane. (扩写完成飞机模型的方式)
→She finished the model plane with great patience and carefulness.
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13.I decide to share my ideas. (扩写分享想法的方式)
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14.We solved the difficult problem. (扩写解决难题的方式)
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15.We keep in touch with each other. (扩写互相保持联系的方式)
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I decide to share my ideas by having a face-to-face talk with my teacher.
We solved the difficult problem by working together and discussing patiently.
We keep in touch with each other by sending messages or making phone calls.
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方法6 扩写感受或想法
用来表示感受或想法的短语有:in my opinion,from my point of view,as for me,I think,I hope等。
例1:A show about paper-cutting will be put on. (扩写对表演的看法)
→A show about paper-cutting will be put on. As for me,it’s a chance to learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
例2:This is my holiday plan. (扩写对假期的期望)
→This is my holiday plan. I hope I can spend an enjoyable and safe holiday.
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16.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers. (扩写对使用手机或电脑的看法)
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17.I’m going to graduate soon. (扩写对毕业后的期望)
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I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers. I think the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
I’m going to graduate soon. I hope I can have a wonderful high school life.
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18.You can use mind maps to learn new words. (扩写对使用思维导图的
看法)
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You can use mind maps to learn new words. I think it’s a useful way to remember new words.
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