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初一下册北师大版
【U4专练】
规则与文明行为
U4专练
【北师大版七下】社区与校园规则范文集合
写作范文集合+逐段解析·北师大版初一下册
范文赏析
【范文一】校园规则
Our School Rules
Hello,everyone!As students in Grade Seven,we should follow our school rules to make our campus a
better place.First,we must arrive at school on time.Being late not only affects our own study but also
disturbs others.Second,we need to wear school uniforms every day.They make us look tidy and show our
school spirit.Third,we should keep the campus clean.Don't litter anywhere;put the rubbish into the bins.
Finally,we must be polite to teachers and classmates.Let's work together to follow these rules and create
a wonderful school life!
【范文一逐段解析】
开头段(规则重要性):
用As students..we should.强调遵守规则的必要性;核心句型make our campus a better place
点明规则目的。
规则列举段(具体条款):
使用First...Second.Third..Finally..清晰列举规则;must/need to/should准确表达义务层
级;Do't litter anywhere直接给出禁止行为。
结尾段(倡导行动):
用Let's work together..发出集体倡议,create a wonderful school life升华主题。
【范文二】社区文明行为
Civilized Behavior in Our Community
Good afternoon,neighbors!Our community is like a big family,and we should behave well to make it more
beautiful.First,we should keep quiet in public places.Don't play loud music or shout,especially at night.
Second,we need to take care of the plants and flowers.Don't pick them or step on the grass.Third,we
should park our bikes and cars in the right places.This keeps the roads clear for everyone.What's more,
初一下册北师大版
【U4专练】
规则与文明行为
we should help each other.If someone needs help,we can give them a hand.Let's be civilized people and
make our community a warm home!
【范文二逐段解析】
开头段(社区比喻):
用Our community is like a big family建立情感联结;behave wel点明核心要求。
规则列举段(具体行为):
使用First.Second.Third..What's more.多维度展开;keep quiet/take care of/park.in
right places明确具体行为;This keeps..说明行为益处。
结尾段(文明倡导):
用Let's be civilized people提升高度,make our community a warm home呼应开头比喻。
高分亮点句型(可直接套用)
规则重要性:
We should follow...to make...a better place./...behave well to make...more beautiful.
规则列举:
First,...Second,...Third,...Finally,.../Don't...anywhere./...especially at night.
行为倡导:
Let's work together to.../If someone needs help,we can give them a hand.
情感升华:
...create a wonderful...life./...make our...a warm home!
仿写练习(结合亮点句型)
请根据提示,仿写校园图书馆规则(60词左右):
提示:保持安静、爱护书籍、禁止饮食、按时归还
仿写框架参考:
Welcome to our school library!To keep it a good place for reading,we have some rules.First,
Second,
Third,
Finally,
Let's
together!
初一下册北师大版
【U4专练】
规则与文明行为
常见错误修正(避坑指南)
情态动词错误:
错误:We must to wear uniforms.→正确:We must wear uniforms,.
错误:You should keeping quiet..一正确:You should keep quiet..
否定形式错误:
错误:Don'tto litter.→正确:Don't litter.
错误:Not play football here.→正确:Don't play football here,
单复数错误:
错误:Put the rubbish into the bin.→正确:.into the bins.
错误:This keep the roads clear.→正确:This keeps the roads clear.
核心写作要点
结构清晰:开头(场景+重要性)→中间(规则分条说明)→结尾(倡导行动),三段式结构。
规则表述:使用mst/should/.need to表达义务,Don't.表达禁止行为。
细节补充:用especially.../every day等补充时间/场景细节。
亮点提升:使用比喻(如like a big family),说明规则益处(如keeps roads clear)。
避坑提醒:注意情态动词后接原形动词,否定祈使句用Dot+原形。