话题 4 介绍体育偶像及事迹-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合选择性必修第二册（译林版）

选择性必修2译林版 【话题4】 介绍体育偶像及事迹 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】介绍体育偶像及事迹 写作范文集合·译林版选择性必修2 范文赏析 【范文一】My Sports Hero My Sports Hero Yao Ming is my sports hero.He is a famous Chinese basketball player who used to play in the NBA. Standing at 2.26 meters tall,he was not only tall but also skillful.During his career,he worked very hard and never gave up.He faced many challenges,like language problems and cultural differences when he first went to America.but he overcame them all. Yao Ming was selected as an NBA All-Star many times.He also helped the Chinese national basketball team achieve good results in international games.Off the court,he is kind and helpful.He started a foundation to help children in need.He shows that with hard work and determination,we can achieve our dreams.Yao Ming is a great example for young people who love sports. 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（人物介绍)： 用Yao Ming is my sports hero.直接点明主题；核心句型He is a famous.…who.…介绍身份背 景，Standing at.突出身体特征，not only.but also.…展示双重优点。 中间段（成就与品质)： 用was selected..many times说明职业成就，helped.achieve good results强调国家贡献；通 过Off the court自然过渡到品格描写，started a foundation展示社会责任感。 结尾段（启示意义)： 用He shows that..揭示核心价值，a great example for..点明榜样作用，结尾升华主题。 【范文二】A Great Athlete-Liu Xiang A Great Athlete-Liu Xiang Liu Xiang is one of the most famous athletes in China.He is well-known for his achievements in hurdling. 选择性必修2译林版 【话题4】 介绍体育偶像及事迹 When he was young,he worked very hard to practice running and hurdling every day.His hard work paid off when he won the gold medal in the 110-meter hurdles at the 2004 Athens Olympics.He was the first Asian athlete to win this event,which made all Chinese people very proud. However,Liu Xiang also faced difficult times.He got injured several times but never stopped trying.He tried his best to recover and return to the track.Although he didn't win all the races,he always showed great courage and perseverance.Liu Xiang teaches us that success comes from hard work and that we should never give up when facing difficulties.He is a true sports hero in my heart. 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（成就介绍)： 用one of the most famous athletes强调地位，well-known for..说明专业领域：通过worked very hard.every day展示训练态度，hard work paid off自然引出奥运成就。 中间段（挫折与坚持)： 用However转折带出困境，got injured.but never stopped突出坚韧品质；showed great courage and perseverance点明核心精神，为结尾铺垫。 结尾段（精神启示)： 用teaches us that..总结人生哲理，success comes from.和never give up形成双重强调，tue sports hero呼应开头。 高分亮点句型 人物介绍类： ...is one of the most famous.../...is well-known for.../Standing at...tall 成就描述类： was selected as...many times/helped...achieve good results/won the gold medal in... 品质描写类： worked very hard and never gave up /showed great courage and perseverance/overcame many challenges 启示意义类： teaches us that.../shows that with...we can.../is a great example for... 仿写练习 2 选择性必修2译林版 【话题4】 介绍体育偶像及事迹 请介绍你敬佩的体育偶像(80词左右)： 提示：选择一位体育明星，介绍其基本信息、主要成就、优秀品质及对你的启示。 仿写框架参考： is my sports hero.He/She is a famous from He/She (主要成就).What I admire most is (优秀品质) Although he/she faced (困难)，he/she never He/She teaches me that 常见错误修正 时态错误： 错误：He is won many medals.→正确：He has won many medals..(完成时表成就) 错误：She running every day.→正确：She runs every day..(第三人称单数) 搭配错误： 错误：He is famous at basketball..→正确：He is famous for basketball.(固定搭配) 逻辑错误： 错误：Although he won,but he was sad.→正确：Although he won,he was sad.(避免双连词) 核心写作要点 四段式结构：开头（人物介绍）一→成就描述→品质描写→结尾（启示意义) 信息选择：必写：身份项目、主要成就、优秀品质：选写：成长故事、社会贡献 时态运用：现状用一般现在时，过去成就用一般过去时，持续影响用现在完成时 亮点句型：使用not only..but also.、What I admire most is.、teaches us that..等高级结构