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选择性必修第一册重庆大学版
【写作专版】U6:旅行计划与经历
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【重庆大学版】旅行计划与经历写作范文
选择性必修第一册Uit6写作专题
旅行范文赏析
【范文一】旅行计划:成都之行
My Travel Plan to Chengdu
This summer vacation,I plan to travel to Chengdu with my parents.We will take a high-speed train there,
which takes about 6 hours from our city.During the 5-day trip,we have made a detailed schedule.On the
first day,we will visit the Chengdu Research Base of Giant Panda Breeding to see the lovely pandas.On
the second day,we plan to explore the Jinli Ancient Street,where we can taste local snacks like hot pot and
mapo tofu.We also want to climb Mount Qingcheng on the third day,enjoying the fresh air and beautiful
natural scenery.On the fourth day,we will visit the Dujiangyan Irrigation System,a famous historical site.
Before coming back on the fifth day,we will go shopping for some special local products.I am really
looking forward to this trip and believe we will have a wonderful time there.
【范文二】旅行经历:难忘的丽江之旅
An Unforgettable Trip to Lijiang
Last autumn,I had an unforgettable trip to Lijiang with my friends.We went there by plane,and it was my
first time taking aplane,which made me very excited.Lijiang is a beautiful city with many ancient buildings
and clear rivers.We stayed in a traditional Naxi-style inn in the Old Town of Lijiang.During the 4-day trip,
we visited the Black Dragon Pool Park,where the water is so clear that we could see the reflection of the
snow-capped Jade Dragon Snow Mountain.We also walked along the streets of the Old Town,enjoying
the peaceful atmosphere and listening to the local music.One evening,we joined a bonfire party with the
local people,singing and dancing together.The most memorable thing was that we tried horse riding in the
Yulong Snow Mountain Scenic Area.Although we were tired after the trip,we all felt very happy.This trip
not only broadened my horizons but also deepened the friendship between my friends and me.
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选择性必修第一册重庆大学版
【写作专版】U6:旅行计划与经历
计划类:
I plan to travel to.../We will take.../During the...-day trip
活动描述:
visit...to see...explore...where we can.../enjoy the...scenery
经历感受:
I had an unforgettable trip.../The most memorable thing was.../Although...we felt...
意义表达:
This trip not only...but also.../I am really looking forward to...
仿写练习
请根据提示,仿写一篇旅行计划或经历(100词左右):
提示:选择一个城市(如北京/上海/杭州),描述你的旅行计划或经历,包含交通方式、行程安排和
期待/感受。
仿写框架参考:
(plan/had)a trip to
I went there by
During thetrip,I
(will visit/visited)many places.On the first day,
The most interesting part was
(am looking forward to/felt)this trip because
常见错误修正
时态错误:
错误:I plan visited Chengdu.→正确:I plan to visit Chengdu,
错误:We go there by plane last year.→正确:We went there by plane last year..
搭配错误:
错误:I am looking forward to visit Beijing.→正确:I am looking forward to visiting Beijing.
逻辑错误:
错误:On the first day we came back home..→正确:On the last day we came back home.
核心写作要点
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选择性必修第一册重庆大学版
【写作专版】U6:旅行计划与经历
时态区分:计划用将来时(will/plan to),经历用过去时
结构清晰:开头(目的地+交通)→主体(每日行程)→结尾(感受/意义)
细节丰富:使用具体地名(Mount Qingcheng)、特色活动(bonfire party)、感官描述(clear water)
衔接自然:使用On the..day,The most..,Although.等过渡词
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