内容正文:
故填absence。
69.afternoons考查名词的数。句意:我住的地方,
晒干的衣服闻起来特别香,这要归功于没有烟
雾,而且下午有很多蓝天和新鲜空气。afternoon
“下午”是可数名词,此处指不止一个下午,应用
复数形式afternoons。.故填afternoons.
70.left考查非谓语动词。句意:如果你从未体验
过在阳光下晾晒了一整天的床单或衬衫散发的
“阳光的味道”,那么你就错过了生活中的一大奇
观。本句已有谓语have experienced,此处应用非
谓语动词,a sheet or shirt和leave“使处于某种状
态”之间是逻辑动宾关系,应用过去分词,作后置
定语。故填left。
卷16应用文写作(一)
【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给
Chris写一封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定:decide-→determine
整个的:entire-→whole
提供:offer-→provide
总之:in a word-→in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decided to
create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over
the park's pond,surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句:Because I was inspired by the fantastic scen-
ery,I decided to create a watercolor painting of the
small bridge over the park's pond,which was sur-
rounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型l]We were tasked to draw or
paint something that impressed us most.(that
的定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had
in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that
impressed us most.Inspired by the fantastic scenery,
I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small
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bridge over the park's pond,surrounded by blooming
flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.
Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my
creativity but also offered a much-needed break from
the usual hustle and bustle of school life.I felt a deep
sense of peace as I painted.
In a word,it was not just an art class;it was a
moment of connection with nature that I truly cher-
ished.
Yours,
Li Hua
[高分句型2]I felt a deep sense of peace as I paint-
ed.(as引导的时间状语从句)
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求
考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏
目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
厌倦:be tired of-→be fed up with
首先:first-→above all
减轻:combat-→relieve
提高:improve-→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This simple routine involves standing up from
your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and
taking a few deep breaths.
拓展句:This is a simple routine that involves
standing up from your desk,stretching your arms,
legs and back,and taking a few deep breaths.
【点睛】[高分句型I]Lastly,it promotes a
healthy and active lifestyle,which is essential for o-
verall well--being.(运用了which引导的非限制性定
语从句)
[高分句型2]This simple routine involves standing
up from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and
back,and taking a few deep breaths..(运用了动名词
作宾语)
[高分句型3]It's a small change that can make a
big difference in your day..(运用了that引导的定语
】
从句)
One possible version:
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
Everybody!Are you tired of sitting in class all
day?How about incorporating some physical activity
into your daily routine?One great option is the
"Stand Up and Stretch"exercise.This simple routine
involves standing up from your desk,stretching your
arms,legs and back,and taking a few deep breaths.
It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing
and re-energize your body and mind.This exercise is
recommended for several reasons.
First,it helps to combat the negative effects of
prolonged sitting,such as back pain and stiffness.
Second,it can improve your focus and concentration,
making it easier to stay engaged in class.Lastly,it
promotes a healthy and active lifestyle,which is es-
sential for overall well-being.
So,next time you feel a bit sluggish during
class,remember to stand up and stretch!It's a small
change that can make a big difference in your day.
三、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求
考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮
食”的作文比赛写一则活动通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
集中:focus on-→concentrate on
鼓励:encourage-→hearten
主题:theme-→topic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school English newspaper is excited to an
nounce the upcoming writing competition,themed
"Hand in Hand,Save the Food".
拓展句:Our school English newspaper is excited to
announce the upcoming writing competition,whose
theme is“Hand in Hand,Save the Food'”.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The competition aims to
raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
(运用了动名词作宾语)
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[高分句型2]Entries should consist of an original
piece of writing,focusing on the theme of food waste
and showing how we can contribute to its reduction.
(运用了how引导宾语从句)
One possible version:
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to
announce the upcoming writing competition,themed
“Hand in Hand,Save the Food”,The competition
aims to raise awareness about the importance of
saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate.
Entries should consist of an original piece of writing,
focusing on the theme of food waste and showing
how we can contribute to its reduction.Please submit
your entries to the English Department mailbox by
the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and
creative submissions.
四、
【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给
外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,
让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:to begin with→irst of all
提高:improve→progress
建议:suggestion→advice
选择:choose→select
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on
their language abilities or to let students choose their
own partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to
group students based on their language abilities or to
let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This can hinder the
progress of students as the more advanced one may
dominate the conversation,leaving little room for the
other students to improve,(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Besides,students may feel uncom
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fortable or less motivated if paired with someone who
they don't get along with or have difficulty communi-
cating with,(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I think it's not a good
idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken
English training after class.The reasons are as fol-
lows.
To begin with,randomly pairing up students
may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the
groups.This can hinder the progress of students as
the more advanced one may dominate the conversa-
tion,leaving little room for the other students to im-
prove.Besides,students may feel uncomfortable or
less motivated if paired with someone who they don't
get along with or have difficulty communicating
with.
