话题 3 介绍自己所在的城镇或城市-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合必修第三册（人教版）

初一上册人教版 【寒假专版】B版介绍城镇或城市写作范文 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】介绍自己所在的城镇或城 市 写作范文集合+逐段解析·人教版初一上册 范文赏析 【范文一】海滨小镇(Qingwan) Welcome to My Hometown Hello everyone!I'd like to introduce my hometown,a beautiful coastal town called Qingwan.Located in the southern part of China,it has a population of about 200,000.The town is famous for its clean beaches and fresh seafood.Every summer,thousands of tourists come here to enjoy the sunshine and swim in the clear sea In the center of the town,there is a long pedestrian street with many traditional shops and restaurants. You can taste delicious local snacks like seafood dumplings and coconut cakes there.The people in my hometown are very friendly and always ready to help visitors.I love my hometown because it's a peaceful place with beautiful scenery and kind people. 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（总体介绍)： 用Hello everyone!亲切开场；核心句型Located in../It has a population of.,/is famous for. 清晰介绍地理位置、人口和特色；Every summer..展示季节性活动。 中间段（细节描写）： 用In the center of the town,there is..描述核心区域：You can taste.介绍当地美食：The people..are very friendly突出人文特色。 结尾段（情感表达）： 用I love my hometown because.自然收尾，总结家乡特点(peaceful,beautiful scenery,kind people)。 【范文二】现代城市(Springfield) 初一上册人教版 【寒假专版】B版介绍城镇或城市写作范文 My City-Springfield My city Springfield is a modern and vibrant city in the northeast of our country.It has a history of over 300 years,so you can find both ancient buildings and modern skyscrapers here.The most famous landmark is the Central Park,where people can go jogging,have picnics or just relax at weekends. Springfield is also an educational center with many universities and colleges.The city has a convenient public transportation system,including buses,subways and shared bikes.In recent years,more and more green spaces have been built,making the city more environmentally friendly.I'm proud of my city because it's a great place to live,work and study. 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（城市概况）： 用modern and vibrant定调城市气质；It has a history of..,展示历史底蕴；The most famous landmark is..聚焦核心地标。 中间段（城市功能)： 用educational center with.强调教育资源：convenient public transportation system描述交通 设施；green spaces..environmentally friendly突出环保理念。 结尾段（综合评价)： 用'm proud of my city because..表达自豪感，总结城市优势(live,work,study)。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 地理位置类： Located in...in the southern part of.../in the northeast of... 特色描述类： is famous for.../has a history of.../The most famous landmark is... 设施介绍类： has a convenient public transportation system many traditional shops and restaurants more and more green spaces 情感表达类： I love my hometown because....I'm proud of my city because... 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 2 初一上册人教版 【寒假专版】 B版介绍城镇或城市写作范文 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇介绍自己城镇的短文(80词左右)： 提示：城镇名称：Sunshine Town:位置：中国东部；人口：约l0万；特色：干净的环境，美丽的 公园：设施：镇中心有一个大超市和图书馆：人们友善。 仿写框架参考： Welcome to ！Itis of China.It has a population of The town is famous for In the center of the town,there a big supermarket and a library.The people here are I love my town because 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 语法错误： 错误：There is many green spaces.→正确：There are many green spaces.(复数名词) 错误：The town famous for its beaches.→正确：The town is famous for its beaches.(缺少be动 词) 表达错误： 错误：I very like my hometown.→正确：I like my hometown very much.(副词位置) 错误：It has about200,000 people live.一正确：It has a population of about200,000.(地道表 达) 核心写作要点 结构清晰：开头（位置/人口/特色）→中间（设施/活动/人文）→结尾（情感表达），三段式结 构。 信息完整：必写：地理位置、人口规模、特色亮点；选写：著名景点、交通设施、人文特点。 亮点加分：使用is famous for介绍特色，用there is/are描述设施，用because表达喜爱原因。 避坑提醒：注意主谓一致(population用单数)，正确使用介词(in the south of),避免中式英 语表达。 3