话题 5 围绕百万英镑片段创作剧本写金钱价值相关观点议论文-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合必修第三册（人教版）

必修3人教版 【议论文专版】 B版写作范文集合 议论文专版 【B版范文集合】金钱的价值(《百万英镑》 议论文) 写作范文集合+逐段解析·人教版必修3 范文赏析 【范文一】The Value of Money in"The Million Pound Bank Note' The Value of Money in "The Million Pound Bank Note" In Mark Twain's"The Million Pound Bank Note",the story vividly shows how people's attitudes towards money can change.When Henry Adams,a poor American,gets a million-poundnote,everyone aroundhim treats him with great respect,even though he doesn't spend a penny.This makes us think:what is the real value of money? Money can buy many things,but it can't buy everything.It can buy a big house,but not a warm family.It can buy delicious food,but not true happiness.In the story,people are attracted by the million-pound note, but their respect is not for Henry himself,but for the money.Thiskind of respect is false and will disappear when the money is gone. So,we should have a correct view of money.Money is important in our life,but it's not the most important thing.We should value the people and things that money can't buy,like love,friendship and happiness. Only in this way can we live a meaningful life 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（现象引入）： 用n Mark Twain's.引出作品，ividly shows生动描述现象；This makes us think..自然过 渡到核心问题。 中间段（对比论证)： 使用but转折结构(can buy..but not.)形成对比：false respect点明金钱本质，vill disappear 强调虚假性。 结尾段（价值升华)： correct view of money提出观点，love,friendship and happiness列举核心价值，Only in this way.总结全文。 必修3人教版 【议论文专版】 B版写作范文集合 【范文二】Money:A Tool,Not a Master Money:A Tool,Not a Master After reading the fragment of"The Million Pound Bank Note",I have a deeper understanding of the value of money.The story tells us that money can affect people's behavior and attitudes,but we should not be controlled by it. Money is just a tool to help us live a better life.With money,we can solve many problems in life,such as buying food,paying for education and medical care.However,if we think that money is everything,we will lose ourselves.In the story,some people do everything to please Henry because of the million-pound note,which shows that they are slaves of money. In my opinion,we should use money wisely.We should earn money through honest work and spend it on useful things.At the same time,we should not forget the true values in life,like kindness,integrity and responsibility.Only when we treat money correctly can we really enjoy the happiness that money brings. 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（个人感悟）： After reading.建立联系，deeper understanding表明思考深度，should not be controlled点明 核心论点。 中间段（工具属性)： such as列举具体用途，slaves of money比喻生动：However转折强调金钱的双面性。 结尾段（行动建议）： use money wisely提出方案，honest work强调道德，true values呼应主题，Only when.条件 句强化结论。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 现象描述类： The story vividly shows how...This makes us think:what is...? 对比论证类： It can buy...,but not.../However,if we think...,we will... 价值判断类： We should value...that money can't buy /...are slaves of money 结论建议类： 2 必修3人教版 【议论文专版】 B版写作范文集合 Only in this way can we.../Only when we...can we really... 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据《百万英镑》主题，仿写议论文段落（使用指定句型）： 提示：金钱能带来便利，但过度追求会导致道德丧失：应通过诚实劳动获取财富，保持善良本性。 仿写框架参考： Money can but it cannot In the story,some people just because of money.This shows that Therefore,we should through honest work.More importantly,we must never forget Only when we keep these values we truly enjoy life. 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 搭配错误： 错误：Money can buy happy..→正确：Money can buy happiness..(抽象名词不可数) 错误：We should against money worship.一正确：We should oppose money worship.(动词缺 失) 逻辑错误： 错误：Money is useless because it can't buy love.→正确：Money is important but it can't buy love.(避免绝对化) 中式英语： 错误：Using money must have degree.→正确：Ve should use money in moderation,.(符合英文 表达) 核心写作要点 结构清晰：现象描述→问题提出→正反论证→结论建议，四段式逻辑严密。 文本关联：必须引用《百万英镑》具体情节（如百万英镑支票、众人态度转变）。 价值升华：结尾需超越金钱讨论，强调爱/责任/诚信等永恒价值。 语言规范：避免绝对化表述(always/never),善用情态动词(should/can)表达观点。