My suggestion is to group students based on
their language abilities or to let students choose their
own partners.This way,everyone can feel more com-
fortable practicing and improving their spoken
English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求
考生为校英文报写篇报道,介绍上周末校学生会组
织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参与:participate in→attend
开始:begin→start
观察,调查:observe→survey
震惊:strike-→astonish/surprise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last weekend,I participated in a“Getting to
Know the Plants Around Us"activity organised by
our Students'Union.
拓展句:Last weekend,I participated in a“Getting to
7
Know the Plants Around Us"activity organised by our
Students'Union,which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型l]The activity began with a
lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the
different characteristics and uses of various plant spe-
cies.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Throughout the event,I was struck
by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our
world and learned about plants that are used for med-
ical purposes,as well as those that provide food and
shelter for animals..(运用了一般过去时的被动语态
和定语从句)
One possible version:
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend,I participated in a "Getting to
Know the Plants Around Us"activity organised by
our Students'Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local bota-
nist,who taught us about the different
characteristics and uses of various plant species.We
then went on a natural walk to observe and collect
samples of different plants.Throughout the event,I
was struck by the incredible variety of plants that
exist in our world and learned about plants that are used
for medical purposes,as well as those that provide
food and shelter for animals.I also gained a greater
appreciation for the role that plants play in
maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall,it was a valuable and enriching experi-
ence.
六、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要
求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办
的音乐会,在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地:undou btedly-→without doubt
尤其地:particularly→especially
感动:touch-→move
希望:hope→expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
】
原句:Their performances are undoubtedly of high
quality,which makes the concert almost no different
from a live one.
拓展句:There is no doubt that their
performances are of high quality,which makes the
concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】[高分句型l]Their performances
are undoubtedly of high quality,which makes the
concert almost no different from a live one,(运用了
which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I enjoyed every second of the concert
and was particularly attracted when the boys and
girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chi-
nese song“Liang Zhu'”.(运用了when引导的时间状
语从句)
One possible version:
【满分作文一】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done
their best in entertaining the audience with one song
after another.Their performances are undoubtedly of
high quality,which makes the concert almost no dif-
ferent from a live one.I enjoyed every second of the
concert and was particularly attracted when the boys
and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional
Chinese song "Liang Zhu".They performed the song
in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling
of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the
future for us Chinese students and our international
friends to learn about and from each other.
【满分作文二】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The joint performance organized by our school
and a friendly school in the UK showcased a variety
of musical styles from different cultures.As an audi-
ence member,I was deeply impressed by the talented
musicians and singers who performed flawlessly.The
concert created a sense of unity and connection
among the viewers,despite the distance between us.
However,I think it would have been better if there
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were subtitles or translations for the lyrics of the
songs to make it more accessible for international
viewers.
Overall,it was an amazing event,and I look for
ward to more such collaborations in the future
【满分作文三】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
With top-quality sound and video production,it
created an immersive and unforgettable viewing ex-
perience.What kept me utterly spellbound were the
sheer brilliance of the performers and seamless tran-
sition between each song.It is not hard to see that
each music piece was carefully selected and each per-
formance was filled with extraordinary/remarkable
passion and professionalism.The only drawback is
that information about the performers and their
backgrounds,particularly for those who are not fa-
miliar to the audience,is not provided enough.
It would be better to know more about their ex-
periences and how they honed their musical skills to
reach this level of excellence,enhancing the
audience's appreciation of their artistry.
卷17应用文写作(二)
【语篇解读】本簫书面表达属于应用文。外国
好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得
知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的
发展成就,要求考生给他回复邮件,就此给予他
建议。
【详解】1.词江积累
很好的:great-→wonderful
成就:achievement→accomplishment
建议:suggestion→advice
此外:in addition→what's more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句:It's great to hear you're planning to write about
China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th an-
niversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句:It's great to hear what you're planning to
write about is China's achievements on the occasion
】最新5年高考真题分类优化卷·英语(十六〉
卷16应用文写作(一)
本卷共六题,每题15分,满分90分
一、(2024·新课标全国卷)
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国
朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.你完成的作品:
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Fri-
day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【最新5年高考真题分类优化卷(26-Z)·英语(十六)16-1】
二、(2024·浙江1月)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学
们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1.介绍这项运动;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
【16-2】
三、(2024·九省联考)》
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请
你写一则活动通知,内容包括:
1.介绍活动目的;
2.说明参赛要求。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
【16-3】
四、(2023·新课标全国卷)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课
后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容
包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【16-4】
五、(2023·浙江1月)
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为
校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
【16-5】
六、(2023·四省联考)
你刚观看了你校与英国一友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请
在线上留言板上写一则评论,内容包括:
1.音乐会特点;
2.观看感受;
3.意见建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
【16-6】