话题 1 自我介绍姓名年龄及兴趣爱好-2025-2026学年七年级上册英语写作范文集合（沪教牛津版）

初一上册沪教牛津版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】自我介绍（姓名/年龄兴 趣爱好)》 写作范文集合+逐段解析·沪教牛津版初一上册 范文赏析 【范文一】活泼型自我介绍 Hello,Everyone! Hello,everyone!Myname is Zhang Wei.I am thirteen years old.I am a new student in Class Three,Grade Seven. I have several hobbies.I enjoy swimming a lot.I usually go swimming with my father every Sunday.I also love drawing pictures.I think drawing can help me express my ideas.My favorite subject is Math,because it is challenging and interesting.I hope to learn more from my new classmates. If you share the same hobbies or like Math,please talk to me.Let's become friends!Thank you! 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（基本信息）： 用HelIo,.everyone!开篇，亲切自然；核心句型My name is..IIan.years old是自我介绍必 备基础句型，信息完整简洁。 中间段（兴趣拓展)： 用I have several hobbies..叼引出爱好，再用Ienjoy swimming a lot.强调最爱；通过every Sunday 补充细节；用because解释喜欢数学的原因，逻辑清晰。 结尾段（友好互动）： 用If you share the same hobbies..发出邀请，Let's become friends!结尾积极向上，符合初一 学生的表达风格。 【范文二】文静型自我介绍 1 初一上册沪教牛津版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 My Self-introduction Good afternoon,everyone!My name is Chen Yu.I come from a small town near the city.I live with my grandparents and parents. I am a quiet girl with long hair.I am kind and always ready to help others.I like reading storybooks very much.I often spend hours reading in the school library.I can also play the piano a little.I practice it every evening after finishing homework.My favorite season is autumn,because the weather is cool and the leaves are beautiful. I am happy to join this class.I wish we can learn and grow together happily.Thank you! 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（身份背景)： 用Good afternoon,everyone!适配正式场合：I come from./I live with..补充家庭信息，内 容更丰富。 中间段（性格+爱好)： 用I am a quiet girl with long hair.描述外貌性格：spend hours reading是高频句型；can play the piano a little展示特长；用because解释季节偏好。 结尾段（学习期望）： 用I wish we can learn and grow together表达积极态度，happily副词使用准确，是得分点。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 基本信息类： I am a new student in Class...Grade.../Ilive with... 兴趣爱好类： I enjoy...a lot/I usually...every.../My favorite...is...because.. 性格能力类： I am a...boy/girl with.../I can...a little /I am always ready to... 结尾表达类： I hope to learn more from.../I wish we can...together 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 初一上册沪教牛津版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇自我介绍（80词左右)： 提示：姓名Wang Fang,14岁，七年级五班；爱好唱歌（每周三练习），喜欢英语（因为有趣）：性 格开朗，希望和同学交朋友。 仿写框架参考： Hello!My name is I am years old.I am a student in I enjoy very much.I usually every My favorite subject is because I hope to with my classmates.Let's together！ 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 主谓一致错误： 错误：I is thirteen years old.→正确：I am thirteen years old. 介词缺失： 错误：I go swimming every Sunday..→加强：I go swimming on every Sunday.(更规范) 冠词误用： 错误：I am new student一正确：I am a new student 核心写作要点 三段式结构：问候+基本信息→爱好性格描述一友好结尾 细节补充：用频率副词(usually/often)、原因because)、外貌特征(with long hair)丰富内容 动词搭配：enjoy doing like doing/spend.doing固定搭配要准确 情感表达：结尾用hope/wish表达积极意愿 3