Unit 7 谈谈对全球变暖的看法及环保做法-2025-2026学年七年级上册英语写作范文集合（沪外版）

初一上册沪外版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】谈谈对全球变暖的看法及 环保做法 写作范文集合+逐段解析·沪外版初一上册 范文赏析 【范文一】 Our Earth is in Danger Nowadays,global warming is a seriousproblem for our world.Thetemperature is rising every year.Glaciers are melting and sea levels are going up.This is because people use too much coal and oil,and cut down many trees.If we don't act now,many animals will lose their homes and some places will be under water. As students,we can do small things to help.We should save electricity by turning off lights when leaving rooms.We can ride bikes or walk to school instead of taking cars.Let's plant more trees and recycle paper and plastic.Protecting the Earth is our duty. 【范文一逐段解析】 问题描述段： 用Nowadays,global warming is a serious problem..开篇点题：通过The temperature is rising. 和Glaciers are melting..具体描述现象；使用This is because..分析原因，逻辑清晰。 解决方案段： 用As students,.we can do small things to help.自然过渡；通过by turning off lights..和instead of taking cars给出具体建议；结尾Protecting the Earth is our duty.升华主题。 【范文二】 Fight Against Global Warming Global warming means our planet is getting hotter.Why does this happen?Because there are too many greenhouse gases in the air.Factories and cars produce a lot of these gases.The hot weather brings more storms and droughts,which is dangerous for everyone. 初一上册沪外版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 What can we do to stop it?First,we should use reusable bags instead of plastic ones.Second,we can save water by fixing dripping taps.Third,we should tell our parents to use energy-saving machines.Remember, even small actions can make a big difference.Let's work together to keep the Earth cool! 【范文二逐段解析】 现象分析段： 用设问Why does this happen?引出原因分析：通过Factories and cars produce,.和The hot weather brings..说明影响；使用which is dangerous for everyone强调严重性。 行动建议段： 用First..Second..Third.清晰列举建议：by fixing dripping taps提供具体方法；结尾even small actions can make a big difference是高分亮点句型。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 问题描述类： Global warming is a serious problem.../The temperature is rising.../Glaciers are melting... 原因分析类： This is because.../Why does this happen?Because.../...produce a lot of greenhouse gases 行动建议类： We should...by doing.../Instead of...,we can.../Remember,even small actions can... 呼吁行动类： Let's work together to.../Protecting the Earth is our duty. 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇关于环保的短文(80词左右)： 提示：描述一个你观察到的环境问题（如空气污染/垃圾问题)，分析原因，并提出2-3条学生可以 采取的环保行动。 仿写框架参考： Nowadays,_is a big problem in my city.I often see_This happens because_ As students,we can help by_.First,we should.Second,_.Remember,_ 2 初一上册沪外版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 Let's to make our city cleaner! 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 词汇错误： 错误：global warming→正确：global warming(注意warming拼写) 错误：green house gases→正确：greenhouse gases（复合词无空格) 语法错误： 错误：The temperature rise every year.一正确：The temperature is rising..(进行时表持续变化) 表达错误： 错误：We should saving electricity.一正确：We should save electricity.(情态动词后接动词原 形) 核心写作要点 结构清晰：问题描述（现象+影响）→原因分析→解决方案(2-3条具体建议)→呼吁行动。 用词准确：正确使用environmental protection,.greenhouse gases,recycle等主题词汇。 时态统一：描述现状用现在时（尤其现在进行时），建议用should/can+动词原形。 逻辑连接：使用because,so,first,,second,.finally等连接词使文章连贯。