话题 1 描述他人外貌并介绍朋友-2025-2026学年七年级下册英语写作范文集合（外研版）

初一下册外研版 【话题1】 描述他人外貌并介绍朋友 【话题1】描述他人外貌并介绍朋友 写作范文集合·外研版初一下册 范文赏析 【范文一】My Best Friend My Best Friend I have a good friend.Her name is Lucy.She is thirteen years old.She has long brown hair and big blue eyes.She is tall and thin.She always wears a pink dress. She is kind and friendly.We often play games together after school.She likes drawing pictures.She can draw very well We are good friends forever 【范文二】A Special Friend A Special Friend Tom is my best friend.He is twelve years old.He has short black hair and a round face.He is short but strong.He wears glasses. He is very helpful.He often helps me with my math.He likes playing football.He is good at it. We usually play football on weekends.I like him very much. 高分亮点句型 外貌描述类： She/He has...hair and...eyes. She/He is...(tall/short/thin/strong). She/He wears...(glasses/a dress). 性格特点类： She/He is...(kind/friendly/helpful). She/He is good at... She/He likes...(doing something). 初一下册外研版 【话题1】 描述他人外貌并介绍朋友 互动关系类： We often...together. She/He helps me with... We are good friends. 仿写练习 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇朋友介绍(60词左右)： 提示：朋友姓名Wang Lin,l4岁，黑色短发，戴眼镜；喜欢读书，擅长数学；经常帮助同学。 仿写框架参考： My friend's name is.He/She is_years old.He/She has_hair and wears_ He/She likes_and is good at_.He/She often_ We-together.I like my friend very much. 常见错误修正 主谓一致错误： 错误：She have long hair..→正确：She has long hair, 形容词顺序错误： 错误：blue big eyes→正确：big blue eyes（大小+颜色) 动词形式错误： 错误：He like playing football.→正确：He likes playing football. 核心写作要点 结构清晰：开头（朋友基本信息）→中间（外貌+性格+爱好）→结尾（友谊表达) 信息完整：必写：姓名、年龄、外貌特征：选写：爱好、特长、互动事例 亮点加分：使用has描述外貌，is good at表达特长，often说明频率 避坑提醒：注意三单动词变化(has//likes),形容词顺序（大小→颜色），物主代词一致(his/her)