话题 3 描写一种变化-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合选择性必修第二册（外研版）

选择性必修2外研版 【写作专版】 描写一种变化 写作专版 【外研版选择性必修2】描写一种变化 写作范文集合+逐段解析·外研版选择性必修2 范文赏析 【范文一】家乡的变化 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the past few years.When I was a child,there were only small houses and dirt roads.People used to ride bikes or walk to work.Now,tall buildings have been built everywhere, and wide roads are full of cars and buses.There is also a new park where people can exercise and relax.I am happy to see these changes and hope my hometown will become even better. 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（总体变化)： 用ly hometown has changed a lot over the past few years.开篇点题；时间对比词When I was a child自然引出过去状态。 中间段（具体对比)： 通过used to描述过去习惯，Now转折展示现状；建筑(tall buildings)、交通(wide roads)、设 施(ew park)三方面具体描写变化。 结尾段（个人感受）： 用I am happy to see these changes表达情感，hope...will become even better展望未来，首尾 呼应。 【范文二】学习习惯的改变 How I Changed My Study Habits Last year,I was not good at English because I didn't have a good study habit.I used to read English books only before tests and never practiced speaking.Then my teacher told me that practicing every day is important.So I started reading English stories for 30 minutes every morning and joined an English club to talk with others.Now I can speak English better and get better grades.This change has taught me that good habits lead to success. 选择性必修2外研版 【写作专版】 描写一种变化 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（问题描述）： 用Last year,I was not good at..because.说明原因；used to.only before tests突出不良习惯。 中间段（改变过程)： Then引出转折点，started.every morning和joined..展示具体行动：时间状语for30 minutes every morning强调持续性。 结尾段（改变结果)： ow对比现状进步，taught me that.…升华主题，点明习惯与成功的因果关系。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 时间对比： ...has changed a lot over the past few years.When I was...,there were.../People used to... Now,... 变化描述： ...have been built everywhere./...is full of.../There is also...where... 习惯改变： I started...every..../I joined...to....This change has taught me that... 结果表达： I can...better and get better grades./...lead to success. 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇关于变化的文章(100词左右)： 提示：描写学校图书馆的变化。过去：书籍少、空间小、开放时间短：现在：新大楼、电子资源、延 长开放；你的感受。 仿写框架参考： Our school library a lot.In the past, Students find enough books. Now. has been built.There are computers and e-books.The opening hours these changes because 2 选择性必修2外研版 【写作专版】 描写一种变化 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：My hometown change a lot.一正确：My hometown has changed a lot.(完成时表持续变 化) 错误：I used to playing basketball..→正确：Iused to play basketball.(to后接动词原形) 表达错误： 错误：There have tall buildings..→正确：There are tall buildings.(there be结构) 逻辑错误： 错误：I started read every day..→正确：I started reading every day.(stat后接动名词) 核心写作要点 时间对比：必须包含过去s现在的对比结构，使用used to/Now等时间标志词。 细节支撑：至少从23个方面（如建筑/交通/习惯/结果）具体描述变化。 时态准确：过去状态用一般过去时，持续变化用现在完成时，现状用一般现在时。 情感表达：结尾需包含个人感受或启示(happy/important/learn that.)。